Meet || Khabar Nahi (a one shot)

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hey all. I blame Shabzie for this. Her songfic gave me the idea, then I got Khabar Nahi stuck in my head (alongside Kuch Kum, for which I blame Bhav. Yes, I blame people alot for all things. Shush. Don't judge me. 😆)
Anyways, this oneshot is dedicated to Ravzie, because I'm not sure I can update my FFs in time for her birthday. So Ravzie, happy early birthday! ILY! 🤗
Everyone else, ILY too, just at the moment, I love Ravzie more. 🤗🤗
Anywho, just a note before you go on to the story for those still reading this. Preet and Meher are not married.
Enjoy!
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Mere Maula Maula Mere Maula, Mann Matwala Kyun Hua Hua Re,
Mann Maula Maula Mere Maula, Mere Maula
Kis Taraf Hai Aasmaan, Kis Taraf Zameen,
Khabar Nahi, Khabar Nahi

Preet could not concentrate on his work. His mind kept replaying the scene in his head. That smile, that laugh, the way those eyes twinkled up at him. Unbidden, a smile crept on his lips as he thought about her. She was breathtaking, and she did not even realise it. He did not know when she had gone from being his friend, his best friend, to being the person he could not even imagine life without. His gaze landed on the photo on his desk of the two of them, taken at Harman Bhai's wedding to Ash. His arm was slung over her shoulder casually, and both were beaming because PB and HB (names she indignantly opposed to, telling him that she might as well call them HD and PJ, which had him howling with laughter) had just announced the good news. He picked up the photo, fingering her form. He sighed. He was not going to be able to get any work done. Not today, anyway. Abruptly, he stood up, grabbing his jacket. He might as well help prepare for Ma's birthday party. This meant seeing her, but that he would take as a bonus, he thought to himself with a small smirk on his face.

Jab Se Aaya Hai Sanam, Mujhko Khud Ki Bhi,
Khabar Nahi, Khabar Nahi
Hosh Gul Sapno Ke Mein Bandhu Pull, Aankh Kab Khuli,
Khabar Nahi, Khabar Nahi

Meher grinned up at Preet as he complained about the shakiness of the ladder, asking her why he had to be the one to put the streamers up. Cheekily, she replied, "Because it gives me a good view." He stared at her in shock, almost losing his balance. She broke into peals of laughter as she noticed his cheeks turn slightly pink. She'd manage to do something not people could: make Preet Juneja, Casanova of Ludhiana, blush. Inwardly, she reflected on how adorable he looked like that, with cheeks still red, and streamers draped on him, precariously balanced on the ladder. Not that she'd ever tell him that. He'd smirk at her, and start his flirting, something that he did anyways, but then she had not realised how much he really meant to her. She had fallen for her best friend, she thought to herself, amused. How cliched could she get?

Kis Taraf Hai Aasmaan, Kis Taraf Zameen,
Khabar Nahi, Khabar Nahi
Mere Maula Maula Mere Maula, Mann Matwala Kyun Hua Hua Re,
Mann Maula Maula Mere Maula, Mere Maula

Preet was bored. The party had begun, but there was no masti, no naach-gaana, nothing. PB and HB were sitting at a table, PB fussing over his baby girl and wife. Harman Bhai and Ash were feeding each other in a corner, both flirting. Preet shuddered, that was really not something he wanted to interrupt. Bauji was annoyed with him again, because he had made fun of how odd his parents looked as a couple. (They did not, but it was fun annoying his father.) Kulraj Di was trying to handle her children, who had been wrecking havoc on some innocent aunty, while Kiran Jiju was of no help, trying very hard not to laugh at what his children had managed to do. God knows where Veera and Nihaal Jiju were, and he'd rather not know what they were doing. And the only other sane person in this house, he had not seen. He had no idea where she was, if she had even come down yet.

Movement caught his eye, and he turned to see what exactly the flash of pink had been. His mouth dropped open in surprise. He had a hard time remembering to breathe. He swallowed nervously. He was pretty sure he would blurt out something embarrassing. A small smile was playing on her lips, and he had to keep himself from staring at them. That would just give him away. But, he realised, looking at her would give him away, because he was not sure he would be able to keep his emotions and thoughts from showing on his face. She reached him, and she craned her head back to look at him.

"Wow," she teased. "You clean up nice."

This he could handle. "Thank you," he bowed exaggeratedly. "Tum bhi itni buri nahi lagti."

"Thanks," she replied drily. "That's probably the best I can get from you."

He grinned naughtily. "That's probably the best you'll get from anyone." He dodged her swipe, chuckling. His smile became gentler, and softly, he told her, "You look beautiful."

She blushed darkly, and did not say anything, but his heart swelled at the smile she sent his way, her eyes glowing. At that he knew this moment would haunt him for a long while to come. This moment, right here, was the highlight of his day, of his week, and if a moment like this did not come again, the highlight of his life.

