NEW FF....Milan jo likhya..NOTE.......Pg38........ - Page 17

Created

Last reply

Replies

268

Views

22.7k

Users

30

Likes

1

Frequent Posters

sweetness4eva thumbnail
19th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail Fascinator 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 16 years ago
Niceeeeeeee!!!
okay so i m not gonna pest you about the next part!!! BUT i ll be waiting for it surelyy!! you've got me gripped in suspense!!! Khair, have fun at your mamoo and friends engagements!!!! I 'lll surely miss you!!!! Get back soon yaara!!!! Take care Byee!!!
flowers4u thumbnail
16th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 16 years ago
no worries yaar fab part bechara nihal i just hope dat veera struth cums out quick
Princess_Priya1 thumbnail
20th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 16 years ago
Thanx aditi.................Glad u enjoyed this one too dear..............😊
Princess_Priya1 thumbnail
20th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 16 years ago
Thanx purplestar22..................Glad u enjoyed this one too dear...............😊
Princess_Priya1 thumbnail
20th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 16 years ago
Hi everyone!................Glad to be back with u all.................Missed u all soooooooooooooooooooooo much..................I hope u all did miss me too.....................😊
Here's the next long part which I hope will make up for the last week....................Hope u like it..................and send in ur valuable comments......................😊

Prem replies--- Nahiin maa……….Nihaal kaa accident ho gaya hai…………..vo nahiin rahaa………….

Gaytri was taken aback…………but she was sooooooooo annoyed that she decided not to show her surprise instead she says heartlessly—Toh?............Toh kya hua?.............Apne kamon kii sazaa toh milnii hii thii usse…………Ek nanhii sii jaan lekar……….Reheney de Prem……………😲

Prem was shell shocked at what Gaytri had said…………and he stared at her…………speechless…………no knowing what to say?......................

Gaytri then says--- Aur tub hi yahii baat kehtaa Prem………..aggar tu Veera kaa saga bhai hota!..............

KD steps in saying—Maa yeh app kya keh rai ho…………..

Prem stops Kulraaj saying—Nahiin KD…………kehney do maa ko…………jo vo kehnaa chahtii hain……………(A hurt and sad Prem says as tears welled up in his eyes……..and he felt something crush within him!)……………….😭

KD says—Lekin Prem tu…………

Gaytri interrupts saying--- Lekin kya Kulraaj…………..Sach toh yahi hai naa…………..aggar tu Veera kii sagii behen hoti toh tub hi kabhi mujhe iss tarah se toktii nahiin………….aur Prem…………….meri baa dhyaan se sunn ley…………..main apna faislaa nahiin badloongii…………….samjhaa!...................Aur abb tu tae kar ley kii tu apni uss maa ko chunna chahtaa hai jissne aaj tak tujhe kabhi thokar nahiin khaani dii……………….humeshaa waqt par tera haath thaam liya…………………jissne uss din jab Daljeet ne tujhe mera sautelaa beta kahaa tab aagey badhkar tujhe apne sagey bete se bhi oocha darjaa diya……………….jissne tera bachpan sanwaara………………apne aanchal kii chaanv mein paal pos kar tujhe badaa kiya……………….Abb faislaa tera hai Prem kii tu apni uss maa ko chunega jo itney saalon se tere saath hai yaa phir uss kal kii aayi Heer ko……………….kabhi kabhi rishton ko saabit karney ke liye unhein chunna padtaa hai Prem………………

Prem staress at his mother wondering howcome the embodiment of unconditional love and care…………….had come to have such hatred in her eyes and anger in her voice!....................😲

Prem wished this was all a dream…………….or rather a nightmare……………..and hoping it to end soon…………….only to find that it was all actually happening to him!....................and that look on his mom's face told him……………there was no escape fo him!...................

