New FF: Sau Dard Ch17 pg67 Apr 19

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maryam

@aishu_fan

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#221

wiw!!i just read ur ff its soooo cute! so ironic that their first dance was thriller,Mj ebing dead at the moment and famous and all. thier wedding night was beautiful the whole ff was awesome!i read 6 parts yesterday and two today,i luvvved it!!i cant wait for the next part!1 lool rajjis labor was so funny! and heer to the rescue!! thier chemistry is awesome!just like in the show good job!

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zaara006

@zaara006

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#222

What an update!!!👏

Awww Prem was portrayed as being soo sweet in the whole update! The surprise was funny....'thriller', i think it was unexpected for all of us!!!!! It was nice the way you showed everything happening, it did move quite fast so that was good! 😃 What the hell happened to Nihaal and Raji, where on earth have they gone... or is the 'alone' a metaphorical one where he has everyone but is alone without Heer????? You better make this abit more cheery and have a happy ending or else...... me and you are going to have some serious words lady! 🤓 😳 😆 😉

Trust you to leave it at the place where we all want to know more... you are evil i can tell you!!! 😆 😆 You always manage to do it like this!

waiting eagerly for the next update already.... make it soon before i forget whats happened so far in the story!!!

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Priyadarshini Basu

@munam_13

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 16 years ago

#223

Hey Jaz!!!! u updated???😲 you have no idea how I have been waiting for the next update... and as usual I loved the whole thing...

Loved the way you portrayed the rituals... Prem was too desperate to spend a moment with Heer... he had to shoo away the guests😆

So Heer's surprise was really surprising😆... Thriller 😆😆😆

Now I am desperately waiting to know how their relationship changed... post soon

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Aradhna

@Anhdara13

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#224

my spot has been edited.

Love,
Radz

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aaminaman

@aaminaman

Navigator

Posted: 16 years ago

#225

it was really superb please update the next part asap

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sugii

@sugii

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#226

excellent update...premeer scene is superb...poor prem.eagerly waiting for nxt part...thnk u soo much for pm...plzzz continue asap..

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nishi

@nishi0904

Explorer

Posted: 16 years ago

#227

a very good update, after a long time though but it was worth the wait and happy to see u back with the update. waiting for the next part

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@flowers4u

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#228

i cant take the suspence any more i want to know wat hapened oh sorry calmdown zaibun

lol

great update keep it up

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purplestar22

@purplestar22

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#229

Updated my comment!!!😊

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Ravjot

@rainydays.

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 16 years ago

#230

YAY! An update *does a little dance* Btw thanks for the PM =)

That was just...wow. I'm speechless. I dunno what to say to describe how much I loved it. The way you wrote it and described everything, it was amazing.

I demand another update! 😆

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