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Alrite guys, this is for one of the most amazing people in the world, our very own, Meera! Ily, and i finally finished it! before it was midnite too! *smug muh* hope she likes it and u all also...so here i go..

Queen of my Heart

She sighed as she walked through the crowd, another day gone filled with boring old classes with the same stupid people around her acting like immature punks. Normally she would have been smiling and laughing with her friends, but today…she wasn't up to it. It's been weeks since he left for his meeting. She was feeling so lonely without him and his comforting arms surrounding her in a loving embrace.

A sudden breeze came through the hallway and caused her hair to fly over her face. Sighing once again, this time frustrated, she pulled the tresses back behind her ear with her eyes closed. When they opened, he was standing there, simply smiling at her with his arms wide open, asking her to come hug him. She closed her eyes and opened them again with an excited smile, but he wasn't there, she looked around with desperate eyes, panic enveloping her before she growled angrily. He came to haunt her in her thoughts when he's not here with her.

"Meera!" a voice called out from behind her, she turned around to look at her friend running towards her. Ravjot stared at her and jingled a key chain in front of her face. "Tum kahan khoyi rahti ho Meera?" What was she to answer to this? That she missed her boyfriend and didn't feel like studying and paying any attention to her surroundings without him there? She shook her head and took the keys from her friend.

"Nothing's wrong Ravs, I've just been bored lately, the lecture was so dull, that's all" she lied, biting her lip. She was sure her friend would catch her lie as she had always been a bad liar. But to her surprise, Ravs didn't say anything and only hummed in agreement. Oh great, now my friends don't notice me being depressed, she thought sadly, oh Prem! When are you coming back? Everything's wrong without you…

The two friends reached their apartment complex, Meera pretended to look for something in her bag, allowing Ravs to go ahead. After making sure her friend had entered the elevator, she began to look through her phone for any messages from Prem, but found nothing. "He hasn't called in two days, what is the matter with him? He doesn't know how much I worry, for god's sake, can't even leave a text!" she muttered, dragging her feet. More than being angry, she was sad, what if he had found someone else?

A sudden fear gripped her heart in its fist as this thought ran through her mind the whole way to her apartment. She took a deep breath and opened the door, more than ready to go hide in her room and cry a little, not wanting her friends to see her breakdown. She looked up quickly only to widen her eyes with surprise and shock. All her friends stood there with big smiles and a big banner with hearts, balloons and other imagery drawn on it hung over the doorway to the kitchen. The room was filled with chattering and happiness. She couldn't help but smile, her sadness gone.

"What is this about you guys?" she asked with a small grin, walking forward to receive the hugs bestowed upon her by them. It was Mayank who answered, his arms wrapped around Radz waist, "Well, our special two birdies told us that you seemed a bit sad lately, so we decided to cheer you up" glancing over where Kiran and Rinki stood. They smirked at each other and winked at Meera who shook her head and smiled a bigger grin.

"Aw, you guys didn't have to do this" she began to say but was interrupted by Shabz, "Nonsense, we did. And, it gives us the chance to party so turn the music on guys" dancing a little in Preet's arms. Meera laughed and nodded, listening to the music begin and all her friends beginning to dance. She stared at them, they were all so happy. Ravs was dancing with Yug, Kiran was cuddled up to Akki and Rinki stood talking on the phone to someone. Shifali was on her honeymoon with Rajveer.

She turned and walked to the balcony, closing the door behind her, letting the music be blocked and only the sounds of the cars below her and other city noises be heard. She leaned against the railing and looked down, watching as some dude walked out of a car and began walking to their building. He was talking on the phone and was dressed in a white kurta shirt with blue jeans, his feet enclosed in sneakers. His hair was messy from what she could see, and if she didn't know better she would've mistook him for Prem.

If she was turned around, she would've noticed Shabz and Kiran watching her with matching smirks, Shabz talking on the phone. If only.

Tujhe dekha to yeh jaana sanam

Pyaar hota hai deewana sanam

Tujhe dekha to yeh jaana sanam

Ab yahan se kahan jaaye hum

Teri baahon mein mar jaaye hum

"Meera, come with me please?" Kiran asked Meera as she sipped on her soda. Meera looked at the younger girl with an eyebrow raised, and nodded softly, following her out of the door. They walked towards the elevators and Meera was slightly anxious due to the smirk that could not leave her friend's face. Uh-oh, what is she up to this time? She wondered to herself, looking at the floor, memorizing the pattern of the tiles. She did not look up as the elevator dinged and she entered before Kiran, turning to the door without paying attention to her surroundings. She saw her friend standing outside and waving at her with a grin. "Enjoy!" were the last words she heard before the doors closed and she was moving up.

