SS || Haule Haule (part 3, page 5)

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So, I've gone completely mental for starting another short story. But I don't think it necessary for you people to worry, this is nothing like the previous one. πŸ˜† This actually has a plot, and purpose.

Nonee, this one is for you! Wanted to cheer your mood up, and keep in mind my suggestion! If you need more, let me know. πŸ˜‰πŸ˜†

Enjoy!

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Wheeling the trolley out of the arrival hall, Nonee scanned the area for her brother. She muttered darkly under her breath as she realised he had not arrived. She should have known he would be late, he always was.

"Stupid Adi," she spat out, not caring about the looks she was getting for talking to herself. "He's probably swooning over his stupid car."

"Nonee," her friend placed a hand on her shoulder. "Would you relax? I'm sure there's a reason your brother isn't here yet."

Nonee looked at Bhavna with something akin to pity on her face. "You'll learn Bhav, as I have, that there's nothing more important to that idiot brother of mine than his stupid car." She made a face and apologised to her best friend for dragging her back to Germany with her. "If I had known," she paused. "No, that's not right, I had known, but I'd thought," she amended. "that because he knew I was bringing guests, he'd at least come on time!"

Aradhna rolled her eyes slightly. "Dude, would you just chill? You can yell at him all you like later, when he's busy drooling over Bhav, kay?"

Nonee could not help but chuckle at Bhav's outraged squeal. She protested slightly as Radz ducked behind her and Bhav's hand landed on her shoulder instead of Radz'.

"Let me call Adi again,"
Nonee pulled her cell out of her pocket and dialled. "Adi, where the hell are you?" she demanded furiously. Radz and Bhav exchanged amused glances as Nonee quickly got into a furious argument with her brother over the phone. Bhav sighed as she heard Nonee yell at her brother for forgetting that they were coming. She turned to her other friend.

"So what do we do?"


Radz pondered for a bit before brightening. "Ohmygod!" She hit her head with one hand. She paused and pouted, rubbing the spot a bit with a distracted "Ow."

"Radz,"
Bhav poked her.

"Oh, right." Radz grinned sheepishly. "Preet's in Germany," she told her friend.

"Preet?" Bhav asked, before her face cleared. "Oh, you mean one of your many cousins from all over the world?"

Radz chuckled and shook her head. "Nope. He's not related to me in any way. Thank God," she smirked slightly. "He's Meera Di's devar."

"Oh, Prem Jiju's brother? That Preet?"
Bhav bounced slightly on the balls of her feet, eyes sparkling. "The one whom," she gestured at Nonee.

Radz nodded, beginning to get excited as well. "Imagine. Our plan may actually fall into place," she squealed quietly.

Bhav did not reply as Nonee turned around furiously and stalked towards her friends.

"We are not waiting for that idiot,"
she fumed, hands on her hips.

"I can call a friend,"
Radz piped up before Nonee could go into a rant. "I forgot he'd come here for work."

Nonee frowned slightly, but nodded.

Ten minutes later, Bhav spotted a tall figure making his way towards them and pointed him out to Radz. Radz abandoned her trolley and raced towards the man, hugging him enthusiastically before practically dragging him to where her amused friends stood.

Nonee's mouth fell open as she laid eyes on the hunk who held Radz' hand. She almost missed Radz' introduction, though, thankfully, she missed the look Bhav and Radz shared as she introduced Nonee to Preet. Radz pushed him towards Nonee, ordering him to take the trolley from her.

"Tumhe bas mujhse kaam karvana hai,"
Preet complained to his friend, but smiled down at the cute girl at his side.

"Obviously,"
Radz replied cheekily, before winking at him. He coloured slightly, knowing that Radz had pegged him down well enough to match make him with Nonee. He only hoped she would be interested. God knew he already was.


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N, try not to die, there are two more parts. πŸ˜† Love you!

Do let me know what you think.

