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Posted: 16 years ago
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awesomeeeeeeeee too good lovelyyyyyyy part do write soon asap.
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Part 9 :

Heer keeps wondering , Was Prem really here. Was it really Prem. Who was this, who was so anjan and yet it seemed as if she knows him forever. Almost instantly, she clutches her necklace. Never in her life was she so helpless. Not when she was forced to marry Prashant/Manmeet, Not even when daljeet pulled her hair and dragged her out locking her in the room. She knows she was doing this for the family but Rishabh, could she really trust him. Heer walks out of the office, lost in her own thought thinking - Can she really trust Rishabh. She was going blindly by what he said he was going to do. She was going blindly when he said that she could be the one to help her and she was blind in her own thoughts when she agreed to go to ajmer.
She couldnt fathom out the reason as to what she did and why she did. She couldnt trust Rishabh. She wanted the family to hate her and hence she was doing all this for the family. But could she really trust Rishabh. Will he deliver what he promised. Her mind then went back to the agreement and she deciced to call Rishabh Rampal, She picked up the phone and started at the cell phone - her mind thinking Prem was her life and if he called, it would end this strife.
Almost resigning to faith and thinking against her heart, she went ahead and called rishabh rampal.
The phone rang endlessly and there was no reply.
She looks at the bangles on the table and thinks of Gayatri. She picks up the phone to call gayatri. At the other end of the office, Gaurav picks up the phone to call Romit. There is a cross connetion and gaurav & heer end up saying hello to each other.
Heer : Hello Ma
Gaurav : Looking at the reciever - Ladki ki Awaaz, Romit ke cell main.
Heer : Ma.....
Gaurav choses to keepo quiet as he hears some sadness in the voice and it pains him. He realizes that it is Heer.
Heer : Ma, ek ajeeb se baat huee, aisa laga ki prem vapas aa gaya hai. aisa ho sakta hai kya ma.
Yaad hai ma, aapne kaha tha, ki bhagwan insaan ko jodee main bhejta hai. Meri Jodee Prem ke saath hi likhee hai na ma. Prem aayega na, ma, shaadi se pehle. Ma, ma kaam to yahan kar rahee hoon, par aisa lagta hai, ki prem yaheen hai, yaheen kaheen pe...Unable to control her tears, she starts crying on the phone and puts the phone down. Seeing Heer cry, Gaurav cant bear it any more. He almost goes and tells her his real identity before better sense prevails on him.
On the other hand, Preet just came back from dinner with meher. There were going to their room, when preet saw lalit crying over Prem, Balrajs and Tejis Photo. Preet is about to go to his bauji, when he just stops. Meher looks at him, and silently nods. Preet smiles faintly and walks to his father. He puts his hand on his fathers shoulder.
Almost instantly, Lalit says prem tu aagaya.
Preet is kinda stunned and he comes infront of his father. Lalit looks at him, hugs him and starts crying. A surge of emotions overwhelm Lalit as he tells preet about his encounter with Gaurav Sharma. At the end of it all, Preet is rather very upset. How can some one insult his bauji and his mother like that. Unable to bear this insult, preet takes the phone from his father to talk to Gaurav Sharma. He manages to get the cell number from the office and calls him up. There is no reply and he gets a recording.....
Hi, This is Gaurav Sharma. Sorry main aapka phone nahin le sakta waqt kam hai,not that i mind, but paisa zindagi main sab kuch hai. Zindagi main kuch banna hai, Agar kaam ki baat hai, and my help you need, then leave message after beep.
Preet does not leave a message and thinking that he will go and meet this Gaurav Sharma the next day.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: sweta2005

awesomeeeeeeeee too good lovelyyyyyyy part do write soon asap.

Thanks... It will take me a while to build on the plot...Just gimme time till sunday night.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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its awesomeeeeee too good very nice part lovely part., but wants to know da flashback part of da story
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its awesomeeeeee too good very nice part lovely part., but wants to know da flashback part of da story

