(FF) Pyaar Ka Signal: Ch 2, Pg 4, Mar 19

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Pyaar Ka Signal

Chapter 1
"Woh dekh. Woh hai business ka mastermind. Apun ka naya target." Preet said pointing to a ban in a black Armaani business attire. That guy, kya naam bataylela tha Preet...I tried to remember but found out that Preet had told me no name. Khair, jo bhi hai.
"Kaisa hai?" He asks.
"Dekh ne mein toh theek lagta hai. Handsome hai, cute bhi hai. Khaate pete khandaan ka lagre raha hai apun ko."
"Uff! Tera main kya karenga Heer. Tu bhich na, Ek number ke bewakoof ch!"
"Kyun? Aisa kya wrong bolela apun ne?" I asked, ek dum confusedch.
"Nahin nahin. Main hi apna dimaag ka dahi karlela hai. Tu toh ek dum jhakaas hai!" he replied, sarcastically.
"Then what? That is what you asked me. Apun uske baare mein kya sooch le ra ha hai. Jo soocha, wohi bola." I reply.
"I meant, what do you think of his bank balance?"
"Woh bhi theek hai, lekin apun ko karna kya hoye ga?"
I glance back at 'The guy', he was still talking on his cellphone...I stared harder at his phone, but the bushes in which Preet and I were hiding in, didn't help much. They just made it harder for me to see him, but at this moment, all I knew was that he was rich, looked smart...from the back that is, a businessman and he had the phone that I wanted most in the world, an iPhone. As I continued to watch him through the bushes, all I heard was "140 billion dollars...transfer...my account." My jaw dropped open. He hadn't just said 140 Million, had he?
"Psst Preet. What do you think? Kitna bank balance hoyenga?" I asked, my eyes wide open.
"I don't know. Alot maybe?" he replies, wide eyed aswell.
As I continued to stare, wide eyed at my 'Prey', the guy finally turned around, and it was then that I could see his face. Those eyes...those lips...that body. I muttered to myself, in a hushed tone that only my heart and mind could hear. Those eyes, they were...like a chocolate pond in which I wanted to drown in. I sighed, unable to remove my thoughts. Those eyes, they were just...I took a deep breath...unresistable. He was Hot. That figure, that face...Hot. Cute. Charming. Adorable. Mast! The guy smiled as he talked into his iPhone and I was lost in his smile...Uff! This was getting too much and to top that all, he was the "one". I wondered how the heck I would survive planning my task underneath his nose...I was bound to get sidetracked...look, I was getting sidetracked already! 'The guy' moved away from his lavishly blank Mercedes, and walked inside the tall building that looked more like a tower to me. Expressionless, as my face was, Preet snapped his fingers infront of it.
"Heer?" he questioned.
"Huh? Kya?" I was jolted. Had I been that lost?
"Which world were you in?"
I felt embarrassed, my cheeks turned red. "Nahi re. Aage ka plan bol."
"OK. Our plan is that you will first come close to him, no matter what you do. Accident ya kuch bhi. Agar woh help maange, give it. When you come close to him, try getting into his house and then once you are in, then sneak some money out OK? And if that doesn't work out, then our 2nd option is...Kidnap."
"Baki sab toh theek hai lekin pyaar?" I hesitated.
"Yea, love, ishq, mohobbat, pyaar."
"Does that mean that I have to stay in the same house as him?"
"The closer the better."
"And remember, this is not for you, it is for Nihaal. Tujhe yaad hai that apun ko paisa mangta hai. Cum se cum 15 lacs."
A feeling of helplessness ran through my body. I had to do this for Nihaal. I reminded myself.
"What is his name though?" I questioned.
"Prem Juneja, Industrialist Prem Juneja." replied Preet.

~Shifu
Chapters -
Chapter 1 - Pg 1
Chapter 2 - Pg 4
Edited by *Shifali* - 16 years ago

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Mine! =]

Woah that was fast. 😲😆When you say something, you really mean it huh? 😆

Like I already told you...FAB, AMAZING, EXCELLENT! 😃 And now the hindi was pretty easy to read, just after a long day of school work that just goes through one ear and out the other, I can pretty much become a air head. 😆 Loved it, from the VERY FIRST PART, you have got people hooked! Honestly, very intriguing about exactly why Preet-Heer-Nihaal need the money so much...😊

And Prem's description....Heer is a total goner. ☺️

--shabz
Edited by shabo24 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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mine! 😛

You know something Shifs? I love each and every FF you start...I said start, cus you dont update them all!😆

But ahhh I love Tapoori language!!!😆 It cracks me up....oooo loved Prem's description!!!😃 I loved the way you described him though through Heers eyes!😃😃😃 Perfect way to do it!😉

I'm telling you this is going to be one of the funniest ff's EVER!😆😆😆

Hmm for Nihaal?😆 Interesting...

Continue soon!😃

Meera😳
Edited by indiandoll89 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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wow i cant stop laughing imaganing heer in dat kind of way omg dat is so gud is she a gundi u knw female gunda loldo continue n all da best
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Posted: 16 years ago
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please update fast. can't wait!!!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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I LOVE Heer in your FF!!! She's so funny and outspoken, not afraid of anything!!! And Preet- haha, how does he cope around Heer all the time? What's their relationship anyway? Hehe.
Hehe, it's like hitting two birds with one stone for Heer isn't it? Trapping a rich guy who is extremely handsome at the same time!! Lucky her, I bet she'll get the biggest jatka when she begins to fall in love with Prem!! I am wondering whether this will cause her and Preet to drift furthur apart as he would desperately want the money, but she wouldn't want to squeeze out money from the one she loves!
Anyway, ooohhh I'm so excited!! I wonder how Prem will react to being kidnapped, lol- a grown man being kidnapped by a beautiful tapoori ladki, hehe!! What a funny concept!! I can't wait to read how Heer courts Prem, seducing him to get closer to her, it's going to be so fun to read, I love it already!! And I know you will do a great job writing it!!
The tapoori-ness is just hilarious- a bit difficult to get your head around at first, but amazing!! How a rich handsome businessman like Prem will get trapped in the web of a girl like Heer I am dying to know, lol!! Can't wait!! She's already getting spellbound by him, hehe!!
I just love it!!
Love Zahra!! xx
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Posted: 16 years ago
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You already know how much I love this FF of yours

I still can't get over the tapori language🤣 Heer's gangster😎
I'll come back to edit this (hopefully) after I'm done cracking up😆
Edited by -Ravjot- - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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whoa shif another ff
interesting they r doing it for nihaal
loved it
very nice
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Posted: 16 years ago
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shifu 😃 extremely stunning update😳... loved the lingo you used in the story... so heer is a tapori who is going to trap Prem Juneja??? now that's something interesting... agey ka update kab karenga????😆 apun se wait nahi hota hai😆😆😆
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Posted: 16 years ago
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HEY!!!! if you have no idea as to who i am, then thats good...because if any if you did, then that would just be a tad bit creepy lol...Anyways, i'm one of the *gasp* silent figures who just randomly comes on this forum EVERYSINGLE day!!!!! uggg...its addicting eh? I wish I knew that earlier. Anyways your Pyaar Ka Signal is AWESOME!!!! I love the humour in this, and absolutely love this version of Heer. lol, I don't think I've ever said the word love so many times. heheheh, no actually with Prem..ALL the time. 😳 Hope you write tons of more updates lol. You are officially my fav! heheh. hope to see you all around and hopefully *hopefully* make some new what i like to call 'webby' friends!!!!! c ya around! and once again Good Job!!!!

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