ff:Love??: PART VII & VIII pg.6

hi everybody, i've been reading the awesome fanfictions and decide to try my own hand at writing some down.😊 Please read and tell me how you all felt this ff was......... i start from where the actual show is going....... so here goes!😊

PART I

Heer was standing at the window, looking out at the moon''thinking about

What had happened earlier that evening. Her eyes welled up with tears even as she thought about it'' her Prem had raised his hand on her' he had slapped her in front of the family for something that she had not done.

And as she fell down due to the shock of what had happened, she had glimpsed the satisfied expressions on Gayatri Ma, Veera and Maya's faces,

And then it had dawned on her. The shocking realization that someone she had loved more than her own mother, had betrayed her. Then it came back to her, all those times when Ma had asked for her help and made her lie to Prem, drawing them away from each other.

And Prem? The one for whom she had been ready to sacrifice her whole life, for whose family, she had actually been about to step into hell by marrying a man who would have made her life worse than hell, Her Prem had not even listened to her when she had tried to tell him the news''

"That's it. Enough is enough'' now it's show time''" thought Heer. " I am going to uncover the truth in front of everyone....".

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I hope you all liked it..😕.... please be kind to me as this is my first FF.😕

waiting for comments.

Love

Gargee😳

ohh sounds interesting. Please do Continue!!! I loved the way you portrayed Heer's emotions and the development of her thought process. Very intruging indeed, very well written!! Oh and I hope the next one will be longer!!! =D Best of luck with this one!

nice start. continue soon. i would love to read it

hi thanks for the encouraging comments...
here goes

PART II

It was Veera's Birthday, the house had been decorated

And anyone who saw the house knew that it was going to be a grand affair.

" Heer beta? Tum ab tak tayyar nahi hui? Go beta get ready…" bauji told her, bringing her out of her trance.

Heer had been standing near the front doors, watching all the decorations and yet her mind was far away……

It was then that she decided that the time had come…… she could not bear the insults thrown at her day after day anymore…

She went upstairs to her room, not even looking at Prem who was getting ready to go downstairs she chose her clothes and went into the bathroom.

"She's probably still upset after yesterday, but I'm not going to go and talk to her until she apologizes." Thought Prem. Heer had not talked to him or even acknowledged his presence since their fight in front of the whole family, the previous night. However he had noticed that she seemed to be preoccupied with something.

"PREM!!! Neeche aao beta!" hearing his mother's calls Prem ran downstairs.

Heer came out of the bathroom, and silently packed her things…

Finally the party was over, everyone had enjoyed it immensely.

All the guests had gone home, and the juneja family sat in the hall

Talking and reliving the fantastic party. Prem's eyes sought to find Heer who was nowhere to be seen. She had been quiet throughout the party and once or twice Prem thought had she had looked at their house and family with a longing in her eyes as if trying to remember them or soak their faces into her memory.

This had seemed a bit strange to Prem… but before he could give the matter anymore thought, the room was suddenly plunged into darkness. Everyone stopped talking at once and stood up as the screen at the far end of the hall lit up. They looked at it intently and what they saw made them gasp in horror…………………………………

Suddenly Veera's voice filled the hall, she was talking to Nihal

" Yes, I aborted the child, and now I'll be free of this relationship…… you didn't tell this to my family so that you could save your sister Heer's life didn't you Nihal? But don't worry she'll join you as soon as possible…… I promise!" laughed Veera… then Maya and Veera were plotting to get Heer out of the house,

And on and on it went till everything was clear to all present in the hall. The lights were switched on and they could see Heer standing with her luggage in front of them. She walked with a determined expression towards Veera. " I could not think what to give for your birthday Veera, this is the best I can do, I'm leaving the house…… Happy Birthday Veera" she said softly. Then she walked to Gayatri Ma and touched her feet, she took her hand in hers and gave her the papers and keys to the juneja estate, everyone looking on disbelievingly, still shocked at the turn of events… " Ma, agar mujhse anjaane me koi galti ho gayi hogi toh mujhe maaf kardijiyega, yeh aapki amanat aur daulat apko waapas karke jaa rahi hu…" hugging her she continued " Jeet mubarak ho ma……" she touched bauji's feet and walked straight past Prem to where Meher and Preet were standing " apnaa khayal rakhna" saying this she touched their faces and before could say anything walked out into the dark dark night………

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so? how was it guys? waiting for comments

love

Gargee

good1 ...liked it..update next1 gargee..

oo very intersting...please continue!!😃

part 1 is great. I m happy that in ur ff the truth of veera come out. plz continue soon and if it is possible then plz next time make long updates.