Flashbacks will be incorporated as well even after gaurav enters the juneja khandaan 😆😆😆 but before that i need to build on the story.
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part 10
Gaurav goes near the river side and sits by the river, his thought going back to a couple of months earlier
April 15, 2008.
Harman - Ma
Gayatri - Bas, ek aur shabd nahin. prem apna hai, sautela nahin. Kya kuch nahin kiya issne tum logon ke liye. Khud Apni Padhai jhod di, taki business main lalit ji ka haath baant sake. Der der raat tak jhagta tha, taki tum logon ko neend aa saktee. Yeh jo tum aaj aash ki zindagi jee rahe ho, yeh sab tumhare papa aur prem ki baudalat hai. Prem ' isse tum sautala kehta ho. Yaad hai tumhe , jab school main tumhara debate competition hua tha, aur tum apne lines bhool gaye tho, to audience main khade ho kar , kisne tumhe hausla diya aur tum debate competition jeet gaye.
Lalit goes towards prem ' prem beta, Prem is in silence, with his eyes filled with tears'.
In the mean while Preet walks up to Prem and Harman, and goes and tells Harman, bas bhai, aur nahin. Prem bhaiya humare bade bhai hain, I don't know whats wrong with you, jaise jaise bade hote jaa rahe ho , aapka sar ka screw dheela hote jaa raha hai.
Prem ' Preet.
Pret ' sorry bhai, but I cant tolerate this. Koi aapse kuch bhi bolta hai aur aap chup rehte ho. Kabhi to defend kariye apne aap ko.
Lalit reads the paper and goes and hugs prem. I'm sorry beta. He hands over the papers to gayatri who is stunned.
Prem has put the hotel in gayatris name!
Gayatri ' Prem'
Harman - bhai , ab to aap kush hain
Gayatri - Harman, maine bola na, ek aur shabd nahin. Tu janta bhi yeh isme kya likha hai.
Harman - Main kuch nahin janta. myujhe bas itna malum hai ki main bhi college khatam karke is hotel business main haath baantna chahta hoon
Gayatri ' tu jaana chahte hai, issme kya likha hai, dekh. Prem ne yeh hotel apne nahin mere naam kiya hai. Kush. baanto haath, kisne mana kiya hain. par harman beta, yeh law aur hotyel business kuch jama nahin. Figure out what you want to do in life...
Prem ' hotel business pe aana chahte ho, aayo, but Harman dammid, come as a legal advisor
Prem walks away from there and goes into his room.
Its night and hes looking at the moon and talking. Chand roshni deta hai par is chand main daag hai, theek mere ateet ke jaise.
Gayatri ' Prem and he looks at her teary eyed. Kitnee qurbani dega beta. Hamesha doosron ke liye sochta hai, kabhi to apne baarein main socho.
Prem - kyun, kyun ho raha hai yeh mere saath. Apni puree zindagi maine apne bhaiyon ke naam kar de. Airforce pilot nahin bana kyunki dad ka sahara chahiye tha. business doob raha tha aur paise bhi nahin the. college ke liye raat ko padta tha, din main office jaata tha, khud nahin soya taaki inhe neend aa jaye
Gayatri ' Prem, tu sautela nahin hai, apna hai, hamesha yeh yaad rakhna. Kabhi to apne future ke barein main sochon.
Prem - Sautela.... kya yeh shabd mera peecha nahin chodega kabhi. He falls on the knees and put his arms around gayatris waist. Gayatri puts her hand and on his head and says tu mera hausla hai. Tu janta hai prem tu apna hai.
Meanwhile , our darling preet gets very upset and thinks of making his brother tea so he dashes off to the kitchen and is looking around for paani..thinks paani kisme daalte hain... haan hai ke bartan main...Meher comes into the kitchen and preet requests her to help him make chai for his darling brother and jalebis too...

Haan Meher to paani dal diya phir.. chai patti right... he is about to put chai patti in the cold cold water when meher stops him...
Meher - ubal to do isse

Dai Jaan walks in humming jaanu meri jaan ..main teri qurban and begins in the kitchen a rock n roll session...

Suddenly , we hear bartans banging noise' and gayatri says shuru ho gayee hain phir se'
Suddenly there is a bang' and everyone runs to the kitchen'They are there and start laughing'
The kitchen is in mess and there is aata all over the floor. Preet is in the kitchen with maida all over his hair, meher is on the floor with oil dripping from her

