FF: Jaane Tu... |Ch 3 -Pg 12, Mar 19| - Page 8

Originally posted by: iqbals4ever

wonderful ff cont soon plz!!!!!!!👏

Originally posted by: Garima93

*reserved*

Me ish backk!!!! really extremely sorry for the delay!!!! *kaan pakading* teehee

Well, as always, ur update was FANTABULOUS!!!!!!!!!!! I love how the story's going!! Thank you G!

The whole "good luck" convo between Prem and Heer was sooo cutee!! I loved how Heer encouraged Prem to go out and play!!!!! But sadly he doesn't know that Heer is his lucky charm....Haha, he thinks Sanjana is.

And then stupid Sanjana came in!!!😡 Grrr!! She needs to get a LIFE!! for real!!!!!

well, atleast Prem saw the sadness in Heer's eyes!! I hope he goes and consoles her!! and bechaari Heer, crying all alone 😭😭 Hope everything works out well!! I bet ya, it will.

and choo cholly for the lame comment!!! will give a better comment next time!!😃😃

Byee!! Luv,
Garima😳😳

Originally posted by: -Anza-

ships....i just read pt 1 and 2 and i must say that you are an amazing writer. seriously i love ALL your FFs

esp this one...its really good

can't wait for the next part

continue soon

Originally posted by: -Ravjot-

-Reserved-

-Unreserved-

Sorry I took so long to unreserve😳

Anyway, on to the update😃

He always forgets his towel?😆 I love the part where Heer is sarcastic in the beginning about him needing help changing. I love their relationship =) Thanks R!

Aww I love Tauras! He's so cute! reminds me of my doggy kinda😆 Where was I? Oh yeah! Aww so sweet. he wished her first? I love how he tells her how he does care about her and everything.

Aww he lost his lucky charm? I love how Heer tells him it wasn't his lucky charm cuz well, it isn't. Unfortunately the poor boy's in denial. I loved this part: "Prem..." I spoke softly. "You know that the charm is within you and that your charm, which is to always stand up for friends is the luck for you. You don't need some stupid lucky charm. You know that you are the luck and you, yourself are the charm." Heer knows just what to say And I just love that!😳

Yeh Sanjana kaha se agayi?!😡 Iski toh main......*tries to calm down* Me no like her! Can I please poke her with toothpicks? Sure. End pe sab chalega.

Poor Heer. That must've hurt. And it must've been hard to keep those tears back. Why couldn't Prem go to the Heer instead? I mean, Heer was there at the game, not her! Heer was there when he was freaking out. Urgh! And the nerve of that girl, smirking at Heer. I know *smacks Sanjana*

Honestly I feel so bad for Heer. That last bit had tears coming out of my eyes...The way you wrote it, I can totally feel her pain

Shifali, you're an amazing writer! I love this FF of yours. Can't wait to read the next part.

Originally posted by: tv star

i have to tell u one thing.........this dog is sooooo cute........i thnk in futre he will play a major role in connecting prem and heer(hope soooo)!!!!!!!!

poor heer i know what she was feeling when prem just passed away!!!!!!!!! really bad.............

but heer just want to tell u one thing sabar ka fhal meetha hota hai........prem is only yours nd one day he will come to u only!!!!!!!!

love

dimple

Originally posted by: ~nikki1992~

hey Shifu (hope u dont mind me calling u that)

amazing update, this was just out of this world.. and i mean it.

the relationship prem and heer share as friends is just soo real..like really amazing,

the little speech about caring and not caring was very sweet.

and then yay..he won the game!!!

and then after the game prem passes heer to go to that sanjana..i have an idea of wat heer might have felt i feel soo sry for heer..update wen u get the chance, and take care till then..

~nikki😳

Originally posted by: Anhdara13

Shifu, you updated! Yay! *dances*

Aw, the friendship between the two is so sweet. Prem really cares for Heer na? Yes he does.But he doesn't know about her family life I'm guessing. I cannot wait to see how he will react when he finds out that his 'darling' Sanjana is so horrible to his best friend. I'm betting he will take Heer's side, because, despite what he thinks now, he cares more for her! He will find out sooner or later...but I just feel like torturing him first.😳

Poor Heer. I came so close to crying over that part. You expressed her pain and hurt so well. How can Prem not see how she feels, how much pain she is in?? Andha kahin ka! 😡 Take off your blinders and see your best friend! She's head over heels for you! Love is blind na?😆

Waiting for more, Shifu! I love your work. 😉

Love,

Radz

Originally posted by: sugi77

👏amazingggggggg updt. u rocked👍🏼.can't wait plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz updt nxt pt asap

-😊sugi

Originally posted by: munam_13

hey shifali...that was an wonderul update... I feel bad or Heer as she is the one doing everythng for Prem and that button eyed idiiot is only chanting sanjana sanjana... cruel fate,,,, I have fallen in love with Taurus...I think he will be premeer's love's lucky charm am I right????
post soon...

Originally posted by: kimmu

Oh-kay, I'm finally here. I read the first part, and then the second part... and Shifs, this is an awesome fic!! Just like all the others...Thanks Kimz!

Heer's kinda like Cinderella, except here Cinderella's really the one chasing Prince Charming. I love the concept, really. I just hope Prem quickly realizes what a bia-tch Sanjana is... becuase that lucky bracelet thing is pretty heart breaking. Heer, being a girl that loves Prem more than anything, just watches Prem think of Sanjana all day... when she knows that it should be her that he should be thinking about. I know. After all, this proves that girls are the smart ones when it comes to love!😆

*sigh* Really amazing job, Shifs! Continue soon!