Queen of my Heart- one shot - Page 3

Originally posted by: shabo24

Meera is pretty awesome no? 😆
of course 😆
*sigh* I MISSED YOUR WRITING MAN! Thank god you are back! (kinda) :) That was so well written, and just the sheer naughtiness and love you had in it - so well done!
Awww! i feel loved 😳😆 i am, jst tomorrow left and then skool is done, im gnna try to be online more but i have summer hw for AP Lit to do...*rolls eyes* stupid ppl..haha. Ooh thanks! hehe, i had fun with it 😆
--shabz
- Rinks

Originally posted by: indiandoll89

my spot! 😛
yayyy
*edited*
ooh gimme! *eager muh*
Just before I get into the gushing...I'll have you know this is going to be a pretty long comment and if it's not...it's because I kept hyperventilating!😆
*roflmao* its okay meera, i'll understand, besides it doesn't matter how long u write it, as long as u write something 😉
*sighs*
a sigh...hm is this a good sign or a bad one? 😆
Firstly...I'm going to tell you AGAIN...you shouldn't have written me one...😳 😳 But thank you thank you x1000 for it!😃 Perfect way to finish off this blah day! 😳 And obviously I like it *rolls eyes* 😆😆😆
Firstly, i will also tell you again, stop it! 😆 i wrote it because i wanted to and for god's sake, u deserved it! You've written so many things for us and i decided this was a pretty good way of thanking you, for having me as ur friend, for putting me in LWB, i love it! and for writing that one-shot for me, i still need to comment, shall do tht after replying to this 😆
Ayi, thanks again? *shakes mundi* tum bhi na meeruu 😆 Aww, im glad it was and u liked it 😳
The title itself had me giggling!😆 And *sighs* I love the way you described the day as being totally blah in the one shot too--nice and real!😉😆😆 The mini hallucination with him was cute! 😳 (something I do A LOT! 😛) 😳
Yes, it was based of a Westlife song i was listening, its pretty cute, and i thought the title would be nice and wud suit u and prem in this scene 😆 Aha, i didnt plan tht, it came out like tht own its own! 😆 Aww, how did i know tht 😆
Awww poor me thinking that my friends don't realize when I'm so blah....(wrong but still!😆😆) *sniff sniff* "More than being angry, she was sad, what if he had found someone else?" Totally possible! 😆 But sigh it is Prem!😳😳😳 Anyways...what I meant to say there before getting horribly distracted was that you caught the insecurites perfectly....being me...that is what I'd immidiately think of😆
Aw they did thou, jst not showing it to surprise u more 😆 i knw, like we wudn't realize if u were sad 😉...aw hush lmao...aww u shudnt, harshu is for u only 😉 me being his "sister" tht can still drool over him becuz im cool like tht, say he belongs with u 😆
Awww a party! 😃 *giggles* that sounds fun! 😛 Ohhh Mayu and Radz! 😛 Shabo and Preet! 😃😳 Shif's on her honeymoon? *sighs*😆😆 But oh yes Yay for Rinkz and Kiran who noticed the depressing me!😆😆😆 Aww Ravs and Yug are dancing! 😃 Cute! 😛😳 Aww Kimz with Akki --and who were you talking to on the phone missy? 😉
Yep a party! =] Yeshie, everyone is here lmao. We all noticed, me and kimz jst announced it like we announce everything thts pretty obvious 😆 I was talking to...my mother? 😆
I love how you added a balcony bit--I've got some weird obsession with just going out on the balcony to think! 😳 *giggles* since I've read the entire thing I already know...but teehee...I love how I could tell it was Prem! 😃😳 *true love na?* 😉😆😆 The entire ensemble sounded fab for him too!😉😆 The If only part was pefectly added! 😆 Evil and yet incredibly sweet Kiran and Shabo!😆😆😆
aww i knw, i love balconies a lot, so had to add it! =] Haha, i bet u do! yesh i described him like he looks only frm the top not face pov 😆😆 yesh, truve love! *nudges* 😉 Muahaha, thanks, i thought it wud make it a lil teeny bit more mysterious, even though it was obvious 😆