Preet ' Dai Jaan'
Dai Jaan has ear phones plugged into her, is wearing goggles and is singing jaanu meeri jaan, main teri qurban, tu mera, main teri jaana jaana pura ambala'
Pret ' Dai Jaan ' Dekha aapne kya kitya..
Dai Jaan ' looking at preet in blank'and gesturing kya bol rahe ho.,,
Preet exasperated, takes out the goggles and the ear phones and shows her the mess she has created dai jaans face is left open'
Then she looks at meher ' haye re meri oputtar, tussi yeh oil kithe mila, preet puutar , dekh na becharee nu, ek dum lafanga hai tu, sharm varm cheex hai nu teri paas, ladki ke sar par tel gir dita, par itne akal nave ki ladki di maddat karein' aur kya maida gira dena tune, kaun safa kare wich isse'
Pret ' Dai Jaan you are too much' meri chai'
Dai Jaan ' Isse to Chai Kitha' waise yeh chai shai kiske liye bana raha hai tu, sonee de' kitnee pyareee sonee hai' (looking at meher)
Daljeet chichi comes humming and hawinh'hay re rabe' and faints'
Ash is cat walking, and comes towards the kitchen'preet darling I mean prem'mere preet, I mean prem' and everyone is looking at ash trying to gesture her not to come in'.
There is maida all over the floor and dripping from preets head' Ash is walking and Oscar stars growling and barking, Oscar is never tied at home

Preet ' nahin sonee ke liye nahin, prem bhaiya ke liye' ab isse saaph kaun karege'
Meher and preet look at dai jaan and smile nodding their head '
Dai Jaan ' Main'
Oscar in the mean while is running and ash hearing the dog barking immediately runs into the kitchen with her high heels, trips, slips and falls on her knees, she gets up with maida on her face, her hands covered in oil' and her hands in some bartans'their one bartan on her head' everyone seeing her plight start laughing'shoo shoo doggy she says'
Pret ' aree bhabhi ' isse doggy mat bolna..prem bhaiya sunege to hay ram, unka gusssa'
Dai Jaan ' haan re vaise is sarein commotion main prem kahan hai, kahan hai mera jaanu
Beeji ' phir tune use mera jaanu bula ditta, who to mera, pyara sa, sona sa, boy friend hai'.
Preet ' Par beeji aapka boyfriend aur dai jaan aapka jaanu hai kahan'
Ash is looking at Meher in disgust and goes away from there muttering to herself that she wont leave her'' she goes into her room, crying, looking at herself in the mirror'
Gayatris worriedness increases and she looks at the watch..its 4 am and there is no sign of prem. She tries calling him but the phone is not reachable'
Preet and Meher in the mean while are cleaning up the kitchen and preet is thinking of his childhood and wipes his tears' (He remembers as a child he used to love aam and his childhood friend meher used to go and get him some aam from the orchard chore see , he remembered clibing up the tree and how meher used to throw stones at the branmch so that he could get aam for him')
Meher in the mean while is thinking of how preet used tro come and bail her out of trouble, how he would hold her and swing her around, how she was the first one, he would come to and share his sorrows and happiness)
Preet and Meher then slowly look at each other '
Preet thinking to herself: mujhe aisa kyun lagta hai kabhi kabhi ki yeh rano hi meri meher hai
Meher is thiking to herself : Pata nahin main chachu ke paas jaa kar unse gale kyun nahin laga saktee, pata nahin main preet se kushi kushji mil kar baat nahin kar saktee'
They both turn and go, their eyes get locked in each other, meher moves away and preet wonders what has become of him'

Prem is in his room admist all this confusion. He gets a call on his cell and says kya , main aa raha hoon and he goes away. Gayatri sees him,she calls out to him and he doesnt listen.

Harman also recives a call and says i will be there.
Mean while, Heer enters the room and is shocked to see no one is there. She sees some powdery stuff on the table and picks it up. She enters prems cabin and is about to leave when the police see her and tell the manager ' whose that girl, we have come looking for her. The police then approach heer and tell her that she is arrested and has to come to the police station. A helpless heer says that she has not done anything but the manager will not listen. The police arrest her and just as they leave, prem's car reaches.
Prem reaches the hotel and is shocked to learn that the police have arrested heer. He asks the manager what happened and the manager narrates the incident to her. Prem blasts the manager for letting the police enter without a search warrant and he leaves for ambala police station where heer has been taken.
Heer is pleading with the police officer saying she has done nothing and knows nothing and the police officers are being lecherous and harassing her.
Prem enters the police station and demands to know under what pretext she has been put in jail. He goes to heer, who is trembling and is behind the bars, he takes his hand and slowly raises her head , looks into her eyes and tells her, mujhe pura barosa hai tum par. Main janta hoon ki tumne kuch nahin kiya aur main hi tumhain yahan se likaloonga.
Their eyes meet and are locked in a moment to be savoured for eternity.
Prem ties to call his lawyer but is not able to get through. He then calls up Harman wanting to speak to his boss and see if they can help him. Prem goes to the police officer and is shocked to see Harman there with his boss with whom he is interning. They want to press charges against heer and prem would have nothing of it.
Prem : I don't wabnt to press charges. I am taking these so called charges back.
Harman ' Bhai, you cant do this. She is a druggie and is tarnishing the name of the hotel. Aap isse bacchana chahte hain. Aapko aone naam aur hotel ki badnaami ki koi chinta nahin hai.
Prem ' Arte you with me in this or not Harman.
Harman ' Sorry bhai. I am not with you. My profession is far above this and my profession teaches be ki saath uska do jo sahi na ki jo galat hai aur aap galat hai bhai.
Prem doesn't heed to this and withdraws the charges put forth by his manager.
Harman is upset and his boss tells him to keep cool, saying they will handle this matter in a separate way.
Heer is released and Prem goes and put forth his hand to take heer. They both are rather silent and keep glancing at each other.
On a lonely road, the car tyres get punctured. Prem gets out to fix the puncture and heer helps him change it. Both looking at each other and prem gets hurt while removing the bolt. Heer immediately catches hold of his hand and puts his fingers in her mouth so as to stop bleeding. Prem continues looking at her when realizes what she is doing and immediateky holds back.
Prem smiles to himself. Tyre fixed, they both go home, prem walks in holding heers hands and everyonr in the family is shocked as they enter.
Just as they are at the door, In walks in Manmeet. He brushes past them in such a way that prem and heer have to let go of each other hands.

