My First Piece of Writing on PREMEER Part51 Pg149 - Page 90

hey guys sorry for being sooo late i hate myself for making u all wait. i was busy in photography project it drove me crazy taking pictures editing them n buying necessary things. now will paste them before submitting on tuesday. anyways i'll update ff tonight so just wait a little more. i have my examz next week so plzzz pray for me. love u all stay in touch never stop reading this ff n truly very sorry for late updates

Precap: Additi calls Prem n tells him that Heer is not back from office yet. She requests him to bring her mom back as she loves her a lot so Prem goes to meet Heer in office.

PART48 (b)

Additi in her playroom is sadly looking at her dolls while Mitali comes in. She sits beside Additi n gently makes her hair. She observes that Additi is being quiet since long time which is rare as she is the naughtiest child and a chatter box.

Mitali: kya huwa angel aaj tum itni chup chup kyun ho?

Additi stays quiet, she plays with her doll's hair.

Mitali: lagta hai angel ka hum se baat karne ka mood nahin, chalo hum doll se baat karte hain. So dolly how are you?

Mitali imitates Doll's voice: I am very sad!

Mitali: kyun doll whats the matter?

Doll says: I am missing my daddy!!!

Mitali: oh! no worries iska solution hai mere paas tum apne daddy se phone pe baat karlo

Mitali places a tiny codless phone in the doll house.

Mitali: additi tumhein codless phone laake doon?

Additi looks at Mitali masi n gives a weak smile. Mitali got up n gave her the codless while Additi hugged her.

Mitali left the room n Additi dialed Prem's number.

Prem was on roof looking at moon n lost in Heer's thoughts while his cell rang.

Prem: hello

Additi: can I speak to mr prem juneja?

Prem: hello additi?

Additi: oh thank god aapko mera naam to yaad hai. So mr prem juneja aap kya kar rahe hain?

Prem: main apni cute si princess ko yaad kar raha hoon

Additi: are wah yeh to kamaal hogaya!

Prem: kyun kya huwa?

Additi: aapko abhi tak yaad hai ke aapki ek princess hai. Mujhe laga aap bhool gaye.

Prem: hum aapko kaise bhool sakte hain additi

Additi: to phir aap mujhse milne kyun nahin aate mr prem juneja?

Prem: hmmm 😊 yeh to bara difficult question hai? Ek baat bataaiye aap mujhse milne kyun nahin aati miss additi prem juneja?

Additi laughed n Prem smiled. He was more than happy after hearing Additi's voice n her laugh.

Additi: papa ab main kuch poochoon? Mama ko juneja surname kyun pasand nahin hai

Prem: yeh kisne kaha aap se?

Additi: pata hai mere school mein mera full name additi heer hai. Teacher mujhe juneja surname se kabhi call nahin karti, mujhe bilkul acha nahin lagta.

Prem: iska solution hai mere paas

Additi: kya?

Prem: jab tak woh aapko juneja kehke call na kare aap unke paas mat jana phir woh wahi karegi jo aap chahti ho.

Additi: okay! Are haan main batana bhool hi gayi. Papa mama subah se ghar nahin aayi. Aap plz unhein office se le kar aao.

Prem: theek hai tum chinta mat karo. Main thori dair mein unhein le kar aata hoon

Additi: I will wait for you. You know I cant live without my mama.

Prem: main bhi tumhari mama ke bina nahin jee sakta. Bye!

Heer's office

Heer held a small album in her hand n looked at every picture of her daughter. She had all the memories of Additi in form of pictures. There was no work to do in office n the staff had left but Heer preferred staying till late so that when she comes home her daughter would be off to sleep as she couldn't face her. Heer had no answers to Additi's innocent questions, it is difficult to make a five year old kid understand what her mom is going through. After looking at pictures for long Heer feels dizzy n goes to sleep. In a little while Prem comes in her cabin n finds her fast asleep. She had album in one hand n her head rested on the other hand. Prem removed hair from her face n gazed at her.

