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Posted: 16 years ago
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it was beautiful JC..... 👏

really da creatives shuld come here n take ideas from our forum.....
this was very well written.... n thank u for this.... coz atleast we could imagine all this which we din't get to see... :)
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Posted: 16 years ago
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That was beautiful. I loved every bit of it....loved how you went back to the past inbetween, reminiscing all the golden moments. And the whole rain scene and their romance....was amazing !

Tnx for sharing it. I wish you guys were in the creative team of Kis Desh...



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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: kis desh Rocks!

wow u wrote it beautifully,👏 really amazing, i really wished the rain scence yesterday turned out to be something similar like this.. but nothing happened.. you really cheered me up thanx..😊 i wish the creatives would read this short story and get some sense in their empty heads....

well according to me I think Vikas Goopta gave much more romantic scence to premeer and ipshita deb is just destroying them...

thanx!...i'm glad i cheered u up...the creatives really need to get their acts together....last week was amazing!...but i feel they arent doing full justice to prem and heer....missing vikas gupta...

Originally posted by: anushka10

wowwwwwwwww u wrote this excellent dear..i loved it soo much👏.I wish that yesterday's scene might turned in this romantic way...

But according to my POV i thought Heer will drag Prem because of that Rain but sab kuch ulta hogaya hain..i did not expect this from Prem leaving Heer alone and running like someone is chasing him..creatives have gone mad they have riuned that scene...I expected a dance in real in rain..we saw their dance in dream but i wanted real..so i expected a dance ..awwww that would be so cuteeeeeee....But i am unable to get out of that bad dream ...Why Prem is behaving in this way ? only ceatives knows? thanks soo much and loved ur effort for cheering up us...i am trying to cheer up my mind..lets see what happens in today's epi..hope everyone gets releived after this episode..

hahaha i kno right...he ran like the devil himself was after him...lol....i hope they get more romantic scenes...i mean their married now for crying out loud....i'm really missing the old classic scenes....well they do have cute scenes now....like the whole bedroom/mirror scene...and the kitchen scene....but those scene are just cute....i want full out passion....thanx for reading btw

Originally posted by: Pyari_Zahra

Oh my gosh, I don't have many words to say how beautiful that was!!!! 👏👏👏 It was just amazing- the way you incorporated flashbacks of their previous scenes was so good and well written!! And the description of their love and closeness was just magical!! I LOVED it, if only this had happened in the show, but the creatives ruined a perfect PH moment that could have been!! But well done- I am seriously enthralled by your writing- it's so amazing!! xx

awww thanx!....i'm glad u liked it so much....u kno i wasnt going to add their old scenes...i was going to jus put song lyrics or something...but for some reason i felt flashbacks wood be more effective...thank you for reading...

Originally posted by: sugi77

thank you soooooooooooooooo much.you r too good.thank you once again😊

ur welcome!...and thanx for reading

Originally posted by: kajjal

wow its beautifully written..

thanks!!!!

Originally posted by: Intellienough

i Think we people are are far far better than these damn creatives.What a thought and romance.This was the thing that should have been actually shown.Very nice , Ultimate, Fabulous.No words....

hahaha i kno right....i've read som great fanfics in this forum....this new creative really needs to read those fanfics n know what we really want....thank you for reading...

Originally posted by: Jai & Bani

I just Loved you SS dear...It was like a Dream...
I wish it was like your one in real...
Anyways we can imagine nah...And ur imagination was too dreamy..too delicate ..too soft & intence to describe in course of Words....Simply BEAUTIFUL!

I remember my SS of Monsoon on Prem heer just two of them in Rain....Thank you soo much for the Luvly gift!😍

SS? wats that?...lol...sorry....but thanx for reading!....i'm glad u liked it so much

Originally posted by: tv star

wowowowowow this was an awsome scene.........wished something like this could have happened!!!!!!!!!!1
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thanx!....i wished somthing like tat happened too....*sigh*....i hope we get a mindblowing scene soon...all these little scenes have been cute n all....but my heart is aching for a full out breath-taking scene.....

Originally posted by: afreen.....

Hey nice well-thought out scene.. its beautiful..😊 👏

Yest's scene cud hav been better but since prem-heer are shown as very shy towards each other.. they wudnt have been doing any of it..
Thou i lykd it, i stil xpected it to be a lil lyk urs.. atleast a hug.. but heer sneezing nd prem's expression lyk uhh.. i knew itt.. was cuteee... 😳

i kno...prem and heer have always been very shy...but still yaar....it was the shy prem and heer who did scenes like 'rasta roko', 'confession scene', 'soap scene'...(hai mein mar jawaan)....'egg scene' (hai mein mar jawaan to the 2nd power)....those scenes wer mindblowing....i hope we get scenes like those soon....