Heer walks ahead and looks behind and keeps on looking at each other. Just as she is about to step inside, Harman tells her to stop and says tumhare liye is ghar main koi jagah nahin hai.

Prem - harman.
Harman - kuch nap kuch nahin kahenge,. Aaj aapko malum hai aapne kara bhi kya hai. Is ladki ke saath dekar, aapne apne naaam shaurat ka dhyan nahin diya. Yahan tak ki aapne mujhe apne boss ke samne neecha dikha diya. Why Bhai.

Heer is about to leave when prem catches hold of her hand and tells her tum yahan se kahin nahin jayoge. Is ghar main, maine abhi tak kisse ko yeh haq nahjin diya, ki woh tumhe mere se, is ghar se door rakhe. aur harman tere har sawaal ka jawab mere paas hai.

Kyun bachaya main isse, kyunki main manta hoon ki yeh sach hai. main jaanta hoon ki isne kuch nahin kiya. to kya hua agar saboot iske kalaf the, kya main isskee aaknhon ki sachai se mooh modta. Dekh isse harmasn, kya tujhe sachchi lagta hai ki isne kuch kiya hai.

Harman - I think yu have gone mad. Mera career, uska kya bhai. This could have been my first case. first case that i would have been working on.

Prem - first case, haan harman but you know we would have been a great team together. Tum jaanne chahte ho ki maine isse kyun bachaya.

Jab main hotel pahuncha to...Flashback Mode:
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Prem enters his cabin and just then the phone rings. He picks up his phone and its a cross connection. Just as he is bout to say hello, he hears two men talking.

Man 1 - tumne woh cheez wahan kyun rakhee
Man 2 - to aur kya karta
Man 1 - aur kahin nahin rakh sakta
Man 2 - mujhe nahin malum tumhe itnee humdardee kyun hai us ladee ke saath
Man 1 - us ladkee ki to tm baat mat karo, par agar usse kuch ho jayega to mera saaara future plan naqayamab ho jayega
Man 2 - tum aur tumhare plans..
Man 1 - woh ladkee mere liye bahut zarooree hai... suno prem sir ko koi shaq nahin hua
Man 2 - nahin abhi nahin. aur woh din door nahin jab prem sir us ladkee se nafrat karenge
Man 1 - kya baat kar rahe ho
Man 2 - haaan, mere pass ek zabardast plan hai jisse, heer is hotel se hamesha ke liye phaikee jayegee
Man 1 - accha, uskee barein main abhi mat bolo, phone pe bolna risky hai... par idea accha tha... powder ke packets dal ke chod diye, taaki police ke lage drugs hai.... ha ha ha ha...
Everyone is shocked to hear this and wonder who could it be who is after heers life. Harman apologises to his prem bhaiya and then looks at heera and tells her ki hamesha sahi ka saath deta hoon aur jab aap sahi hai, to ab main aapka saath doonga. Main aapko yakeen dilate hoon ki aapke kilaf koi case nahin hoga.

Heer nods and is going towards her room in absolute silence. She is going and just then a chandelier is about to fall. prem sees the chadelier falling and scream heer.... he runs to her and pushes her away and the chandelier falls. Everyone is shocked and wonder how the chandelier has fallen.

