FF: Kis Desh Mein Hai Meraa Dil Scene#01 *Updated*

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Hello...
This is my First FF...Besides that I had written a small Prediction and named that as Untitled FF... But this is my First FF..
About the Title: Well, I can't change the theme of Premeer so, I will not change the Title of my FF...Sorry to those who are using this Name, Or decided to...Sorry
I am starting It...But Before I do, I would Like to say few things,
01. This FF is not a small one, I mean its really detailed...So if u want to Enjoy it, u must have to be a Good Reader....
02. This FF has no Villians and Vamps...Every character is Positive...
Characters/Families:
MANN'S:
Balraj Mann: He is the father of Heer and is a farmer...He thinks that his land is his mother and he respects it. Balraaj is a Very honest man and a hard working farmer. He loves his family...He is devoted and a Kind Hearted Person...He is married to Teji...
Teji Mann: She is the Mother of Heer..She is sweet and a housewife who knows everysingle thing about her family...
Heer Mann: She is the lead girl of this FF.. She is innocent and sweet...She loves to write about her feelings near the River... She enjoys everything in her life, She enjoys nature and wants everything happy around her.
Meher Mann: Well, She is a cute Bubbly Girl and younger sister of Heer...She loves to Eat...
Balwant Mann: He is also a farmer and looks after the field with Balraj..He is the younger brother of Balraaj...He is married and has three children...
Daljeet: She is the wife of Balwant and is very sweet...She is also a housewife and loves Meher and Heer like her own children.. There is no kind of discrimination b/w Heer, Meher, Vishaka, Nihaal and Ashlesha...
Vishaka: Vishaka is the elder daughter of Daljeet and Balwant. She is the elder in all five. She is married to Manmeet and have two children...She lives with her Husband in New York/Manhattan...
Manmeet: Manmeet is a Cardiac Surgeon and is one of the known Indian surgeon of USA...He is married to Vishaka and has two children ----------- & ----------
Nihal: Nihal is the second in Line...He is a simple guy who also love to work harder and live a simple life like his father and Chacha... Daljeet and Teji are finding a perfect match for him, but he thinks there is no girl on Earth who can enter his heart so easily....
Ashlesha: She is also a sweet girl and wants to be a Doctor like her Jiju, Manmeet...Therefore, She lives outside Ludhiana and is studying in a Medical College/University to become a Doctor..
JUNEJAS:
Lalit Juneja: Friend Of Balraj and Balwant... He used to live in Ludhiyana but his dreams were really high..He wants to become the most Famous business over the world..Therefore he left for Canada/Montreal..and achieved his dream...
Gaytri: She is the wife of Lalit and is very sweet... She is also a housewife...Lalit and Gaytri have 5 children, Kulraj, Prem, Harman, Preet and Veera.
Kulraj: Kulraj is married to Kiran and Has three children....------------,----------&---------She is a Housewife...
Kiran: Kiran is the husband of Kulraj and works as a Senior Manager in some company...He is a chain smoker...
Prem: Prem is just a Prince Charming of every girl..He blvs that there is someone special for him and he is waiting for him..He is descent, Sincere and a hardworking..He is also with Lalit in his business.
Harman: Harman is a Structural Designer...He is also an obedient son like Prem and wants to do something really good in his life, which makes him really proud on himself...
Preet: Preet is a carefree lad of Lalit and Gaytri..He Likes to party, Drink and flirt with everygirl he saw..
Veera: Veera is a sweet girl, who awaits a man who can love her the most and can do anything for her...
RAMPALS:
Rampals are the friends of Junejas in Canada...
Rishabh: Rishabh is a very responsible man..He Handle the business with Juneja...Prem and Lalit and treats Lalit as his Bauji and Prem as his brother...
Sanjana: Sanjana is the younger sister of Rishabh and loves Prem since from her childhood...And she thinks that Prem also loves her...
Bharti Devi: She is the mother of Rishabh and Sanjana...
OTHERS:
Maya: She is Harman's GF...She is dating Harman since 4 years and finds him really boring but cute...
Jugni...Jugni is the love lady of Ludhiana Village. Jugni used to love an army guy who had promised her that he will marry her when he will win the war.. But he dies in the war and left Jugni Forever... This make Jugni really sad and angry...She never blvs that Rab can make Love Stories complete..She argues with Rab... And she can feel love...
Dheer: He is the younger brother of Manmeet and is the owner of a small library who really loves to read romantic Novels...
Hope u guys like the Charactersketches....Its almost the same....Will update the Prologue and part 1 Soon....
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Posted: 16 years ago
#2
I am the first one


hahaha....that was a strange introduction of Meher she loves eating😆

omg we hav Rampals too🤢
as u said no vamps thats good but to run a story we need twist n turns so we hav it
Sanjana luvz prem 😆

