[FF] Kuch Kum[Meet-centric] Epilogue, Pg 52 [27/4] - Page 25

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Posted: 16 years ago
*bangs head against wall repeatedly*

I know where this is going. *stern face* Ohhh you are good. Typical insecurities is going to end with her throwing some present at his feet, him hopelessly confused and both stalking home, one crying, one angry. All I can say is that there better be more kisses on the cheek. *sternnn
*

*pretending Preet muah'ed her cheek*

--shabz
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Posted: 16 years ago

Preet great as usually taking Meher to work everyday aww cute kiss loved it!!
Loving Preet's mind in getting Harman and Ash together!

Can't wait till Thursday, Saturday updates will be cool also!!

Nikita

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: blackdaughter

ping! =) Whoosh! =D

Ok......... so Harman wants Preet to convince Ash and agree to go out with him right !?!??!??! Becuase when you said 'court' i was like what !?!?!??!?
😆 Yep! I couldn't think of another word for 'court' so that's gonna be everywhere!
Oh, poor Preet!!! He is completely lattu over Meher!!!!! There is no hope for him now (not that any of us mind really)!!!!! 😉😆 Meet are simply adorable!!!!
Whee I know! 😳
Oh wow!!! Preet drops Meher of to the art gallery!!!!!!! That is sho shweeeeet!!!!!!! Don't worry Meher, Preet can't think or see anything beside you!!!!!! 😆
OMG, a kiss on the cheek!!!!!!!! I'm in heaven now!!!!!!!!! Why are you doing this to our poor hearts!!!! *being all wierd and dramatic here* 😆
Can't wait till the next update!!!!!! Please Thursday come quickly!!! By the way, i don't really care when you update specifically, as long as you do!!!!!! 😆

Thursday's tomorrow! WHEE! P.S. What's Maddy short for? I found a place for you in HMT! 😃

Originally posted by: indiandoll89

mine! 😳

*unreserved*

Don't worry about the Premeer thing from me, yes I like them more than Meet, but you just write Meet so adorable, and you are focusing on Premeer for the Handmaiden's one, so no complaints from me! 😳😃 Harman and Ash add a different spice to the story!😳
Awww thanks! 😳
Teehee, Harman taught Prem the art of flirting?😆 I find that hard to believe, Prem the guy who can look at a girl and make her swoon....*enough of that shakes head* back to the story!😳
😆 Yes, Prem can look at a girl and make her swoon, but in my story, he's a little dorky! 😳 Don't mind!
This line....amused me a lot!😉😆 sounds so like Preet ji! "As he watched her leave, Preet found himself grinning like an idiot. Again. He had been doing that often, especially when he thought about Meher. " That just sounds totally cute!😆😆😆

Awwww poor Meher, getting all confused with Preet asking her about Ash's favorite flowers!😆😆 But that kiss made it ALL better!😳😳😳
Aww I know right? Wait till you read Part 12!
And oohh three days a week would be AWESOME!😉😃 Can't wait for more Bhav! 😃
Three days a week it is, then! 😃
Love you loads,

Meera😳

😃
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: sparikh

Hi Bhav, Hiya!

Great part as usual. :)
Thanks! 😃
I'm little sad with ur note of no Premeer but that's okay. I was looking forward to reading about them because U had their setting as typical Indian neighborhood romance (which I think is very unique & funny).
I made HMT Premeer-centred just for ya! The setting is waaay more unique, IMO, and I hope you like it! 😃😳
I vote for 3 updates per week. I hope ur planning a new story for Meet since ur done writing KK.....
Er...I'm not planning a new Meet story yet...But once I will I'll start work on it!
-Sona

@jamune: I shall not say anything except wait till you read part 12 and thanks! 😃

