ff: How could I be so blind?- part 4 page 5 - Page 2

WOw !! this is fantastic....I liked it... Poor miserable Prem....

hey i really liked the update.....

I really loved the update.................I was so sad..........I hope to read more soon

A great FF. I also happy that Heer has Ash, Meher, Aditya and PREET! Preet went against his own brother, his Ram to his bhabhi. But, Preet did make the right choice. I feel so bad for Prem, though. The thought of him not having his Heer is bad, but also him not being able to see his son grow up, change his nappies, put him to sleep, feed him it's all so sad. But, Prem does deserve it. I am sorry to say. But, after all he had done. Not trusted his Heer and everything, Prem does desere it. Hmm.. so before Heer's life was a living hell, but I guess not it's Prem's turn. He is indeed very, very lonely. Preet, Meher and Ash leaving. Lalu in coma. All Prem is left with are the two witches and that good for nothing Harman. Btw, did G3 figure out the truth, yet? And yeah, I guess Rajveer will find Heer in Delhi. Great FF. Please continue!

awesomeeeeeeeeeee too good very nice part waitinggggggggg for next asap.

whoa!!!! its really very nice!
i Love it!
please do continue!
Love
Gargee

hi all. Once again, thank you for your awesome views. I'm really glad you guys have liked my story. Here is part 3. It is a little short, but this is all I have time for today. Please let me know what you think. Let me know if you like how the characters are being developed. You will learn more about Gayatri and the others in a future chapter.

Part 3

After Preet, Meher, and Ash had gone to their respective jobs and Aditya had left for school, Heer decided sit on her balcony and read a book. The wind began blowing furiously and all of a sudden it started raining. The situation made her think back to that one night.

Flashback

It had just started raining and all of a sudden there was thunder. Heer was scared out of her mind. She jumped as she felt a hand on her shoulder. It was only Prem. She felt relieved, but there was another loud thunder and she quickly turned and hugged Prem tightly. He smiled to himself as this was exactly what he wanted. His love was in his arms. He slowly dug his face into the nape of her neck and started nibbling. Heer laughed to herself "boy I played right into this one...not that I'm complaining." She pulled away and brought her face up to his. Without thinking twice, he slid his lips onto hers, slowly kissing her. As the kiss intensified, their hands began roaming and clothes came off. Nothing would stop them today...

Back to the present

"That was the probably the day Aditya had been conceived." She thought to herself. "My life has taken a total 180 degree turn since that wonderful night. I lost everything, but gained the biggest gain of my life. My Aditya. The symbol of my love." Tears started welling up in her eyes, but she held them back. She had a party to get ready for. It was Meher and Preet's 6^th wedding anniversary today. She walked into a large hotel to check if the banquet hall had been decorated. The hall looked wonderful. "I hope you like it Heer bhabhi!" said a familiar voice. "It looks wonderful, Aakash. Thank you so much for taking time out of your busy day to help me with his." she replied, patting him on the cheek. "Anything for you, Heer bhabhi, anything for you." Aakash held a special place in Heer's heart as did she in his. He had called her Heer bhabhi just as Preet did. They had grown really close and she was the first one he told when he fell in love with Ash. She was so happy for them. They were perfect for each other. They had also taken Heer's promise that they would only get married if she did Ash's kanyadan. They continued with the decorations, unbeknownst to them that someone was watching them.

Later that night, the party had been a huge success. Preet and Meher were so surprised, that Meher almost started crying. They enjoyed the party with their friends and the little one of their family put on quite a show. Heer had taught him a dance that he would do and he was adorable while performing. The family was so happy; little did they know what was waiting for them later on.

"Thank you so much guys. You are the best. I can't believe you put all of this together and we didn't even get to know." Said Preet. "What about my dance, chachu? How was that? I looked really handsome right?" asked cute little Aditya. Everyone couldn't help but laugh. They continued chatting until they heard a knock on the door. As Heer was about to go open the door, Preet said "I'll get it Heer bhabhi, you relax. It's probably just one of my girlfriends anyways" while winking at Meher. Meher playfully hit him and told him to go open the door. Preet made his way to the door pretending to be hurt by Meher's hit. After he opened the door, he stood there, shocked. Anger started brewing inside him. His fists clenching with rage and fury. "What the hell are you doing here?"

hey... wonderful update... i'm pretty sure itz prem ther at the door.... or some one from jzoo...

omg whos at da door cant w8 to read more keep it up