Bandhan ~ Ch2 - Pa1/Pg11 ~ 07/30/09 - Page 9

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Posted: 16 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: Momana

when are u updating the part....



Just now... after a long time break...

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Posted: 16 years ago
#82

Originally posted by: sonu0511

just nw read all 4 parts and they are just awesome...loved hw prem's getting jealous.............



Thank you

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Chapter Two – "Rituals are nightmares"

Part 1
Later in the evening, Desha shouted at the servants who are doing their job, but not the speed she thought work would be done.
Kumkum arrives with her brother Milind...
Kumkum: Mummyji, don't worry everything will be done.
Desha looked at Kumkum with a smile: now I don't need to worry about anything.
Heer just woke up in her room and finds Prem starring at her in her white night-see-through-gown which is shorted only up to her knees. Heer looked for her bathrobe, but Prem was sitting in front of it.
Prem walked toward Heer on the bed...
Heer moved slightly backward on the bed, but Prem made his way towards her.
Heer: Don't you dare!
Prem: I won't hurt you like you have few hours ago...!
Heer: What do you mean?
Prem: I'll show you what I mean!
Prem takes Heer by her shoulders and points toward the door mirror in her room.
Heer struggling: Leave me!
Prem: So my touches haut you and when Rajveer your friend touches you its alright. Well my dear Heer it's not alright with me and no one dares to mess with my property other then myself.
Prem leaves in anger...
Rajveer spots Prem coming out of Heer's room and stares at him leaving in anger.
Heer quickly puts her robe on and leaves toward the bathroom because she feels like crying under the shower.
Prem sits inside his car...
Heer completely breaks down underneath the shower and whispers to herself "I wanted to make Prem jealous by using Rajveer, but now I am going to make him pay for today throughout his entire life by teaching him emotions aren't empty words, but they are feelings of pure love and long-term commitment".
Heer gets out of the shower and dress into her (hand embroidered choli suit) she purchased for tonight's function.


Rajveer, Navin, Abhi and Aalekh stared at Heer who looked stunning in bluish-purplish (backless) choli suit.
Prem worn orange sherwani with matching stool (scarf), but nothing compared to Heer.
Preet brought Prem down stairs...
Gayarti hugged her son...
Desha hugged her daughter and placed a tiny black dot behind her ears afterwards Heer sat down beside Prem and whispered into his ear "earlier whatever happened between us was our ego talking, but now the war has begin of hatred between us".
Prem: May I have the pleasure of dancing with my fiance?
Heer nods her head
Prem and Heer made toward the dance floor...
Background music chosen by Preet: (Yeh Ishq Hai Gunaah to Gunaah Kar Ke Dekhiye… (2)
Muhobbat Main Zindagi Tabah Kar Ke Dekhiye)… (2)
Prem: What were you saying that whatever happened in the past was only meaningless ego of our talking?"
Prem twirls Heer in circles
Heer: Yep!
Heer stared into his eyes before answering his question...
Background Music: Chamak Uthegi Bijliya Barash Padegi Badaliya
Khilenge Phool Pyar Ke
Udegi Dil Main Titaliya
Kabhi Kisi Hasin Par Nigah Kar Ke Dekhiye
Indeed the song was matching the weather, but emotions of ego going on between Prem and Heer wasn't matching the song.
Prem twirls Heer fast that she fell in his arms by grabbing his upper arm and continued whispering "fine! Let's see who has the courage of playing with each others emotion without hurting themselves?"
Heer looked into his eyes...
Background Music: Kabhi Kisi Hasin Par Nigah Kar Ke Dekhiye… (2)
Muhobbat Main Jindgi Tabah Kar Dekhiye
Najar Ko Jach Gaya Hai Jo
Jigar Me Bas Gaya Hai Woh
Karar Ban Gaya Hai Jo Khumar Ban Gaya Hai Jo
Milega Woh Zaroor Dil Se Chah Karke Dekhiye… (2)
Muhobbat Main Zindgi Tabah Kar Dekhiye
Heer places her arms around Prem's neck and says "we will see who confess first without having their ego come in between. Tonight will be the night of confession of fake rituals and nightmares of our life."
Prem pulled Heer closer to him and whispered "Indeed from tonight each of our rituals will be nightmares in our life until one of us say iss des mein nahiin hai mera dil"
Background Music: Nasha Hai Kitna Ishq Mai Ishq Main
Maza Hai Kitna Ishq Mai Ishq Main
Junu Hai Kitna Ishq Mai Ishq Main
Shukun Hai Kitna Ishq Main
Kabhi Kisi Se Ishq Main
Kabhi Kisi Hasin Par Nigah Kar Ke Dekhiye
Kabhi Kisi Se Ishq Main
Nibah Kar Ke Dekhiye
Kabhi Kisi Hasin Par Nigah Kar Ke Dekhiye
Muhabat Main Jindgi Tabah Kar Dekhiye
Sumit and Veera interrupt Prem and Heer on the dance floor by saying "let's have a mini game of antakshari".
Both Prem and Heer looked into each others eyes and say "girls vs. boys or groom side vs. brides' side"
Sumit asked everyone who is playing the game and they came up with groom side vs. brides' side.
Heer gave Prem a smile...

Please do comment and I am sorry for continuing after along time...

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Posted: 16 years ago
#84
awesome mindblowing update
continue asap
can u please pm me????
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Posted: 16 years ago
#85
Hey i like ur update its amazing!
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Posted: 16 years ago
#86
Hey
awesum update
oh antakshari nice
from now on can u plz pm me when u update
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Posted: 16 years ago
#87
hi there ur ff is really very good.can u plz add me to ur pm list if u have one................thanks
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Posted: 16 years ago
#88

Originally posted by: desichica

Hey dear..your concept is very different...and am loving the title of your FF...so please continue...I am def one for reading how this develops!!!!


you are right its awesome ff plzz continue soon and pm me for your next update thanks
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Posted: 16 years ago
#89
nice.... please continue...
Please also add me to your PM list. When you update, please notify me. Thank you!
Edited by punjabi0926 - 16 years ago

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