"Kiran!" she yelled a bit too late. She frowned and crossed her arms, what was the matter with her friend, leaving her like this alone. She muttered to herself, and gasped when arms crept around her tiny waist and pulled her against a firm chest. She felt her heart beating fast, her eyes widened, why did this man feel as if it was her Prem. Suddenly lips brushed against her shoulder blade as a nose caressed at the curve of her neck. What was she doing, allowing this ajnabee to touch her in the way only Prem was allowed, yet why did it feel as if she knew him? She was stiff in his arms, but a sigh escaped her pale lips as a whisper rang through the quiet, "Miss me?"

She smiled and closed her eyes, leaning her head against him, even when her eyes did not know who he was, her body and heart knew. "Prem…am I dreaming again? Because if I am, I don't want to wake up..." he smiled at her words and kissed her cheek before turning her around. "If you're dreaming then so must I, because I don't want to wake up from this dream either" he smirked at her. She immediately blushed as he pulled her flush against him. Without her noticing, he had her cornered against the wall.

La la la la la, la la la la la

La la la la la, la la la

Aankhen meri sapne tere

Dil mera, yaadein teri

"What are you doing here Prem? I thought you wouldn't be back for another week?" she asked, closing her eyes as he trailed kisses over her cheeks. He hummed against her throat and lightly nipped at her jawbone, "I was missing this hot girlfriend of mine, see I couldn't concentrate on my work fully because she kept appearing in my thoughts all the time, so I decided to come home early to surprise her". Trailing his lips against her forehead lightly kissing her hair, he lifted her chin and looked deeply into her big doe eyes, staring so lovingly at him. His heart still got caught in his throat every time she looked at him so trustfully.

O, mera hai kya

Sab kuch tera

Jaan teri, saansein teri

Oh what he wouldn't do for this girl! Anything she wanted was hers, all she had to do was ask him and it would be lying in front of her before she could miss it. How she managed to make him feel this was still astounded him and he decided he didn't want to know, it was better to feel it every time then expect it coming.

Just as his lips moved down to caress hers, the bell dinged and the elevator opened, an elderly couple stood there staring at them with knowing grins. Meera tried to stop him but he held her against him in his strong arms, letting their lips touch, she caved in the minute his touched hers. Her arms reached around to wrap around his neck as the elderly couple snickered to themselves over young love and went to the next elevator. The two lovers came up for air and gasped, leaning their foreheads against one another's. Her cheeks were flushed while he was smirking at her lost look.

She blinked at him before growling and tugging his head back down, pushing the emergency button, stalling the elevator as she got reacquainted with him. The two remained missing for another 15 minutes before their friends began wondering about them. Radz looked at them all and snickered, "How much you wanna bet they're getting it on in the elevator?" causing the group to burst out laughing. Just then the door opened and they stumbled in, flushing red and breathless. "Someone looks like they had a good make-out session" Rinki muttered with a smirk, watching as the two shuffled their feet and stared at them with wide eyes.

"Uhh…" they stuttered as their friends laughed and began to leave, telling them to enjoy themselves. Prem looked at Meera with a smirk and whispered, "Looks like Ravs is gonna spend the night at Yug's house" before pulling her closer in his arms, letting his lips descend upon hers once again. "Let's go, queen of my heart, time to get reacquainted with the couch" he muttered, pulling her with him. She shook her head and smacked his head with a roll of her eyes. But he managed to persuade her with some talents better left unmentioned.

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Before u ask, yes the song is cut, lmao
Oh Meera! i hope this was good enough, i think its not as good as it could have been, but here it is..
Comments and critisism is alwys welcomed!
- Rinks

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Reserved. Gonna go sleep now 😆
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Posted: 16 years ago
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my spot! 😛

*edited*

Just before I get into the gushing...I'll have you know this is going to be a pretty long comment and if it's not...it's because I kept hyperventilating!😆

*sighs*

Firstly...I'm going to tell you AGAIN...you shouldn't have written me one...😳 😳 But thank you thank you x1000 for it!😃 Perfect way to finish off this blah day! 😳 And obviously I like it *rolls eyes* 😆😆😆

The title itself had me giggling!😆 And *sighs* I love the way you described the day as being totally blah in the one shot too--nice and real!😉😆😆 The mini hallucination with him was cute! 😳 (something I do A LOT! 😛) 😳