hmm.......good intoduction👍🏼

I like it
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will be waiting for the update
thanks
Edited by Innocent02 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Scene #01
Juneja House:
Sanjana entered the house and hurriedly moves towards the Prem's room but Preet stops her...
Sanjana: Oh Hello Preet...Will u Take a side?
Preet: Why? Want to meet Prem Bhaiyya.. He is a bit busy...
Sanjana: Buzy??
Preet: Yups...He is playing a new tone on his banjo... And he asked me to paste this paper on his door before leaving...
Sanjana reads the Note on Paper: "Plz do Not Disturb", Mr. Preet Juneja...U think I am a Fool? Its not Prem's handwriting...
Preet: Haaye!!! Is ishq mein ap kia kia kar rahi ho... Aur ek Prem Bhaiyya hain jo apko notice tak nahin karte...Mera kaha mano, leave him.
Sanjana: That's not Possible. Preet plz, move.
Preet: Okies: By the way Sanjana, What are your plans for tonight?
Sanjana: I will be leaving for NY... I had to start internship in some hospital.
Preet: Ok... Sanjana, PB had left for the office in the morning with Bauji and will return late in the night. So there is no chance of seeing him today...Sorry, but i think u will not have a good bye Hug...
Sanjana: I will have someday.. Anyways, Where is aunty.
Preet: She is in Kitchen, preparing my meal!
Sanjana moves towards the Kitchen and asked Preet to stop irritating her.
Sanjana: Aunty, Good Morning.
Gaytri: Good Morning.. Sawayre Sawayre yahan... Khairyat? Or aaj tu itni subah kaise uth gai?? Waise bhartiji ka phone aya tha k tu NY jarahi hai aj raat ki flight se?
Sanjana: Ji. Mujhe jana parega, mere sab frnds ja rahe hain. Mein tou bas Prem se milne aayi thi magar Preet ne kaha k woh uncle k saath bahar gaya hai, shayad office...
Gaytri: Nahin, Prem hum sabki tickets confirm karwane gaya hai.
Sanjana: Tickets?
Gaytri: Tujhe nahin pata k hum sab wapas Ludhiyana ja rahe hain! Ek wada pura karne...
Sanjana: Wada?
Gaytri: Haan, Do dilon ka wada, Do doston ka waada, Do Parivaaro ka waada...
Sanjana: Mein kuch samjhi nahin?
Gaytri: Teri flight kitne baje ki hai?
Sanjana: 2300 ki. But aunty aap mujhe bataye kaisa waada? Waise bhi aj ka din mein ap sab k sath bitanay wali hu...
Gaytri: Yeh kahani hai Dosti ki, Vishwaas ki or Prem ki...
F L A S H B A C K:
Balraaj, Balwant and Lalit are sitting on a chattai and having lassi's.
Balraaj: Oye Lalit, tu apni Bail(cow) ka khayyal ku nahin rakhta? Aaj kal dekh raha hu tera dhayyan kahin aur bhatka hua hai...Na Khait mein ata hai na Ghar dekhta hai...
Lalit: Ab tujh se kia chupaao Balraaj. Yeh Khait, Yeh Zameen shayad mere liye nahin hai... Aaj duniya kitni aagay nikal gayi hai or hum wahin pheechay rehgaye... Is Khet se hum kitna kama lete hain...Jitna kamatay hain kia us main hum apne bachcho ko parha sakeingay, kia hum unka bhawishya sudhar sakeingey.?
Nahi... Mein nahin chata k mera Prem aisi Khait Khaliyan mein apni zindagi guzarde...Or Kulraj? Mein Apni beti ko har khushi dena chahta hu... Us ka aanay wala kal phoolon ki tarah khushbu se bhar dena chahta hu..
Balraaj: Betiyaan to humari bhi hain. Tu to aise bol raha hai jaise hum apni Beti ko khush nahin dekhna chahte?
Lalit: Khush? Balwant tu bata Vishaka kitni parhi hai?
Balwant: Bhai Sahab, Larki ki parhayi itni zaruri nahin jitna uska byaah hota hai...Larki apni ho kay bhi apni nahin hoti...
Lalit: Tu batayega nahin k Vishaka sirf 6 tak parhi hai or tu uski 12 saal ki umer mein he shadi kar raha hai? Magar mein apna or apni aullad ka sukh yahan ki jahalat mein barbad nahin karna chahta.. Samajh mere dost...Aur mein apne is faislay par bahut khush hu...
Balwant: Bhai Sahab, Agar tu Pardes jana he chahte ho to aapko koi rok sakta hai?
Balraaj: Tu apna desh chor kar pardesi hone pe khush hai? Tu apni maa ko chor kar anjani zameen par qadam rakhne par khush hai? Tu apni is dosti ko yahin ruswa karne par khush hai...
Lalit: Nahi Balraaj... Mein pardes ja kar bhi apne watan ki khushbu ko nahin bhool sakta...
Balraaj: Mat Ja. Tu ne waada kiya tha k hum saath raheingay, Hamesha..Har qadam pe ek dusre ka saath deingay...
Lalit: Ab kuch nahin hosakta, Meri noukri lag gai hai pardes mein...Kal mujhe Delhi k liye nikalna parega...
Lalit stands up and leave them... Balwant also left for home... but Balraaj waited at the dhabba...
