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Posted: 16 years ago
hi everyone....
i am really gald that u are liking the story so far.....
there are more twists and turns thats you are gon to witness....
but you will have to be a bit patient everything will be revealed bit by bit.... actuall even i havnt thought nuch about the story so lets see how it goes😉
😉😉.........
nyways enough of my bakwaas here it the next update........
njoy urself..... and caution this update might actually shock you !

~CAPTIVATED (chapter 6)~

Prem was lost in his own world, but a sudden touch on the back of his hand brought him back to reality. Kruti was looking upon him with sympathy, as if she knew that Prem would need more strength and support to deal with what was going to be thrown in his way.

"Kruti I have a request, I will highly appreciate if you would not divulge any information about Heer to anyone" after a brief pause he said "not even Preet."

Kruti understood where he was coming from and she nodded reassuring him that he can trust her with that. Prem asked her to tell him as much as she can about Heer. He told her that he wants to know all about Heer not because he has doubts about her but because he wants to know the reason behind her pain her misery.

"Prem whatever I know about Heer is only via her medical history but I really think that her personal problems are much more major than this" she handed him the report that she was holding. Prem went through it and after that all he had was confusion and pain on his face. He had no idea what it meant, it seemed he was staring at something which held no significant or rather it was so drastic that he just did not want to believe it. He looked up questioningly at Kruti, as if asking her to tell him that this was someone else's file.

"But how can this be true''. How can she be pregnant before" the last sentence was barely audible.

"This is something you will have to understand Prem, this is not that simple as it seems" she said in a tensed voice..

"what do you mean this is not simple'.. of course it is NOT simple this can't be her" he said raising from his seat.

"calm down Prem' this IS her file and this is not that simple because she was not naturally pregnant" she said in an escalating voice. Prem had no idea what she was saying, it seemed that he has entered a totally different world Of Heer. He reluctantly sank himself in the chair.

"What do you mean by that?"

"I mean that she had undergone an embryo implantation, which means the baby was not her's but someone else's''.. and as far as I know it was of some Mr. and Mrs. Rampal's" listening to this on one hand Prem had sigh of relief that Heer was actually not pregnant and that meant that she did not have anyone in her life. On the other hand things are becoming more complicated, he had more turbulent thoughts and questions in his mind.

"but why would she do such a thing?" he looked at her expectantly but to his dismay she had no answer to that question'. "and where is the child if you are saying that she carried one" he asked with a rather arrogant tone as if it was all Kruti's fault.

"I am sorry to say this but the child was never born, it was aborted because there were no appropriate development in the child and if Heer would have continued for the whole term then she might have lost her own life" the last sentence left Prem transfixed in his seat.

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Heer was sitting on the bed looking out of the window, bathing in the sunlight of the morning. She was glad that Dhriti and others visited her in the morning, may be because that gave her a way to escape from her past memories. Inspite of all this one thing was bothering her, Prem's absence. She knew that she will have to confront him sooner or later. She was ready to do that but all she needed was a bit of more time so as to gather courage. Sudden crackling noise brought her out of her thoughts, it was Prem. She had a sudden tightening feeling in her stomach; there was something oddly strange about Prem today she thought. With every single step that he was taking towards her, her heart was beating faster. Though he did not utter a word Heer still felt that something was horribly wrong and somewhere she knew that may be her worst fear were about to come true. This is was what she was afraid about, Prem coming to know something about her from someone else. But she was yet not sure if this was the case.

"Prem' I..um ..I want to talk to you about something"

but before she could have said anything he ran towards her took her into his arms. He wanted to hold her close to him, he didn't want to let go of her. The last words of Kruti were ringing in his ears "she might have lost her own life" he drew her closer to himself, it seemed that he didn't even want air to come in between them. Suddenly Heer's eyes caught sight of the file that Prem was holding in his hand and she knew. She held him more closely, she felt protected in his arms, and she felt that nothing could touch her if he was around, a feeling that she had lost long time ago. Tears were rolling down her eyes which were soon converted into hiccoughs. This time Prem did not tell her to stop. He wanted her to let go of her pain once and for all. He was holding her in his arms caressing her head lending her his shoulder to cry on. There were no questions asked and no answers given, she was in his embrace until her crying subsided.

