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Meera

@indiandoll89

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Posted: 16 years ago

#31

Ohhh...that intrigues me now! 😛 Can't wait! 😃

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Aradhna

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Posted: 16 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: sourpuss
My spot!

Now I know why you're in cahoots (that's such a funny word, isn't it? Cahoots. Hoot. Kuh-hoot. 😆 Cahoots...) with Nonee. Matchmaking is a helluva lotta fun, even if I'm doing it in a story! 😆 O.o Bhav, you need help. 😆 And yes, matchmaking is fun. (SHABZIE! You in? 😆)

I love how dramatic and theatrical you made me. "Death by trolley." Would I really say that? 😆 Hmm. I guess if I was seriously high I would... Yes, you would. Even if you were not high. And you know it. (I know I would. 😆)

Meow. I'm all out of things to say.

Ooh one more thing: Just because I said matchmaking is fun doesn't mean you can do it. 😛 Taylor Lautner + cupcakes trump your cake. So there. 😛 *rolls eyes* We still have more people, and I'm still recruiting. *sticks out tongue* (Oh, and my mom thinks it's hilarious by the way. I told her. 😆)

Love, love you too!

Bhav (:

Originally posted by: noneeM

Yikes! I didn't see the Update! Yikes! *runs off to read and trusts she will be alive after reading* Big hugs A:) Love:-Nonee

Backkkk....Oh! Golly! I couldn't get past the NP bit in the Author's Note. I died there itself, admiring how the alphabets N and P look like they're meant to be next to each other. Maybe it should L,M,N,P,O....yeah! Gosh! 😆😆😆
No comment N. No comment. 😆

Must go and read the update now...Hopefully, I don't get entangled at the NP bit again....*hopes*
Oh! I love this so! *faints with the excitement* Love:-Nonee

Backkkkk again! Oh! My! Goodness! That was just so adorable*blush*blush*! can I hug Adi for not coming and standing us up please (Oh! My!Preet!) This is so wonderful that I can actually imagine this happening😍 Go hug him when you see him when he gets back then! 😆 And don't tell him why! 😆

Oh! I wish this was really happening! You know like one of those fantasy books, if we blink or drink something or just some fairy dust falls on us....or whatever it takes....and the characters from this tale come alive....That means I'm standing with PREET as he looks admiringly at me*faints away* 😆 Again N, no comment.

And that swooning mentally bit happens every moment*blush* he smiles on screen and I'm a goopy mess miles away!!!! Awww, that was totally awesome!!!!!! Me too, N, each time he's on screen. 😳

Oh! A! That was so wonderfully written. I'm gonna be reading this all the time. Please get my fav real time couple together (please please please please please) ?? *ish confused*
Preet+Nonee=Ponee, see it even makes sense, the pairing!!!! *suddenly starts dancing and jumping up and down wildly, merrily shaking her head around and running around the garden, Maximillian, the neighbour's golden retriever comes bounding up, barking his head off, thinking this is some new game the resident lunatic has come up with!!!!!! Nonee jumps over the picket fence separating the properties and holding Max's paws, circles the garden with him, dreaming of Preet😍 Again, no comment. 😆

Can't wait for the next part.....Amazing!!!!!!I totally loved it! Thanks a million A:) Loads of big hugs:)
Love:-Nonee

Of course, you know that any awkwardness on my part is just a mirage. Thank God I didn't utter a war cry and jump on him, stick a flag on his forehead, something that declared "Nonee's possession. Tampering with which shall lead to diabolical destruction of one's mental makeup, including but not restricted to permanent loss of sanity" 😆

N, I love you. 😆 And I never know what to reply to your comments.

Love,
Radz

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Aradhna

@Anhdara13

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Posted: 16 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: indiandoll89
my spot! 😊

*edited*

Psht Adi forgot to pick them up? 😛 But I loved the slip up from Preet! 😛 Yup. Adi is not nice. 😆 And Preet is feeling awkward! 😆

But seriously Radz...the whole coffee bit was totally believable! 😃 I loved it! 😳 I can't wait to see what happens next, NP are totally adorable! 😉 and you're right Nonee they are meant to be said together1 😉😆 I love coffee. *dreams* Er. Thanks. 😆

Love you, love you too!

