My First Piece of Writing on PREMEER Part51 Pg149

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srikrithi

@srikrithi

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Posted: 15 years ago

#901

awesome update. heer chahat scene was emotional. continue soon.

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Mahum talpur

@Crazy_94

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Posted: 15 years ago

#902

wat a lovely part....it was emotional like previous one yet very cute simply loved it.

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Anumta

@zehra-pisces

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+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#903

to all readers: let me tell you that in part 48a i've made slight change in precap

earlier it was that prem calls additi to talk with her but then i changed it so now it is that additi calls prem n tells him that heer is not home yet. this is why i've written precap before part 48b. anyways i've updated two parts tonight part 48b n part 49a. part49 is the final one with sub parts n then there will be individual parts. enjoy updates!!!

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poonam

@P.Kamaljit.Sean

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+ 6

Posted: 15 years ago

#904

Hey
Awesome update
loved it
thankz for pm

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Dolly

@kptl

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Posted: 15 years ago

#905

this prt is really touchy....m amazed by additi shes so understanding...its really cute mother daughter prt..bt not prem🥺 i cant see additi suffer like tat shes jst a kid.. i hope she tells prem watever she heard....

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swati

@sweta2005

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+ 8

Posted: 15 years ago

#906

awesomeeeeeeeeee too good very nice part waitingggggggggg for next asap.

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Whypadhu

@Whypadhu

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Posted: 15 years ago

#907

awesome update. heer chahat scene was emotional. continue soon.

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mandy60

@mandy60

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Posted: 15 years ago

#908

awesome update

plz continue soon

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zohakhan7

@zohakhan7

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+ 10

Posted: 15 years ago

#909

the scenebetween additi and heer was very emotional but u described it very well.thanks for the pm and do continue soon . and pm me whenever u update.