Originally posted by: munam_13

Bhav Bhav Bhav *hugs* you updated!!!.. I am all dancing...
*dances too* Yep I updated! 😃
I was laughing when I read that Harman the cassanova, flirt guru has asked Preet's help regarding a girl..fair enough coz this girl is tottallly different...
Heehee...yep! 😃
Awww... Meet kiss!!!*blush blush*... it was so simple and cute but it left me blushing... but this Preet has definitely got bad timing to ask what Ash likes...
Guys don't generally have very good timing...I think...Heh...
Hope you'll post soon... will wait😃

Originally posted by: Anhdara13

Yes, I would like you to update three times a week. *angel wala smile*

Kay...*angel wala smile back*
Moo! Quack!
*edited*
I refuse to ever moo again. 😆
Then don't...😆 Try quacking instead. It's funner.
You know I love this story right? And now that you've written the entire thing, don't you think you should post three times a week? *angel wala smile*
You're always saying that line, you know...
Anyways, love this bit, with Preet worrying about how he is to help Harman. (I love what he does in the end!)
(Shh! Don't tell anyone what he does! Though I think he's so sweet...*sigh* Then again, I wrote him! 😆)
And Meher's insecuritites come to light, but he reassures her easily. *sighs dreamily* I love them together. Really.
😳 Me too!
Waiting for more!
Love,
Radz

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: *lucky_karen*

hey bhav!!

i was so happy cuz all weekend i was looking forward to ur update and i get it a little early cuz its not monday here yet! Haha yeah time differences are weird! I never get them...😃 but whos complaining? lol😆..ok so i loved that part so much..had me smiling throughout! Yay!..hmm but this whole ash thing is worrying me..hopefully she doesnt fall for preet in the process😕*fingers crossed*...but...drumroll pls...THE KISS was sooo cuteeeeeeee😍...u get a whole box of cookies from me already!! 😉 Yay cookies! *noms cookies*..and oo lala..cameo eh?..cant wait😛 Ooh and I can't wait to post it!! and yes yes yes update three times a week!!! 😃 pls lol Three times a week it is then~! 😃...cant wait for the next part! -karen

Originally posted by: egle

Cute!!!

Thanks! 😃
Now lets just hope that the insecurities don't get to Meher. I would hate to see Meet fight..... but then again, that could lead to a potentially fluffy make-up scene.....*sigh
Ooooh fluffy make-up scene! Yes fluffy make-up scenes are aweshum! Like when Meet were dancing and she thought he was complimenting the girl behind her and he laughed and said no he was talking about Meher? Awwwwww!
Good job =)
😳 Thankoo!
~Cheers

Originally posted by: bd670816

hey, awesome and lovely update.
kiss scene is so cute. Thanks! 😃
cont.soon.
tc.

@ zaibun: Thankoo! 😃

Originally posted by: fj08

it would be great if you could update saturdays as well, move the story along faster, never give your readers the choice of more ...anything.... bcos we will always take it,😊 Hahahahaha okay!
thanks for the great update, i wonder if ash has caused all the conflict she was supposed to or if theres going to be more I'm not saying anything about that, but don't worry, you won't have to wait tooooooo long!
looking forward to the next one
tc
fatima

@ sugi77: Thanks! So I take it you'd like Saturday too? 😆

Originally posted by: shabo24

*bangs head against wall repeatedly*

I know where this is going. *stern face* Ohhh you are good. Typical insecurities is going to end with her throwing some present at his feet, him hopelessly confused and both stalking home, one crying, one angry. All I can say is that there better be more kisses on the cheek. *sternnn
*
Ahahahaha...I'd say that you know me too well (which is weird, because...well...yeah...) but then I'd be saying too much! I'm not sure if I've got more kisses on the cheek, but I *think* I have a hug! 😆
*pretending Preet muah'ed her cheek*
Oh Shabz...*shakes head in disappointment* I have to find a way to give you a scene with Preet in HMT...And OOOH I think I've got it!!
--shabz

Originally posted by: nikita_88

Preet great as usually taking Meher to work everyday aww cute kiss loved it!! 😳 Thanks!
Loving Preet's mind in getting Harman and Ash together!
😆 More of Preet's mind in Part Twelve! 😃
Can't wait till Thursday, Saturday updates will be cool also!! As you wish! *bows*

Nikita

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Posted: 16 years ago
Psst! *throws paper ball at Bhav to get her attention* I unreserved
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: -Ravjot-

I'm here!

