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Posted: 16 years ago
Thanx dear.............Glad u liked the whole thing.............I will pm u ............no wories..............😊
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Posted: 16 years ago

Prem stood stunned…………as he watched Heer looking soooooooooooo angrily at her………….accussing her………….with such hatred in her eyes………….and bitterness in her words!.................Prem was completely at a loss of words as her kept on staring at Heer dumbfounded!...............

Its raining even harder and there is loud thunder in the sky.............

heer walks away............when Prem steeping forward holds Heer y her hand and turning her ronud with full force he brings her close to himself..............

He says---Heer yeh kya bakwaas kar rahii ho?

Heer replies back---Main bakwaas kar rahii hoon?............Toh yeh bataao kii kal raat ko tum aur Ashlesha apnii bachchi ke saath uss hotel mein kya kar rahey the?!.............

Prem felt hurt as he replies---Yeh...........yeh sochtii ho tum mere baarey mein?............bas itna............itnaa hii jaan paayi mujhey?..............Tum jaannna chahtii ho kii main Ashlesha ke saath kya kar rahaa tha toh suno!..............

Prem tells Heer everything about manav and Ashlesha and the kid too listening to which heer felt embarassed and sorry............

prem says softly letting go of Heer---Tumney...........tumney aisaa soch bhi kaisey liya Heer kii main............tumhaarey alwaa apnii zindagii...........yun.....kisi aur ke saath?!..............

Heer stood crying.......this time it were tears of repent.............as she saw Prem leave...............

Prem walks into the raina way from heer as in the background plays Prem's sad music.............u see him rembering Heer leaving him at the station and her rude words just moments ago............

He hears his phone rings and picks it up saying a hello?..............

It was manav who says----Main kab se aapkaa phone try kar rahaa hoon bhaiyaa..............aap hain kahaan?.........aaj Ambala nahiin jaana kya?.............bhool gaye...........aaj hii ke din har saal aap Ambala jaatey ho?..............

Prem says---haan jaana hai...........Tu kahaan hai.............

Its the next scene and u see Prem sitting in the car as manav drives it and the two make their way to ludhiana.............Manav asks Prem---Kya baat hai bhaiyaa aap bheegey hue hain?

Prem doesn't reply as he was lost in his own thoughts.............

Mnabv then asks him---Kya hua bhaiyaa ?............Kuch hua kya?

Prem says---Woh...........woh aaj bhi muhsey bahot nafratt kartii hai...............

Manav says instantly---Lekin Prem bhaiyaa kyun?............Koi aap jaisey insaan se itnii nafrat kaisey kar saktaa hai............Heer bhabhi aapse nafrat kaisey kar saktii hain?.............

Prem asks Manav taken aback as Manav drives on---lekin tu............tu kaisey jaantaa hai Heer ke baarey mein?..............

Manav replies---Itney saalon mein main roz aapsey poohtaa rahaa bhaiyaa............aapkey ghar aapkey parivaar ke baarey mein............aapkey apnon ke baarey mein lekin aap humeshaa khamosh rahey bhaiyaa..............phir kuch din pehley mainney faislaa kiya kii main aapko aur dukhii nahiin dekh saktaa isliye I decided to dig into ur past............aur sach toh yeh hai kii main aapko Ludhiana bhi isiliye laaya tha.............aur khud uss din aapkey ghar bhi gayaa tha.............(Prem watched manav stunned)............Aur jis ghar ke har koney mein aap basey hain............uss ghar ke har sadasyaa ke dil mein bhi aap hii hongey...........ITS OBVIOUS!.................Phir aisaa kya hua bhaiyaa kii aapney khud ko unn sab se iss tarah durr kar diya?!....................Kaise...........kaisey koi APSEY NAFRAT KAR SAKTAA HAI Prem bhaiya.............KYUN?...................

Prem falls silent and manav could seee tears welling in his eyes and prem tells Manav everything about himself and Heer and what separated them too!.............

After Prem has finished manav didn't know what to say!...............

He didn't want to be judgemental and he didn't want to hurt Prem anymore.............by making him remeber all the things.............he says as the two reach the temple by the time it was night already---Chaliye yeh sab chodiye Bhaiya yeh bataaiye kii app har saal aaj hii ke din yahaan kyun aatey hain?!.............

Prem replies looking at Manav ---Kyunkii yaheen............pehlii baar main apnii heer se milaa tha..............aur uss din kaa woh pal woh lamhaa woh manzar meri zindagii kaa hissa ban chukaa hai..............jissey aaj hii ke din har saal ek baar phir jeeney main yahaan aata hoon...............

Prem gets down from the car..............leaving a dumbfounded Manav in the car who was trying to get Prem's mind off his old memories but realising that Prem was all about Heer and her love................nothing an no one else!..............

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Posted: 16 years ago
hey nice update...thanks for the pm...waiting eagerly for the next part!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
Great update leo.
Loved it.
I thought that he will meet chahat today?
But seems like u r trying something more dramatic.😉
Can feel it.
Waiting for the next part.
Plz update soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
great update.........................👏
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Posted: 16 years ago
I hope Heer is already present there...and they make up!!

come back...and meet the kids!
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Posted: 16 years ago
great update
continue asap
thanks for th epm
pm me
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Posted: 16 years ago
hey not fair....i thought u will make prem meet chahat in this episode.....u must be having fun in making us all waiting right..........do update soon...............👏
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Posted: 16 years ago
great updates dear.... thanks for the PM...... and update asap.....😃
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Posted: 15 years ago

Very good... Keep up the good work. Cannot wait for the next part. I also appreciate the PMs.!

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