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Posted: 16 years ago
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I loved this sad shot. The best part that made this story amazing was Meher's resolve to live her life happily even after Preet was oblivious to her pain.....After today I am officially a big fan of your writing😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: sourpuss

*hugs* You're awesome, Meera. Awww *hides face* Thanks Bhav! 😳

And yeah. Like Radz said, one of your best so far. I was this close to crying. It was just cus of our talk yesterday and you know I felt so blah and it just seemed to flow when I was writing it! 😳
I love the whole unrequited love thing. And what I preferred about this one (in comparison to Cinderella) was how Meher decided that she would move on, not let the roses wilt. Yeah but your's is so much more realistic to me....I'd have been like Meher....this was just so no one would ask for a sequel! 😉😳
Okay ow headache. I so need to get out of my funk. I hope you feel better! 😃
Love,
Bhav (:



Originally posted by: shabo24

I agree. One of your best pieces to date. :) You never cease to amaze Meera. 🤗 Awwww thanks! 😳😃 That means a lot to me! 😳

That was so beautiful, the symbolism with the love vs. her love never dying. Honestly Meera...how do you do it? Really? 😳 I don't actually know....since I said that he gave her flowers, I felt it would work..😊

--shabz



@Poonam: Really thanks a lot! 😳

Originally posted by: *Shifali*

Yes, this is good...but, it won't be counted as your best work till date. I mean, it is REAL good with Meher's feelings and all but I have seen much better shots then this from you Meera...



Thanks...😳

Originally posted by: fungrl

I loved this sad shot. The best part that made this story amazing was Meher's resolve to live her life happily even after Preet was oblivious to her pain.....After today I am officially a big fan of your writing😊



Thanks! 😳 I'm glad you liked it! 😛
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Posted: 16 years ago
#13

That was realy sad. didtnt catch the ending but I heard its happy so im happy she moved on and didnt die. It was written really well.

Love Lily
PS Could u please write a fluff shot 😳
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Thanks Lily, the ending was that she saw her roses kinda wilting and so she put them in water and decided to keep herself like that, alive and she vowed to keep living! 😊

As for fluff ones...I'm not sure yet...
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Posted: 16 years ago
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thakhu 4 update take ur time
love lily
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Thanks lily, I posted a somewhat fluffy shot, it's kinda dark though! 😛
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Posted: 16 years ago
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yup just read it was cute yet eerie but at the same time yet in the shadows of night kind of thing makes him sound like a vamp i hav no idea y 2 much twilight 4 me i think. love lily
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Ahhh Preet like a vamp? I could see it with his smile! 😛
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Posted: 16 years ago
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lol yea my profile pic makes him look like a vamp
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Oh! Me! This was so beautiful! And I feel so sad for Meher. At the same time, you have written meher so well. And I love the way she resolves to stay strong and move on....I love how she didn't let the roses wilt...This is really written so beautifully Me! I LOVED it!

And I HATE Ash!!!!! Unfortunately, I can't hate Preet *Sigh*

Loved it!
Love you:)
Big Hugs:) Nonee

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