Prem said in heart: heer ab main jaan gaya hoon ke tum ghar kyun aana nahin chahti, uski waja maa hai.

He then looked at album, it was open n he saw Additi's picture on one page. He took the album n saw all pictures of his princess. Those were the moments when Prem was not with Heer n Additi. A drop of tear fell on one picture making it wet from its corner.

Prem thought: aisa kyun hota hai ke jin lamhon ka humein saari zindagi intezar hota hai hum unhi lamhon ko kho dete hain. He gently touched a picture when a 2 months Additi was playing in Heer's lap. Yeh pal doobara kabhi nahin aayenge lekin aaj'

He looked at Heer who was fast asleep n said in heart: aaj ke in lamhon ko main itni aasaani se jaane nahin doonga. Heer tum ne har rishte ko dil se nibhaya hai, un rishton mein pyaar ka ehsaas bhara hai. Tum ek achi beti ho aur ek maa bhi. Main tumse wada karta hoon ke bohot jald tum apne ghar mein apnon ke saath zindagi ke pal jiyogi. Yeh tumhare Prem ka tumse wada hai.

Prem kept album back on table due to which a file which was at the edge of table dropped on floor. With its sound Heer woke up n saw Prem looking at her. At first she thought it's a dream but then she realized that its reality.

Heer: tum is waqt yahan?

Prem: tum itni dair tak office mein kyun ho? Saara staff to chala gaya

Heer: meri choro tum apni baat karo

Prem: kyun heer kyun? Tumhein kyun choroon

Heer noticed that Prem was getting angry

Prem: choro'kitna aasaan hai chor dena, hai na?

Heer said in heart: nahin prem aasaan nahin hai bohot mushqil hai

Prem thought: bas ek baar mujhe apne dil ka haal bataao heer, main har mushqil aasaan kardoonga

Heer thought: tumhein apne dil ka haal bata kar main tumhein dard nahin de sakti prem. Umeed hai ke kabhi na kabhi tum meri majboori samjhoge

Heer: anyways tum ne bataya nahin ke tum yahan kaise?

Prem: additi ka phone aaya tha woh pareshaan thi ke tum abhi tak ghar nahin aayi, is liye chala aaya.

Heer was touched by the care n concern that Prem showed for Additi n for her.

They both sat in car n drove to Additi's mansion. Both were silent during the ride back home.

Additi's mansion

They entered inside n saw Additi sitting on sofa with folded arms. Bruno was sitting on floor, even he waited for Premeer.

Additi: aap logon ne kitna intezar karwaya. Dekha bruno yeh bare hain phir bhi time par ghar nahin aate.

Heer came near n held her ears n whispered: sorry!

Additi: kya kehte ho bruno maaf karen ya punish karen?

Bruno made some sound which was understood by Additi only!

Additi: chalo theek hai warning deke chor dete hain lekin agli baar aisa huwa to hum ghar mein nahin rahenge

She then hugged her mama n Heer took her in arms.

They both looked at Prem while Additi said: papa aap yahan aayenge phir family complete hojaayegi

Prem thought: beta chahta to main bhi hoon ke family complete hojaaye lekin shayad aapki mama aisa nahin chahti

He came near, hugged Additi n kissed her. With sadness in eyes he looked at Heer, here comes the eyelock session but instead of romance n passion there is pain in Premeer's eyes.

Scene ends

In morning Mitali wakes up Additi n gets her ready for school. She makes her eat breakfast n goes to drop her at school while Heer acted to be busy in office work. Additi in class played the trick that she learnt from Prem. Ms Seema called her name for attendance but Additi didn't answered. She just sat there showing a goofy smile to her teacher. Finally Ms Seema inquired the reason for Additi being mischievous n Additi requested her to call her by her full name ie Additi Juneja instead of Additi Heer. Her request was granted n Additi was excited that her trick worked. Prem came to pick her n they had loads of fun. They ate icecream n Additi told him everything abt her school. Heer observed Additi's happiness when she came back home as she spent the day with her loving father. This was the time when Heer realized that now is the time when only Prem can make her daughter happy n take care of her.