Awww poor me thinking that my friends don't realize when I'm so blah....(wrong but still!😆😆) *sniff sniff* "More than being angry, she was sad, what if he had found someone else?" Totally possible! 😆 But sigh it is Prem!😳😳😳 Anyways...what I meant to say there before getting horribly distracted was that you caught the insecurites perfectly....being me...that is what I'd immidiately think of😆

Awww a party! 😃 *giggles* that sounds fun! 😛 Ohhh Mayu and Radz! 😛 Shabo and Preet! 😃😳 Shif's on her honeymoon? *sighs*😆😆 But oh yes Yay for Rinkz and Kiran who noticed the depressing me!😆😆😆 Aww Ravs and Yug are dancing! 😃 Cute! 😛😳 Aww Kimz with Akki --and who were you talking to on the phone missy? 😉

I love how you added a balcony bit--I've got some weird obsession with just going out on the balcony to think! 😳 *giggles* since I've read the entire thing I already know...but teehee...I love how I could tell it was Prem! 😃😳 *true love na?* 😉😆😆 The entire ensemble sounded fab for him too!😉😆 The If only part was pefectly added! 😆 Evil and yet incredibly sweet Kiran and Shabo!😆😆😆

I've gotta say I love that I knew Kimz was upto something! 😆 I wouldn't totally just walk away with her!😆😆😆 But yet I still do that!😃 But I'm telling you Rinkz...I loved the way I went in the elevator, because believe it or not--that's the way I actually step in elevators too! 😆 But Sheesh Kimz waving like that1 😆 *shakes head*

*sighs* this is where the innumerable blushes start!☺️ I swear Rinkz this ENTIRE elevator bit had me wanting to squeal, I couldn't since my parents are asleep, but I bit my lip instead!😆😆😆 Not a good idea!😳😳 This part had me grinning like an idiot😆 "She smiled and closed her eyes, leaning her head against him, even when her eyes did not know who he was, her body and heart knew. " It just sounded so beautiful and showed the connection between them soooo well!😳😳😳 The light whisper of his "miss me?" was chilling yet thrilling! (oh I rhymed!) But I'll have to tell you the minute the hands grasped her/me(whatever you'd prefer) my breath got caught! *giggles* ☺️

Awww the whole thing about it being a dream was adorable! 😃😳 And ofcourse...your little teaser bit had me grinning like a fool then and still again! ☺️ Oh and btw..I'm turning about 10 times more red than that emo!😳😳😳 OMG! that was my reaction when the elevator opened!! 😲 I totally forgot that it was movign! 😆 It made me burst out laughing that the elderly couple knew what was up and went to another elevator!😆😆😆 and that was also my main reaction when I stalled the elevator..."girl power!"😆😆😆 I expected him to do it...but ah *shrugs* This was much more fun to read!☺️

😲 Radz would say that? *shame shame* then again I'm not really one to shame anyone am I? *giggles* 15 minutes Rinkz? really?😆😆😆 Thanks!😆 the comment from you was WELL expected though! 😳 See meaning I know you pretty well too!😆 But seriously the description you gave us was....*shakes head* It was BAD! (in the good way😉 Get it?) ☺️ Always a good way!😉

Ravs is such a great roomie! 😃 *hugs for Ravs* And besides she gets to spend time with Yug! 😆 As for his little "reacquanted with the couch" line...my reaction WAS PERFECT!😆 I absolutely loved it Rinkz! 😃

AS for the song being cut, it worked perfectly like this!😃 And why don't you think it was good enough? I LOVED IT! 😃 ^the comment is evidence of that! 😉

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Thank you SOOOO much Rinkz! 😃 I absolutely loved adored and will now read this almost every night!😆

Love you loads and loads! 😃

Meera😳 🤗
Edited by indiandoll89 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Can't wait you two! =P hehe
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Posted: 16 years ago
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YAY! Read and laughed 😆
ill reply tomz...gtta do the prelogue for the story and then post it tomz as a lil preview of my summer writing 😆 plus chem and span test tomz..better study 🤢
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Ahh yes studying's important! 😃

But ohh the prologue already? 😳 YAY! 😃
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Yah i knw, but i dnt wnna! *whines*
Yesh Ma'am! hehe, its frm my attendants' pov...in the beginning at lst, lmao
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Sounds intriguing! 😆😳

You'll do fine--😃
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Thank thee *bows* haha, it strts with her chasing me...lmao

Oh i hope so! *crosses fingers* pray for me yes? =P
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Now that sounds a bit MORE intriguing! 😆

Course I will! *hugs*😃

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