My First Piece of Writing on PREMEER Part51 Pg149 - Page 100

Originally posted by: Crazy_94

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chari hunde tu😆 aaon update kandas thoro waqt lagndo, sabar kar

subhaaren kandas promise 😉

ha tunjo asar thyo aahe😆 jaldi kar wadeekh sabr nothe the.....

Originally posted by: Crazy_94

ha tunjo asar thyo aahe😆 jaldi kar wadeekh sabr nothe the.....

paarn wakayi charya pya lagoon🤣🤣

PART51

Additi is sleeping between Prem n Heer on bed. She gets up with a smiling face n jumps out of bed. Heer woke up n saw Additi looking for something in the drawer.

Heer: additi tum kya rahi ho?

Additi didn't answered back n kept on searching

Heer: itni raat hogayi hai beta ab so jaao

Additi almost shouted: milgaya!

Heer turned to the other side, covered her face with blanket to get rid of Additi's screams n grumbled: aaj kal ke bache uff! Chen se sone bhi nahin dete.

Prem half asleep said: heer meri angel ko kuch mat kaho

Heer removed blanket from face n looked angrily at Prem who was asleep.

Heer: prem tum bhi na, neend mein bhi apni beti ki tarafdaari kar rahe ho

She then looked at Additi who was making drawing on a piece of paper.

Heer: tumhari angel bilkul tum par gayi hai.

Heer went to sleep n Additi was done with drawing. It was a complete family picture of a man, his wife n their cute little daughter.

Additi noticed that there is some space between the mother n daughter's sketch.

Additi: oh no, thori space reh gayi hai ab main kya karoon. No problem subah theek kar doongi.

She carefully placed drawing paper in drawer, climbed on bed n went to sleep.

Prem is in his room sitting on his chair n writing diary. He wrote: yeh kismat bhi kaise ajeeb khel khelti hai. Kuch waqt pehle hum na chahte huwe bhi ek doosre se door the lekin ab koi doori nahin, aur naahi koi majboori. Additi ki family finally complete hogayi.

Heer comes in room calling Prem for breakfast. She saw Prem writing diary n placed her hand on forehead.

Heer: hey bhagwaan yeh baap beti dono ek jaise hain

Prem: kyun heer kya huwa?

Heer: raat ko additi drawing kar rahi thi aur abhi tum kuch likh rahe ho. Aisa lag raha hai jaise main kisi successful writer ki biwi hoon.

Prem got up from his chair n said: jee nahin mrs heer prem juneja.

Heer smiled at him

Prem: aap kisi writer ki nahin balke ek business tychoon ki biwi hain. Kya aap unka naam jaanti hain?

Heer: haan aap ne abhi abhi bataya tha

Prem: maine! Maine kab bataya?

Heer: jab aap mera naam le rahe the tab aap ne apna naam bhi le liya.

She repeated what Prem said earlier: heer prem juneja

Prem smiled n said: aur ab yeh naam hamesha tumhare naam ke saath rahega

Heer felt proud for being Mrs Prem Juneja

Prem came near Heer with an intention of kissing her when Heer interrupted him: prem tum ne kuch suna?

Prem: heer nahin maine kuch nahin suna

Heer: are maine abhi koi awaz suni

Prem: heer tum bhi na, har baar koi bahana bana kar mujhe kiss karne se rok deti ho

Heer: prem believe me

Prem: no I will not, tumhare paas har baar koi bahana tayaar hota hai

Heer placed finger on his lips n gestured him to be quiet

They both heard noise of someone coughing.

Heer: suna tum ne, ab bhi kahoge ke main bahana kar rahi hoon.

Prem: heer I'm sorry woh'

Heer angrily said: mujhe kuch nahin sunna

They heard someone saying: aap dono plz jhagra mat karo

Prem: yeh kiski awaz hai?

Heer: kisi bache ki awaz hai

They heard someone saying: mama papa main hoon additi

Premeer: additi tum kahan ho?

Additi: cupboard mein

Premeer rushed to cupboard n opened it.

Prem took Additi in arms n carried her to bed.

Additi stood on bed while Premeer stood on floor beside her

Heer: tum cupboard mein kya kar rahi thi?

Additi: aap dono ki baatein sun rahi thi

Premeer were shocked. Heer looked angry while Prem hid his face in embarassment.

Heer: kyun kiya aisa?

Additi: aap hi ne to raat ko kaha tha ke main papa jaisi hoon

Heer: to iska matlab ke papa bhi aise karte the?