Dhabba Master: Balraj ji,Lalit bhaisahab ko ku rokte ho...Oye Pardes ho ya Apna des, Muhabbat koi sarhad janti hai? Dilon k rishtay par hum kabhi sarhad ya bandish nahin janta...Woh jo Rab hai, us ne tere dost k liye kuch bhala he likha hoga, jo usko tujh se door bhej raha hai. Jantay ho Balraj, Har dukh k baad ek sukh hota hai.. Har dukh takleef to daita hai par har dukh aanay walay sukh ki Khabr hota hai... Na Jaane kon sa sukh hai, Yeh to Rab ki marzi hai... Zindagi k faislay to woh hi karta hai...
Chaloji, Ab Dhabba band karne ka samay hogaya hai...
Balraaj: Tu theek kehta hai, Humein to hanske he Alvida kehna chahiye jaane wale ko...
When Balraaj turns he finds Lalit and Gaytru standing behind him....
Lalit: Tujhe Yehi lagta hai k mein apni zameen chor kar apna desh chor kar, humari yeh dosti chor kar ja raha hu hamesha k liye...Nahin Balraaj. Mein Lout k aaonga..Aur tu bhi dekhayga apne is dost ko...
Balraj: Har wada tor k ja raha hai, Ek naye iraaday k liye...
Suddenly Nihaal(Young) came running and asked Balraj to run for home as Teji is having Pain(due to her Pregnancy)
Gaytri, Nihal, Lalit and Balraaj run straight to home and find Daljeet...
Daljeet: Mubarak ho Bhai Sahab! Aap k yahan Beti hui hai. Is taaro bhari raat mein woh apna naseeb likhwa kar aayi hai...
Lalit: Bilkul, Daljeet...Aur aj mein is beti ko, is laxmi ko apna manta hu.
Balwant: Matlab?
Lalit: Oye Balraj, Mein apne Betay k liye teri Beti ka haath mangta hu...Aur ek wada karta hu k ab mein is dharti pe qadam wapas tabhi rakhunga jab hum ek rishtey mein bandhne jarahe honge...
Daljeet: Oh Bhaisahab aap sab ko badhai ho...
Gaytri and Daljeet hugged each other and go inside to see Teji...
Gaytri: Teji, Kitni Sohni Bachi Hai.
Daljeet: Bilkul apni chachi pe gayi hai..
Soon Balwant, Balraaj and Lalit enters the room and told Teji everything. Everyone got happy and than Balraj took out all of his money (30000) ang give it to Lalit...
F L A S H B A C K ends...
Gaytri: Hum ja rahe hain, wapas apne bharat, wapas apni zameen ko ek adhura rishta pura karne...
Sanjana had tears in her eyes as she came to know about this truth.
Gaytri: Baton he Baton mein bhool he gayi k Khana charhaya hai...Tu beth mein ati hu.
Preet was also standing behind Sanjana and heard everything.
Preet: App ku rorahi ho..Ku k PB aap k nahin hai.
Sanjana: Shayad Qismat ko yahi manzoor that, Shayad Prem k liye mein kabhi bani he nahin thi... Na jaane kab woh mujhe apna lagnay laga, Na jaane Kab mein ne usko apne dil mein itni jaga di...
Ab Samjh nahin araha...Ansu apne aap he nikal rahe hain
Preet: Waise mein ne suna hai k jo hota hai achay k liye he hota hai....
Sanjana: Aur ab jo honay wala hai woh bhi acha hai...
Preet: Kiya?
Sanjana rushes into kitchen and show Pic of Preet drinking to Gaytri...
Gaytri shouts and Preet goes back to his room.
End...
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Posted: 16 years ago
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nice update
I didn't think k Sanjana itni asani say Prem ko chor daygi😆
thanks


will be waiting for the next update
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Posted: 16 years ago
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awesome update=) i really like it<3
can't wait to next update...jaldi karna
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Posted: 16 years ago
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nice ff update soon plzzzzzzzzz
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: Innocent02

nice update
I didn't think k Sanjana itni asani say Prem ko chor daygi😆
thanks


will be waiting for the next update

Thanx... Its really means a lot... Anyways, I will Update 3 Scenes Together but need time.... Coz its the Introduction of Prem and Heer and Yes Sanjana has only a cameo.... So...
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Posted: 16 years ago
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gr8
3 scenes together......take you time
will be waiting 😉
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Posted: 16 years ago
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wow no vamps,u r shooooo sweet.first part is soooo cutei luvvved ur ff and predictions too.hope i get lenghty premeer😉 scenes here.plz updt asap😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
#10
hey
very nice
interesting
yay sanju is out og the way now
oh can't wait till premeer met

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