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Imran

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Posted: 16 years ago

Pyaar Ka Safar - Ek Rasta Aisa

Hey Guyz This Is Imran Me and My Production
Mohabbat Productions
Finally I got an Time to Write an FF For the Jodi Premeer
So Hopefully You all Will Like it
It's a Love Story. And it is Titled Pyaar Ka Safar - Ek Rasta Aisa
Please Support me throughout the Journey of this FF,
Please Give me Your Point of Views
Wether it's Bad or Good Tell me
I need Bad Comments for Improvement and Good for Encouragement
if I don't get enough Comments/Views/Feed back's
I will be Forced Wrap the FF Up
So Please Do Support me

I Will Update Every Weekend Most of the Time,
Because I have School

Concept :
"Pyaar Ka Safar - Ek Rasta Aisa seeks to build the concept of love within the traditional setting of an love. It creates a quintessential contrast to the world around us where Love once considered sacrosanct in our society, are losing their sanctity and turning into relationships of convenience.
In this story, Prem and Heer are two people both who believes in Love a lot,
They Both Meet in a College, Falls in Love and Nothing Comes in Between them
Later On they Get Married, This where Heer Faces Troubles in Her Marriage life

Throughout the story you will see comedy,Love,Romance, Emotions between Prem and Heer

But Nowadays in this generations After Marriage does the love still exists?
this where Prem and Heer Experiences their Love Before and after marriage....

The story starts with Nupur Entering Heer's House!

Note : I will Introduce Each Character on Each Update
So it's Easier.

Update Links :
Will be Updated Time to Time

Thank you
Imran & Mohabbat Productions

Edited by Imran94 - 16 years ago

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Imran

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Posted: 16 years ago

Character Sketch !

Heer Sharma - Main Lead

Nupur Khandelwal : Heer's Best Friend

Parvati Sharma : Heer's Mother

Rishab Sharma : Heer's Father

Mayank Sharma : Heer's Brother

Shahid Khandelwal : Nupur's Brother

Vaishnabi Khandelwal - Nupur's Mum

Prem Garewal - Main Lead

Shubha Garewal : Preem's Sister

Manpreet Garewal - Prem's Brother Small

Note : Prem's Parents Will Stay The Same ..
As the Story Develops, Other Characters Introduction will be Done

Thank you

Edited by ibrahim94 - 16 years ago

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Imran

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Posted: 16 years ago

Part 1/Episode 1

It Is Now 10 am in Udaipur, the Sharma's are Having Breakfast, Only Rishab and Parvati eating

Nupur Heer's Best friend comes in and then shouts Heer, Heer Heer, then Parvati gets Up and then Tells Nupur, Betaa Woh toh College Ki Liye already chali Gayi, Aaj 8 Baje Chali Gayi,

Nupur : Kya Itni Jaldi, Woh bhala Kyun ? Hmm ?
Parvati : Mujhe Nahiin Pata, Woh Keh Rahi thi Ke Aaj Kuch Important Kaam Hai Isliye Jaldi Ja Rahi Hai..
Nupur : Aaj Toh Mein use Chor Ne Wali Nahiin Hoon ? *Angry*
Parvati : Tik Hai, Kuch Khayegi, Mein Aur teri Uncle Breakfast Kar Rahe Hai, Chal Tu Bhi Kuch Khale..
Nupur : Nahiin Aunty, Mujhe College Ke Liye Late Ho Rahi Hai, Kabhie Aur Haa ?
Parvati : Theek Hai Betaa, Samhal Kar Jana..
Nupur : Theek Hai Aunty,

Parvati Smiles and Says Paagal Ladki and then turns around goes back to Dining Table.

At College : -

In College Everything seems really Busy, the Lectures are about to start
Nupur Reaches at college, She looks for Heer Starightway ..
But heer is no where to be seen... Nupur goes forward to a Class Room, As she walks she asks Her Class Mate if they have seen Heer, Two of them says No we have not Yet Seen her..
Nupur Walks forward and Ask another two Girl, Tum Dono Ne Heer Ko Dekha,
They Replies - Haan Woh Mandir Mein Hai, Abhi Gayi Hai ..
Nupur : Thank you ... Nupur Walks Faster

She Reaches College Mandir, Pooja is going on then lot of People are seen but Nupur is finiding it difficult to Find Heer, Therefore she enters the Mandir and walks inside the Mandir Looking for Heer, She asks the Students if they hav seen Heer as she walks in...

Then She gets Tired and Stops at the Middle of the Mandir and then she joins her hand together and starts to Pray and she says This " Hey Bhagwan, Please Heer Ko Bhejdona , Please Mein Use Dhoonte Dhoonte Thak Gayie Hoon" Then the Pooja is Finished and Then Nupur is about to Turn back and then a Girl turns back after putting the Veneration Plate on tool, And then Nupur Says, Use Mein Class Mein Dekhlungi, Mujhe Kitna Nachaya, Mein Agar Use Nahiin Nachaya Mera Naam Bhi Nupur Khandelwal Nahiin.... hmmmphh
Then another Girls Shout Heer, Nupur - Heer ?? She turns back and Sees Heer ...
Heer Smiles and Waves Hi to Nupur .. And then Nupur Takes a Breath and Puts her hand on her Waist and says, Yahaan Hain Maharani ... Heer Runs up to her and Hugz Nupur ..
Nupur, Mein Nahiin Bat Karne wali Hoon Teri Saath .. Hmmphh ..
Heer : Aab Mein Ne Kya Kiya Bhen-jII ??
Nupur : Kya Kiya ?? Okaii - Pehli Toh Mujhe bina bataye College Chali Aye aur Call bhi Nahiin Kiya, Aur Mein Teri Ghar, Poora College Chakara Dekar Yeha Akaar Pochi, Ek Call Bhi Nahiin ??