Cant wait for the next chapter!!!

hi again!
here i am with the third part.... and thank you for all the comments!
they are really encouraging............... and i tried to make this part a bit longer but i think it is still short.... actually i am not very well at the mo' so........... please forgive me for any mistakes and enjoy!

PART III

What had she done?? How could she have been so cold hearted?? She had taken her own son's life away from him, and all that for a huge and unforgivable lie told by her own daughter??? She had let Heer take the blame of all her wrong doings and watched contentedly, not even blinking an eyelid? Gayatri was shocked at her own behavior… she turned to stare at her oldest child, who was looking at her with disbelief etched across his face…… the silence that had followed Heer's departure was deafening… and before could say more than " Prem, mein……" he had walked away to his room……………

Gayatri stood in the hall, shaking with grief and remorse at what she had done to the life of the woman, who had once upon a time not even thought twice about sacrificing her whole life for this family.

" Gayatri? Tum theek to ho naa? Chalo ab yahaan khade reh ke kuch nahi hone waala hai… humne use hamesha ke liye kho diya hai Gayatri………… chalo tum thak gayi hogi… hamare kamre me chalte hain…………" hearing her husband utter those words, made shame crash over Gayatri and she started sobbing and cried into his shoulder for forgiveness as he gently took her away.

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Prem couldn't believe what he had done………………… as he ran into his and Heer's room, he immediately noticed the letter that she had left for him. He opened it and began to read,

Prem,

I have kept Ma and Bauji's medicines in the cupboard beside their dresser in their room… make sure that they regularly take their medications or they will fall ill. Take care of Harman and maaya, and tell Harman that whatever she may have done to me but she still loves him so don't be hard on her. I know that Preet will take good care of Meher and himself, but you watch over them and make sure that what happened to us won't happen to them.

Prem, don't wear the same suit to work for two days running, you have 17 suits and please give them for laundry after wearing them, and don't go to work without having your breakfast and don't forget to take your lunch with you. Don't be angry with Ma Prem, she must have had your best interests at heart! And she did not know about Veera's lie… and Please apologize to Veera from me, as it was me in the first place who suggested she marrying nihaal bhaiya.

Always remember Prem wherever I may be, I'll always be in your heart. I have lived loving you Prem and will die Loving you.

Love

Heer.

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He broke down. His Heer had left him. He sat on the carpet near the bed leaning against the bed post and read the letter- his Heer's letter- again and again, and he knew not when he fell into a deep but uncomfortable sleep.

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She was sitting on a lone bench on a dark street, her luggage beside her. After she had left her house, she had walked away down a street she knew would take her to the railway station…

Halfway down the road she sat on the bench and let her bottled emotions take the better of her…… she cried, she sobbed till her throat was raw and her eyes were puffy. Thinking about her Prem, the love of her life and what she had done- but this had to be done- she thought sternly and wiping away her tears continued down the road, thinking that she would go away to some city and try to start her life anew.

But apparently destiny had something else planned for her…

As she rounded a curve and onto the highway she was blinded by a light and before she could do anything more than scream she experienced an excruciating pain that engulfed her body as she flew through the air………………………………………………………

"HEER!!!" he screamed and immediately woke up. He knew something had happened to his Heer. He got up from his position and was about to leave his room when Preet came running into his room, yelling at the top of his voice and crying at the same time,

" Prem bhaiya, jaldi chaliye woh……woh…… Heer bhabhi……… bhabhi……… "

"Preet? Kyaa hua Heer ko? Tu theek se kuch kyu nahi bolta?

Preet, bata na kya hua meri Heer ko?"

" bhaiya abhi city hospital se phone aaya tha, Heer bhabhi ka ek truck ke saath accident ho gaya hai……………… she's critical bhaiya

Jaldi kijiye."

