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Posted: 16 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: danharryiel

nice start Imran,

Just read your ff.I always love the way you write ur ff.
Looking forward to read the rest....



Hey How are you ??
Thanx for reading the FF,Means such a lot to me ..
Really ?? I am so Glad You like the way I write my FF, Will defo Update the Rest !

See you !
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Posted: 16 years ago
#42
ooh luved it it iz wonderful n da concept iz even more wonderful mayur also in it den y not samrat n gunjan
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Posted: 16 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: premdiwani

ooh luved it it iz wonderful n da concept iz even more wonderful mayur also in it den y not samrat n gunjan



Well My Friend, This is just the Beginning of the FF, Many More Faces/Actors and actresses will be entered here soon, So right Now you have to Deal with them .. 😛

Thank you Soo Much for Reading the First Update, Means such a lot, i am also glad You liked the concept ...

See you soon ..
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Posted: 16 years ago
#44
hey imraan...
just caught your ff.....]its good...
the concept is very different,...
bas ek request hai.......
plzzz continue.....don't stop in the middle...
will look forward to the next update
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Posted: 16 years ago
#45
man its damn cute.. i seriously loved it.. n da way heer believs in love is amazing..

The first part was awesome. Loved it... continue soon!
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Posted: 16 years ago
#46
Update 2/Episode 2

Heer and Nupur leaves the Mandir and heads towards the Class, The bell has gone they are 2 mins away from their class, Nupur is worried and therefore asks Heer, Are Yaar jaldi karna, Class ke Liye Der Ho rahi Hain..
Heer : Haa Meri Maa, Jaldi Chaal, They both reaches the class and then sees the teacher has not Yet arrived yet and takes a long deep breath, Nupur notices the Principal and then Pushes heer and herself inside the class room and Heer, Nupur Kya Kar Rahi Hai Tu,
Nupur : Principal , Is coming towards this class now shut up and sit down ..
Heer : Kya ??
Nupur : Haa Meri Maa, Sit Down .. They both sits and then Principal Arrives, and enters the class room.

Principal is a Lady, Her name is Rajshri Khandelwal ... She is the Head of the College everyone calls Her RK Ma'am



She enters, Everyone is Sat and Quiet..Then she starts to Speak.
Good Morning Everybody
Everyone Else Replies and Says Good Morning to you too RK Ma'am
RK : I have come here to inform you all that. You Teacher Mr.Bhattarcharya is off today because of His illness and I will be taking Up your class today.

She asks someone on the latest topic they are taking on the class, She Points out Nupur and asks her, what is the latest topic they are taking, she Gives her all the information
Then she turns back and then starts to write on the Board with a Chalk ..
After a Few Minutes, Rajshri Recieves a Text Message, She looks at it and then says .. Hey Bhagwan Mein toh bhool hi gaye .. Then she looks around the class and then she sees Heer .. and then calls her name out and says, Heer Beta, Can you Please do me a Favour ??
Heer : Yeah Sure Ma'am
R'K - Woh Kya Hena ke Aaj Yeha Ek Naya Student Araha Hai, Isi Class Mein Join Karega aur woh mein Usse lene Ke Liye Janewali thi, Toh Aab Mein Class Chorkar to nahiin Jasakta Na, Kya Tum ??
Heer : Sure Ma'am .. I Will go get him
Heer Leaves the Class and then R'K again says to herself, Hey Bhagwan Mein phir se bhool gayi, Mein heer ko toh Prem naam toh batana tha .. uff ... She then sits down in stress

Heer comes near the Reception and waits for a while, she looks around, She waits for like 5 Mins and then ask the Reception lady,
Excuse Me - Did anyone name .... Then she realises and says to herself, Ma'am Ne toh Mujhe Uska Naam Nahiin Bataya, Aab Mein Kya Karoo .. Then the Reception Lady asks her, Are you alright ??
Heer : Yes I am Fine

Heer then Decides to Go back to class, as she doesnt know the Name or ever saw his Face .
She is about to walk but the floor is Wet and there is No Sign ... She is about to Fall and She Screams !
But suddenly Someone stops her from falling and Heer Ends Up in Someone's Arm, Her Eyes are Closed, The Person who is Holding her is a Guy.. He Says, It's Okaii, I got you ! Heer then Slowly Opens her Eyes and Sees Prem Smiling, Prem and Heer's Stares at Each Other, Prem Looks at Heers Eyes and Heer Looks back, they both smiles and Suddenly it gets All Windy and the Windows around the College Opens and it gets all Windy, Heers Hair Moves here to there ... Suddnely the Bells goes on and Both comes back to reality, Heer shys and smiles and then she turns back to Prem and Says Thank you, Prem Replies, Your Welcome ..
Heer : I Must Leave Now, She says ... She is about walk forward her Dupatta Is Stuck in his Watch, She turns back and then he too tries to take it off , They both struggles and Finally They take it off,
Heer then Turns back and Prem stops her saying Xcuse Me ?? Heer Turns Back and says Jii
Kya Aap Mujhe, Principal Ke Office Mein Lekar Chalenge ??
Heer : Of Course, Meri Saath Chaliye ..

