FF: Bittersweet Allusions [Pt 13 pg.57]

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poonam

@P.Kamaljit.Sean

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Posted: 16 years ago

#141

hey
aweum
very nice loved heer and kaki scene
party yay

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Kiran

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Posted: 16 years ago

#142

Reserved, again. I'm gonna un reserve the other one tomorrow, and this one too... *tehehe*

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Ravjot

@rainydays.

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Posted: 16 years ago

#143

Originally posted by: indiandoll89
mine! 😃

*unreserved*

YAY you updated! 😃 (yes my initial happiness)😉😆😆 I told you I was gonna, didn't I?😆 Notice how I update when you ask?😆

Ahhh I loved her relation with her Kaki and with her dad! 😃 It's sooo well written that you can actually see it....Teehee, She was interested in Prem's eyes too?😳😳 *sigh* who isn't?😳 Yupyup. I wanted some sort of interation with the 3 and that's what I came up with😆 I know eh? There's just something about em. I have Yug so I don't care as much😉

And awww poor Kaki, Heer telling her that prem's too young for her...already getting slightly possessive na?😉😆😆 She's a bit annoyed that everyone is falling for him😆

I loved how we all kinda stampeded into her room!😆😆 Totally priceless! Shabo and Kimz kinda remind me of Alice from Twilight!😳😆 Just not as .....*snaps fingers* not sure of the word I'm trying to fish out here!😆😆😆 You know what I mean, if you read twlight!😆😳😳 Yes I know. I love Alice! She was my fav😃 And Emmet

I like my gesturing to you to get off the dresser! 😆 Sooo sounds like something I'd do!😆😆😆 I can imagine you doing that. And me sitting on the dresser is something I would do😆

The whole update was awesome! 😃 Ooooo can't wait for the party!😳😃 It's going to be awesome!😳 Thanks Meera😃 As for the party, I have no clue what's going to happen😆

Love you loads,

Meera😳

P.S. The whole addition of Shabo and Kimz..."guess what?.................................................nothing!" Was awesome!😆😆😆 *high-five* I thought it would be important to add it😆

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Priyadarshini Basu

@munam_13

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Posted: 16 years ago

#144

hey ravz...mind blowing update...ladkiya kya kam thi now kaki too has joined the list????😆😆😆..... this heer is really a brat...and i like that😃.... u included a doodh wala ??? but's were's the asli doodhwala for whom we are waiting????😳 now waiting to read the dawaat part...I know that's gonna be interesting...😃 post soon...

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Ravjot

@rainydays.

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Posted: 16 years ago

#145

Originally posted by: Anhdara13
this one is mine. Ok😆

I will come back.

*edited*

Heer's friends are too cool. *ponders* I wonder why. 😆 Oh right, maybe 'cos they're mine too? 😆 Maybe?😆 Seriously awesome part though. Good part Heer interaction with her dad and Kaki (and you've made it quite obvious that Kaki is not evil. 😉😆 I thought I should stress that😆

They're all in love with Prem except for Heer, even Kaki! 😆 And not Chandni, the doodwala's wife? Or girlfriend? 😆 Glad he finally made his appearance, it really made my day! So apparently I didn't make it clear who Chandni is😆 I'll make it clear in the next one. And yes dood wala is finally here😃

Want the doodwala story now. 😉 Dood wala story is going to be part of it😛

Love,

Radz

Originally posted by: shanu333
Hey doodhwali! 😛 Yo😎

I loved the update! just loved it! Thank you!😃

hehe... the doodhwala has an admirer?! 😲😆... and what perfect names the have: Chandu and chandni... made for eachother😆 I know eh? Don't you just love Chandu and Chandni?😆

lol... can't wait for the party! 🥳.... speaking of parties,... it's been long since I went to one 😆 Same I wanna go to one. I think I'll throw a party tomorrow😆

okji... bye... enjoy watchin TZP =)... i love tht movie =) I love it too😃 Aamir Khan was amazing😳

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Ravjot

@rainydays.

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Posted: 16 years ago

#146

Originally posted by: sugi77

vry niceeeee😊 updt .i loved heer and kaki scenes vry much.can't wait ,plzzzzzzzzzzzz updt asap.