Prem went cold as he heard these words… no, this could not be happening. NO!

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so? how was it guys??
please tell me honestly what you think of it
waiting for your comments!
love
Gargee.

Originally posted by: Gargee

hi again!
here i am with the third part.... and thank you for all the comments!
they are really encouraging............... and i tried to make this part a bit longer but i think it is still short.... actually i am not very well at the mo' so........... please forgive me for any mistakes and enjoy!

PART III

What had she done?? How could she have been so cold hearted?? She had taken her own son's life away from him, and all that for a huge and unforgivable lie told by her own daughter??? She had let Heer take the blame of all her wrong doings and watched contentedly, not even blinking an eyelid? Gayatri was shocked at her own behavior' she turned to stare at her oldest child, who was looking at her with disbelief etched across his face'' the silence that had followed Heer's departure was deafening' and before could say more than " Prem, mein''" he had walked away to his room'''''

Gayatri stood in the hall, shaking with grief and remorse at what she had done to the life of the woman, who had once upon a time not even thought twice about sacrificing her whole life for this family.

" Gayatri? Tum theek to ho naa? Chalo ab yahaan khade reh ke kuch nahi hone waala hai' humne use hamesha ke liye kho diya hai Gayatri'''' chalo tum thak gayi hogi' hamare kamre me chalte hain''''" hearing her husband utter those words, made shame crash over Gayatri and she started sobbing and cried into his shoulder for forgiveness as he gently took her away.

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Prem couldn't believe what he had done''''''' as he ran into his and Heer's room, he immediately noticed the letter that she had left for him. He opened it and began to read,

Prem,

I have kept Ma and Bauji's medicines in the cupboard beside their dresser in their room' make sure that they regularly take their medications or they will fall ill. Take care of Harman and maaya, and tell Harman that whatever she may have done to me but she still loves him so don't be hard on her. I know that Preet will take good care of Meher and himself, but you watch over them and make sure that what happened to us won't happen to them.

Prem, don't wear the same suit to work for two days running, you have 17 suits and please give them for laundry after wearing them, and don't go to work without having your breakfast and don't forget to take your lunch with you. Don't be angry with Ma Prem, she must have had your best interests at heart! And she did not know about Veera's lie' and Please apologize to Veera from me, as it was me in the first place who suggested she marrying nihaal bhaiya.

Always remember Prem wherever I may be, I'll always be in your heart. I have lived loving you Prem and will die Loving you.

Love

Heer.

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He broke down. His Heer had left him. He sat on the carpet near the bed leaning against the bed post and read the letter- his Heer's letter- again and again, and he knew not when he fell into a deep but uncomfortable sleep.

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She was sitting on a lone bench on a dark street, her luggage beside her. After she had left her house, she had walked away down a street she knew would take her to the railway station'

Halfway down the road she sat on the bench and let her bottled emotions take the better of her'' she cried, she sobbed till her throat was raw and her eyes were puffy. Thinking about her Prem, the love of her life and what she had done- but this had to be done- she thought sternly and wiping away her tears continued down the road, thinking that she would go away to some city and try to start her life anew.

But apparently destiny had something else planned for her'

As she rounded a curve and onto the highway she was blinded by a light and before she could do anything more than scream she experienced an excruciating pain that engulfed her body as she flew through the air'''''''''''''''''''''

"HEER!!!" he screamed and immediately woke up. He knew something had happened to his Heer. He got up from his position and was about to leave his room when Preet came running into his room, yelling at the top of his voice and crying at the same time,

" Prem bhaiya, jaldi chaliye woh''woh'' Heer bhabhi''' bhabhi''' "

"Preet? Kyaa hua Heer ko? Tu theek se kuch kyu nahi bolta?

Preet, bata na kya hua meri Heer ko?"

" bhaiya abhi city hospital se phone aaya tha, Heer bhabhi ka ek truck ke saath accident ho gaya hai'''''' she's critical bhaiya

Jaldi kijiye."

Prem went cold as he heard these words' no, this could not be happening. NO!

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so? how was it guys??
please tell me honestly what you think of it
waiting for your comments!
love
Gargee.