Meera😳

Originally posted by: shabo24

Dude Nonee, where do you get the TIME for these lambe comments? :) 😆 Good question. N, answer that please.

ahaha flustered Preet is awesome, though I love slick Preet as well. Hack I love all Preet's. 😆 Cute update, and wow captured BD in her true light. :) I wanted to know how Preet would be flustered. And everyone loves all Preets. And obviously! I've known her seven years. 😆 Thanks Shabzie.

--shabz

Originally posted by: blackdaughter

OMG!!! You and Bhav are ebil.................... in a good way!!! Reading the Jacob parts again!?!?!? This is an amazing peice of work!!! At least it is normal unlike the last one! *cough crazy cough* Oh shush you. 😆 I would read the Jacob bits again. And again. And again. *giggles*

Too bad for Meeru if she didn't like it! She got Prem so she better shush!!!! *mock glare* Aw, i feel bad for Nonez, this just isn't her week, one shots and ff's about her popping here and there!!! *dramtic sigh* ROFL!!!! 😆 Yeah, I feel so bad for her. Like really.

You and Mayank locked in a room......................... I DON'T like you!!!! *pouts* So there!!!! *wink wink* *mutters under her breath - I wouldn't mind being locked in a room with Mayank. Never mind that he is Sadu, he's still a sexy sadu!!! sigh Goes to Mayu land* Yeah, he is a sexy sadoo. *giggles* I just wanted to put something in there, and that fit. 😆

"How could he forget you"!?!?!? Nice Preet, real smooth..... NOT!!!! i love this, can't wait till the next part!!!

Love you! *hug* LOVE YOU TOO! *hugs*

P.S. What's with you guys and coffee!?!?!? Like seriously!?!? =D

Originally posted by: -Ravjot-

Ooh part 2! Yay!! You know you reserved the page before right? 😆

Aww Preet hit Bhav with the trolley? She's so dramatic. Death by trolley 😆 And Preet locked Radz with Mayank? 🤣 I didn't think she would mind that much 😆 Bhav's like that in real life. *looks around* Shh, don't tell her I told you. 😆 Yeah, I wouldn't. But I wouldn't admit it either. 😆

Now my question is, did Bhav and Radz really want coffee or did they just want Nonee with be with him alone? And why did I hear water running in the bathroom even though I'm the only one at home?😳Oh, Radz wanted coffee, and they wanted to leave them alone. Bhav got dragged along. 😆 O.o I have no idea. Why do you hear water running although you are the only one at home?

Anyway, they're both already attracted to each other? That's awesome! Hurry up and post the next part 😆 Yes, they are. And next part coming up! 😉

Oh and I dunno whose sid eto take. Yours or Bhav's...you have cake though. The question is, what is Bhav offering? 😆

Love,
Radz

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Aradhna

@Anhdara13

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Posted: 16 years ago

#34

And finally, the last part. I refuse to write anymore thatn this N. I refuse to. I leave anything after this up to your imagination (I know you shall do it full justice. 😆)

Enjoy!

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They pulled up in Nonee's driveway after a long and silent drive, punctuated only by Nonee giving Preet directions to her place. Preet got out of the car as well, before beginning to take out their luggage. Radz commented sarcastically that he was only doing it to get back in their good graces, to which Preet had replied by apologising repeatedly.

The door to Nonee's house was flung open, and her brother bounded out, a cheerful smile on his lips. Nonee ignored him, paying attention to her luggage instead.

"Come on sis," Adi said. "You cannot stay mad at me forever."

"Wanna bet?" Nonee drawled, not even bothering to glance at him. Preet raised an eyebrow. His eyes never once left Nonee's face. Thankfully, she did not notice. Unfortunately, her friend did. Radz tapped him on the shoulder, smiling sweetly at him. Preet knew that did not bode well for him.

