'I can be your Hero baby...' New FF Part 1 Updated

hey
interesting nice
can't wait...
u change the concept or what

hey, heer?? a spolit bratt??? this is new.. ithink..?? i cant wait to read more of it..update soon, and take care

interesting..do continue soon and please pm me when u update

Hello everyone. As you all have noticed I am new to this forum. A friend of mine got me into this. I really liked it. Well I decided on getting involved and doing this FF. Its something very different and out there. Hopefully you guys like. Why is it about the marines??? How do I know so much about the marines??? Some of you might probably be wondering. Well before that let me tell you about myself. Well, I am not your typical Desi/Indian. Lets start with my name which is Dana. I jsut turned 18. So the MARINES... my dad is a retired marine. he is irish. my mother is half french and half indian. the indian culture absolutely is something i love about myself, even though i do not look indian..neither does any one else in my family. but yah..getting back to the marines. i have 5 older brothers who are in the marine corps. so i know a lot about marines and men's psych...i am the only sister in these 5 brothers... i'll admit that i am spoilt and very pampered. i dont know if this is a good thing or bad thing, that i imagine everyone as being a marine..and thinking how their life might differ because of that. well part of this story has my oldest 26 year old's brother's ( his name is Sam { he was supposed ot be a confirmed bachelor: he was the last person i imagined falling in love.. and he did!! head over heels!})love story in it.. well part of it. he is engaged. so thats partly my inspiration..what else should i mention about myself? ohhh!! i am going to be marrying a marine!😊 that is it, i hope i did not bore you guys!😛 Let me know if you like it?😃

Hai Dana,

Just read ur ff & must say it's very different from the other ffs in this forum in every aspect - Be it the scenario,the character sketch so far of our leads Premeer. The leads here are very different from that we have accustomed to. Very different personalities but i feel there's more to them than what they appear to show towards each other.Do continue. Waiting for the next update.

Hi..
Loved the part,very diferent ,wow heer has tatooh,cool ,cntn soon

Originally posted by: vrinda16

Hai Dana,

Just read ur ff & must say it's very different from the other ffs in this forum in every aspect - Be it the scenario,the character sketch so far of our leads Premeer. The leads here are very different from that we have accustomed to. Very different personalities but i feel there's more to them than what they appear to show towards each other.Do continue. Waiting for the next update.

hi. thanks for taking the time to read it and leaving comments. i hope you like it even more as it goes along... there is a lot of marines theme in here. i love it!😳