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Posted: 16 years ago
Thanx happybrar ................Glad u read and replied dear...............Next part asap................😊
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Posted: 16 years ago

Thanx Pooji..................Glad u enjoyed this one too dear................Next part asap...................😊

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Posted: 16 years ago
Thanx purplestar22................Glad u liked it............Next part asap................😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
Thanx aditi...............Next part asap..............A very warm welcome to u dear..............😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
Hello everyone................At last its Monday today................This has been such a long weekend..............abb I just hope the wait will be worth.....................anyways Here's the next long part.................Hope u enjoy this one too and leave ur valuable comments and suggestions.....................😊

Gaytri tells Prem everything that wicked Veera had told her………….blaming Nihall for illtreating her to an extent that she lost her child…………….

Gaytri says—- - Meri betii ko itney dukh pahonchaaney waale…………aur uss kaa ghar ujaadney waale Nihaal kii behnon ke liye mere ghar mein koi jagah nahiin hai…………..😡

Prem looks at Gaytri shell shocked!...............while she says further………….. Abb tu faislaa kar le Prem……….tu apni biwi ka saath dena chata hai…………ya phir apni maa ka……………

Heer is shattered as she listened to what gaytri was saying…………she holds Meher's hand………….and takes her from there………….while Preet and Prem try to talk things out with their mother……………

Meher kept on asking as the two made way for the exit---- Didi hum kahaan jaa rahein hai…………..kuch toh bolo didi……………

Heer stops a taxi and the two get into it……………

They reach Nihaal's place……………where Heer finds a broken and wornout Nihaal sitting in the hall…………..holding his head………….(Veera jaisi biwi ho toh yahii hota hai😆)…………….

Heer asks Nihaal who then tells her everything…………..and Heer is stunned to listen to him………….and she had no choice but to believe her elder brother…………reason…………..he was saying all this with his hand on Meher's head!.................😲

Heer puts her hand on nihaal's shoulder and tells him—Aap fikar matt karo bhaiya…………main aur Meher hain aapke saath………….sab kuch theek ho jaayegaa………….

Heer wanted to stay with her bro in distress………….lekin she wanted to tell Prem the truth………….and as the two make their way back to the Juneja house………….Heer wished all through the journey that Prem should not have taken his decision…………..

After Heer leaft a sad and tired Nihaal said to himself--- Kuch theek nahiin hogaa Heer……………..kuch theek nahiin hoga……………..sab kuch khatm ho gaya…………………..sab kuch!........................😭🤢

He leaves the house in his car…………………driving in a rash manner……………….

There Preet and Prem were just not getting anywhere reasoning out things with Gaytri………..who was in no mood to listen to them!................😡

Prem then asks her to wait………….till he talks with Heer atleast…………

Prem moves out and Preet to goes after him…………..while Veera and Maya share evil smiles!.....................

There Prem hurries outside and sees Meher and Heer get down from the taxi…………….

Prem walks upto Heer…………and while he asks Heer-- Kya hua Heer tum kahaan gayi thi?.................Preet walks upto a sobbing Meher and tries to calm her down……………😳

Meanwhile Heer tells Prem each and every word Nihaal had told her……………

Prem looks at Heer taken aback and he just says--- Lekin Heer…………humaari………….humaari Veera aisaa kyun karegii?...............vo khud apnaa ghar kyun todegii…………..😕😡

Heer replies sounding a little impatient—Vo main nahiin jaanti Prem…………lekin itna zaroor jaanti hoon kii Nihaal bhaiya………….Meher ke sar par haath rakh kar…………usski kasam khaa kar jhoot toh nahiin boleinge……………..👏

Prem stares at Heer and nods his head slightly in agreement……………..😳

Heer says sobbing—---Prem…………..main kya karoon………….bahot dar lag raha hai mujhe…………pata nahiin…………aisaa kyun lag raha hai………….jaise………….jaise main kuch khoney waali hoon…………..jaise kuch buraa honey waala hai…………..(Heer was all tears)……………….🤔😭

Kaisa laga?

Jaldi batao...................😊

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Posted: 16 years ago
OMG.....just read all the parts.....u are sooo good....awesome updates....its good to c dat at least prem respects heers POV...im soo tensed....update soon.....loving it.....good job....
u r truly talented....😃
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Posted: 16 years ago
awesomeeeeeeeeee too good very nice part waitinggggggg for next asap.
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Posted: 16 years ago
Thanx purplestar22..............Glad u liked it...........Next part asap............😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
Thanx iditri............Glad u read the whole thing and enjoyed it............Next part asap.............Hope u enjoy the coming track too.................Thanx for those lovely complements................I'm sooooooooooo humbled.............😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
Thanx sweta..............glad u enjoyed this part too............Next part asap..............😊

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