Don't you love how I'm the first to reserve but last to unreserve?😆 I'm so cool😎
*bows down* Yes, oh great Ravjot, thou art indeed very cool. 😆
Anyway....wait what was I gonna say? Oh yeah! So Preet's going to help set up Ash and Harman? Good luck with that😆 Wonder how he's going to get Ash to agree. And Harman's supposed to be a pro at this? Wow...No wonder Preet is confused😆
Isn't confused-Preet just the cutest? Oh no wait, I'm getting him confused with clueless-helpless-losing-things Prem...(i.e., in Pichle saat Din...😆)
Aww they went to the art gallery? Glad to know they had fun =) Poor Meher was feeling insecure but Preet cleared it up by giving her a good bye kiss. So sweet =) Loved the update Bhav! Can't wait to read the next one😃
Yep! Meher works there. And wait till you see who her boss is!😆

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Posted: 16 years ago

Hey! Thursday's here again! Before I go on to say that I'm going to (hopefully) be udpating KK on Saturdays as well (oh wait. I just said it...Genius, Bhav, genius.), OHMYGOD Preet can DANCE! *fangirl giggle* Hands up if you drooled over him last night!

Part Twelve goes out to Preet because he gave me weird dreams. (Dreams NOT related to Preet, so get your minds out of the gutter! I had dreams that involved buying chocolate...and something else a little morbid.) And also because Meher is so lucky to have him. Oh I read a quote by some lady that said you should marry guys with ear piercings, because 1) they understand pain and 2) they know how to buy jewelry! 😆

Enjoy Part Twelve!

-||-

Kuch Kum

Part Twelve

It was the late afternoon. Preet had left work a little earlier, feeling way too distracted to concentrate. So he sat on the tree, eating an apple. Eating apples on the tree helped him relax and think.

Right now, he was thinking of Ash. How to get Ash to agree to a date with Harman, to be precise.

He bit into the apple, chewing thoughtfully.

Let's see, he thought. Ash likes red roses. She hates Harman. She hates me. She loves the kids.

He glanced down into the Maan yard, where Varun and Tannu were throwing a ball around with Ash. She loves the kids. He frowned slightly. She loves the kids… A slow smile grew on his face. She loves the kids.

He had an idea.

-||-

Meher came into the house, happily humming Socha Hai from the movie Rock On. She blamed her boss, who had been playing the songs from Rock On the entire day at the gallery, thus effectively getting them stuck in her head.

She bounced up the stairs. She peeked into Tannu's room and found her eating a chocolate bar while rereading the Nancy Drew book Ash had given her. Meher raised an eyebrow. Chocolate before dinner? Kuldi hardly ever gave her kids chocolate to start with, so how was Tannu eating chocolate at 5 in the evening?

"Tannu, beta, tum yahaan par akeli chocolate kyun kha rahi ho?" she asked subtly.

Tannu looked up, breaking out into a grin as she saw Meher. "Meher Maasi! Woh Preet Uncle hai na, usne mujhe chocolate diya."

Preet had given her chocolate? Meher frowned.

"Usne kahaa ki agar main Ash Maasi ko roses doon toh voh mujhe chocolate dega, toh maine Ash Maasi ko roses diye aur usne mujhe chocolate diya!" she said happily. She offered it to her. "Aapko chahiye?"

Meher smiled a little and shook her head. "Nahin, beta, tum kha lo. Lekin Mama ko mat batana ki Preet Uncle ne tumhe chocolate diya, theek hai?"

Tannu nodded, and Meher left the room.

Her insecurities from earlier in the day returned. Preet was sending roses to Ash through Tannu?

She swallowed. She had to find Ash.

-||-

"Di, I can't do it, it's bubbling too much!" Ash whined, standing two feet away from the pot, holding a bowl full of cubed potatoes.