Jaane Kab Kahaan Kaise, Tere Ho Gaye Kaise,
Hum Toh Sochte Hi Reh Gaye, Aur Pyar Ho Gaya
Mere Khawaab Dil Saansein, Mil Ke Kho Gaye Aise,
Tujko Dekh Ke Aisa Toh, Kai Baar Ho Gaya
Tu Kahe Deil Yeh Tera Rahe, Aur Kya Kahoon,
Khabar Nahi, Khabar Nahi

Meher could hardly control her racing heart as he led her onto the dance floor. He knew that this was one of her favourite songs, and had specifically requested it for her. There was no smirk on his face as he looked down at her. They swayed to the music, and she could not help the thrill that ran down her spine as she realised that they moved in sync. Her eyes would not leave his. She was pretty sure her cheeks were stained with pink, she could feel the warmth on them. He moved closer to her, and her breath hitched slightly. She tightened her hold on him. They were now so close that she could feel his breath on her neck. They could no longer see one another, but they did not have to. She felt him hug her closer, and she responded in kind by resting her head on his shoulder. It was as if the world had slipped away, and all that was left was the two of them. She had never realised how well they fit together until this moment.

Aayega Woh Iss Intezaar Mein,
Ud Chala Dil Wahan Sapne Jahan Mein Janu
Lagta Hai Woh Mere Kareeb Hai,
Aisa Kyun Hai Magar Dhunde Nazar Beqabu
Hosh Gul Sapno Ki Mein Bandhu Pull, Aankh Kab Khuli,
Khabar Nahi..

Preet could not believe this was happening. Meher was in his arms, unresisting. She was melded to his body. It was as if they were two pieces of a jigsaw, finally aligned with one another. He rested his cheek lazily on her head and closed his eyes. Now he knew what perfection felt like. She was made for him, and he for her. Words would be expressed later, he would have to tell her. But here, in this time and place, nothing mattered but the angel that was in his arms.

Jab Se Aaya Hai Sanam, Mujhko Khud Ki Bhi,
Khabar Nahi, Khabar Nahi
Hosh Gul Sapno Ke Mein Bandhu Pull, Aankh Kab Khuli,
Khabar Nahi, Khabar Nahi
Kis Taraf Hai Aasmaan, Kis Taraf Zameen,
Khabar Nahi, Khabar Nahi
Mere Maula Maula Mere Maula, Mann Matwala Kyun Hua Hua Re,
Mann Maula Maula Mere Maula, Mere Maula

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So please, please let me know what you guys think of my first foray into Meet territory.
Love,
Radz
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Oh my god thats was beutiful hun 👏. Can i give you one advice though why don't you kick the writer of ekta ji that writes stupid story lines of meet and you join. what you say than i will watch the show non-stop. think about it
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Posted: 16 years ago
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this one shot was tremendously wonderful😃... I loved it very much , as much as I love our Meet....😃😳... it was such a romantic and sweet shot... I just cant resist myself but read it more...⭐️
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: shikha87

Oh my god thats was beutiful hun 👏. Can i give you one advice though why don't you kick the writer of ekta ji that writes stupid story lines of meet and you join. what you say than i will watch the show non-stop. think about it

Aw, thank you so much! That means alot to me! Though I think the creatives are handling Meet very well, it's PremHeer they need help with! 😆

*whistle**whistle* *whistle* *whistle* *whistle* *whistle* *whistle* *whistle* *whistle* *whistle* *whistle* *whistle* *whistle* *whistle* *whistle* *whistle* *whistle* *whistle* *whistle* *whistle* *whistle* *whistle* *whistle* *whistle* *whistle* *whistle* *whistle* *whistle* *whistle* *whistle* *whistle* *whistle* *whistle* 😳 Thank you so much! You are too sweet.


this one shot was tremendously wonderful😃... I loved it very much , as much as I love our Meet....😃😳... it was such a romantic and sweet shot... I just cant resist myself but read it more...⭐️ That means so much! Thank you so so much!

Originally posted by: Bul3

Beautiful👏👏👏

Thank you!
Love,
Radz
Edited by Anhdara13 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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luved ur one shot totally amazing
Posted: 16 years ago
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Blaming me huh? =] Well you can keep on blaming me, if it gets you to write such adorable and cute songfics! 😆

I LOVE THIS SONG! *stars singing under her breath* It's such a sweet, melodious song which suits Meet so perfectly, specially the line "Kis taraf hai aasman, kis taraf zameen." *sigh*

Amazing one shot, was really well written di! Loved the dance and then how you described their emotions, what I love about this couple is that its sorta the typical tellywood couple with a freshness no?

I loved how you ended it! With Preet musing over if he should tell or say anything but instead was like "What the hey!" and just kept dancing *cough* so nicly with her. *angel smile*

LOVED IT!

