FF: Bittersweet Allusions [Pt 13 pg.57] - Page 14

mine! 😃

*unreserved*

YAY you updated! 😃 (yes my initial happiness)😉😆😆

Ahhh I loved her relation with her Kaki and with her dad! 😃 It's sooo well written that you can actually see it....Teehee, She was interested in Prem's eyes too?😳😳 *sigh* who isn't?😳

And awww poor Kaki, Heer telling her that prem's too young for her...already getting slightly possessive na?😉😆😆

I loved how we all kinda stampeded into her room!😆😆 Totally priceless! Shabo and Kimz kinda remind me of Alice from Twilight!😳😆 Just not as .....*snaps fingers* not sure of the word I'm trying to fish out here!😆😆😆 You know what I mean, if you read twlight!😆😳😳

I like my gesturing to you to get off the dresser! 😆 Sooo sounds like something I'd do!😆😆😆

The whole update was awesome! 😃 Ooooo can't wait for the party!😳😃 It's going to be awesome!😳

Love you loads,

Meera😳

P.S. The whole addition of Shabo and Kimz..."guess what?.................................................nothing!" Was awesome!😆😆😆 *high-five*

this one is mine.

Hey doodhwali! 😛

I loved the update! just loved it!

hehe... the doodhwala has an admirer?! 😲😆... and what perfect names the have: Chandu and chandni... made for eachother😆

lol... can't wait for the party! 🥳.... speaking of parties,... it's been long since I went to one 😆

okji... bye... enjoy watchin TZP =)... i love tht movie =)

I is here. Short comment alert. You think I would get time on my time off but no.....

Heer reminds me of you! You know why? Cuz she is in denial. *giggles* ok fine, I'll shut up. You were in denail...so slowly..Heer will come out of being denial at this party (ball?) and dance with Prem all night long and they will end up discussing how big their feet are. With this ff...you never know! 😆

Loved Meera, Shabo and Kimz, Ravz and Shifali in this part...how they just kept going at it, not leaving her alone! Chadnu and Chandi?? *snikers* Oh me and Kimz so HAVE to be cupid for these lovebirds! 😆 Ohh and guess what??


Nothing.

--shabz

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hey
that was amazing. 👏 cant wait till heer meets prem at the party. continue soon. 😊

Heyy Ravs!!!!!!!!!!! OMG that was a hilarious update!!!!!!!!!

LOL, Heer and her Kaki are just mindblowing I love theri cher-chaar and little come backs!! Its so cute!! hahaha!

Heer's still pissed at Prem isnt she?? But I bet she'll get over with it quickly cuz no one can stay mad a Prem for a long time....

Ohhh!! So they have a party to go to!! Sounds really interesting!! ha-ha Heer has to go now!!! I love how Shifs, Kimz, Shabz, Meeru, and Ravs all drool over him!! lmao!!! so cutee!!!

Cant wait till the next update to know what happens at the party!!! Great update Ravs!!!! Continue soon!!

Luv,
Gari <333333333

hey great update do continue cant w8 to read more

Thanks everyone😊 I'll comment back soon =)