Heer in her bedroom thinks abt all that happened last night n this afternoon. Heer says: mujhe kaise bhi kar ke do hafton mein additi ko khud se door karna hoga taake woh prem ke paas chali jaaye. Yeh sab meri operation se pehle ho jana chahiye.

Precap: Heer scolds Additi badly n cries in study room. She says something abt her disease n the reason for acting to be rude with Additi. The door was half open n Additi stood behind the door. She heard everything n cries. Heer is shocked to see Additi. A tragic maa beti moment coming soon which will separate them for a while but they will unite soon.

PART 49 (a)

Additi enters in room n sits beside her mama on sofa.

Additi: mama I love you

Heer stays quiet

Additi: do you love me?

Heer had tears in eyes but she remained silent.

Additi: mama aapko promise yaad hai?

Heer: kaisa promise?

Additi: yahi ke hum mall mein ghoomne jaayenge

Heer gets up sofa n walks toward drawer n takes a file from there. She plans to be busy reading the file.

Additi: mama aap apna promise bhool gayi? Masi kaam mein busy hai aur aap bhi. Papa hamare saath nahin hain n hum us ghar mein nahin hain. Mama hum us ghar mein kyun nahin hain?

Heer: additi stop asking so many questions mujhe disturb mat karo

Additi: mama main bore ho rahi hoon main kiske saath kheloon?

Heer: tumhein chaar din nahin huwe apne papa se mile aur ab tum is ghar mein bore hoti ho, jab papa nahin the tab kya karti thi tum? Tab kaun khelta tha tumhare saath?

Additi: tab aap khelti thi mere saath

With this Heer became quiet as she didn't had anything else to say

Additi angrily left the room.

Additi's playroom

Additi went in her playroom n opened her cupboard to take her bear. A piece of shirt fell out from cupboard. Additi picked it up n along with bear she sat on bed.

Additi: mama yeh toto bear ki shirt kharab hogayi thi mujhse aur aap ne mujhe nayi bana ke di, ab to aapko yeh bhi yaad nahin hoga. Mama aap kyun kar rahi ho aisa?

She threw the shirt, hugged toto bear n went to sleep. With nothing else to do she had an afternoon nap. Tears fell on her pink, furry pillow n she was in deep sleep.

Heer entered after little while n sat on bed beside her daughter. Under the bed she found the shirt. Heer remembered the beautiful, fun filled moments she had with Additi. Additi in sleep hugged her n Heer gently removed her dry tears. Knowing the fact that she is responsible for her angel's tears she couldn't do anything.

It was dinner time at Additi's mansion, Mitali was making Additi eat dinner while Heer was having dinner n at same time she had her laptop on her table. Heer didn't talk with anyone n her rude behaviour was visible. Mitali n Additi didn't had a clue abt what is the matter with Heer. Heer after finishing dinner ordered a cup of coffee n headed towards study room.

In the morning Additi played with her doll near stairs n accidently dropped a vase on floor, it broke in pieces n due to sound Heer came out of the room. Heer carefully looked at Additi n when she was sure that Additi is not hurt she scolded her.

Heer: additi kya kiya tum ne? kaise toota yeh vase?

Additi: sorry mama galti se toot gaya

Heer: har cheez sorry se sahi nahin ho jaati additi, you should be careful choti bachi nahin ho tum?

Additi started crying, she hid her face with her small hands n cried terribly.

Heer: ab rone se kya hoga? Jaao apne room mein.

Additi ran towards her playroom while Heer went in her study.

Study room

Heer entered in study room n didn't bothered closing the door. She hit hard on the door n sat on sofa. Heer cried terribly for scolding Additi.

Heer: aaj nafrat ho rahi hai mujhe apne aap se ke kyun maine additi ko daanta. Yeh ghar usi ka hai, usi ke liye banaya tha maine yeh ghar aur aaj ek maamooli se vase ke tootne par maine use itna daanta.