Love,
Radz

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Posted: 16 years ago
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chapters:
part 1 - page 1
part 2 - page 2
part 3 - page 5

PM list:

blackdaughter (Maddy)
indiandoll89 (Meera)

Love,
Radz

Edited by Anhdara13 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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What suggestion? *narrows eyes* Y'know, now I'm going to be constantly suspicious of what you guys are plotting behind my back...
Ahahahahahhahaha Meera Di! 🀣Haha Meera I was the one you were arguing with over 'Meera Didi'...πŸ˜† And now Radz is using that too! *is very amused*
Geez, Radz, why don't you just tell the whole world about Adi? *sulks* I'm not commenting anymore. πŸ˜›
Love,
Bhav (:
Edited by sourpuss - 16 years ago
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Reserved. Remind me to unreserve after πŸ˜†
You're setting up Bhav with Adi in this?πŸ˜† And how does Bhav feel about this?
And Meera's dever? meaning she's married to Prem? She must've been very happy when she read thatπŸ˜†
Wait. So Bhav's supposed to be with Adi and Nonee with Preet? Radz are you trying to play match maker?πŸ˜† Well at least Preet showed up. Can't wait to read the next part and about Bhav's meeting with Adi =)
Edited by -Ravjot- - 16 years ago
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*Giggles* Meera di!?!??! That sounds so adorable!!! Prem jiju is even better!!!! =D
Poor Nonee, must you give her a heart attack like that!?!?!? *mock glare*................ ROFL!!!!! She is going to freak and die when she sees this!!!!! I can't wait t see her post!!!! =D
By god! Good thing Adi was late warna Preet kaha se tapac aata!?!?!? LOL. Oh ho ho, he is already interested eh!?!?!? I'm so J !!! *pouts* LOL Hm, Germany, sounds interesting!!!!
He he swooning over his car! Typical! *shaking my head in dismay* LOL I can't wait gor the next two parts!!! Hope you updtae soon!!
Love you! *hug*
P.S. PM list, me, asap! =D
Edited by blackdaughter - 16 years ago
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A really high pitched unearthly squeal/yell/scream (at a shattering-the-ear-drums-of-human-beings frequency) is emitted by a shimmery silvery being (rather good looking even though decidedly not human) on reading this post.......πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜† All humans in the vicinity (radius of 2 kms at the very least, drop down dead (with no hopes of miraculous revivals), their ear drums crumpled into dust around them, their limbs in various stages of shock.....Unfortunately one human (the shimmery being's brother who really ought to remain unnamed) is further away and so escapes unscathed....(Shucks! says the shimmery being, stamping her gossamer foot, must check these things next time and time actions perfectly to achieve maximum damage!!!!!) Nonee looks around the damage she has inflicted and shrugs...."What is a Ghost to do?" she asks around batting her eyelashes....Expectedly, no one replies....

A:) That does it! I'm a medical marvel.....So, I was already dead reading B's SS. Then I was revived (in a miraculous wonderful Preetful manner..which I'm trying not to recall for fear of another relapse....Oh! dearie me!) I just came back on and what do I find.....This....And then, guess what?

My heart stopped! Again! And just like that.........I died again....Just like that........(At the moment, I'm alternating between ghost and human.....depending on whether Preet revives me or not!!!!) But you know what?

Although it might be super boring for you to read of my frequent deaths, I'm having the time of my life.............πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
It's really exhilarating dying like this (reading wonderful dreamy SS's I mean)....I get to be with Preet ALL the time (no need for day dreams!!!!!!!!) I actually think I must reward Adi for being so nasty......For here I am, grinning from ear to ear, having a visual feast.......all thanks to him:) *note to self: pick up one fight with horrible brother at least once a week*

If you're still reading this (and have not given up after the first two lines......) then you know that apart from being a medical marvel, I am also the looniest character in the Bin....And, so I assume, you would forgive my theatrics*A ghost may hope, right?????*

Oh! A:) I'm a blubbering, blithering, bubbling, blot of unstable goop right now....two SS's in a day! How is a Preet crazy insane person supposed to deal with this.....
*can't get a sane word out* am just staring at this page wondering whether I am, in reality, reading this....or whether my mind has just desperately conjured up.....what my heart wants to read....(make that, see happening!!!!*wicked smile*)

Okay, now on to the fic:)
If Adi ever dared to do something like that like stand us up, he'd be dust below our dainty manicured well shod feet....
On the other hand, maybe he deserves a cookie.....Preet!!!!!!!!!*the goop unstabilises itself and flows unreservedly all around, messing the whole place*
Oooh! I so love a particular pairing in this fic...I'm jumping up and down while reading this.....(and so happy, there's no one at home at the moment*dances merrily**and the words jump out and dance merrily with her*) I can't wait to read the next part......A dearest, I hope it will be a happy ending for my favourite pairing here....*blows fairy dust into the air and desperately tries to scan the garden for a four leaf clover*

I think this is beyond wonderful......Thank you so very much.....My mood's the best in the world at the moment, thanks to Bhav and You.....You both rock!!!!!! A toast to the sweetest girls in the planet....Zum Wohl die Pfalz!!!!! (A toast from the best wine growing region here)

