Bandhan ~ Ch2 - Pa1/Pg11 ~ 07/30/09 - Page 2

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Posted: 16 years ago
#11

Originally posted by: pooji123456789

hey
nice character sketch
interesting
can't wait for part 1



What's sup... happy that you liked the character sketch... promise first part will be a thriller... 😛

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: ~nikki1992~

hey. sounds very interesting.👏.👏 nice character sketch.👏 👏and wow, prem doesnt beleive in long-term relationship, and heer dont beleive in love before marriage!!! nice.. different do continue.....and take care

~nikki😳



Hi... happy to see that you liked the storyline and the character sketch... Yep! Prem doesn't believe in long-term-relationship and yes... Heer doesn't believe in love before marriage... you also take care... 😳

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Posted: 16 years ago
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heyy mickey!! I loved the intro, and I'd definitely love to read it!! Please continue soon!!!!! looking forward to part one!!

garima<3333
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Thank you 😃

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: desichica

good character sketch........i like how u excluded harmaan character....he is boring newayz....but def lukin forward to read ur first part!!!!



Happy that you liked the characters... even I don't like Harman's character that much... after what he did with Meher but I thank him for bringing Meher and Preet together in the name of marriage...

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: srklover93

heyy mickey!! I loved the intro, and I'd definitely love to read it!! Please continue soon!!!!! looking forward to part one!!

garima<3333



Thank you... happy to see that you like the storyline and the characters... 😛

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Before I start... My Fan-fictions are written in novel styles so I let you know when Chapter 1 ends than Chapter 2 starts... like novels... I hope that's alright!

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Chapter One - "Unforgettable Moment of Our lives"
Part 1

"Ladies and Gentlemen, thank you for coming today! Few minutes ago everyone was wondering why there is a celebration today at Raichand place… well I would like my daughter Heer to get married to my best friend's son Prem Juneja" announced by Vijay Raichand standing beside his friend Lalit Juneja.
Everyone claps at the announcement while Heer looked shock and Prem double shock after hearing about their engagement news which was held tonight without them knowing.
"(Aaj Hai Sagaai
Sun Ladki Ke Bhai ) -2
" Smile appears on Meher after seeing Kumkum standing in front of Sumit and mostly challenging him like always…

