NEW FF....Milan jo likhya..NOTE.......Pg38........ - Page 19

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Posted: 16 years ago
awesom eupdate!!! glad everyone left!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
Thanx happybrar ..............glad u enjoyed this one too...............Next part asap.................😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
Thanx purplestar22 ..............glad u enjoyed this one too...............Next part asap.................😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
Heyyy!! sorry for not replying after reading both parts!!! EXAMS!! just found a minute, so i want to say superb yaar!!! I m glad prem actually stood up for heer, maybe because he knows the truth!!! BUT i wish the creatives hurry up and show that prem also knows the truth in the show!!

Anyways, your superb, the story is superb!! Apply for the new creative head since its been said that there is no creative head for kid desh at the moment!! Atleast you know that we want Premeer together and forever!! None of the crap that they show in the show sometimes...Lol, anyways, gotta run, but hey, good job! loved it!! Update soon!!! Take care!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
Thanx dear.................I was wondering where r u?.............Abb I know..............chalo wish u luck dear...............All the best and well...............do take out some time to read my FF and reply Plz................Thanx once again.................waise is it true?.............Kis Desh does not have a creative head?!...............Anyways.............I would love to do it.............lekin aisi meri kismet kahaan?!................Thanx once again.............😊
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Posted: 16 years ago

NEW PROMO----

In the Juneja house…………u can see Maya and Harman talking………….Harman says--- Pata nahiin yeh sab kaise ho gaya Maya?............Ek hii pal mein sab kuch bikhar gaya…………….then u see an evil maya smile and saying----Yeh toh sirf shuruaat hai Harman………… mera badlaa poora hua hai……………..aur abb jis barbaadi kaa aagaaz main karoongii………..vo kisis aur apney ka badlaa leney ke liye………….Prem aur Heer kii zindagi mein aisaa toofaan laaongii……………kii unkii khusiyaan…………unkaa rishtaa………….unkaa sab kuch tehas nehas kar doongii……………….The voice in the background says--- Abb aur kis nayi mushkil kaasaamna karnaa padegaa…………Prem aur Heer ko…………..and u can see a Heer…………..crying bitterly in Prem's arms……………..in their house in Kasaulii……………..

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Posted: 16 years ago
Thanx purplestar22.............Glad u enjoyed the promo............Next part asap................😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
Here's the next part..............Hope u all enjoy this one too..............and haan its only ten hours to harshad's b'day!..................😊

Gaytri looks at a sobbing Veera……………and she strokes her head gently with her hand……………she nods her head……………….she hugs Veera…………….saying---Tu fikar matt kar Veera………….teri maa tere saath hai……………sab theek ho jaayega……………..🤢

Maya stands there flashing he evil smile……………..knowing it was just a beginning…………..kyunkii usske rehtey hus kuch theek nahiin ho saktaa ……………….at least she would make sure it didn't happen!...........................

There outside…………Preet stops a taxi and helps Kuldii…………Meher and Heer into the car…………while Prem stands talking to Kirran…………..who was saying--- Tu bilkul pareshaan matt ho Prem…………….Yeh ley meri gaadi kii chaabi…………isse tu hii rakh ley…………main toh bachon ko lekar taxi se airport chalaa jaaonga…………..ku;lraaj kuch din tumhaare paas hii rukegii………….main bhi aise waqt mein tumhe akela nahiin chodnaa chahtaa…………..lekin mujhe parson hii job join karni hai…………….isliye mujhe jaana padhh raha hai…………..baaki tu kaam kii fikar matt kar………….mera ek dost hai mainne usse baat kar lii hai…………..he will help u get a loan to start a new buisiness…………..bas rehney kii jagah kaa intezam rehtaa hai…………..vo bhi main baat kar raha hoon……………😊

Prem interrupts saying---- Nahiin jeeju aapney itnaa kuch kar diya…………..thanx………….reheny kaa intezaam toh hai………….abhi kuch din pehle hii mainne Kasaulii mein Heer ke naam par ek cottage khareeda hai…………..hum log waheen raheinge…………..sach jeeju aggar aap nahiin hotey toh…………👏

Kirran smiles and hugs Prem…………..who felt relieved that there was someone he could look upto when everything seemed to be out of his hands!..................Kirran says--- Tu fikar matt karnaa Prem………..maa jald hii maan jaayengii…………..aur dekhna khud tumhe ghar waapas laayegii……………bas tu Heer aur Meher ka dhyaan rakhnaa…………..theek hai…………..😊

Prem just manages a slight smile saying………….his voice felt heavy---- Pata nahiin jeeju main inn teenon kii zimedaari nibhaa paaongaa bhi yaa nahiin……………😊

Kirran puts a hand on Prem's shoulder saying--- Don't worry Prem main tujhe achchi tarah jaanta hoon…………apni zimedaarion ko sambhaalnaa…………..unhein poora karma………….mere salley saab se zyaada koi nahiin jaanta……………..chal abb chalein……………

Preet comes upto them and says--- Bhaiya abb hum kya kareinge?...............😕

Prem noticed his younger brother sounded tired…………..and anxious………….

He says trying to assure him--- Sabse pehle hummein hospital jaana hoga………….Phir socheinge kii kya karma hai………….tu taxi se jaa………….tab tak main jeeju ke saath bachchon ko lekar pahoonchtaa hoon…………theek hai…………aur sab theek ho jaayega………….main hoon naa tere saath……………😊

Preet nods and leaves from there……………

They all reach the hospital and then after performing the last rites…………by Prem………..they all leave from there………….while kirran leaves with the kids for the airport…………Preet………..Prem………Meher…………Heer and KD leave for Kasaulii……………..by the time they reach the house Prem had just gifted to Heer last night………….it was dusk………….

Prem gets down the car……………..and helps KD to take a shocked and quiet Heer inside the house……………..while Preet helped Meher who sobbed silently as the two made their way along the same passage last night…………where Prem and Heer had walked hand in hand!................😉

When they reach the entrance…………..Prem remembers with a heavy heart how elated Heer had been to see the place……………..and today……….looking at her same……….but sad face……….and wet eyes………..made Prem feel miserable like anything!................😭

He makes Heer sit on the sofa………….and then sitting next to her…………he hugs her tight saying--- Heer plz iss tarah khaamosh matt raho…………kuch toh bolo……….

When Heer doesn't say anything…………..Meher turns to Preet and softly she says……….Yeh sab kya ho gaya Preet………..Heer didi theek toh ho jaayengii naa?..............Preet Heer didi……………😭

Preet says putting his arm around Meher's shoulder--- Kuch nahiin hoga bhabhi ko…………….kuch nahiin hoga…………..bhaiyaa hai naa…………hum sab bhi hai unkey saath…………😊

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Posted: 16 years ago
awesomeeeeeeeee too good very nice part waitingggggg for next asap.
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Posted: 16 years ago

verryy nicee waiting for next partt

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