Originally posted by: premeerrock

hey tht was jus MINDBLOWING!!👏thnx for cheering me up!!i was in such a bad mood afer watching yesterday's epi!😡it was soo disapointing!!i was expecting much much more n da stupid creatives just destroyed it.. dey culd hav shown soo many things but no dey jus had to ruin da beautiful moment!anyways thnx dear it was jus gr8!!loved it!!😊

ur welcome!...n thanks for reading!....well i wasnt fully dissapointed because they showed that cute bedroom scene....and it confirmed prem remembered....but yea...the rain scene cood have been much better....

Originally posted by: thephworld

it was beautiful JC..... 👏

really da creatives shuld come here n take ideas from our forum.....
this was very well written.... n thank u for this.... coz atleast we could imagine all this which we din't get to see... :)

heheheheh thanx....i hope the creatives pull their act together soon....

Originally posted by: Magpie_07

That was beautiful. I loved every bit of it....loved how you went back to the past inbetween, reminiscing all the golden moments. And the whole rain scene and their romance....was amazing !

Tnx for sharing it. I wish you guys were in the creative team of Kis Desh...



thanx!...i'm glad u liked it....hehehe oh man if i was the creative head i wood go balistic with premeer scenes....lol....
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Posted: 16 years ago
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wow fantastic beautiful
no words to describe the rain scene u have written
thanks for cheering me up
tooo goood
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Posted: 16 years ago
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thats really really beautiful i wish they eud have shown sumthin like that but nevertheless thanks a lot
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hi JC, It was absolutely beautiful, I was left speechless reading it. Seriously I think if the creatives visit this forum on a daily basis they ought to read the talent of creativity in the members here to get some ideas in their dense heads. Then hopefully they will get some vague idea what exactly we want from the show & this mindblowing couple. They r so under utilised with their awesome chemistry that they could put to use so constructively. Simply superb, I loved it to the core. Thanks for making it so beautiful, its like getting a taste of our wishes that took shape right in front of our eyes! I also love ur other ff Prem ki diwani. U r a very good writer. Lana.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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SS means Short Story! I hope now you get it!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Beautiful Post JC😳Thank u sooooooooooooooooo much for sharing u r a true fan of Premeer the way u discribe each&evey part of thier beautiful moment along with dialogue was jst amazing👏Now Here is mine scene the way i want this rain scene😳Hope u all ll like it
Prem Heer Having thier dinner in theier terrace on the open air the atmoshphere is sooooo romantic&beautiful they both r looking to each other eyes&lost suddenly a drop of water bring them in the reality its raining Prem grabbed Heer's hand&run for shelter after leaving Heer's hand he bring his hankechief to wipe thier face whn he looked for Heer she was not there.whn Prem looked here or there he saw his Heer in the rain happily enjoying each&every drop of water he shook his heas&called Heer,She looked at him&he indicate to come inside otherwise he ll got cold but Heer is not ready to come whn Prem tried to bring her back Heer pulled him to her side&it cause Prem to get drenched then they both start to feel the rain suddenly there was a thunder which make Heer to scare&she hugged Prem tightly after some moment She shyly look at Prem&thier eyes meet
Bhigi Bhigi Rato Mein...Aisi Barsatoo Mein Kaisa Lagta Hai???
Bhigi Bhigi Raato Mein Mithi Mithi Baato Mein aise barsato mein kaisa lagata hai
Aisa lagta hai tum banke adal mere badan ko bhigo k mujhe chher rahe ho chher rahe ho
Heer felt shy&bcom red by feeling Prem's hot gaze on her.then they both go in side&start to soak thier hair,whn the window opened by a heave push of wind,Heer rain to close it but the wind was sooooo wild tht it disturbing her to get shut,whn she felt Prem's arms bsides Her,He was looking at her with tht same intention a naughty smile playing on his lips&Helped her to shut the door
Barkha Se Bachalu Tujhe Sine se laga lu a chupalu aa chupalu
ho dil ne pukara dekho rut ka ishara dekho
uf ye nazara dekho kaisa lagta hai
Aisa lagta hai kuch hojayega mast pavan ke ye jhoke
saiya Dekh rahe hai dekh rahe ho
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Heer shyly hide her face in Prem's chest&thn Prem held her tightly by her waist
Edited by lian - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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that was seriously one of the best SS's I've read! 😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
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wow..I got so absorbed..awesome..I think nobody could have written the scene better👏👏👏

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