Additi after crying thought of saying sorry to her mama so she slowly tiptoed towards study room.

Heer: I'm sorry additi aapki mama bohot buri hai bina baat ke aaj maine aapko daanta. Magar main kaise aapko samjhaaon ke meri majboori kya hai. Aapki mama theek nahin hai, woh beemaar hai.

Additi was shocked to hear all this. She understood a bit of what Heer said.

Heer: additi kya tum apni mama ko samjhogi? Maaf karogi mujhe? Kaise bataaon tumhein ke meri beemari ka ilaaj tumhare jaane mein hai. Tum apne papa ke paas chali jaao main bas yahi chahti hoon.

Additi started crying out loudly after hearing that her mama wants her to leave this house.

Heer heard Additi's cry n quickly looked outside the door. Additi's cry made it clear that she heard everything.

Additi: mama aap mujhe yahan se jaane ke liye keh rahi ho? Aap chahti ho ke main chali jaaon?

Heer rushed outside n hugged Additi. She carried her in arms n came inside the study room. Heer removed Additi's tears n asked her: beta aap ne kuch suna mama ne kya kaha?

Additi: haan maine sab sun liya

Heer was shocked as she never wanted this to happen

Additi: mama aap beemaar ho? Aapko kya huwa hai?

Heer: beta mujhe kuch nahin huwa main bilkul theek hoon

Additi: to phir aap mujhe khud se door kyun kar rahi ho?

Heer didn't know how to explain all this to Additi

Additi: aap apni angel se pyar nahin karte aapko apni angel ki bilkul parwaah nahin

Heer hugged her n said: nahin beta aisi baat nahin hai hum aap se bohot pyar karte hain.

She thought for a while n continued: angel'aapko pata hai maine aapka naam angel kyun rakha

Additi: kyun?

Heer: kyunki angel ka matlab farishta, aap apni mama ki life mein ek angel ho, ek pyaari si angel

Additi: angel kya karta hai?

Heer: angel sab pareshaaniyon ko door kar deta hai. Angel har majboori mita deta hai. Beta aapki mama ki ek majboori hai.

Additi: majboori kya hoti hai?

Heer: beta jab hum kuch aisa karte hain jo humein pasand nahin tab hum majboor hote hain. Hum kuch badal nahin sakte aur na chahte huwe humein woh karna hota hai. Tumhari mama ki life mein ek majboori hai aur use tum door kar sakti ho.

Additi: kaise?

Heer: woh aise kyunki aap hamari angel ho. Aap apne magic wand se majboori ko choo mantar kardoge

Additi: mujhe kya karna hoga?

Heer: beta thore dinon ke liye aapko papa ke saath rehna hoga. Aap wahan rahoge aur aapka magic wand mere kaam aayega, meri majboori khatam phir mama hamesha aapke saath rahegi.

Additi: mama main aapke bina kaise rahoongi? Mera khayal kaun rakhega?

Heer: are itne dinon mein kaun khayal rakhta tha?

Additi: mitali masi

Heer: to is liye masi aapke saath jaayegi.

Additi: magar masi ka magic se kya connection?

With this Additi laughed n then she tightly hugged Heer.

Additi: I will miss you mama!

Heer: I will miss you too my angel!

Heer: acha ab aapko ek aur kaam karna hai

Additi: kya?

Heer: hum apna secret kisi ko nahin batayenge papa ko bhi nahin

Additi: to phir main papa se kya kahoon

Heer: aapko papa ko sirf yeh kehna hai ke aap unke saath rehne aaoge. Chalein papa ko phone karne?

Additi sadly nodded, earlier she used to be happy to talk with Prem but now this phone call means her separation from Heer.

Heer: additi tum apne papa bear ko yaheen bhool gayi

Additi: yeh mere saath nahin jaayega. Prem bear is ghar mein rahega aur uski family mere saath jaayegi.

Heer: kyun?

Additi held shona bear n sweetu bear in her hand n said: kyunki mama aur baby alag nahin reh sakte isliye main inhein alag nahin karoongi.