I've gotta say I love that I knew Kimz was upto something! 😆 I wouldn't totally just walk away with her!😆😆😆 But yet I still do that!😃 But I'm telling you Rinkz...I loved the way I went in the elevator, because believe it or not--that's the way I actually step in elevators too! 😆 But Sheesh Kimz waving like that1 😆 *shakes head*
U alwys know! haha, thts cuz ur so sweet! Omygosh, really? 😆 i jst did tht so u wnt see prem yet 😆 u know she wud do tht too! 😆
*sighs* this is where the innumerable blushes start!☺️ I swear Rinkz this ENTIRE elevator bit had me wanting to squeal, I couldn't since my parents are asleep, but I bit my lip instead!😆😆😆 Not a good idea!😳😳 This part had me grinning like an idiot😆 "She smiled and closed her eyes, leaning her head against him, even when her eyes did not know who he was, her body and heart knew. " It just sounded so beautiful and showed the connection between them soooo well!😳😳😳 The light whisper of his "miss me?" was chilling yet thrilling! (oh I rhymed!) But I'll have to tell you the minute the hands grasped her/me(whatever you'd prefer) my breath got caught! *giggles* ☺️
*roflmao* and a lot there are too 😆 Aww, dnt disturb em, cnt use the "friend said something" excuse forever 😆 aww im glad it did! lmao..hehe yesh, u knw im a describing freak, 🤣 yesh u rhymed! lmao i prefer u rlly, since it was for u 😆 aye haye! how cute! haha
Awww the whole thing about it being a dream was adorable! 😃😳 And ofcourse...your little teaser bit had me grinning like a fool then and still again! ☺️ Oh and btw..I'm turning about 10 times more red than that emo!😳😳😳 OMG! that was my reaction when the elevator opened!! 😲 I totally forgot that it was movign! 😆 It made me burst out laughing that the elderly couple knew what was up and went to another elevator!😆😆😆 and that was also my main reaction when I stalled the elevator..."girl power!"😆😆😆 I expected him to do it...but ah *shrugs* This was much more fun to read!☺️
*roflmao* ur welcome for tht meera, i jst love making ppl blush, shud see wht i do to kimz 😆 haha, u wud, since prem was getting cozy wit ya lmaoo. Hey, they been there before lmao. Muahah, i knw rite, girl power all the way 😆 i thought i shud make it something diff, not the guy taking the initial but the girl, the fact tht it was u makes it even more fun 😆
😲 Radz would say that? *shame shame* then again I'm not really one to shame anyone am I? *giggles* 15 minutes Rinkz? really?😆😆😆 Thanks!😆 the comment from you was WELL expected though! 😳 See meaning I know you pretty well too!😆 But seriously the description you gave us was....*shakes head* It was BAD! (in the good way😉 Get it?) ☺️ Always a good way!😉
Oh u knw she wud! lmao its the infulence of Adi 😆 U wanted it to be more than 2 hrs instead? 😆 *rofl* u knw me perfectly then, i so wud say tht to ur face too 😆😆 *roflmao* thanks meera, yah i got it 😆
Ravs is such a great roomie! 😃 *hugs for Ravs* And besides she gets to spend time with Yug! 😆 As for his little "reacquanted with the couch" line...my reaction WAS PERFECT!😆 I absolutely loved it Rinkz! 😃
Yesh she is, plus yug time was a double plus for her 😆 *roflmao* i figured u wud smack him sometime in there, lmao
AS for the song being cut, it worked perfectly like this!😃 And why don't you think it was good enough? I LOVED IT! 😃 ^the comment is evidence of that! 😉

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Hehe, u think? Ah, i alwys think tht. its called being nervous of others reactions 😆 Yesh it sur ish! *hugs back* 😉
Thank you SOOOO much Rinkz! 😃 I absolutely loved adored and will now read this almost every night!😆
Ur welcome, and plz no more thanks, i did it for me, not u 😉😆 Aww, tht wud be interesting, u blushing every nite, mite not be healthy for u, shud ask a doc...mayb Dr. Prem can help wit tht question? 😉😆
Love you loads and loads! 😃
Ily2 😃
Meera😳 🤗
Rinks