Thank you😃 I'll try to update. Soon😆

Originally posted by: shabo24
I is here. Short comment alert. You think I would get time on my time off but no.....Yes yes we all know how busy you are. So busy that you're trying to watch all the seasons for Friends over the break. That's called working productively. And no I'm not being sarcastic. I really mean that😆

Heer reminds me of you! You know why? Cuz she is in denial. *giggles* ok fine, I'll shut up. You were in denail...so slowly..Heer will come out of being denial at this party (ball?) and dance with Prem all night long and they will end up discussing how big their feet are. With this ff...you never know! 😆 What are you talking about? I was NEVER in denial. You can ask Kimz Wait am I openly accepting something?😕 I'm confused now. What are we talking about again?😆 Feet? I prefer hands. Yes that's right I compare my hands with others and out of all my friends, I have the smallest hands😆

Loved Meera, Shabo and Kimz, Ravz and Shifali in this part...how they just kept going at it, not leaving her alone! Chadnu and Chandi?? *snikers* Oh me and Kimz so HAVE to be cupid for these lovebirds! 😆 Ohh and guess what?? I know eh? Not leaving people alone is what I do best😎 Um...cupid? We'll see😆 Lemme guess, nothing?

Nothing. I was right

--shabz

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Ravjot

@rainydays.

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Posted: 16 years ago

#147

Originally posted by: *Shifali*
bllubber!

Wasn't there a movie called Flubber?🤔

Originally posted by: Anhdara13
My comment has been edited.

Love,

Radz

I read it😃

Originally posted by: premeer928
hey
that was amazing. 👏 cant wait till heer meets prem at the party. continue soon. 😊

Thanks for liking it😃 I'll try to update soon😆

Originally posted by: happybrar
awesomeeeeeeeee

Thanks😳

Originally posted by: Garima93
Heyy Ravs!!!!!!!!!!! OMG that was a hilarious update!!!!!!!!! Garimaaa! Oh oh oh I had this other friend named Garima and my other friend used to call her Gauri Maa😆 I never knew it was that funny😆 But I did try to make it as funny as possible so glad to know I succeeded😃

LOL, Heer and her Kaki are just mindblowing I love theri cher-chaar and little come backs!! Its so cute!! hahaha! I love both of em =) It's a better relationship of me and my mom cuz well, my mom doesn't think it's funny or joke around😆 Which reminds me, I gotta bother her😆

Heer's still pissed at Prem isnt she?? But I bet she'll get over with it quickly cuz no one can stay mad a Prem for a long time....Yes she is except she knows it was her fault so we'll see😊 As for staying mad at him for a long time, are you sure about that?😆

Ohhh!! So they have a party to go to!! Sounds really interesting!! ha-ha Heer has to go now!!! I love how Shifs, Kimz, Shabz, Meeru, and Ravs all drool over him!! lmao!!! so cutee!!! Yes she does😃 I find it funny😆 And yes them drooling over him makes her even more mad😆

Cant wait till the next update to know what happens at the party!!! Great update Ravs!!!! Continue soon!! Thanks Garima😃 I'm try to update soon😆

Luv,
Gari <333333333

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Ravjot

@rainydays.

Sparkler

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Posted: 16 years ago

#148

Originally posted by: zaibun
hey great update do continue cant w8 to read more

Thank you😊

Originally posted by: pooji123456789
hey
aweum
very nice loved heer and kaki scene
party yay

Thank Pooji😃

Originally posted by: kimmu
Reserved, again. I'm gonna un reserve the other one tomorrow, and this one too... *tehehe*

Ooh can't wait to read what you have to say😃

Originally posted by: munam_13
hey ravz...mind blowing update...ladkiya kya kam thi now kaki too has joined the list????😆😆😆..... this heer is really a brat...and i like that😃.... u included a doodh wala ??? but's were's the asli doodhwala for whom we are waiting????😳 now waiting to read the dawaat part...I know that's gonna be interesting...😃 post soon...

Thanks Priyo😳 I know eh? Kaki thought it would be funny to tick Heer off by saying that😆 And yes the dood wala is finally here😃 Asli dood wala? And who is that? Am I forgetting something?😆 I'll try to update soon😃

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And I should tell you because...?

@shabo24

Rocker

Posted: 16 years ago

#149

HEY! Yesterday and THursday are my only free days, which I think watching FRIENDS is a very productive way to spend your free time! Today I got volunteering at random places, and tomorrow a FULL DAY OF LACROSSE! =] Then Friday I got just plans with friends then the weekend I gotto do homework =]