(FF) Pyaar Ka Signal: Ch 2, Pg 4, Mar 19 - Page 3

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Posted: 16 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: rajave

HEY!!!! if you have no idea as to who i am, then thats good...because if any if you did, then that would just be a tad bit creepy lol...Anyways, i'm one of the *gasp* silent figures who just randomly comes on this forum EVERYSINGLE day!!!!! uggg...its addicting eh? I wish I knew that earlier. Anyways your Pyaar Ka Signal is AWESOME!!!! I love the humour in this, and absolutely love this version of Heer. lol, I don't think I've ever said the word love so many times. heheheh, no actually with Prem..ALL the time. 😳 Hope you write tons of more updates lol. You are officially my fav! heheh. hope to see you all around and hopefully *hopefully* make some new what i like to call 'webby' friends!!!!! c ya around! and once again Good Job!!!!

Welcome to the Forum Raj. Yea, the forum is addicting. Thank you sooooo much for liking this FF and glad I could get you to comment😳 I feel honoured for being your fav😳
~Shifu
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Posted: 16 years ago
#22

Originally posted by: Anhdara13

Tapori Heer is hilarious Shifu! I lost count on the number of FFs you have. 😆 But I must say, I love each storyline. They're all so different.

At present, I counted, I have 9 Fics plus writing 3 more, so don't worry😆
And this is absolutely intriguing! What's the Preet-Heer-Nihaal angle? I want to know. I love how Heer has no brain-mouth filter. 😆 She says what she thinks basically. And it's going to be so interesting how she and Prem will fall in love. The whole idea is so entertaining. I cannot wait to see where it goes.
Nihaal is Heer's brother who needs an operation and Preet is Heer's friend who is helping her get the money, but at the same time, he wants money for himself because he wants to start a new business. I love her no-brain-mouth-filter aswell...it feels soo refreshing😆
Love,
Radz

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Posted: 16 years ago
#23

Originally posted by: sourpuss

Hiya Shifs!

Okay so I have to admit the title of the story dragged me in and I have NO REGRETS! I loved the lightheartedness of this chapter and I so cannot wait for the next part! I'm cracking up just imagining Preet and Heer crouched down behind a couple of bushes, except Heer looks more like Aish in 'Josh' than she does in the show itself. But the point is, LOVED IT!

Eagerly looking forward to the next part!
Love,
Bhav (:

Thanks Bhav. Yea, she does look like Aish from Josh😆 Thanks for liking the FF though.

~Shifu
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Posted: 16 years ago
#24