Prem turns around only to find Heer and Meher standing at the doorway with Preet………………Prem looked at a sobbing Meher……………and then he stared at a dejected Heer………………it was then…………….that Prem had Made his DECISION!...........................😭

He turns back to face Gaytri and says with sheer determination in his voice—Maantaa hoon maa aapne mujhe chalnaa nahiin sikhaaya……………..Lekin………………. Yeh sach hai maa kii aajtak zindagi mein aapne mujhe thokar kha kar kabhi girney nahiin diya……………Par mainne uss din…………..(Prem remembers how he had proposed to Heer going down on his knees)…………….mushkil halaaton mein bhi……………aapke kehney par aap hii ke kehney par Heer ka haath thaamkar humeshaa usske saath deney ka jo waada kiya tha………………vo kaise bhool jaoon?.......................Maanta hoon maa kii uss din sabkey saamney Daljeet chachi ke kahey ko yeh keh kar jhhutlaa diya kii aapke liye mujhse badhkar kuch nahiin hai………………….(Prem remember how Gaytri had stood for him that day……………and after this every word Prem said…………….his voice didn't stir but each thing he said pierced his crushed heart like a dagger!)……………….Lekin ussi tarah……………jab Heer Rishab ke saath mandap mein phere ley rahi thi…………….tab aagey badhkar usski maang mein sindoor bharkar……………agley saath janmon ke liye usska saath deney ka jo waada mainne kiya tha…………….vo kaisey bhool jaoon maa?!..........................Maanta hoon maa……………aapne mera bachpan sanwaara……………….lekin apne aaney waale bachchon se unke pita ke hisse ka pyaar kaise cheen loon maa?...................👍🏼

Prem has tears welling up in his eyes as he says with a heavy heart--- Yeh donon hii rishtey mujhe vo banaatey hain jo main aaj hoon maa………………apne astitva ke inn donon hisson mein se kisi ek ko main kaise chun loon😭…………….Phir bhi mainne faislaa ley liya hai maa………………uss ek usool ko dhyaan mein rakh kar……………….jo aapne mujhe sikhaaya……………aur…………mainne zindagi bhar usse maana……………….Humeshaa sahi ka saath deney ka usol…………………(Prem steps back………….turning around he walks upto where Heer and Meher stood with Preer and he goes on to hold Heer's hand saying)………………..aur main ussi kaa saath dey rahaa hoon maa…………….jo sahi hai………………………aur main jaanta hoon bahot jald aapko bhi iss baat ka ehsaas hoga………………….👏

Everyone looks shell shocked at Prem's decision……………….Heer herself couldn't believe it was her whom Prem had chosen over his mother!.................She wasn't expecting this…………….infact she didn't want it too!..................Heer kept wondering what made Prem take this unexpected decision?!!!!!!!!!!!!!....................😕

Kaisa laga?😊

Jaldi batao..................😊

sweta2005 thumbnail
19th Anniversary Thumbnail Visit Streak 500 Thumbnail + 7
Posted: 16 years ago
awesome too good very nice part waitinggggggg for next asap.
Princess_Priya1 thumbnail
20th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 16 years ago
Thanx sweta.................Glad u enjoyed this one too...............Next part coming soon........................😊
Princess_Priya1 thumbnail
20th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 16 years ago
Thanx purplestar22................glad u enjoyed this part too dear.............Next part asap.............😊
Edited by leothebest9 - 16 years ago
vrinda16 thumbnail
17th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 16 years ago
I know I hadn't replied to you abt ur previous 3 updates. I'm sorry. In fact,wasn't visiting the forum much bcos of the preparations for my engagement,which finally got over yesterday. Caught up with ur last 3 updates & what???I'm shocked - Nihaal is no more?????????? It's a false news for Heer right?????Or is it true????
Well, I loved Prem's dialogues while he stated his decision to his Mom over his choice between - G3 & Heer. And I'm happy he chose Heer.
Vrinda
Princess_Priya1 thumbnail
20th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 16 years ago
Thanx Vrinda..............Glad u enjoyed the whole thing.............and haan Nihaal is no more..............what happens next u will find out soon............ 😊
Edited by leothebest9 - 16 years ago

Related Topics

Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".