"Stop drooling," she stated drily, though she still had that same smile plastered on her lips. Preet flushed. Radz spun back around to stop Nonee from ripping the handle of her bag in her fury.

Adi reached out to take the bag from his sister, who let him, but did not say a word. Nonee stopped her friends from dealing with their own bags, gesturing that Adi would have to manage. Bhav almost protested at the injustice of it, before realising that she did not really care about it, because it meant that she did not have to carry her bag. Radz leaned against Preet's car, her coffee high dwindling already. She poked Nonee.

"I'm bored," she whined.

Nonee looked at her in amusement. "What d'you wanna do?"

Radz brightened. "Annoy your brother? He seems as annoying as that sadoo."

Nonee laughed, while Preet just looked at Radz, vocalising his disbelief at her need to mention Mayank at every turn. He zipped his mouth at her glare.

"We could do that rather easily," Nonee smirked. "Just tell him something happened to his 'baby'," she mocked. "and he will freak!"

"Let's do that then!"

Nonee nodded, telling her friends to go in before her. She turned around almost absently, thanking Preet again.

"It's no problem," Preet reiterated. "I got to meet you, didn't I?" He closed his eyes briefly as he realised his mouth had run off before him again. Nonee blushed.

"Yeah, there were benefits to Adi forgetting," Nonee said shyly. Preet caught her eye and grinned.

As she turned to go in, Preet called out after her. "Any chance of meeting again? Say," he looked at her. "maybe dinner? Tomorrow?"

Nonee bit her lip, smiling slightly, cheeks pink. "I'd like that."

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Do let me know what you think!

Love,
Radz

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Posted: 16 years ago

#35

Ohmigoodnesssssssssssssssssssssssss* Shrieks loudly like a banshee disturbing the peace and calm of a quiet afternoon* A......you updated! Oh! You sweetheart! The thought of an update to this one is enough to kill me as I try to hold on to life and breath.....*wheeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee*

Hope you realise that I'm dying with each laboured breath I take.....

Preet and Nonee..........has a musical sort of touch to it, I think, kind of a made for each other thingie......

I have to, have to read this coherently (I can try, can't I) I just hollered crazily seeing that you had updated.............I don't know how long it will take me to calm down.....😆

Oh! I love you so A:) Adorable A! Will come back and edit!

My Spot! [Did you know anyone who needs twenty thousand words just to say 'My Spot'😆😆

An ocean of hugs:)
Love:-Nonee

I'm back.....Of all days, today I have loads of course work to complete, so I have been interspersing IF and course work and of course, how am I supposed to focus when all I'm thinking of is THIS!!!!!! Rolling over and squealing delightedly...😆

Oh!My!God! Preet driving me to my place.....Like even the thought of that is making me all giddy.....my fingers are spastically beating against random keys...wtqeeb fsjhfjhs jadhjah dsgjahgfja mfagfhfg fsjherjlhj....*get yourself together Nonee* 😆😆😆 Oh! I love you A! Wheeeeeeeeeee!😆😆

I just realised! Preet was sitting next to me, right! Goodness Gracious! No wonder I was silent all the way, I must have been staring at his forearms on the steering wheel, 'cause I really like his hands 😳 😳 😳 They are such a musicians hands, long tapered fingers, ooooohhhh! I love his hands as well*sigh* And of course, I must have been looking at Preet*heaven* through the corner of my eyes the whole time*God!* Even I fear for my insane self sometimes!!!!!😆😆😆

I'm sure Adi, my insufferable brother, was looking through the windows for us to arrive and so had to come spoil my moment.......'cause I was so going to hug Preet for driving us home*sighs dreamily and slips into day dream mode* Adi 😡 😡 😡 Even in a story, he has to spoil something for me 😆

Preet's eyes on my face 😳 Oh! Thank heaven I didn't notice! Or I might have again done something hysterical like fainting into his arms (which, thinking back is not such a bad thing actually.....*ponders and again slips into day dream mode)

