Judwaa FF: ArMan MEET prt 4 pg 4 ArMan MEET love

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Will start to post up the actual story in a week or so.
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Plot:
This story is about two brothers who were separated at birth when there parents both died one was raised by a big Punjabi family the other was raised by a poor Marathi family. Now both are grown up, one who has become the Juneja families youngest and naughty brother who is always yelled at by everyone because of him always fooling around but is loved by his older brother prem, while on the other hand the other one becomes the oldest son in the family, a very responsible and hardworking guy, who works at a garage as a mechanic who lives for his family, both are totally opposite people but have one thing in common and that is that if one gets hurt then the other feels it. Both are brought up in India but on different sides of India, while one falls in love with a typical traditional Marathi middle class girl who is working at a office, the other falls in love with his sister in law's younger sister who has just come back from Canada finishing her studies but has decided to study more in India, when both manav's family and preet's family go to Ambala there is a big storm in which both manav and preet get trapped in, both who are unconscious are taken by each other's family, when they both wake up they don't remember anyone.
Characters:
Manav: A very responsible hardworking Marathi guy who has always lived for his family, he always thought that he would marry to girl that his parents would choose for him but ends up falling in love with a girl. He is the oldest in his family and the one who takes care of everyone's needs, he is very close to his mom, and he doesn't know that he is adopted, Archana and Manav get married and they all decide to go to Ambala where Manav is taken by the Juneja thinking he is preet as he also has lost his memory.
Preet: A Punjabi background guy and also a very naughty, also doesn't know that he is adopted, never does any work type of guy, who is always fooling around with everyone, but is always saved by his brother prem and is loved dearly by his sister in law, when his sister in law's sister comes from Canada he falls head over heels for her but it takes her time to like him they end up getting married and right after marriage they go to Ambala, where preet is taken by Manav's family since he has lost his memory and they think he is Manav.
Archana: a very traditional and valued girl, who also comes from a Marathi background, she is the second oldest in her family, who is really close to her brother, mom and her sister Varsha, she works a office as s typist, she meets manav when she was at the temple when she was about to fall the stares. She marries Manav but before there marriage could progress, he loses his memory.
Meher Mann: A Punjabi Girl who has just come back from Canada after finishing her studies, but decides to study further, she gets into a fight with Manav when she is coming back, and then meets Preet she thinks he was fooling around with him and gets really mad at him and starts to not like him, on the other hand preet who has fallen for her tries everything to win her over, when he does they get married but aren't able to live a married life as she is trying to make her husband remember her and his family.

Other characters:

Prashant: Archana's boss who has soft side and likes her but has never told her.
Harman:
Meher's best freind who owns his dads empire and also the guy who her parents has arranged for her to get married to him when she comes back to India, but ends up marrying Preet as she falls in love with him, which hurts Harman alot.

Edited by jamune - 16 years ago

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Posted: 16 years ago
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yay! Here as well! 😆 But i'll comment in the PR forum!!! 😃
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Posted: 16 years ago
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interesting........do continue............u knw wat dis is d only way we can keep Preet alive by writing fics........
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Posted: 16 years ago
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WOW!!!!! real interesting plot......

can you plzzz.. add me too??

for m also in love with Manv oh! Preet oh! Sushant.........oh! what ever u call him he's as adorable than ever
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Posted: 16 years ago
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wow i really like the concept and characters continue soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
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After giving birth to two twins, Mr. And Mrs. Kapoor are going back to Ambala, on the way back there train crashes into another train where many get injured. Many get hurt and many have died, both who are hurt are in the hospital end up dying leaving there twins behind. When a lady who had lost her youngest son in the train crash, see's a little baby crying she feels as if her son has come back and decides to take him, but didn't see the other baby. While the other baby is still crying as he got separated from his brother is picked up by a kind gentleman and lady who think that he is gods greatest gift, as they have been trying to conceive for a while but were never able to have any kids.

Back in Mumbai the lady brings the little baby in with her and her husband along with her two other kids prem and kulraaj, she decides to name him Preet as he is brought back from god for her dead sons placer , preet will be gayatry and lalits youngest son.

Back in Calcutta a couple takes the little boy to the temple, where she names him Manav and kisses him on the forehead telling her husband that he is going to be her apples eyes, later on she has two more kids two daughters but has always loved her sons more.

18 years have passed

As two ladies in two different cities and different houses are getting ready for a puja both are calling out there sons.

While a girl is telling her Aai that Dada is taking a shower, we see a guy who gets out of bed went prays to god and goes into the shower to take a shower.

While on the other hand we see a girl dress in a nice red suit telling her mother that Preet is still sleeping and Heer went to wake him up as he only listens to his bhabi, and Gayatri smacks her head telling herself what will she do with this boy.

The girl comes to her Dada telling him to hurry up as Aai is calling him and the Manav is telling his little sister to give him 5 min he will be out.

