so i noticed alot of u guys unhappy with how the rain scene turned out....its ok...cheer up guys....u forget that we got a very cute bedroom scene between premeer....anyways....i wrote this little scene to cheer you guys up who wer dissapointed....this is how i wanted the rain scene to be like...well kinda...lol...but i still hope u read this and comment.....also i want all of u too post ur versions of the rain scene as well....tell me how u wood have wanted it to be.....
They say when it is raining…God is crying from above…
Heer felt his gaze on her…she lifted the martini glass to sip...in hopes of quenching the sudden thirst that appeared. Her cheeks burned a delicate pink because of his gaze…those soft brown eyes…filled with intensity…with a hint of naughtiness on the edges. How can a girl not drown in them…it was as if he looked into her soul…could read her deepest secrets.
Thunder rumbled above their heads before the clouds let loose. Prem looked up just in time to feel the first drops of rain fall on his face…before it started pouring down. He made a run for cover…thinking that heer was right behind him.
Prem wiped his face with a hankie and brushed off the few drops of rain caught on his shirt. When he turned to offer his hankie to heer…he noticed that she wasn't near him. Confused he looked out onto the now completely wet terrace…and felt his heart skip a beat. There was heer…standing in the rain with her eyes closed…her face lifted up to the heavens…and a sweet smile on her face. Was there anything more beautiful? Prem didn't know…the love he felt for her seemed to grow day by day…even death didn't stop that love from growing.
Heer smiled as she enjoyed the feel of raindrops around her…but that feeling in her chest came back…that little flutter she felt every time prem was nearby. Heer opened her eyes and saw prem standing next to her in the rain…his hair completely wet like hers…his white shirt sculpting his tones muscles. Even in this chilly whether heer felt heat rise on her cheeks for the way prem was looking at her…now his eyes not only held intensity…but passion as well…
~Prem pulled heer into an empty room and shut the door…locking everyone out. He looked at her…her beauty shined even more in the bridal gown. He didn't ask why she was dressed like this…and he didn't let her explain either…for this one moment…he wanted to forget the world and let it just be them…only them. The fear flickered in her eyes…but her racing heart calmed the moment she felt prem touch her hand…and he didn't let go…~
Prem lifted up a hand for heer to take…Heer understood perfectly and placed her hand in prem's as he pulled her close…swaying with the beats of their hearts. It was destined…their love…it went against all traditions…all relationships…all of society…but their love was destined…
~"Koi haath tho laga ke dikahye…maar ke dikhaye…himat hai tho maar ke dkhaye!...gar dunga yahan par!" Prem's eyes glittered in fury as his held a crying heer by his side. His gaze glared at the people around them…challenging them to come near his love. No one dared…the calm, quiet prem was nowhere to be seen…in front them stood an enraged lover…the obsession of love running through his veins…~
Prem twirled heer and pulled her back to him. Their bodies collided...and the sparks flew. His fingers trailed the side of her face…his lips soon replacing his fingers. Heer closed her eyes as prem's lips skimmed along her jaw…igniting a fire in her. Prem then placed a soft kiss on her forehead…right where he put vermillion not too long ago. It was as if he sealed their vows with a kiss…
~"Aaj mein Prem Juneja…apni jaan se zyaada inn hawa ko sakshi maan ke…inn fizao ko sakshi mann ke… Heer…tumhe apni patni mann tha hoon…" Everyone danced around them, but all prem saw was heer as he circled her. He didn't say these words out loud…but heer could still hear them… "Mein Prem Juneja aaj apne naam ke saath…apne astitva…apne shareel aur apne aatma ke saath…Heer Mann ko apne dharam se…karam se…dil se…apni patni mann tha hoon…" ~
Heer looked up at prem…their faces merely centimeters apart…Unn dono ka pyaar ek bagawat ban gaya tha…ek aisa junoon…ke zamana aur rasmo ko unke agge jukna para…Lekin shayaad kismat ko kuch aur hi manzoor tha…
~"Mein jaa raha hoon.." Heer ran to the tv screen where she saw her love…tears running down her face…not willing to accept the truth yet…not willing to say goodbye yet. "Khud ki zindagi jeena heer…" Heer shook her head stubbornly, whispering between sobs, "mein tumhare saath zindagi jeena chati hoon Prem…" Heer watched through blurry eyes as prem's pained face looked back at her, "Mujhe maaf kar dena…alvida Heer…agle janam thak…" Heer fell to the floor, her pain consuming her whole…her sobs now unstoppable. "NAHIN!....PREM!" Heer's heartfelt cry echoed throughout Juneja mansion…it rained that whole night… ~
"prem…" Heer softly whispered. He was actually here…holding her in his strong arms. Heer wished with her whole heart that this wasn't a dream...life wasn't worth living without prem. A tear rolled down her cheek and mixed in with the rain drops. No one could even tell that it was a tear drop that rolled down…but prem did. He softly kissed the teardrop away…after all…a true lover knew the difference between tears and water. Heer cupped prem's face…making sure this is real…he's real. Her love has returned.
~Heer ran through the dessert of rajasthan…the storm pounding around her. But she kept running…at that point the storm held more promise than the palace she fled from. When her legs couldn't carry her anymore, she looked up at the moon…with what little breath she had left in her body…she said one name…"prem…mere lahoo ke har khatre mein tum ho…meri aatma mein tum ho…iss heer mein tum ho prem…" Tears rolled down heer's face as she called out to him…maybe this time…she'll get an answer… "aa jao prem…laut aao…laut aao prem!...laut aao…" When heer was about to fall…strong arms circled around her…familiar arms…~
That night, Heer's heart wrenching cry reached the heavens…and it made God cry as well. Her pain was so great that even destiny bowed down to her…
Prem took heer's hand that cupped his face…and placed a kiss on each hand. He knew what was going through her mind…he could read it in her eyes.
"Yeh sach hai heer…hum saath hai…humhe koi alag nahin kar saktha…" prem gently murmured.
Heer sighed when prem captured her lips with his…their soaking bodies so close…that someone from afar might mistake them for one form…
The rain pattered around them softly…they say when God is crying…it rains…the night Prem was stolen from Heer…it rained…and it rains tonight too…but these are tears of joy falling from above…and it danced around Prem and heer…
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