My First Piece of Writing on PREMEER Part51 Pg149

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Posted: 15 years ago

#971

Originally posted by: heer_varsha
the scenebetween additi and heer was very emotional but u described it very well.thanks for the pm and do continue soon . and pm me whenever u update.

thanks a ton dear for liking the emotional part

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Posted: 15 years ago

#972

Originally posted by: premeer928
amazing update...👏 awww....additi is too cute...poor child. hope heer is treated and gets fine soon. continue soon...and thanks for the PM....😊

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Afreen

feeling sorry for additi my poor baby 😭 hopefully all will go well with heer

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Posted: 15 years ago

#973

Originally posted by: punjabi0926
Missed your update... You did a wonderful job updating...

thanks dear for loving my ff n missing the update wen i take time in updating it. thanks for appreciating my work

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Posted: 15 years ago

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Originally posted by: premeer928
wow...awesome update...👏 so emotional...i almost cried...especially the song sequence was so sad... 😭 plz dont separate premeer...make heer better soon. continue soon...and thanks for the PM...😊

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Afreen

i wanted to do sumthing new in this ff this song sequence was a new experiment for me though it was emotional but i hope u liked it i hope u understand the depth in the lines.

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Posted: 15 years ago

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Originally posted by: Miracle_leo

awesome part but filled wid emotions,i like da song which u picturized 2 premeer n da ways u described dis song lyrics in ur ff i loved it i mean da ways u explain dis song in scenes.plz dont seperate premeer i hope jaldi prem came to know abt heer cancer.

thanks for luving the song sequence n dont worry premeer wont be separated

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Posted: 15 years ago

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Originally posted by: Crazy_94
it was really emotional and loved ur song sequence it was superb

thanks for luving it, though its emotional but i loved it

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Posted: 15 years ago

#977

Originally posted by: Miracle_leo
hey again its excellent part,loved premeer scenes n dialouges r superb.in dis part its has loved,sadness n cuteness which made this part more beautifull i really like ur ff alot n loved all scenes.

thank u sooo much for reading it on time n commenting on it i love ur comments

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Posted: 15 years ago

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Originally posted by: Miracle_leo
loved premeer scenes,heer scenes at mandir n offcourse additi innocent scenes i mean all scenes r mind blowing.additi is so cute i loved her when additi will came to know abt her mama throat cancer how she will behave mujhe to soch ke dar lag raha hai.

dont get scared dear everything will be fine

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Posted: 15 years ago

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Originally posted by: Miracle_leo

precap se to lagta hai dat additi apne papa ke paas jayegi,i hope heer operation main bach jaye oh god heer ko throat cancer hai mujhe cancer bemari se bohat dar lagta hai yar koi aur bemari de deti heer ko anywaz yar iss part ne to mujhe sach main dara diya n i hope jaldi prem ko pata chale dat heer ko throat cancer hai.

additi will unite premeer hopefully

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