Prem and heer in the mean time have locked their eyes in each others eyes in eternity.

Daljeet and her husband are slightly worried and think they must think of a plan to keep prem away from heer.
The next day the entire family is sitting together. Beeji is sitting and talking and remembering the good old days when her husbasnd use to get her ber from the nearby ber ka tree which incidentally was a 5 km walk from the house. It was a token of their love. ashlesha wanted to know if love marriage existed in that time ands beeji was saying yeh pyar shaar ka hota hai. un dino main to ghar wal raazi to kya karega kaai....

Passing reference is made to mitu and the tipic is changed to the children. The children are asked what kind of a guy/girl they will want to marry.
Ashlesha says, smart hona chahiye, music ka shookeen, disco shisko jaana chahiye, etc etc ek dum preet jaisa, harman sys main is barein main to socha hi nahin, par ek dum natkjhat honee chahiye, jisse dekh kar dil bole haan yeho hai woh, jo meri saath kadam pe kadam chale...

aur prem bhaiya, aapko kaisee ladkee chahiye... prem is lost in thoughts...
Lalit - aree prem kya bolega..usse to wohii ladki chahiye, jisse humne pasand kara hai iske liye...
Preet - eating an apple - lekin bhaiya boliye na...aapko kaisee ladki chahiye..
Prem - mujhe... kyun preet tu bata, tujhe kaisee ladkee chahiye.
Preet - bhaiya mere, pyar kiya nahin jaate ho jata hai.,.. havent you ever fallen in love . par aap kya bologe.
Prem - me no, pyar kya hota hai, but preet what about the rfias, the dias and the priyas
preet - meri chodiye, phaasi ka phanda aap par dalne jaa raha hai mujhpe nahin...aap batayee..aapko kaisee ladki se pyar hoga
Prem - yaar aisee ladki shayad is duniye main paida hi nahin hue hogee jo prem juneja ko sambhal sake ... (flashbacks of heer helping prem and saving him just as he is about to fall from a stool...) , jo prem ko pamper kar sake .. ( flashback of heer pampering lalit and then shaving prems face ) jisse juneja family ke log pasand kare... (flashback of lalit tand how much he likes her), jisse mere paise aur daulat ki parvah na ho..(flashback of heer refusing a car ride from prem or then refusing his money at a shop when she falls short of money) , Jisse Oscar pasand kare ( Flashbacks of Oscar licking heer!) and prem turning himself towards preet and walking backwards aise koi ladki paida hi nahi huee hai jissle prem aankh pe aankh daal kar keh sake ..... (heer is walking backwards too and colluides into prem and preet is waving his hand as if saying no...) I love you....prem and heer collide into each other ..

heer - excuse me
prem - I love you
heer - Aap pagal ho gaye hain
prem - I love you
heer - Not me
prem - but I love you

and they are locked in each other eyes for eternity. 😳 😳

Heer is flustered and flabbergasted and Prem is quite stunned with what he has just said. He smiles and Heer is super shocked and turns to leave. prem doesnt stop her, something which stuns heer further.

heer goes to the kitchen muttering to herself, kya samajatha hau apne aap, i love you to aisa keh raha tha jaise sach much mujhse pyar karta ho...

On the othwr hand, prem is smiling to himself wondering how did you manage to say the magival words ..

In the drawing room, everyone is shell shocked until preet bursts into laughter and makes a jokes of the whole thing..

Lalit is not convinced and gets very upset and goes into his room. Gayatri walks in and sees lalit in an upset mood, shakes her head and says prem bhi na, iska bachpana abhi bhi nahin gaya..