Kulraaj rolled her eyes. "God, Ash! How are you supposed to learn to cook if you don't jump right in?" she replied, taking the potatoes from Ash and dumping them in.

Ash rolled her eyes back. "It's my first time, Di! Gimme at least a couple of days!" Don't forget that I didn't sign up for this, she added silently.

Meher silently entered the kitchen, a rather troubled look on her face.

"Meher, tell Ash how easy it is to dump potatoes into a pot of sizzling garlic!" Kulraaj requested, glancing at her sister. "Meher, sab kuch theek hai kya? Tum itni pareshaan kyun lag rahi ho?"

Meher looked up. "Hmm? Oh, um, no, I'm fine, Di," she said, smiling absently. "Um, Ash Di, mujhe aapse kuch baat karni thi."

Ash sent a tremendously grateful smile Meher's way. "Chalo, hum kahin aur chalte hain. Nahin toh hum Kuldi ko disturb karenge, na?"

Meher let herself be led listlessly to the living room by Ash. Ash sat down in an armchair, and Meher lowered herself onto the couch.

"Toh bolo, kya baat karni thi?"

Meher hesitated. "Um, Di, aapko roses mile kya?"

Ash made a face. "Yeah, it was from one of those Junejas. Kyun?"

"Oh. Uss par kuch likha tha kya?"

"He asked if I wanted to go for dinner with him. I said no. I mean, come on, yaar! Prem watches Heer Di from his window, Preet stares at you from the tree, aur voh Harman ka gaddha? Don't get me started on him!"

Meher wasn't listening. So Preet had asked Ash out. Her stomach was in knots, and she thought she felt one in her throat as well.

"Meher? Arre, Meher, kahaan kho gayi ho?" Ash waved a hand in front of Meher's face.

Meher blinked. She forced a smile. "Sorry, Di. Thanks. Mujhe kuch kaam hai, I'll see you at dinner."

And with that she left, leaving a rather puzzled Ash behind.

"Ash! Potatoes jal rahe hain!"

She groaned and dragged herself back to the kitchen.

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Meher paced the length of her room, the door closed. She played with her dupatta, trying to reason with herself.

Ash Di just said that one of the Juneja boys gave it to her. That doesn't mean Preet. It could have been Prem or Harman, right? Well, maybe not Prem, he's got eyes only for Heer Di. It must have been Harman, then, who the flowers are from.

But then why did Preet ask Tannu to give it to Ash Di? Is that why Preet asked me what Ash's favourite flowers are? Why couldn't Harman give Ash Di the flowers himself? Why ask Preet to do it?

The sneaky voice that had fed her insecurities throughout her entire life reared its ugly head again: Unless the flowers really are from Preet.

Meher swallowed.

Come on, Meher, look at yourself.

She obeyed, stopping in front of the mirror.

Compared to Ash and Heer, who would give you a second thought?

Meher stared at herself, forcing that voice away. Preet loves me. I know it. He would never hurt me.

Right?

-|end of part twelve|-

I know, I know, sad part. But come on, I know you guys liked it! So yeah, in case you guys forgot, the next part shall be up on Saturday! Oh, and for those of you reserving, you don't have to make animal noises anymore! 😆 Though cookies to all those who did! (Even if you didn't, help yourself to a cookie anyway!) See you on SATURDAY!

Love,

Bhav (:

P.S. Please don't hate me for what I did to Meher! :(

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Posted: 16 years ago
heyy bhav!! that part was soo sad😭..awhh poor meher...shes feeling so insecure n confused..😭...stupid harman! couldnt he give the darn flowers himself..gaddha kahin ka😆😆..lol..and tannu...😃i love her..😛..i just got a pm..im assuming its you lol😆 beat u to it this time 😆😉..sad part but enjoyable to read..😃..now ive got my meet dose i shall get back to studying..exam tomo🥱..-karen
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Posted: 16 years ago

its interesting😛.vry curious to see wher it leads to..poor meher.waiting for saturday😃

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