Kulran || Shayari Aa Gayi (a oneshot)

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hey! This may actually be the first KulrajKiran shot in the forums! I'm not sure, but I think so! 😆 Anyways, I came up with this when my sister got the song 'Main Shayar Toh Nahi' stuck in my head during dinner one night. And it has a splash of Meet in it. 😉

Enjoy!
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Kulraj and Meher glared at their husbands', both of whom were trying hard to keep straight faces. The day had started out pleasantly enough. Kulraj should have known something would go wrong, considering the fact that even her kids had not bothered her today. It had been too good to be true.
"Par humne kiya kya?" Preet asked plaintively. Kiran, who was sitting on the armrest of the chair Preet was sitting on, turned his face away, snickering quietly.
Meher flared up at her husband. "There is no need to act innocent. Aap dono toh -" She growled and Preet shrank back.
Kulraj just folded her arms across her chest and raised an eyebrow at her husband. He gulped. "It had seemed a good idea at the time," he ventured.
"That's how it always starts," she stated drily.
But Kiran was telling the truth, this time at least. The newlyweds, Harman and Ash, had decided to go out for a candlelight dinner. Veera and Nihaal were back at their place. So the remaining three young husbands had formulated a plan to try and surprise their wives by preparing dinner. Midway through preparation, Prem had decided to leave, taking in the mess, and knowing his wife would not be happy with it. But Kiran and Preet had followed through with their plan. How were they to know that they would set off the smoke alarm and almost start a fire? It could have happened to anyone, and Kiran told his wife just that.
"It could," she conceded. "But it had to happen to you." She shook her head. "Ab hume hi sab kuch saaf karna hai, aur upar se dinner bhi tayar karni hai."
"Then it's a good thing Ma-Bauji took your kids to Veera's place for dinner no?" Preet asked.
Meher snapped at him. "Tum chup raho, toh behter rahega."
Preet and Kiran exchanged looks. Kiran reassured his saala silently. He turned to his wife, and started to sing, "Main shayar toh nahi, magar eh haseen, jab se dekha, maine tujhko mujhko, shayari aa gayi." Preet applauded, and egged on, Kiran continued, "Main aashiq toh nahi, magar eh haseen, jab se dekha maine tujhko mujhko aashiqui aa gayi."
Kulraj tried to keep an angry front, but the blush that stained her cheeks was evident to her husband. Meher hit her forehead. Preet smirked at her, and she bit down a grin. It was just not possible to stay mad at them.
"Chalo, hum bhi bahar chalte hai," Preet slipped an arm around his wife's waist. "Enjoy having the house to yourselves!" He cheekily waved at his Di and Jiju.
Kiran continued to serenade his wife, walking around her, enjoying the fact that even after all these years, he could still bring colour to her cheeks.
"Main shayar toh nahi."
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Do let me know what you think.
Love,
Radz
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urworstnitemare thumbnail
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Posted: 16 years ago
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yay! me first!!! ohh i'm good at this now...reserving that is😛*pats self on back
ohh a onee-shot on Kulran...interesting!!!!! sounds so cool! thanks for trying something different! 😳
*unreserved!😃
Heyla!!!!!!! If i recognized u correctly, ur the pope of the temple nah?
anyways nice job👍🏼
🤣 it was hilarious! seriously, it was waaayyy too cute..😆 loved how kiran started randomly singing to his wife...suck up..but must say that's quite shmart. lol. i was imagining him having a horrible voice throughout the whole thing which made me laugh even harder...ahh mi imagination. reminded me of big B for some reason..you know amitabh bachan?😕 i dunno why?
Anyways, love how you practically mentioned everybody in the serial and yet managed to keep the focus on Kiran and Kul. di 😛 prem was smart i see? *why am i not surprised...ohh and The part of meet i think was pretty well done but i think i'm so used to reading so many FF's or one-shots on them that I wanted more 😆 .... back to kulran...I can't believe kulraj blushed...shooo shweet!!!! 😳 me having difficulties imaging our Kul blushing but still..cute!
Haha..can't wait to read more one-shots on these two..their adorable..Thanks for a lovely one-shot! -blahblah
Edited by urworstnitemare - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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I may not be in the commenting mood, but I seriously adored this one! It's nice seeing a Kulraaj-Kiran thing, because they are such a cute couple! They've been married for a few years and have like three kids but they're still so flirty and cheeky with each other that it just makes you grin. And the best part of this shot is that you managed to bring that out.

Love,
Bhav :P
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hi.gosh what one shot!amazing,very well written.keep the good work...and thankx
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Thanks guys! Will comment back soon!
Love,
Radz
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Posted: 16 years ago
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oops. double post. 😆
Edited by Anhdara13 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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ahhhh kulkir just cracks me up they are so sweet and yet so nuaghty lol plz do more and oh yer it was brill
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Reserved =)
Unreserved =)
Ooh I love this song! Shabo sang it for me once😆
Aww so sweet. They tried making dinner for their wives? Setting the smoke alarm off was an accident. Though it never happened to me😆
Aww I love how he sang to her and all the anger vanished =) He knows how to keep his wife happy. Me loved your one shot =) I love how it had to do with Kiran and Kulraj =)
I dunno what to say now cuz the song is stuck in my head😆
Edited by -Ravjot- - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Kulraj and Kiran!! 😃 Seriously one of the best "happy" jodi's in Kis Desh! 😳

And that song it just so cute, how could anyone not give in! 😳😛 I cant comment much sorry Radz, my finger's in pain! 😔
Posted: 16 years ago
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RAVZ! It's our song! *starts humming*

Wow, see you were on a roll today, with what like 3 shots?? Loving it, and this was so cute, loved how they are so in love after so many years and you got me all like tingly with the last part....Kiran slyly singing, smirking at Kuldi who is desperately trying to make it look like she is working :P

Fantastic shot!

--shabz

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