Lalit - aaj jo hua, woh phir se nahin hona chahiye
Gayatri - matlab
Lalit - tum jaanti ho, main kya keh raha hoon. Prem - usse heer ko i love you nahin bolna chahiye tha
Gayatri - to kya aap ne bhi uskee aankhon main wohee dekha hai
Lalit is quiet
gayatri continues... kab tak sachhai se muh moroge.
Lalit - main sacchai se nahin muh mor raha hoon..ujhe apna vaada pura karna hai
Gayatri - kaun sa vaada lalit , kaunkaun se vaade pure karoge
Lalit - tum kehna kya chahtee ho
Gayatri- turning to face chaliye mere saath and takes him towards a mirror
yeh jo aadmi aaj seeshe main hain, yeh woh nahin hai jisse maine shaadi ki thi
Lalit - keh keh rahee ho tum
gayatri - main jo keh rahee hon, usse aap ankahe maan rahe ho... kyun prem ki balidaani de rahe ho
lalut - main prem ka tyaag kar raha hoon, balidaan karraha hoon, main ane dost ko diya hua vaada pura karraha hoon...
Gayatri - kaun sa diost lalit ... kaun sa dost ...
woh dost jisse aap bees saal pehle yeh ambala main chod aaye the aur bees saalon main ek baar bhi nahin yaad kiya ya phir aap us dost ki baat kar rahe hai jisse aapne usske jaane se pehle k baar bhi yaad nahin kiya, kisse ne aap ko chitti sama di aur keh diya , ki heer ki shaadi kahin aur tey ki gayee hai, aur aapne prem ki shaadi ashlesha se kar di kyun ki aap yeh samajh baith gaye ki yeh aapki yaar ki nishaani hai... kya aapne ek baar bhi yeh jane ki koshish ki, ki heer kahan hai, uskee behen kahan hai? Kya aapne ek baar bhi prem ke dil main jhaankne ki koshish ki, ki prem kya chahta hai?nahin na... dost nibhane chale aap...

Gayatri then takes out a photo of balraj and teji and shows it to lalit, dekhiye aap isse. aaj to dekh lijiye aur yaad kariye woh pal jo aapne iske saath bitaye the.

Yaad kariye woh din, jo aapne is mitti main bitaye the

Yaad kariye lalit ji... yaad kariye...

Saying this, gayatri walks out and lalit is stern with a hard look on his face. He looks out of his window and remembers balraj and the moments he shared with him. He looked up to the sky, with tears in his eyes - was he really such a looser as his own family has made him out to be?

No one knew of the midnight walks to the shiv mandir where he would pour his heart out or then to the aam ka baag where he and balraj had spent most of is formative years.

No one but he knew that it was it was heer who in actuality heer and rano was actually meher... no one but he and saraswati kaki knew... but yet he was helpless as he couldnt tell this to any one... that he knew and no one more keen to make the prem - heer alliance happen more than him...but he had to be sure that the feelings were geniune from both sides and more than that he had to know of dj and balwants game plan.There are only a few hours to go for the wedding and he had his fingers crossed that his plan would work.

Heer on the other side is flabbergated. She cant believe that prem actually said i love to you her and that too a few hours before her wedding. Here she was caught in her own turmoil... on one hand she knew that prem really loved her and she too loved him. Here she was at the cross roads of life. kaisee boloon usse ki main bhi usse pyar kartee hoon, jab se hosh paya tha, tab se usse pyar kiya hai, par woh dard bhi kaise bhoolon. Main apne sachai ke barein main bhi to nahin bata saktee. kitnee koshish ki main usse bhool jayoon, ki woh mujhse nafrat kare, kitna dard diya usse, bas is liye ki woh apne zindagi jee le par woh muhe kitna pyar karta hai. kya isse pyar kekte hai?

Prem is in his room, and he has just torn every memory he has of heer..he locks away everything in a box and says ab mujhe usse bhoolne ki koshis karnee hogee. kal se main uske taraf dekh nahin payoonga. he tries going to sleep but cant and thinks of going for a long drive.

Heer on the other hand thinks that she needs fresh air and so decides to go to the aam ka baag, It was here, that her father had spent most of his years. She thinks of going there and meeting the peer ka baba too. It was a long time, since she went there.

Heer goes off and balraj catches hold of prem just as prem is leaving and tells him ki aaj mujhe tumhe aisee jagah le jaana hai, jahan tum kabhi nahin gaye the, aaj mujhe tumhe ek dastaan batana hai, dosti ka, pyar ka. Sunogo. Prem is speechless.

Lalit - prem main janta hoon aaj tumha dil main bahut sikhwah hai, bahut se sawaal hai, jinka jawaab mere paas bhi nahin hai par ek baar bas ek baar mere saath chalo.