They both walks together .. Prem then Asks heer, as they both dnt Know each other
Prem : If you Don't Mind Me Asking, Aap Ka Naam Kya Hai ??
Heer : My Name is Heer ..
Prem : Heer, Acha Naam Hai
Heer : Aap Ka ??
Prem : Prem
Heer : Prem !! Unique Ha, Prem Ka Dusra Naam Pyaar !

They both keeps walking and Chats. Prem Realises that Heer is taking him to A Class room where he wanted to go to Principal's Office .. He then stops and Heer Turns back and asks him, What happend ??
Prem : Your taking me to a Classroom
Heer : Yes Because R'K madam Is taking the Class today ..
Prem : RK ??
Heer : The Principal ..
Prem : Oh Okaii ...
Then both of them Walks and Enters the Class Room ...

Then Rajshri Looks and Smiles and Says, Prem, You've Arrived, Thank God ! Then she is confused and looks at Heer and Asks her, I dint Tell you Prem's Name then how did you Find Him ??

Heer : Woh Actually Ma'am, Mein Girne Wali thi, Floor Wet thi, So Prem Usi Wqat Akaar Mujhe Girnese Bacha Liya ...

Rajshri : Okaii, Acha Hua, Unknowingly Hi Sahi, You actually Brought Him Here,
Heer : Ma'am Aab Mein ??
Rajshri : Sure, Thanks Once Again Heer
Heer : It's Okaii Ma'am

Then Heer sits down, Nupur Says to heer, Ladka Handsome hain Na, Pehli Mulaqaat Mein Hai Baho Mein,
Heer : Shut Up ! Ma'am is about to Speak,
Nupurs Grins and Heer Shys .. 😳😳

Rajshri Then Introduces Prem to Everyone ...
The Class bell is gone and they have to go for next lesson, Prem is confused and Therefore Heer asks him if he is unsure about anything, Prem Replies, I dnt Know where Biology Class is
Heer : Come Along with me, I have Biology Class too, Nupur Smiles and Comes forward and Says
Hello Ji-- My Name is Nupur, Nupur Khandelwal ..Nice to meet you Jii
Prem : Hey nupur Nice to Meet you Too.... Kaise Hoo ?? College Enjoying ??
Nupur : Nahiin, College Ek Dam Boring Hai,
Prem : Don't Say that .. College is cool, this is where Youngsters Like us Can Chill ..
nupur: Kya Baat Hai, Tum toh Cool Dude Nikle ..

Heer : Nupur tu Bhi Naa Bak Bak Karti Rehti Hai
prem : Koi Baat Nahiin, Mein Bhi Kuch Jada Bolta Hoon .. Prem Asks Nupur, Friends ?? And Forwards His hands towards her and then Nupur Says, Friends and Shakes Hand with him and She Smiles, Both Looks at Heer, She responses What ?? Kya ?? Nupur Points at the Hand Shake ..
Heer : Ohh, Teek Hai, Friends They smiles, Nupur and Prem Walks faster than Heer .. and Goes forward and Heer Slows Down ...
Heer thinks, Kaisa Insaan Hai, Aaj Hi Aya aur Aaj Hi Dosti Ka Rishta Jod Liya... Duniya Mein Naa Jane Kaise Kaise Log Hote Hai .. She smiles and Goes forward ..

They Reach Biology Class, ......


To Be Continued ...
i am sorry Guyz, if I have not been be able to Meet Your Expectation ..
I have been studying all week because of Exams and etc
Brain is Jammed Up .. lol ...
So Sorry for any Mistakes I have made.. forgive me ..

Do Comments and Criticise ..
thank you !!

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Posted: 16 years ago
#47
FIRST ONE TO COMMENT! after i read it lol
*reserved*
;)
Ok i just finished reading it.
its sooo sweet!
Aaah Prem<3 :P
Keep up the good work, you're very talented, well atleast more than me XD
anyways can't wait till the next part..😛
Edited by Pr3cii0uz - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#48
awesum update
loved prem entry
sooo cute
thanks for pm

good luck for ur exams
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Posted: 16 years ago
#49
omg luved it was fab prem n heer meet wow luved it do continue n thanx
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Posted: 16 years ago
#50
hey
that was awesome. premeer's first meeting huh...that was so cute. cant wait till they fall in love...continue soon. 😊

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