A:) A truckload of hugs....some are spilling over... πŸ€—
Love you:) Nonee

@Bhav:*grinning widely while winking wickedly at A* what one doesn't know......he he he(wicked smile)Big hug:)
@Maddy: My insanity knows no bounds....πŸ˜†Big hug:)


Edited by noneeM - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Another one? YAY! πŸ˜ƒ I'm getting excited, seriously Radz your crazy stories are just what I need after work! πŸ˜›

I love the title first of all *dreams* But Aww Nonee! *hugs* She's obviously very very VERY thrilled! πŸ˜›

Yay for Adi being late! πŸ˜› Now Preet gets to be here! πŸ˜ƒ I loved the line of "one of your many cousins around the world," same story everwhere! πŸ˜†

Meera di? Really? Was it you or Bhav I had this 'arugment' with? I don't wanna be a di...I only use the "older" card when I want something done! πŸ˜† But Prem jiju sounded good! *sighs*

This whole concept it awesome Radz! πŸ˜ƒ And I can't wait to see where you take it! πŸ˜›

Oh I wanna be on the pm list! πŸ˜ƒ

Love you loads,

Meera😳
Posted: 16 years ago
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Meera di? *falls of her chair laughing*

*wipes tears of laughter away* Well. judging my Nonee's reaction, I'm sure she LOVED IT! πŸ˜† And so did I, oh gosh, I don't know WHY, but I have the feeling Adi is going to get a cameo, and paired with someone. *bursts out in laughter*

Loved it! :):)

--shabz
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I'm glad it's soooo amuzing to all of you! *narrows eyes* Grrr....I hate being old! πŸ˜”
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Originally posted by: sourpuss

What suggestion? *narrows eyes* Y'know, now I'm going to be constantly suspicious of what you guys are plotting behind my back...Well, maybe 'cos we are? πŸ˜† And we're not telling! (And, we're recruiting. Anyone interested?)

Ahahahahahhahaha Meera Di! 🀣Haha Meera I was the one you were arguing with over 'Meera Didi'...πŸ˜† And now Radz is using that too! *is very amused* I only used it 'cos it seemed to fit. πŸ˜†
Geez, Radz, why don't you just tell the whole world about Adi? *sulks* I'm not commenting anymore. πŸ˜› Oi, I was going to write worse! Be glad I did not. Yet. *evil laughter*
Love, love you too!
Bhav (:



Originally posted by: -Ravjot

Reserved. Remind me to unreserve after πŸ˜†

You're setting up Bhav with Adi in this?πŸ˜† And how does Bhav feel about this? I wish. She'd kill me. πŸ˜† I was gonna, then she proofread part 1, and told me not to. (But I plan to do it in real-life, to yeh fiction ka world kya cheez hai! πŸ˜†)
And Meera's dever? meaning she's married to Prem? She must've been very happy when she read thatπŸ˜† Yupyup, she's married to Prem. πŸ˜‰ Go read her comment to know what she thought. (I don't remember. πŸ˜†)
Wait. So Bhav's supposed to be with Adi and Nonee with Preet? Radz are you trying to play match maker?πŸ˜† Well at least Preet showed up. Can't wait to read the next part and about Bhav's meeting with Adi =) Something like that. πŸ˜† Ahh, that's not yet, and nothing interesting, unfortunately. πŸ˜†



Originally posted by: blackdaughter

*Giggles* Meera di!?!??! That sounds so adorable!!! Prem jiju is even better!!!! =D πŸ˜† She seems mad though. πŸ˜†

Poor Nonee, must you give her a heart attack like that!?!?!? *mock glare*................ ROFL!!!!! She is going to freak and die when she sees this!!!!! I can't wait t see her post!!!! =D Oh, her reaction was .. tough to read? πŸ˜†
By god! Good thing Adi was late warna Preet kaha se tapac aata!?!?!? LOL. Oh ho ho, he is already interested eh!?!?!? I'm so J !!! *pouts* LOL Hm, Germany, sounds interesting!!!! πŸ˜† Yup, I really enjoyed writing that. And the Adi thing had .. other reasons that got lost in transalation? πŸ˜†
He he swooning over his car! Typical! *shaking my head in dismay* LOL I can't wait gor the next two parts!!! Hope you updtae soon!! πŸ˜† Updating in a bit! Thanks Maddy!
Love you! *hug* Love you too!
P.S. PM list, me, asap! =D



Love,
Radz

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