Heer decides to go to the aam ka baag , after all this was the only place where she could be herself. Also, this was the only place where she had spent lots of childhood years in playing with prem,... siding with him, protecting him... it was also the same aam ka baag, where lalu chacu and her father balraj used to spent many evenings together having thandi thandi lassi...
On the other hand, lalu took prem to the aam ka baag. he wanted to bring prem here to make him feel what he was feeling. he knew he was wrong but he couldnt admit it. he wanted to tell prem how much prem meant to him and how much balraj meant to him.. most of all he wanted to tell prem of the promises he made to balraj... he knew he was wrong in not thinking of balraj...he wanted to go to this aam ka baag with prem so that prem could remember his childhood...
heer is alrady there at the baag, she puts her hand against the tree....and notices the mannat ka dhaga there... tears well up in her eyes and sher thinks of the moment where both she and prem wre playing and teji and gayatri had tied this mannat ka dhaaga as a promise to each other that come what way these children will never face difficukties in theur life and if something happened to one of them, then the other will take over the role of the mother for all the kids...
the aam ka baag was an emotional one for heer for both teji and balraj had gone there before setting off for ludhiana for some important work... heer is walking round and comes across a jhoola... she notices the jhoola and remembers that it was the same jhoola that prem had swung her as a child,.. she takes out the payals that prem had given to her as a child
Suddenly she hears footsteps and tries to hide self. In an attempt to hide hersekf, her payal breaks away and she leaves from there in a ruish.. and goes inside the hut nearby...
Lalit and prem come towards the swing...and prem sees the payal there. hes shocked and remembers that its the same payal he had given heer as a child...lalu is nearby and he glances upon a ginni he had given heer as a child... lallu is shocked and both prem and lalu say heer unanimously ... they look at each other and then look around... there is no one in sight... then they glance towards the hut ... prem looks up in exasperation....and goes towards the hut... both prem n lalu reach the hut and fling open the hut... there is total darkness and the furniture is creeing, there are lots of cobwebs too...
prem takes a match stick and lights a candle... with that candle he makes his way forward when a photo is about to fall... and there hear a scream baujiii...................... Shocked they look down, only to see heer flinging herself towards catching the photo of balraj.!!!
three months later
- Lalit has got to know the truth about meher and heer and prem has got to know it was all daljeets plan. lalit and prem are both fuming and at heers insistence has let her stay on...he doesnt let daljeet know that he knows though
- prem and heer still stay away from junejas .....
- preet and meher have fallen in love and no body knows of their love story.
- Kulraks husband kuldeep has got a promotion and there is a party at home to celebrate the occassion....
September 01, 2008.
the rays of the sun fall into the room and the first rays on a book shelf. The door opens and you see a man dressed in a white kurta pyjama.... A book falls and the man shakes his head. he goes to pick up the book and his eyes fall on a photograph, Its a photograpg he teasures for ever and its a photograph he holds very dear to his life. the man keeps on looing at the phtograph and tears well up in his eyes.
he feels someone put their hand on his shoulder. he loos back and up and sees his younger brother looking at him with mellow eyes...
Preet - aree tum, kan aaye.
Preet - jab aap is photograph ko dekh rahe the
prem - meher kaisee hai
preet - theek hai, par us sadme se bahar nahin aa pa rahee hai.. hamesha uskee paas jaati hai aur woh hai ki usse door hi bhaag rahee hain...
prem - woh sab se door bhaag rahee hai
preet - aap to theek hai na bhai
preem - haan bhi na bhi...
preet - matlab
- prem - kuch nahin, tum nahin samjhoge. meri life theek is kitaab ke paane ki tarah hai... khaali aur safed
preet - aur is kitab ke paane ko aapko bharna hai bhai.. you know bhai log kehte hai ki ek prem kahani ka ant ho gaya hai... par
prem - prem kahaniyan kabhi ant nahin hote.... koi kahani kabhi khatam nahin hota.. kisse bhi kahani ka ateet nahin hota...
preet - right ...kyun
prem - kyunki har ateet main ek kal chupa hai
preet = aur har kal, humhain ek naya saware dikhata hai
prem - shayad humare is kal main, ek naya saware chupa hai
preet - aisa sawera, jo humare zindagi roshni se bhar de, theek suraj ki kirano ki tarah...

Prem looking out ...aisee kiran jo kabhi na dhale ...

