NEW FF....Milan jo likhya..NOTE.......Pg38........ - Page 18

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Posted: 16 years ago
hay.....OMG....it was sooo good...ohh loved the way u described prems feelings....it was sooo good....
I hope the creatives show tht premeer are getting back togather and prem supporting heer.....
ohh and missed u too hun...thanks soo much for the pm....
love reading ur FF....waiting for the next part.....take care....:)
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Posted: 16 years ago
i read it just now itz awesome.update next part asap.
luv
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Posted: 16 years ago
only if he took this decision on the show man i would have been really happy
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Posted: 16 years ago
Thanx iditri..................glad u enjoyed this one too.................and mentioned what u liked about Prem feelings being expressed.................Thanx dear................and neaxt part coming soon.....................I PM kyunkii I am back after a long time................in case u want me to PM u everytime plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz tell me dear......................Hope u enjoy the next part too....................Thanx once again..................😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
Thanx luv4bb .................Glad u read the whole thing and loved it too dear..................Next part asap..................and a very warm welcome to the FF dear..................😊
Edited by leothebest9 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
Hi kajal_aarav ...............a very watm welcome to this FF dear..................Even I wish Prem had made this decision................anyways hope u enjoy the coming track too and keep sending in ur valuable comments too...............Thanx...............😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
Hi Leo, I really enjoyed this one too, what ever we wish in the real show is at least heppening in your FF. We loved the way you describe Prem feelings.
waiting for hte next part!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
Thanx shantaus ...............Glad u enjoyed this part too.............and yaa even I wish we culd get to see all this in the show too..............anyways I hope u liike the coming track too.................Thanx once again..............😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
The show is actually disappointing me sooooooooooooooooooo much kii bas poocho hii matt....................abb Prem will leave Heer voluntary thanx to Gaytri mom's evil PLAN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!😡...................I hate these three women sooooooooooooooooooooo much........................anyways....................here's the next long part......................hope u all atleast enjoy this ....................and plzzzzzzzzzzzzz send in ur valuable comments......................😊

Everyone looks shell shocked at Prem's decision……………….Heer herself couldn't believe it was her whom Prem had chosen over his mother!.................She wasn't expecting this…………….infact she didn't want it too!..................Heer kept wondering what made Prem take this unexpected decision?!!!!!!!!!!!!!....................😲

Somehow Heer knew there was more than just this……………….which made Prem take this decision………………but what?!...................she wondered……………😕

Gaytri too was taken aback listening to Prem……………..as she just stood looking at her two sons standing by their wives' side outside the Juenja house…………………..she says bitterly--- Prem……………tujhse toh kuch aisi hii umeed thi mujhe!...................Lekin main jaanti hoon ke mere bete…………..Preet kaa yeh faislaa nahiin hoga……………..

She looks at Preet expectantly………………who in turn……………takes a step forward…………….holding Meher's hand he makes sure gaytri got his decision too……………..and then he says-- Maa aapkey the socalled sagey bete…………..aur Veera ke sagey bhai kaa bhi yehi faislaa hai……………..abb toh samajh jao maa……………kahiin aap se hii galtii ho rahi hai……………🤢

Gaytri was in no mood to listen anything………………and she asks all four of them to leave the house asap…………….alonwith them……………Kirran an Kuldii who were leaving for London the next day too became a victim of Gaytri's anger and all of them…………….packing their things leave the Juneja house with heavy hearts and tears in their eyes…………….feeling bad they couldn't see their father last time before going from there as Lalit was out of town for a couple of months……………….😭

Prem bends down to touch gaytri's feet who takes a step backward…………….as a tear from Prem's eyes fall on her feet………………Prem looks up at his mother…………..and then at Veera who stood next to gaytri busy shedding her crocodile tears…………….as Prem gives her a 'I know u r wrong but why?!'…………look on his face…………..which made Veera jitter for a second but she thought it was her vahem………………😕

Outside Kirran and KD stand with the kids……………as Prem stands by a quiet Heer and Preet by a crying Meher……………….

They all were sad………………uncertain………......each wondering what would happen next……………….each worried what to do next!..................😭

There inside u can see a broken down gaytri sitting on the sofa…………….as Maa stood consoling her while Veera knelt besides the sofa………………with her head resting on Gaytri's lap………………….😡

Maya asks Harman to get some water for Gaytri who leaves from there………………while Maya says-- Aap…………..aap pareshaan matt ho maa………………aapne jo kiya………….vo bilkul sahi tha…………..abb aap iss tarah se himmatt haar gayi…………..toh………….toh humaari Veera ko kaun sambhaalegaa?!....................dekhiye iss waqt usse aapkii sabse zyaada zaroorat hai…………..🤢

Gaytri looks at a sobbing Veera……………and she strokes her head gently with her hand……………she nods her head……………….she hugs Veera…………….saying---Tu fikar matt kar Veera………….teri maa tere saath hai……………sab theek ho jaayega……………..

Maya stands there flashing he evil smile……………..knowing it was just a beginning…………..kyunkii usske rehtey hus kuch theek nahiin ho saktaa ……………….at least she would make sure it didn't happen!...........................😈

Kaisa laga?😊

Jaldi batao...................😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
Itney saarey views and no replies?????????????😕
Edited by leothebest9 - 16 years ago

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