While Kulraaj comes to Heer who is flirting around with her husband Prem, Kulraaj tells Heer and Prem she is sorry for disturbing there romantic moment but Mom wants Heer to go and wake Preet up, Heer is telling Kuldi that Preet hasn't woken up yet, and Kulraaj tells Heer that he hasn't, Heer is telling Prem that Preet is definitely going to get beaten up today and she leaves from there to wake him up.

Back in Calcutta some ladies are talking about how great Manav is and that who ever he will marry will be lucky and all talk about there daughter proposal for Manav, Manav's other sister Jyoti hears it and tells her younger sister Rani that there they go again.

Heer comes to wake preet up who has his whole body and face covered with his blanket, Heer is trying to wake preet up but he doesn't wake up, Heer is telling him that there is a puja going on downstairs and that they are all waiting for him, preet still doesn't listen until Heer brings a bucket of water and throws it on Preet who wakes up, on the other hand Manav who can feel the water splashing on his face makes a nose which his sister think he has gone crazy, and he goes to his mom and dad so they can do the puja.

Preet who is awake tells his Bhabhi that he doesn't want to go downstairs as he thinks this is all boring but Heer tells him he has no choice and he will have to come down and also that Prem wants to discuss something g with him.

Manav who is getting late work is stopped by the neighbours lady who are praising there daughter in front of Manav thinking he will get impressed but Manav is not interested what so ever, and leaves from there.

Preet goes down for the puja, his mom comes and pulls his ears, Manav who says ouch realizes that no one is around him and then he starts to walk thinking he really has gone nuts.

Prem takes preet asking him about joining the office, but preet somehow cuts him off and leaves from there telling his brother that he doesn't need to work as he has his older brother, before leaving he see's Heer telling him he wants to take her shopping tom but Heer tells Preet that she can't her sister is coming back from Canada tom and she needs to receive her but preet begs her to come with her and that they will go together to receive her and she agrees.

Manav who is talking to a friend who is asking Manav why he is always rejecting all these proposal, Manav is telling his friend that he knows he will marry who ever his Aai tells him to but he doesn't see HER in them, Manav friend is asking him what doesn't he mean by HEER, Manav is telling him HER meaning his dream girl, someone who understand him and others, who will put her family first, someone traditional a kind hearted girl.

Preet on the other hand is at the beach with his friends, when some girls come and starts to flirt around with preet, preet who flirts with them but then walks away, his friends come and ask him why he never pays attention to these girls as all these girls are head over heels for him but preet tells his friends that he hast found her yet that he has gotten mesmerized by.

Precap: Manav takes his sister to the temple, where a girl is about to fall but he catches her.

Preet is shopping with Heer, on the other hand her sister has arrived at the airport waiting for them and is mad that no one has showed up.

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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey this is awesome!!!!!!
if may i suggest smthing........a few pics with changes would surely help!!!

i can't wait for the next part!!!!!!
Edited by natashaa46 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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aww i loved it cant wait for the next part
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Next day

Manav is about to leave for work when his sister Jyoti comes asking him to take her to the temple and he agrees.

Preet on the other hand take Heer shopping.

Manav is at the temple when someone bumps into him, the guy said sorry and Manav said it is okay. Preet feels the bump and thinks the guys beside him bumped into him and told him to watch where he is walking, Heer takes him from there.

Manav is walking up the stairs and goes to pray, he is telling god that when will he find her, it was the first time he told someone about his dream girl and hope his Aai will find her, he tells his sister he going to wait for him downstairs and leaves from there, while putting on his shoes a girl who drops her taali is about to fall but Manav catches her, her hair is blowing into her face, Manav who is mesmerized by her is just glazing at her, her dupatta goes onto manav's face and she removes it off, after a good five minutes he let got of her, her sister Varsha runs after her asking her if she is okay, Manav's sister comes and recognizes Varsha and they both tell there sister and brother that they go to school together, and both introduce Manav and Archana and both leave different ways, Manav is still standing there looking at Archana is walking but turns around to see Manav when

Khulti fizaein, khulti ghatayein,
Sar pe naya hai aasaman,
Chaaro dishayein, hass ke bulaye,
Yu sab hue hai meharbaan..

Haann..
Hume to yahi rabba,
Kasam se pata hai,
Dil pe nahi, koi zor, koi zor
[Teri ore, teri ore, teri ore, hai rabba
Teri ore, teri ore, teri ore..]- 2 times

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A girl wearing western short dress is waiting for someone but no one has arrived, she gets mad, on the other hand heer and preet are still shopping, the girl waits for a little while more and ends up taking cab asking them where the juneja mansion is and he takes her.

Heer realizes she is later and tells preet to hurry up, they reach to the airport to find out that the flight from London has arrived and every passenger has left and both heer and preet think meher has arrived home, heer is worried as she knows meher's anger, preet tells her to relax.