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okay...... so this is for today i will prolly update it again day after tomoro........

i kno after this part people might want to criticize.....if u do feel that way i am open to it 😉😉......

so..... you are most welcum to either comment or criticize..

and thank oyu so much for your wonderful responses...🤗

luv

-iksha


Edited by iksha20 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
me first!!
wwooowwhh!!*trying to take it all in!*..i didnot expect that at all!! i'm just as confused as prem is right now!!..heer?..was pregnant before?..embroy implantation?..abortion? why?!!..lol
i'm confused right now..but i know it's not going to be for long!!...as soon as heer reveals her past..both prem and I will get rid of the confusion!..lol
i loved the fact that prem just ran to her and held her in his arms!!..these are the little things about prem that absolutely take my breath away!..even in the show!
he didn't care that she hid all fo that from him..but he was worried that she might have died!..awww...sho shweeet!!..that's prem for you right there!
anyways....aweeesome update!..can't wait for the next one!
~luv nitya
Edited by nityatarlapally - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
awesome update...finally Heer's secret revealed..pheww...Poor Heer ..she went through a lot..
why rampal ..what made her to take this decision?
waiting for the next update


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Posted: 16 years ago
woah! look at that!! You have done your research........... it's all so sciency!!!! 😆 I really like it! Shows you are ready to put in osme effort into your work! *thumbs up*
Awww, poor Prem! One shock after another, and poor us too! 😆 Can't wait to see where you are going with this! I'm so happy Heer is allowing Prem to confort her. Prem won't let anything hapen to Heer now! 😳 *rubs hands together*
I'm just happy that the comforting faze has started! It has.......... hasn't it? 😳😆 I'm sure things will get cleared as to what is going on as the story progresses
Dunno what critism you are on about! *roles eyes* But Ugh, It Ratpal! Yuck! I don't like him! *pouts* 😆
Anyways, good update, eagerly waiting for the next part! Hope that comes up soon too!
Love you! *hug*
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Posted: 16 years ago
omg!! wow that was a shocker!
i cant believe heer's past!! omg she was preggers with RR's kid? because of the 'Rampal' name im predicting that tis was RRs!!
prem is so adorable!
that was a great update
thanx for updating - glad ur back!
-Sadi*
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Posted: 16 years ago

omg!mindblowing parts...👏u r amazing....its vry vry vry interesting....thnk u sooo much for pm..plzzz continue asap..

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Posted: 16 years ago
interesting!!! interesting!! the story is moving ahead interestingly... Wonder wat's the whole mystery abt.. waiting for the next update and your PM...
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Posted: 16 years ago
iksha,
wonderful update...and completely different concept...so thats what has been bothering heer ...She was being a surrogate mother to Rishab's child 😕 but why was she operated twice? Abortion requires one, that too only if its after 3-4 months...but embryo implantation doesnt require one....So is there more to it ?eagerly waiting to know...
I love the Prem here...calm composed and wise...and more than anything, he loves heer unconditionally...
looking forward to the next update....
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Posted: 16 years ago
hey
i read your ff
it is awesomeeeeeeeeeeeeee
update soon
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: nityatarlapally

me first!! hi nitya..... yay u first! lol😊😉.....
wwooowwhh!!*trying to take it all in!*..i didnot expect that at all!! i'm just as confused as prem is right now!!..heer?..was pregnant before?..embroy implantation?..abortion? why?!!..lol lol yahi to twist hai.... well actually even i m confused right now.... i trying to develop the story futher so as to keep it interesting and surprising!!
i'm confused right now..but i know it's not going to be for long!!...as soon as heer reveals her past..both prem and I will get rid of the confusion!..lol i know and i will try mu best to irradicate all the confision possible dont u worry...lol......😉😆😆
i loved the fact that prem just ran to her and held her in his arms!!..these are the little things about prem that absolutely take my breath away!..even in the show! i know this is what prem was when Kis Desh started and see what they have done to him i swear this mansi has ruined everything uptill now i was tolerating all the stupid track that they were feeding us was onli bcuz they had kept prem heer intact but now everypassing day this show is getting intolerable cuz of the crap they are up for but nevertheless i guess i will watch it for my dailu does of harshiti😃
he didn't care that she hid all fo that from him..but he was worried that she might have died!..awww...sho shweeet!!..that's prem for you right there!
anyways....aweeesome update!..can't wait for the next one! i kno that is what Prem stands for..... i mean he is shud b with heer no matter what and i srsly hate this new prem that creatives are showin us.... so much for that lovable Prem yaar who could go to any extent to be with his HEER! aur ab..... nyways
Thank you sooo much for ur response......... and i will update real soon..... nad hope with the next update a lil bit of ur confusion will be cleared😉
~luv nitya

thank you once again!
luv
-iksha
Edited by iksha20 - 16 years ago

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