Heer : Sorry Baba, Mein Na Bhool Gayi, *she Pulls her Ears*
Nupur : theek Hai, naatak Mat Kar *angry Expression*
Heer : Tujhe Toh Pata Hain Naa, Mein Har Mangal War Mandir Ati Hoon..
Nupur : Haa ?? Sorry Yaar Mein Bhool Gayi, Khama Ka Naraaz Ho Gayi Teri Upaar..
Heer : It's Okaii Yaar, ... Meri Sabse Favourite Month Hai, Celebrations toh Ho Ga ..
Nupur : Aww Haa, Februrary, Love Ka Month, Friendship Ka Month,
Heer : Haa Pyaar - Tujhe Toh Pata Hain Naa, Mein Pyaar Pe Andha Bishwash Bhi Karti Hoon
Pyaar hi toh Hota Hai Jo Hume Aise Raste Pe Le Chalti Hai, Ek Safar Jo Kabhie Na Socha Hoga Yeha Dekha Hoga, Pyaar Ke Liye, Do Insaan Kuch Bhi Karne Ke Liye Tayaar Ho Jate Hai Naa ?
She looks at a Couple who are romancing on the front of the College, Who too are Students and then Heer Points them Out too Nupur, She Says, Woh Dekh, Woh Dono shayad Is Waqt Apne Ane Jane Wale Ki, Koi Khabhar Bhi Nahiin Honge Shahed, Jab Pyaar Hote Hain, Duniya Alaag Si Lagti Hai ..
Mein Nahiin Janti Mujhe Kaisa Premi Milega, Aur Meraa Dil Kisi Chahega, Isliye toh Mein Haar Mangwal Yeha Akaar Bhagwan Se Yahi Chahti Hoon, Mujhe Koi Aisa Mile, Jo Mujhe Janaam Janaam Tak Apne Saath Rakhe, Take Mein Keh Sakti Hoon Pyaar Ka Safar - Ek Aisa Rasta Jo Janmo Ke Liye Bante hai,

Nupur : Heer Wakayeeme Aaj Tumne bhi Mujhe Pyaar ko Dusri Naaraz Mein Dekhne Ke Liye El Reason De Di, Pyaar Hote Hai Asa Jo Duniya Ko Duniya Nahiin Suwaarg bana Deta Hai ..
Heer And Nupur then Turns back towards Durga Maa, and then Both of then holds and Folds hands together and Worships Durgaa Maa, and Then the Bell Goes and Then Both of them Leaves from Mandir and then,
A Flower from Durgaa Maa's Hand Falls at the Veneration Plate Which was Brought by Heer ..

To Bo Continued ...
Please Keep in Mind, Hindi is Not My First Language
Sorry any Mistake
Hope you all Like it..

Edited by ibrahim94 - 16 years ago

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Imran

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Posted: 16 years ago

Hey Guyz, Everthing Update - Hope you all Like it
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Ravjot

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Posted: 16 years ago

Reserved😎

*Edit*

Ok so I finally get a chance to update my comment =)

I love th concept and everything!

And Nupur and Mayank are in it too? I love those two!

I wonder how Heer will meet Prem later on...

Can't wait to read the next part =)

Edited by ravioli_11 - 16 years ago

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Kiran

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Posted: 16 years ago

Ooh! I loved it! It was awesome... loved how you didn't keep some of the character's name the same, ahh... Meet is going to fall in love? *sigh* Oh well, I just want to know how Prem Heer are going to get together.

The first part was awesome. Loved it... continue soon!

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Imran

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: kimmu
Ooh! I loved it! It was awesome... loved how you didn't keep some of the character's name the same, ahh... Meet is going to fall in love? *sigh* Oh well, I just want to know how Prem Heer are going to get together.

The first part was awesome. Loved it... continue soon!

Thank you Soo Much For Reading it First of all .. Means such a lot to me ..
I Kept the Characters Name different, So i could give the Readers a Different story and etc lol ..
Yeah Meet will Fall in Love soon..
You will find out soon how they will get together ...
Thanz for reading it ..
Thank you Once Again ..

Imran

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Nikita

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Posted: 16 years ago

hey, sounds very interesting!!!! i like the character sketch.. very nice, and i cant wait to see how prem and heer meet!! yay!(in advance)😆. update soon..and take care,

~nikki😳

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desichica

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Posted: 16 years ago

Wow...Imran u have won me completely over with the outlook of Premeer love story!!!! I def am a sucker for College love stories...and def love how you changed last names and changed around the relations....All the more fun to the kahani!!!! I'm def looking forward to Premeer ka milan...chalo ekta land mein na saahi, lekin Imran ki FF mein Premeer ka milan bilkul paaka....I'm waiting also for their shaadi and the challenges ahead after marriage!!!!

You're a definite talent ⭐️!!!! keep up the good work and continue more with this wonderful FF!!!!👏

Edited by desichica - 16 years ago

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Imran

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Posted: 16 years ago

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Originally posted by: ~nikki1992~
hey, Hey
sounds very interesting!!!! i like the character sketch.. very nice, and i cant wait to see how prem and heer meet!! yay!(in advance)😆. Glad you Like the Sketch .. You find it Intresting too .. Prem and Heer will Meet Soon, I wnt Drag it .. I Promise
update soon..and take care, Will surely do, You Take care too
~nikki😳

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