The girl is in the cab when the cab stops, she goes to see what is happening and she see's Manav who is in the middle of the road fixing his bike, and meher gets mad and both meher and manav get at it, meher just walks off, one of manav's friends ask who she was, manav tells him she is a rich spoilt brat and we have noting to do with and he leaves, meher sist in the car telling her self what type of people there are in India.

Archana drops her sister off and goes to work, while walking she drops some files, when her boss comes and helps her he tells her how she is and she tells him she is fine and she leaves and her boss smiles, one of Archana's colleague also a friend tell her about going to the movies but Archana's refuses but they convince her and she agrees.

Meher reaches to the Juneja Mansion, she is walking in when all of the servants are staring at her, she goes into the house and see's Lalit and Gayatri and hugs them both telling them she is Meher, her parents are also there and she hugs them to, Heer reaches hom and see's Meher who is mad at her, Heer explains to her that it wasn't her fault but her devars fault, Meher tells heer she isn't mad at her but at someone else. Some idiots who she met on the streets and hugs her, preet is walking and ends up stumbling on meher luggage's and one of the servants who was walking in with petals of flowers ends up falling to and all of the flowers fall onto meher, preet looks up and she her who is talking to heer and he thinks he has just seen an angel, while looking at her when
raaton raat tara koi chand ya sitara koi
gire to utha lena, o suniyon re

tara chamkila hoga chand sharmila hoga nath(nose) mein laga lena) - 2

zara si sawwari hai woh zara si baawri hai woh

woh surme ki tarah meri aankhon mein hi rehti hai..

subah ke khawab se udai hai palkon ke neeche chupai hai

mano na mano tum sote sote khawabon mein bhi khawab dikhati hai

mano na mano tum pari hai woh pari ki kahaniyan sunati hai

(khuda ya khair, khuda ya khair) - 2

Heer is asking Meher about who the guy was, Meher is telling Heer that the guy was really rude, preet comes to introduce himself, but meher start to yell at him asking him what is he doing here and preet gets confused. Meher tells heer that this is the guy, but Heer thinks meher has gone nuts and takes her to her room, and meher tells herself that preet was fooling with her she wont forgive him.

Manav is at his garage thinking about Archana, one of his workers are asking him for a tool but he isn't paying attention to him until Manav ends up dropping a tool on his leg. His employee ask him what is he thinking about and Manav tells him noting.

Archana goes to the movies with her colleagues, there car gets stuck half way and Archana starts to cry thinking how will she get home on time, her friends tell her to relax they will get home on time. Manav who is driving spots the car goes to them asking them if they need any help not seeing Archana until he turns around and see's her, they ask for help and Manav helps them out but tells them that they need to leave the car here and they should come and pick it up tom and drop it at his garage he gives his card, he is about to leave when he hears Archana crying telling her friends how will she get home until Manav offers her a ride, Archana knew she couldn't say no so she went with him.

Archana is hesitating to hold manav and just sits behind him but ends up holding him as she was about to fall, Manav tells her not to be scared as he will make sure she doesn't fall, Manav drops Archana near the galley so no one will see her with a guy, she starts to walk but her dupatta gets stuck, she turns around to see her dupatta is stuck on Manav's watch, she stares at her but also stares at herself as her dupatta has fallen off her, she stands there kind of scared and is crying, Manav takes her dupatta out of his watch goes to her and wraps the dupatta around her, Archana stares at him and so his Manav, Manav tells her not o be sad and to leave and she does and Manav stares at her telling himself what is it that makes him more closer to her.

Preet comes into Meher's room to talk to her but see's she is not around, Meher comes out of the bathroom and Preet hides behind the blinds, Meher comes out in a purple silky long dress, drying her hair, Preet stands behind blinds staring at her, Meher seeing no one is around puts some music on and starts to dance to Zara Zara touch Me from Race, Preet is kind of mesmerized but also feeling really uneasy as he thinks he should leave but cant as he can't take his eyes off her, Meher is still dancing until she see's some feets and thinks it's a theft she is about to scream when Preet covers her mouth telling it is her she gets mad and tells him to get, Preet tells Meher he came in to talk to her, Meher tells him if he is crazy and how long he has been in here for, Preet tells her long enough to see her dance, Meher gets embarrassed but gets mad and kicks him out, and ends up kicking him in the bum and preet runs out, Preet tells himself that today she hates him but he will make sure he will win her.

Precap: Preet and Manav are both at the movies but don't see each other.

Arcahan is trying to find a cab but fails and some car stops in front of her.

Meher is walking and is about to fall when someone catches her and he asks her she should see where she is walking and all you can see is the guys eyes.

Edited by jamune - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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OMG its funny really cool concept do continue and could you add me to

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