Chapter 2

"Love?" I questioned.
"Aur kya?" he answered.
The next few days were a teacher-child day with Preet as my teacher and I as his students. Wohi na, Guru-chela typesh. Preet told me all about Prem Juneja. He told me what Prem does, what he eats, what brand electronics he carries, where he lives, how much houses he has. Where in the world he had travelled. Everything and for some reason, I was excited, very anxious and looking foward to learn more. Normally I run away from al this likes and dislikes lectures, it is not like I will really get married or something. Apun ko Oscar kaun sa jeetne ka hai. Slumdog won, woh ishch kaafi hai. At the end, Preet also told me what time he goes to the bathroom. I looked up at the him in a very disgusted manner.
"And why do I need to know that?" I ask.
"Kuch bich nahin. Just a heads up." he replies.
I shrug my shoulders and I continue to listen. As I kept listening, I found out that to me, Prem Juneja was someone different then anyone else would be. All his needs, likes, dislikes, how he behaved, tastes, his way of living seemed to be catching onto me. It felt as if it was a need of me to know about that and for some reason, it was not for our plan. It was for something way different and personal. It felt as if I actually enjoyed learning about Prem.
"To phir, he has 20 personalized cars from different companies such as Ford, Lexus..etc and he likes to eat Gajar Ka Halwa the most, is it?" I asked sitting in the tight and conjusted bedroom of Preet at 8pm.
"Hann Heer." replied a very tired and bored Preet.
"And he has a big mansion and he jogs to the beach every single morning at 5am."
"Heer! You have asked me these questions since 2 hours! You know all the information needed and remember, you need to act as a GIRL and not a guy. To phir, your baggy shirts, ruffled hair won't work. Aur hann, you can't wear your running shoes to his house, you need to be wearing heels kyunki, paise wali mem woh hi panti hai. I have 5000 Rs, we will go and buy some nice girl clothes such as skirts, and Indian dresses, make-up and heels, Okay?" he explains.
"What?" I question, staring at him, wide eyes and open mouthed. I gulped. "Heels, skirts, Indian wear? Make -Up? Tu pagal ho gaya hai Preet! Tujhe pata hai, that I don't wear such things." I protest.
"Heer! Tu bichna, ek dum darpokch. Fookat mein daar le rahi hai." Preet said in a very stern voice.
"Preet! Tujhe pata hai, I can't wear girlie. Torture mat kar." I plead.
"Agar main tere ko lessons dega, toh chale ga?" he offers.
I fold my arms around my chest. I turn my face to the other side. "Agar lesson de sakta hai, toh tu khud hi kyun nahin mera place le sakta? Why don't you be the one to trap Prem Juneja?"
"Paise kisse chahiye?" he asks politely but at the same time, in a stern voice.
I look down. "Mujhe."
"Aur ladki kaun hai?"
"Apun."
I turn my face towards Preet, helpless. "I know, I know."
"Good." He smiles at me in a 'nice-to-know-you-understood' way. I give him a nervous smile while I thought about the real tests, opposite Prem Juneja, I will have to face. It was easy for him to tell me what do do, but it was way harder for me to actually take the plan forward.
~*~
The next day, Preet took me out to shop for heels, make-up and everything. I simply agreed to take everything he offered and this time, I didn't even protest. I was just too deep in thoughts about the plan. What if everything didn't work out? What if at the end, Nihaal wasn't all right? What if Prem Juneja started to love me? What if I started to love him? Wouldn't I be then destroying Prem's life? I got a tangly feeling inside me. It was not right. I was not right. I couldn't do this. I just couldn't. Woh main nahin hoon. I am not someone that can ruin someone else's life because I need to save someone's life that is really dear to me. I just can't.
"Heer? Ye kaisa hai?" Preet asks, holding a pink and white ankarkali design, simple Indian wear out for me.
I come out of my thinking mode and look at the dress. I give him a weak smile.
"Theek hai Preet."
Preet turns around to the counter and tells the sales man to pack that dress. At the end of our shopping spree, I had 10 Indian attire dresses, 5 western, 5 sets of heels, a make-up kit consisting of different shades of eye-liners, lipsticks, lipgloss, nail polish, eye shadow, blush and mascarra. And I also had 5 pairs of heels.
"Chale Heer." Preet asks after he is done paying. I smile warily at him.
As we are walking down the street, towards Preet's house, Preet keeps blabbing on and on about what will happen after I get the money from Prem. I don't say anything and keep walking. He then notices that I am not smiling and not even listening to him.
"Heer, tu kya soch le rahi hai?" he asks.
"Kuch bhi toh nahin." I answer.
"Dekh, if you are thinking about Prem, then don't. Woh ek business man hai, use toh koi bhi ladki mil jaaye gi. You just think about Nihaal and his operation. Okay?"
"Per.." I try to protest, at the verge of questioning about what if Nihaal doesn't make it, when I stop. Preet will not listen to me.
That day, Preet made me try on all the dresses he had brought and even made me talk to him as if he was Prem Juneja. So basically it was my Parade day and I can guarantee, then when I meet, Pem Juneja tomorrow, I would be fully trained for whatever may come. And I hoped that tomorrow would never come. I hoped that I would never would have have to carry my plan out. Call me weak or whatever, or even call Prem Juneja a big man that could get any girl that he wanted, but if I got his heart beating for me, I knew that no girl would be able to take my place afterwards.
~End of Ch 2~
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Posted: 16 years ago
#25

hi shifali wow😃 what an ff,ek dham bindaas😎(sry if made any mistakes iam weak in hindi) .i luvvvvvvvvd it .plzzzzzz continue asap.

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Posted: 16 years ago
#26
mine! 😛

*unreserved*

First of all, aren't you proud of how fast I'm commenting!😛😃😃

And now I'm going to comment on the update!😉😆

🤣

^^^ I think that sums up my whole reaction to reading the WHOLE part!😆

I don't think it could have been written better!😉 The way Preet was giving her ALL the information, and I mean ALLLL the info was hilarious!😆😆 She really didn't need to know what time he went to the bathroom!😆 oh and I loved how she made the comment about him being the girl with Prem was hilarious!😆

but oh I loved all of Heer's worries, about him falling for her, or her falling for him, or none of this helping Nihaal, very well written Shifu, the feelings were so real!😳😳😳

*sigh* I love this ff!😛

continue soon!😃

Love you,

Meera😳
Edited by indiandoll89 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#27
hey...
WOW!!! i love this FF already, its just so ..out there..its great.
and i have to say i love ur style of writing in here..outstanding!!!
Preet has been paying quite a bit of attention to Prem hasnt he..lol all the info he gave Heer was too funny ..ROFL!!!
loved it,, update wen u get a chance,
and do take care till then...
~nikki
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Posted: 16 years ago
#28
'ladki kaun hai?? apun"!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 🤣🤣
Great update!!!! That was awesome!!!!!
It had humour, touch of seriousness, potrayed Heer's caring nature and why she is doing this and also gave us a heads up as to what is about to come.
Underlinings of foreshadowing were very nicely done!!! Update when you can!!!
You could me for a 'role/cameo' in this one as well!!!! Reading all your FF's one after the other again and again!!!! 😆
Really like this story and looking forward to what is about to come!!!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
#29
hey shif
awesum update
ladi kaun hai apun omg wow
toooooo gooooood
can't wait till prem met heer
loved it every bit of it
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Posted: 16 years ago
#30

LOL. What time he goes to the bathroom?🤣 Preet's hilarious.

Heer hasn't even spoken to Prem yet and she's already drawn to him. Me loves it! And I understand how she feels with the girlie part. I comepletely symapthize with her.

Aww Heer's so sweet, considering Prem's feelings and all and is forced to do it for Nihal's operation. I kinda feel bad for her. And all that training she's going through, I bet none of it will prepare her for when she meets Prem😉

Btw how are you so good at writing tapori style?😆

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