I am not going to comment on a scenario where PREET is drooling over me! Nah! I need to stay alive for some more time to finish my 'home work' But, I'm gonna be doing some drooling of my own as I think about it, every second from now on....😆

Oh! I wish Bhav had protested*sigh* 😉 *wicked smiles galore*

Oh! I love the way your mind works! Project Annoying Adi is a most enjoyable distraction! And I kind of am working towards a doctorate in said subject😆😆 And your ideas always rockkkk and help me A 🤗

Oh! Thank heavens I'm all coy and shy and blushing in front of Preet and not following up on my natural instant to just jump right at him and brand him as MINE 😆😆😆 A girl who knows WHOM she wants! That's me😆 😆

I could actually hug Adi for not coming 'cause I got PREET!!!!!!! Holy Preet! (credit:Shabzie)

he ask...aske....asked....askedddd....ddddd....*stutters and DIES!!!!!!!* remembers home work that still needs to be done and recovers miraculously! PREET asked ME.....OUTTTTT! *Swoons and falls off the surface of the earth!!!!!!😆😆 Will someone please finish my homework?😆😆😆

Love you! Love you! Love you! A, I Love You! You are full of awesomeness! Thank you so very much for this awesome, fabulous, amazing and wonderful SS. And on that extremely eloquent note 😆😆 I am signing off and running to finish my course work *curses professors who ought to have known better than to pass out loads of home work on a thursday!*

Loads and loads and loads of hugs!
Love:-Nonee

Edited by noneeM - 16 years ago

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Meera

@indiandoll89

Trailblazer

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Posted: 16 years ago

#36

mine!😊
*edited*

Loved the whole concept of this Radzie! 😛 It's so shweet and simple, and I'm sorry for the crap comment....I'm just totally utterly exhausted today!😆😆😆

Love you loads and I know FOR SURE Nonee loved it! 😳

Meera😳

Edited by indiandoll89 - 16 years ago

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Bhavna

@sourpuss

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Posted: 16 years ago

#37

Ooooh totally didn't realise you put part 3 up!

My spot.

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@shabo24

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Posted: 16 years ago

#38

My head is throbbing really bad now so excuse the lame comments. I'll get back to proper comments soon enough. :)

*ponders* I think N would kill me if I said that Adi sounded totally adorable during this update. *ducks* You should have written what you guys did to annoy Adi. *sticks tongue out*

aha Preet is so <3. The sly flirting was awesome!

--shabz

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Maddy

@blackdaughter

Dazzler

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Posted: 16 years ago

#39

There she goes again!!!! I'm talking about Nonez, it took her soooooo looooong to just reserve her spot!!! *rolles eyes*

Awww, that was so sweet!!! LIke total fluff!! I love that the sexy sadoo is mentioned again!!! 😆 OMG, poor Preet! I love how he is completely lattu about Nonez!!! 🤣

YAY!!! He asked her out!!! Gosh, wait till she reacts to this! *roles eyes* She is going to freak.... well she already has a couple of times, but this should be interesting!!!! 🤣

Nice one Radz, really sweet of you!! I loved it!!! Can't wait till whatever is next............. though a nice long update in one of your FF's wuld be nice!!! *angel wala face*

Love you! *hug*

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Posted: 16 years ago

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Originally posted by: shabo24
My head is throbbing really bad now so excuse the lame comments. I'll get back to proper comments soon enough. :) *ponders* I think N would kill me if I said that Adi sounded totally adorable during this update. *ducks* You should have written what you guys did to annoy Adi. *sticks tongue out* aha Preet is so <3. The sly flirting was awesome! --shabz

N would not kill Shabzie, no matter how high the provocation! N loves Shabzie!!!!!!Yikesss......that's just so cheesy.....signs off! I so need to go and finish my home work! sigh! (Ughhh! Adi and Adorable!!!!! The only thing in common is the first alphabet!)

Edited by noneeM - 16 years ago

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