|Estranged|One Glance-p5/AltEnding-p10 - Page 2

Originally posted by: Anhdara13

Oh, Shabzie, what would happen when Meera finds out Prem lied? And Prem finds out Meera came to tell him that her wedding had been called off? SEQUEL!

I WANT SEQUEL!

Originally posted by: ~Rinki~

Muahaha! Firstly...the title is deliciously yummy! ☺️I love it too :)
Second...hayyeee My poor bhabhi jaan and bhai jaan separated...🥺 ah hush, tragic ROCKS! 😃
Oh i loved this Shabz...u knw anything tragic is beautiful to me *wipes tears dev-muski-style*
🤗 awesome job turtle! OHOH! I miss *dms* 😆 Thanks a ton!!!
- Phoenixx. [i missed this]
me too.
--turtle

Originally posted by: indiandoll89

My spot! 😳

*edited*

Do not credit me for the concept...it's so cliched! 😛😳 I just wanted to see what you could do with it and once again...I was proved Right! 😃 Still crediting you....😆

They were both so right in their own ways...although I feel worse for me😛😉 He lied! 😛 I wonder what would happen when he found out the wedding was actually cancelled...😆 Reminds me of KANK in a way😳 😳 I'm soo glad you wrote it Shabzie, the emotions you put for both of them were perfectly apt! 😃😳 aha I felt worse for you too, I kept giving you all the more tragic-y related lines. Thanks!

And I liked the open ending! 😳 Makes it mysterious somehow! 😛 Thanks! :)

Anyhoo....I'm still touched that you wrote this for me, so thank you! 🤗 Oh hush, even if you had said "DON'T WRITE IT" I would have still wrote it, it was fun to write! 😉

Love you loads,

Meera😳

Originally posted by: sourpuss

My spot. :D

😲 You wrote tragic PreMe! But you did it so well! I lost a bet. :)

The pain that Prem had when he found out Meera was getting married to someone else...Him lying to make sure Meera would be okay...and then she forcing herself to be happy...Yups, way to repeat the story line. :)

You realise you need to continue this right? Ugh.

Love,

Bhav (:

Originally posted by: *Shifali*

Fine! I HAD to comment on this and this broke my deal with strike with KDMHMD!

Originally posted by: Anhdara13

Shifs! *hugs* YAY!

Oh, Shabzie, what would happen when Meera finds out Prem lied? And Prem finds out Meera came to tell him that her wedding had been called off? SEQUEL! You too? *groans*

I loved the way you've contrasted the emotions though. Here Prem was feeling so depressed and sad, and there, Meera's full of hope and happiness. Then Prem goes and ruins it all with his lie and stupidity! *shurgs* Guys are stupid, what are you going to do?

I WANT SEQUEL! *grimces* I heard, I heard.

Love,
Radz

Originally posted by: SaNyA_21

Dude I agree! CONTINUE THIS. Not you to?!?!

this one-shot was awsome, Shabo ;) I loved ittt. Thanks Sanya!! :)