Kumkum: Zara Nach Ke Humko Dikhaa
Aaj Hai Sagaai
Sun Ladki Ke Bhai
Zara Nach Ke Humko Dikhaa
Kudi Ki Tarhan Na Sharmaa
Hai Tu Meri Gal Maan Ja
Haan, Tu Meri Gal Maan Ja
Sumit: Sabh Ko Nachaoon
Nach Nach Ke Dikhoon
Aa Mujh Ko Gale Se Lagaa
Sabh Ko Nachaoon
Nach Nach Ke Dikhoon
Aa Mujh Ko Gale Se Lagaa
Munde Se Zara Aankh Lada
Munde Se Zara Aankh Lada
Hoi, Tu Meri Gal Maan Ja
Hai, Tu Meri Gal Maan Ja
O Soniyee...
Sumit tries hugging Kumkum but she runs away hiding behind Heer. Heer stared at Prem like her world came to end. Because she knows that Prem doesn't believe in long term relationship other than his family and friends. They might be friends but never thought about getting married to one another. Even Prem looked at Heer like he was ready to kill her after the even comes to an end.
Sumit: Sar Pe Sajaa Ke Sehraa
Baarat Le Ke Aaon
Dulhan Tujhe Bana Ke
Doli Mein Le Ke Jaoon
Kumkum: Bholi Samajh Ke Mujhpe
Na Daal Aise Daane
Shaadi Nahin Karoongi
Ja Maan Ja Deewane
Kumkum stick out her tongue at Sumit
Sumit: Sun Albeli
Meri Tanha Akeli
Abh Kat Ti Nahin Ratiyaan
Kumkum: Jaa Re Harjayee
Chal Chod Kalayee
Sabh Dekhti Hain Sakhiyaan
Tu Meri Gal Maan Ja -2
Sumit: Hoi, Tu Meri Gal Maan Ja -2
O Maan Ja...
Kumkum: Hain Meri Sakhiyaan
Dil Mein Hai Chor Tere
Kyoon Haath Dho Ke Aise
Peeche Pada Hai Mere
Both Prem and Heer are called up on the stage for the ring ceremony… Prem looked at Heer and gives her a dirty look. Heer lowers her gaze toward the floor so nobody notice her tears.
Sumit looks at Kumkum's friends before going to her: Sakhiyoon Se Apni Keh Do
Ke Beech Mein Na Aaye
Ban Jayein Meri Saali
Jija Mujhe Banaayein
Heer placed her hand forward after hesitating for awhile. Prem slipped his ring into Heer's index finger without looking at her.
Kumkum gets annoyed: Main Na Aaon Tere Sang
Tere Ache Nahin Dhang
Na Aise Baat Badha
Sumit: Mujhe Karna Tu Tung
Abh Band Kar Jung
Aa Ban Ke Dulhan Ghar Aa
Tu Meri Gal Maan Ja
Tu Meri Gal Maan Ja
Prem puts forward his hand while Heer slipped her ring into his index finger. Everyone clapped for them while Kumkum teasing Sumit on the dance floor.
Kumkum: Haan, Tu Meri Gal Maan Ja
Haan, Tu Meri Gal Maan Ja
Aaj Hai Sagaai
Sun Ladki Ke Bhai
Aaj Hai Sagaai
Sun Ladki Ke Bhai
Zara Nach Ke Humko Dikhaa
Aaj Hai Sagaai
Sun Ladki Ke Bhai
Zara Nach Ke Humko Dikhaa
Sumit: Sabh Ko Nachaoon
Nach Nach Ke Dikhoon
Aa Mujh Ko Gale Se Lagaa
Kumkum: Kudi Ki Tarhan Na Sharmaa
Sumit: Munde Se Zara Aankh Lada
Kumkum: Hoi, Tu Meri Gal Maan Ja
Sumit: Tu Meri Gal Maan Ja
Kumkum: Hai, Tu Meri Gal Maan Ja
Kumkum hugs Heer
Sumit hugs Prem, but Prem looked irritated by everything going around him.
Only few guest left because most of them left after dinner. Veera drags her brother onto the dance floor and Meher drags Heer on the dance floor while Kumkum requested a song to the DJ for them.
Heer's feeling of cries… Aye Dil Dil Ki Duniya Mein
Aisa Haal Bhi Hota Hai
Baahar Koi Hansta Hai
Andar Koi Rota Hai
Aye Dil Koi Pehchaana Nahin
Kisi Ne Yeh Maana Nahin
Kisi Ne Yeh Jaana Nahin
Kisi Ko Batana Nahin
Dard Chhupa Hai Kahan
Aye Dil Dil Ki Duniya Mein
Aisa Haal Bhi Hota Hai
Baahar Koi Hansta Hai
Andar Koi Rota Hai
Prem wishpers in Heer's ear: What the heck is going on?
Heer wishpers back into his ear: How would I know? Do you think I told my parents that I want to marry you? I don't think so!
Prem wishpers back into her ear's: I don't care but you hurt me and our friendship…
Prem's feeling… Tune Mujhse Vafa Nahin Ki
Tujhko Kaise Vafa Milegi
Tune Mujhko Dard Diya Hai
Tujhko Kaise Dava Milegi
Seene Mein Uthte Hai Armaan Aise
Dariya Mein Aate Hai Toofan Jaise
Kabhi Kabhi Khud Hi Maajhi
Kashti Ko Dubota Hai
Aye Dil Dil Ki Duniya Mein
Aisa Haal Bhi Hota Hai
Baahar Koi Hansta Hai
Andar Koi Rota Hai
Prem looked irritated by Heer's answers but his ego wasn't letting him back down so he said… "If I didn't say anything… you didn't say anything than how in the heck did they got this idea about us getting married?"
Even Heer was irritated by Prem's attitude and her ego wasn't letting her back away so she said… "How I know? Think whatever you want, but don't mess with me or my family's feelings…"
Prem gets annoyed but his ego wasn't ready to drop this topic easily so he made it worst by saying "Alright… I won't mess with your family's feelings or my family's feeling but I can mess around with you and you're feeling… See you tonight in our room meaning your or mine…" he winks at her. (Prem's character is more like a player boy who considers emotions empty words. Also his ego gets hurt easily by anyone most likely Heer, but their friendship started well until today).
Heer got pissed by his attitude and pushed him away from her afterwards ran into her room…

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Appreciate or Criticizes! Either way works for me... 😃
Edited by Mp_Desigirl - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#18
awasommm it wss amazing cn't wait for the next part...
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Posted: 16 years ago
#19
It is Awesome .. I Just Loved the You have written ..
Carry On, I am Sure this would a Hit soon ..
I Love it .. Updt Soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
#20
super part 1
loved the whispering scene
i can imagine the scene
loved every bit of the update

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