Wow Shifali!!! I love all your FFs, but I have to say, this one is my favourite now!! 😃 I just absolutely love it!! The maturity and clarity with which you write is both commendable and applaud worthy!! The way you have used the Cinderella story to create a more modern and interesting tale of unrequited love is just amazing!!! 👏
I can totally feel Heer's pain!! It's so sad that she is all alone in this world, and that the relatives she thought she could rely on turned out to be nasty and selfish money-grabbers!! I like the strong Heer, wish she didn't control her temper and smacked Sanjana on the up side of her head, hehe!! I love how from the first chapter we are able to see how much Prem means to Heer- she is almost like his wife- taking care of his little needs, going hungry just to wake him up, supporting him in the bad times as well as the good times!! 😳
Late Langoor- LOL, that made me laugh sooo much!! Gosh Prem lying shirtless on his back already has me blushing- I can just imagine it, hehe!! I love how the two are so casual and informal around each other- kinda reminds me of Harshiti!! So sweet!! It also sorta reminded me of Neev and Prachi- don't know if you used to watch Kayamath, but I absolutely loved Neev-Prachi jodi- their deep friendship, how they teased each other, how they supported each other- how Prachi loved Neev yet he didn't love her at first, but then he realised how much he loved her!! I was so hurt when Neev and Prachi were seperated though, never liked her with Milind so just stopped watching the show!! Anyway back to your FF, they remind me of the Prem and Heer in your FF!!
Poor Heer, she loves Prem but he loves that spoilt brat Sanjana!! I thought the scene where he tells her that he cares about her was so touching 😳 - I had my head to the side and my hand on my heart while reading that, it was so sweet!! And how Heer supports Prem was just as sweet!! She is like his rock which he can always lean on, just like he is her rock!! Yet he doesn't realise how important she is to him!!! I really hope he does soon!!
Aaaawww, bechari Heer- I could feel the pain about to overflow from her eyes as Prem walked past her to embrace Sanjana- that was heartbreaking!! 😭 Evil Sanjana, I despise her already!! 😡 It was Heer who gave Prem the courage and support to go out and win the game, yet this little monster smugly took the credit!! The ending was just sooo sad, I feel so bad for Heer, poor girl is suffering from inside, the pain consuming her, yet she can't even do anything about it, bechari!! 😭
Oh Shifali, didn't mean it to be so long, I got a bit carried away, but I just had to comment- I absolutely LOVE the FF, you've done a great job!! 👏 I can't wait to read how you take it further!!
Love Zahra xx
Edited by Pyari_Zahra - 16 years ago
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