phhandooh at: a phhandooh-of-my-own, pg.89 - Page 68

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: -Bee-

I hate you. I do. I hate you for this mind-numbingly awesome story. This was beautiful, and it was tragic, and then, unbelievably, there was STILL some hope left in the end (or perhaps that's just in my phried brain 😛)

But that does not change the fact that I hate you. I may consider not-hating-you if you watch the PREMEER V-day performance. 😃 And write a line or two on it. Just a line or two *angelic smile* Or you shall fine your pm inbox mysteriously flooded with caps of their dance. Imagine that. 😊


beeeeeee!!! *hugs bee tightly* kaha thi tum yar mei ne tum ko kitnnaaaaaa yaad kiya 🤣ROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFL and thats such an excellent threat! I'll help!! 😃ROFL
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Posted: 14 years ago
Okay technically i should be studying but here i am writing the feedback coz i couldnt help myself.. (em royally scewed as well so trying to divert myself from the looming problems in my head) ah anyway E i loved this writing... and i dont know but there's more to this... the story cant end here E.. i just know it cant.. things cant stop.. they cant go back to normal... and here i am coming back on my previous answer that dont u think that the girl deserves a second chance at happiness? that he deserves a second chance at happiness? look no matter how principled they are.. he's not doing justice to his wife... cant his wife feel that he doesnt love her? how dense is she? 😆 okay enuf of blabbering its just that i JUST know that it hasnt ended there and more can happen!! how about that "something" happening on the Premier night of the film? the after party?? Estee write more on this! i want more coz where they are concerned things just cant stay in control.. coz how far will they go on controling? they ae humans.. they will loose control. it has been 10 years.. 10 awfully long years... the control has to snap! i insist! *bangs on her desk*

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one thing i wanted to add regarding the perf.. even if u cant write..its perfectly okay (that was tough😛😆 lol no i mean it) just watch the perf coz u would be missing some really awesome work by these two if you wouldnt.. there was pain, passion, angst, hurt and deep love that knew no boundaries 😍 it was complete PH thing estee so you can watch 😆 i really dont want u to miss such a fabulous and wonderful portrayal of love that was still as magical as it was a year ago
Edited by ...Hiba... - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Wow fabulous story estee😛

Thanks for updating so soon, that is a treat, back to back update within two weeks!😲😆

I'd be happy too if you took Hiba's suggestion into consideration.😃
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Posted: 14 years ago

Estee i dnt ask u name but when i read it only one couple is came to in my mind and after 10 years thier phhandooh r magical...........yes Hiba is right thier story not end here plz continue it there is so much things that they do plz do write next part

Ofcourse one more important thing 😆 just see thier performance😍 thier magic is still d same even after one whole year😉
Edited by uswah - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
OMG! OMG! This was so awsommmeeee Esteee! Sorry if half om comment just says OMG cause em seriously at loss of words!😆 But before I comment *pans* Where were you exactly? You know when I saw your thread updated, I had this huge goofy grin on my face and it wouldnt go especially after reading your oneshot!😍😍😍 It was awsomely divine Estee and I just cant tell you how much I loved it! You're a genius!👍🏼 Ive never read such a beautiful yet heart wrenching thing so far! And you know what amazed me the most? I can so see this happening!!And no you dont need to tell who they were😆😆 All you need to do is watch their Vday performance and right an analysis on it! Pretty please! With a cherry on the top!😳😳

Love, Mehak!!
Edited by --Mehak-- - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Love the one shot...is there a possibility of a second part?
It can't just end there 😭

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Posted: 14 years ago
😲

ya, that's my reaction to your comments. seriously. 😆

@my holiness: actually, why would you be taken aback at the hope? after all, prem-heer have always been about hope, no? hope and a hard faith that they will prevail? no matter what happens? in ways that we can't always readily imagine? no? 😊

ya, i was in sing. and i had no time to do anything but make sure that i ate dutifully all the meals that my tons of cousins and their parents and related friends dished out as an indication of how pleased they were to see me after two long years. you have no idea how much food i had to eat! i think i ate five meals every day for the three days we were there. all that and bobba tea! are you sure your divine powers aren't rubbing off a little on your devoted slaves? 😆

@rehana: hate??! me? but.. but ... but why??! that bad it was? and you seem to have set off a trend. lots of haters...