Additi: haan

Heer looked at Prem while he denied

Prem: nahin heer maine aisa kabhi nahin kiya

Heer stared at him

Prem: tum mujhe aise kyun dekh rahi ho? Maine cupboard mein chup kar maa bauji ki baatein kabhi nahin suni

Heer: to phir tumhari beti kya keh rahi hai?

Prem looked at Additi n said: beta aapko koi galat fehmi huwi hai main nahin aapke preet chachu aisa karte the.

Heer turned to Additi: beta aapko kuch ho jata to?

Additi: aap dono ko meri koi parwaah nahin thi

Prem: acha! humein parwaah nahin thi?

Additi: jee, aap dono jhagra kar rahe the phir papa mama ko sorry keh rahe the.

Heer: haan woh is liye kyunki unhon ne meri baat nahin maani, maine aapke khaasne ki awaz suni thi lekin tumhare papa ne mama ka vishwaas hi nahin kiya

Prem: heer woh to is liye kyunki main tumhein kiss'

Heer covered her mouth in embarassment n shot him an angry look

Prem realized what he was abt to say n tried to avoid Additi who was staring at him.

Additi: papa sentence main poora kardoon? Aap mama ko kiss karna chahte the na? mama aap ne papa ko kiss kyun nahin karne diya

Heer angrily said: additi

With her hand she closed Additi's eyes where as Additi thought her mom is abt to hold her ear.

Heer quickly kissed on Prem's cheek, removed her hand from Additi's eyes n ran away

Additi: papa kiss milgayi na?

Prem smiled n said: yes!

They had a highfive n Prem hugged Additi.

Kitchen scene

Heer was preparing lunch in kitchen while Meher came in shouting at Avi n holding his ear.

Avi: ouch mama plz choro na

Heer: are meher kya kar rahi hai?

Avi: mama plz its hurting me!

Heer: meher bache ko dard ho raha hai, chorde na

Meher: didi yeh ise kissing scene dekhne se pehle sochna chahiye tha

Heer was shocked: kya?

Meher: ek film mein pati patni romance kar rahe the aur yeh nalayak maze le kar dekh raha tha

Avi: mummy chota sa to scene tha aap ne aakar sab kharab kar diya

Meher angrily said: chup kar!

She heard Preet's voice: meher meri tie kahan hai?

Meher: hey bhagwaan yahan mere bache ke sanskaaron par woh film producers paani pher rahen hain aur preet ko apni tie ki pari huwi hai

She heard his voice again: meher jaldi aao plz

Meher: aarahi hoon preet

Meher left n Heer became busy cutting the vegetables

Avi: yeh mummy ko bhi kya hai chota sa to scene tha uske baad to un husband wife ka rona dhona shuru ho jata.

Heer was totally involved in preparing meals

Avi pointed out to a bowl of yogurt n asked: masi kis ki hai?

Firstly Heer was busy cooking but when she heard the word "kiss" she was surprised n asked him: kya?

Avi repeated his question: kis ki hai?

Heer was quite surprised: kya!

She then noticed his finger n understood that he was asking abt the yogurt n she thought that he asked whether she have had a kiss?

Heer: oh beta yeh aapke papa, prem aur additi ke liye hai. Aap khaoge?

Avi: no mujhe pasand nahin, main lunch ke baad icecream khaaonga.

Avi went away n heer said: yeh kiss to mera peecha hi nahin chor rahi!

Precap:

Additi drew another girl of her age in the space between her n Heer's sketch. Heer entered in the room, saw the drawing n asked: beta aap ne ek hi jaisi do sketches kyun banaai?

Additi: mama space reh gayi thi to is liye maine apne jaisi ek aur larki ki sketch bana di

Heer: aap ise mita do, aisa lag raha hai jaise aapke mama papa ki do judwaa betiyaan hain

Additi: but family complete lag rahi hai

Heer: lekin beta yeh sach nahin hai

Additi: kyun nahin hai? Additi looked sad!

What destiny has in store for this family? Keep waiting!

Wonderful update......loved premeer nd chahat scenes.........meher-avi part was 😆........nd heer thinking abt kiss was funny........after reading the precap,i remembered that lady from hospital talking to heer abt her chahat ........i think heer gave birth to twins but she got only additi.........just a guess 😃..........hope ul cont sooon.........thanx 4 the pm......

loved the part....it was awesome each n everything from scenes to dialouges and your beautifull way of expressing each thing was superb.aww my additi is soo cute just like her mom dad..enjoyed alot reading meher avi scene too! overall great work👍🏼

hey i completely agree with anisha...i guess this is going to b ur next track...wow it seems interesting,its going to b fun! loved n enjoyed reading the part.This FF truely rocks!!!

premeer's kiss scene was soo sweet...