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wowwww i really liked it sooooooooooo romantic😍

Aww....I'm running totally late today for classes but can't help myself.....Oh! Meera! (hope I can call you that) this was so dreamy and lovely. And the diamond necklace bit was so very 'awww' to borrow an "adjective" from Bhav:) Loved it. of course, I wish it was my neck and not Meher's but....(titbit added to my Preet day-dream:)

Really cute one and loved that ended happy....Written really really well. Thanks:)
Love:-Nonee

MEERA!

I love it when you write! You just write them so perfectly.

So cute, how the understanding slowly grew to respect, then hints of love like jealousy then acceptance and all that! I agree with BD there, why can't I just see them happy? I also thought Ash was going to do something or he was going to die or whatnot. =]

Such a good shot! Loved it!

--shabz

Meeraaaaaaaaaaaaaaa....awesoooooooome...lovely...you always portray Meet relationship so perfectly..I just love reading them....You started from there marraige part and I suddenly felt she'll reffer him by 'Preet ji'😆 but I am glad she did not do so, and not to mention you always get hold of my favorite songs and this one's also from my list😃 loved it..

cute cute cute cute cute and awsomely cute.. awwwwwwwwwwww my preetu and meher..... i cant wait them to be satrt livn as husband and wife....... iluved every single emotion..... it was so cute

another fab one shot cant w8 to read more

Originally posted by: sourpuss

MINE! (:

*unreserved!*

Ahh this was so sweet! Although somehow I kept expecting something tragic to happen...😕😆 Like when Preet left because of Ash, I thought something had happened and they were done for good or something. And again at the airport, I thought maybe he wouldn't come out or there would be an accident or something like that...Why is it so hard for me to accept that it's completely happy? I am so amused at myself! 🤣 As I've mentioned...I was VERY tempted to make it tragic, but I just couldn't...I felt all weird, I even wrote out this whole thing with Preet and Ash...but I just--couldn't do that! 😛

Oh the diamond necklace bit was so 'awww'! (And don't tell me 'aww' isn't a proper adjective. I shall use whatever words I want! 😛) I melted just imagining the entire scene playing out, with the kids crowding around them and then the two of them slowly going up to their room talking all the while and then finally the diamond necklace bit...Dammit I want my own Preet. *pouts* Aww's an adjective to me! 😛😳 But I'm glad you liked the whole thing! 😛😳😃 Awww sorry...😆

Love,

Bhav :D

Originally posted by: ruky786

wowwww i really liked it sooooooooooo romantic😍

Thank you so much! 😃

Originally posted by: noneeM

Aww....I'm running totally late today for classes but can't help myself.....Oh! Meera! (hope I can call you that) this was so dreamy and lovely. And the diamond necklace bit was so very 'awww' to borrow an "adjective" from Bhav:) Loved it. of course, I wish it was my neck and not Meher's but....(titbit added to my Preet day-dream:) Awww I'm sorry! 😛😆😳 But OF course you can call me that! 😛 Awww I'm glad you liked the little bit with Preet and Meher! 😳😳

Really cute one and loved that ended happy....Written really really well. Thanks:) Thanks a lot hun! 😳😃
Love:-Nonee

Originally posted by: shabo24

MEERA! SHABO!! 😃

I love it when you write! You just write them so perfectly. Awwww I'm glad you liked it! 😛😳

So cute, how the understanding slowly grew to respect, then hints of love like jealousy then acceptance and all that! I agree with BD there, why can't I just see them happy? I also thought Ash was going to do something or he was going to die or whatnot. =] Yup...meaning the transition worked?? 😳 But ahhh Ash was definitely going to do something in the version I had! 😛 I just couldn't bare to ruin the happiness this time! 😳

Such a good shot! Loved it! Thanks! 😃

--shabz

Originally posted by: munam_13

Meeraaaaaaaaaaaaaaa....awesoooooooome...lovely...you always portray Meet relationship so perfectly..I just love reading them....You started from there marraige part and I suddenly felt she'll reffer him by 'Preet ji'😆 but I am glad she did not do so, and not to mention you always get hold of my favorite songs and this one's also from my list😃 loved it..

Thanks a lot Priyoooooooooooooooooo! 😆 Awww you think? 😳 I'm glad you liked it....I was going to have it like that, but I just wanted to show that they were already kinda friends! 😛 Awww I'm glad you like the song choice too! 😃

Originally posted by: Sunehari*Rose

cute cute cute cute cute and awsomely cute.. awwwwwwwwwwww my preetu and meher..... i cant wait them to be satrt livn as husband and wife....... iluved every single emotion..... it was so cute

luv

tina

thanks a lot Tina! 😃😛 Glad you liked the whole thing! 😛

@jamune & zaibun: glad you two liked it! 😃

That was sooo good...Preet and Meher are soo cute!! I love the necklace part!!

Originally posted by: purplestar22

That was sooo good...Preet and Meher are soo cute!! I love the necklace part!!

Thanks a lot Amna! 😛 Glad you liked it! 😃