@bee: so unhate me already. i saw the damned thing. 😆

@sukrutha: ya, so am i. no, seriously! contrary to all my beloved commentors, i am seriously puzzled as to who exactly it is about... 😕

@jyoti: hi, lover of all things prem-heer. i saw it. against my wishes. sulking all the way. even with ice-cream. two things stood out, no? first was the thought that *+ thinks that this is the couple to be the most ... bold! with on the whole physical love bit. i mean, the way they were dressed, all thin cloth and bare skin and.. oh-so-very-suggestive of ... stuff 😆, no? second was that in all the time that they were prem-heer, we sure missed out on their feet chemistry! 😆 there was some part of the dance that i had to suddenly blink at how comfortable their feet were with each other! there was some step that looked complicated but they made it look sooo smooth and inevitable. but then again -- sigh! -- this is/was prem-heer, after all. what part of them was not comfortable with the other? 😆 and please let this be it? don't think i have time to do an analysis. and given the way these two danced, not sure that a full-fledged analysis will help my brain any... 😆

@hiba: ki-bachchi-ki-ma! how can you be so sure -- that they are who you think they are? i mean, even i'm not sure i know who those two in the story are. they are a strange mixture of prem-heer (who i know) and ... some other people (who i do not know!) i mean, i think that i was comfortable thinking that it was the .. uh .. other people (who i do not know) when suddenly there was a handooh that appeared in my story. that's when it got strange. i mean, there is only phhandooh. no one else on earth has a handooh. so who were these two that did? that totally confused me. 😕 i guess it's like the handooh in my signature thingie -- in that promo, looking at the smiles on their faces, i was never sure whether that was supposed to be prem-heer or hc-ag. they looked that pleased to be together again!

oh well. i guess i'll never know -- who is in my story, or who they were in that picture.

but about your other belief -- like uswah and iheartchai (in case i haven't said this before, cool name, btw. i don't heart chai unless you're offering bubble chai but i like the name! 😆) -- that the story can't end there, that they can't remain unhappy, that there has to be a divorce.

know s'thing? i don't think the two in my story are unhappy, do you? i think they are happy. they are together. they love each other. the only thing that is missing is that they don't get to go home every night and sleep in each other's arms. that's the only missing thing. they have everything else -- they have all day to be with each other, get to spend time doing things with each other they both totally love and enjoy, have breakfast together, lunch together, laugh together, work together. i really really thought of them -- those two in my story -- and i am not sure that they are unhappy. or deserve pity. they've been through a life, not perfect, not together. but they've come through it sounding like lovely people, no? balanced, calm, fully trusting each other, loving each other. i kinda like them. and for some reason, i don't see them as unhappy.

hiba, you really think that the guy would divorce his wife? i think that neither of them would accept that. he wouldn't think of it. she wouldn't think of asking for it. not given where they are, or what they've been through. about wanting a second chance with each other? there i am not sure. i can't see deeply enough. but one thing i think i know: they would neither of them force it so they would get one. no, they are not like that. after all, they have forever. which is why i think that this is prem-heer, not hc-ag. prem-heer-are-one forever. this is just yet another avataar of theirs.

er.. no? 😃

@mehak, athisda: 😆 thank you. i'm glad you liked it. and as i said earlier to jyo, i did see the show. not gonna do an analysis. the heat will probably blow the few remaining fuses that i've got left in my brain. soooo not gonna watch that darned thing again! once was enough.

😆

but seriously guys. am i the only one thinking and dreaming phhandoohs even after all this time?
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Posted: 14 years ago
no ofcourse not we r all same thinking about them only
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: estee

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ya, that's my reaction to your comments. seriously. 😆

@my holiness: actually, why would you be taken aback at the hope? after all, prem-heer have always been about hope, no? hope and a hard faith that they will prevail? no matter what happens? in ways that we can't always readily imagine? no? 😊

ya, i was in sing. and i had no time to do anything but make sure that i ate dutifully all the meals that my tons of cousins and their parents and related friends dished out as an indication of how pleased they were to see me after two long years. you have no idea how much food i had to eat! i think i ate five meals every day for the three days we were there. all that and bobba tea! are you sure your divine powers aren't rubbing off a little on your devoted slaves? 😆
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but seriously guys. am i the only one thinking and dreaming phhandoohs even after all this time?


Bhav and I are both still mad at you for not letting us know you were in town. :( you'd better let us know the next time you're here!

and no, you're not the only one thinking and dreaming phhandoohs. I'm making PremHeer fanmixes in hopes that it'll inspire me to finish my ff!
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice story.. but it was bleak..thank god this never happened to premeer onscreen and i never want this to happen offscreen to harshiti too.. hope they dont marry some other persons.. and get to realise love after 5 yrs.. true love never fulfilleth? .....😕...faileth!
harshiti foreva <3

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