Kulran || Shayari Aa Gayi (a oneshot)

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Maddy

@blackdaughter

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Posted: 16 years ago

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waltz! =0

Wow, Kulran!!! I like that name!!!! 😆 Nice to see something on them, becuase they are one of the only 'happy' couple in the serial!!!! *hint for the creatives, not that they have the power to understand*!!!!! 😉😆

OMG, Preet is always acting like cool dude par Meher ke samane he is like a little child who got caught stealing a cookie (that reminds me of Bhav who is ALWAYS having cookies)!!!! 😆 Anyways, awwww, they wanted to cook for their wives!!!! Sho shweeet!!! *pinching cheeks*

Too bad that didn't go so well!!! 😆 Prem is ishmart, leaving half way through!!!! 😆 Wah wah, they both also left the food half way through!!!!!! *shaking my head at them in dismay* I am a walking disaster around the kitchen, but even i wouldn't do that!!!!! 😳😆

Really good song choice!!! I love this song, it's so romantic!!!!! Hai, Kulraaj is blushing!!! That is true love, having that effect on your wife/husband every single day no matter how many years pass!!!! 😳

Really nice one Radz!!! Hope you continue righting them!!!!

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@flowers4u

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Posted: 16 years ago

#12

soooooooooooo sweet very funny and prem such a scry cat

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Aradhna

@Anhdara13

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Posted: 16 years ago

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Originally posted by: urworstnitemare
yay! me first!!! ohh i'm good at this now...reserving that is😛*pats self on back
ohh a onee-shot on Kulran...interesting!!!!! sounds so cool! thanks for trying something different! 😳Avu! Thank you for commenting! 😃

*unreserved!😃

Heyla!!!!!!! If i recognized u correctly, ur the pope of the temple nah? Yup. I am the Pope! 😉😆

anyways nice job👍🏼Aw, thank you!

🤣 it was hilarious! seriously, it was waaayyy too cute..😆 loved how kiran started randomly singing to his wife...suck up..but must say that's quite shmart. lol. i was imagining him having a horrible voice throughout the whole thing which made me laugh even harder...ahh mi imagination. reminded me of big B for some reason..you know amitabh bachan?😕 i dunno why? You imagined him having a bad voice? I imagined him having an average voice. Not too great but not so bad. You remembered Big B? Is that good? 😆 Am glad you enjoyed it!

Anyways, love how you practically mentioned everybody in the serial and yet managed to keep the focus on Kiran and Kul. di 😛 prem was smart i see? *why am i not surprised...ohh and The part of meet i think was pretty well done but i think i'm so used to reading so many FF's or one-shots on them that I wanted more 😆 .... back to kulran...I can't believe kulraj blushed...shooo shweet!!!! 😳 me having difficulties imaging our Kul blushing but still..cute! Aw, thank you! Am glad you liked it.

Haha..can't wait to read more one-shots on these two..their adorable..Thanks for a lovely one-shot! -blahblah Aw, thank you for such a sweet comment. Hope to write more on them. 😃

Originally posted by: sourpuss
I may not be in the commenting mood, but I seriously adored this one! It's nice seeing a Kulraaj-Kiran thing, because they are such a cute couple! They've been married for a few years and have like three kids but they're still so flirty and cheeky with each other that it just makes you grin. And the best part of this shot is that you managed to bring that out.
Love,

Bhav :P

Aw, so sweet. Thanks Bhav! 😉 And you were actually commenting on this despite having read it before.

@ Deizy and Shikha: Thanks guys! Am glad you enjoyed this. I hope to write more on them too!.

Love,

Radz

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Aradhna

@Anhdara13

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Posted: 16 years ago

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Originally posted by: -Ravjot-
Reserved =)

Unreserved =)

Ooh I love this song! Shabo sang it for me once😆Ooh, really? Shabo sang it? O.o Lemme guess, off tune? *ducks just in case Shabo decides to attack* 😆

Aww so sweet. They tried making dinner for their wives? Setting the smoke alarm off was an accident. Though it never happened to me😆It's never happened to me either (though I think that's because I never cook 😆). Am glad you liked that. I needed a reason for the wives to be angry. 😆

Aww I love how he sang to her and all the anger vanished =) He knows how to keep his wife happy. Me loved your one shot =) I love how it had to do with Kiran and Kulraj =) Aw, thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it! My first foray into the Kulran pairing. 😉

I dunno what to say now cuz the song is stuck in my head😆*hums the song*

Originally posted by: indiandoll89
Kulraj and Kiran!! 😃 Seriously one of the best "happy" jodi's in Kis Desh! 😳

And that song it just so cute, how could anyone not give in! 😳😛 I cant comment much sorry Radz, my finger's in pain! 😔

Aw, I hope your finger feels better! Thanks for reading and enjoying! 😃

Originally posted by: shabo24
RAVZ! It's our song! *starts humming* Your song? 😆

Wow, see you were on a roll today, with what like 3 shots?? Loving it, and this was so cute, loved how they are so in love after so many years and you got me all like tingly with the last part....Kiran slyly singing, smirking at Kuldi who is desperately trying to make it look like she is working :P Yup, 3 shots! And thanks. My aim was then achieved! 😉😆

Fantastic shot! Thanks Shabz!

--shabz

Originally posted by: blackdaughter
waltz! =0

Wow, Kulran!!! I like that name!!!! 😆 Nice to see something on them, becuase they are one of the only 'happy' couple in the serial!!!! *hint for the creatives, not that they have the power to understand*!!!!! 😉😆Yup, they are the only 'happy' couple (though initially apparently Kiran was supposed to have an affair. I hope they don't bring that track in!) 😕 I love this couple, they are so real.

OMG, Preet is always acting like cool dude par Meher ke samane he is like a little child who got caught stealing a cookie (that reminds me of Bhav who is ALWAYS having cookies)!!!! 😆 Anyways, awwww, they wanted to cook for their wives!!!! Sho shweeet!!! *pinching cheeks* Yeah, he's a little kid only. Especially when it comes to getting out of trouble. 😆 (She never shares them with me! She gives me brownies though. 😆) Yes, they are sweet.

Too bad that didn't go so well!!! 😆 Prem is ishmart, leaving half way through!!!! 😆 Wah wah, they both also left the food half way through!!!!!! *shaking my head at them in dismay* I am a walking disaster around the kitchen, but even i wouldn't do that!!!!! 😳😆Neither would I, and I have absolutely no clue how to cook! 😆 Prem made a mess before na? So he knew there was no chance of it turning out good. And it only got them in trouble. 😆

Really good song choice!!! I love this song, it's so romantic!!!!! Hai, Kulraaj is blushing!!! That is true love, having that effect on your wife/husband every single day no matter how many years pass!!!! 😳Aw, thanks Maddy, I'm glad you enjoyed it!

Really nice one Radz!!! Hope you continue righting them!!!! I hope to! 😉 Thanks Maddy!

@ zaibun: Thanks sweetie!

Love,

Radz

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