--shabz
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And you say I don't comment...I'm appaled and insulted. AP-PALLED. (Okay, that would have worked better if you had done Great Ex too...)
Anyway, you know I loved it. I loved the last part, where they were dancing together. The way you described it just made me go 'awww...' Again, overlooking the fact that it does not take much to make me go 'awww...'. And HAH! I got something stuck in your head! whee! Go me! *victory dance* If me getting songs stuck in your head makes you write then I should do that more often...*hums a random Rock On!!! song*
Love,
Bhav (:
P.S. Radz, before you fly off again (*must...resist...urge...to...grumble!!) let's collaborate on a one-shot. Whaddya say? 😃
P.P.S. Uh, no, spamming my FF thread won't make me update any faster. 😛 I do that when I'm bored.
Edited by sourpuss - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: zaibun

luved ur one shot totally amazing

Thank you!

Originally posted by: shabo24

Blaming me huh? =] Well you can keep on blaming me, if it gets you to write such adorable and cute songfics! 😆 Okay, I will do that. Whenever. 😉 And thanks for the compliment!

I LOVE THIS SONG! *stars singing under her breath* It's such a sweet, melodious song which suits Meet so perfectly, specially the line "Kis taraf hai aasman, kis taraf zameen." *sigh* I love this song too! My sister is so annoyed with me 'cos I played it (loudly) on repeat as I wrote the story. 😆 I actually wanted to make a VM on this song for Meet, but 1) I no longer have the softer, and 2) (which in my eyes is more important) I don't have many scenes. I think I have all of three, and everytime I try to get more, it doesn't work.

Amazing one shot, was really well written di! Loved the dance and then how you described their emotions, what I love about this couple is that its sorta the typical tellywood couple with a freshness no? Yup! Thank you so much. They actually wrote themselves. I wasn't going to write them dancing, and it was supposed to be Meher's birthday, and he was supposed to confess, but this just - flowed. 😆 It worked better anyways.

I loved how you ended it! With Preet musing over if he should tell or say anything but instead was like "What the hey!" and just kept dancing *cough* so nicly with her. *angel smile* Aw, thank you.. I'm really glad you liked it. I figured that, this moment would be too perfect for them to disrupt, and any conversations would occur later. 😉

LOVED IT! THANK YOU! ILY!

--shabz

Originally posted by: sourpuss

And you say I don't comment...I'm appaled and insulted. AP-PALLED. (Okay, that would have worked better if you had done Great Ex too...) Okay, firstly, the you spelt appalled wrongly. *shrugs* You know me. Secondly, I so have to read that book now! 😆

Anyway, you know I loved it. I loved the last part, where they were dancing together. The way you described it just made me go 'awww...' Again, overlooking the fact that it does not take much to make me go 'awww...'. And HAH! I got something stuck in your head! whee! Go me! *victory dance* If me getting songs stuck in your head makes you write then I should do that more often...*hums a random Rock On!!! song* 😆 Thank you. And thank you for beta-ing it! ILY for that. And ILY for getting Dostana songs stuck in my head, because it got me out of my writing rut, though my sister may not agree with me. She's fed up of the song now. 😆
Love,
Bhav (:
P.S. Radz, before you fly off again (*must...resist...urge...to...grumble!!) let's collaborate on a one-shot. Whaddya say? 😃 YES!!! DEFINITELY! Oh, and would it help if I promise to get you something? And to be online during (almost) every episode? 😉
P.P.S. Uh, no, spamming my FF thread won't make me update any faster. 😛 I do that when I'm bored. Darnit. *sigh* Back to the drawing room then! 😆

Love,
Radz
Edited by Anhdara13 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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mine! 😳

*unreserved*

Awwww it's okay if you blame people! 😳 I blame ppl for everything too!😉 I love this idea that you have for Rav's bday! 😃 Very shweet of you!😉😛😳

But I don't know why.......I love this song....like I can not get enough of this song, specially the, aayega woh is intezaar mein, udchala dil wahan sapne jahan main jaanu, lagta hai woh mere kareeb hai, aisa kyun hai magar dhunde nazar beqaboo....it's just 😳

Wow Radzie! 😃😳 That was just fantastic, yes I didn't do in depth comments, because I personally feel....👏 this says enough, I honestly feel speechless at the subtle way you wrote this entire fic!😳😳😳

The last sentence got me...."nothing mattered but the angel" 😃 It was fantastically done!😃😃

Love you loads,

Meera😳

P.S. Write more soon!😃




Edited by indiandoll89 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Ooh I LOVE Khabar Nahin!!

*sings* Kis taraf hain asmaan, kis taraf zameen, khabar nahin

K I think that's enough singing😆

Aww thanks Radz! I love you too🤗 I feel special😳And thank you Shabz for giving Radz the idea to do a song fic😃
Aww Preet's in love aur use pata bhi nahin chala ke how and when it happened? So sweet😳 And Meher's in love with her best friend too! I loved the streamers part and how she made him blush😆
Preet's not bored at the party. His eyes are just searching for that one special person =) I love how you had them dancing together =)
Me loved it! You should do more song fics😳 They're fun to read =)

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