Preet - aapko malum hai bhaiya, mujhe meher ki baut fikar hai.. theek hai, yeh dikhane ki koshish kar rahee hai... apni hassi main, apna gum chupanee ki koshish kartee hai... hamesha, yeh kehtee rehtee hai ki didi hamesha ke liye chod kar chalee jayegii...
Prem - Heer nahin jayegi ab, woh mujhe chod kar nahin jaa saktee...
Preet - Heer ka sab kuch yaad dilane ki aapke is koshish main main aapke saath hoon....aur mujhe malum hai, ki muje kya karna chahiye
Saying this... preet walks out,..
Prem - yeh to chala gaya, main bhi jaa hoon,.. heer ka uthne ka waqt ho gaya hai
Prem first decides to get ready so he goes and wears a white shirt with blue trousers... a naughty smiles comes on him as he wears the button of his shirt all ulta putta and just takes his tie around the collar of his shirt without actually wearing it....
Prem goes into the kitchen... he takes out the chai ko bartan, puts water in the bartan and hunts around for chai patti... he comes across the newspaper and after finding the chai patti, starts reading it.... he gets so engrossed reading the paper that he totally forgets that he has put the water to boil... its only when the water evaporates and he thinks he smells something burning that he realizes his mistakes...
he takes a cloth and loses control, the bartan falls as he burns his hand...
Un deterred, he washes the bartan and puts the water to boil again, this time more carefully... he puts chai patti and let it boil along with water... hunts around for dal cheeni, tulsi, saunt powder and elaichi and adds that... once this boil, he puts this in a kettle. takes a channi, puts it separately along with the kettle in tray....realizes he has forgotten to keep the milk, so takes the milk and warms it up...
once its all ready, he takes the tray and takes it to heer...
Heer looks at him and his shocked, as prem walks in - actually barges in to the room with a tray of tea and biscuits, wearing
unbuttpned shirt and just a towel drapped around him,...his tie around the collar of his shirt and his trousers on one of his shoulder....
Prem places the tray on the bed side table, goes to get ready, come out wearing his trousers, shirt still unbottoned the wtong way and tie still over his collar . As he comes out and realizes that heer has prepared two cups of tea. Prem smiles... He is about to go out when heer calls out to him and says chai... chai nahin peeyogee.. prem smiles and stops and goes towards her...
He takes a sip of tea and heer tells him, chai acchi hai... abd thinks to herself aur tumhe malum hai yeh acchi kyun hai.. kyunki - issme pyar chupa hai, woh pyar jisme mera koi hak nahin hai...

Heer looks at Prem and goes tiwards him, he unbottons the shirt buttons and fixes it ... then she takes the tie and makes him wear it.... eyes all very downcast...

Downstauirs door bell rings... tring trings...
Daljeet opens the door.... haan ji..
Guy - main kehta hooon ji, is ghar ke safedi mujhe yeh kehtee hai , ki ki..
Daljeet - ki..
Guy - ki aako suerf excel ki zroorat.... bilkul nahin hai....
Daljee - theek farmaiya hai aapna ... ap ab patli gali pakdi aur liklo...
Guy - aree aissee kaisee nikaloon.. aapki maathe ki lakeerin yeh keh rahee hai ki, is ghar main cheh jawaan ladkiyan rehtee hai,
Daljeety - huh
guy - haan aap to jawaan hai ... btw kaisee hai aap, mehmaan aaya hai, aur aap andar aane ko nahin kehtee hain..
daljeet - areee kahan jaa rahe ho tum, as the guy barges in , thaking her...
Meanwhile, prem and heer hear some commotion doenstairs... heer and prem wonder whats it all about... come out and see daljeet breaking her head over a guy..
Preet , gayatri , Lalit are trying hard to cntrol their laughter, so are harman, beeji, daijaan, beeji, kulraj and veera...
the guy is playing a guitar singing allah ke bande and insusting that daljeet dance kathak to that song.. Balwant - aree nachle le, pata nahin kaun hai, agar tere nachne se yeh moosibat yahan se chala jaata hain to kyun nahin,
Daljeet - Moosibat, nahin yeh to toofan hai, shaitaan hai...
Balwant - is liye kehta vich...nach le
Daljeet - aisee kaisee naach loon. kyun naachoon, kahan main delicate si, miss universe... naachna mujhe atta nahin, logon ko naachna, mera kaam hai...
Guy - looking up... and taking daljeets hand and making her dance as he sings ... those were the best days of life... summer of 69... guy making daljeet dance a kathak dance .... as meher and heer look bewildered along with balwant and ashlesha and the others are trying their best to control their laughter as daljeet is dancing away,....with high heals, wearing dark glasses....
August 2008
While dancing, the guy suddenly maroes a thumpky to daljeet chachi with his waist against daljeet chachi's waist. Daljeet chachi is like hayee rabba...
Balwant is exasperated, after all, how dare a good looking guy maro a thumpki to his wife and too infront of him... he indigantly goes up to the guy and taps him on his shoulder..
Guy looking at him... uncle jii....aap idhar hai
Valwant looking at him
Guy - Kya
Balwant - kya ho rahe
Guy - kya kya ho raha
Balwant - yehi to main tumse pooch raha hoon , kya ho rahe hai
Guy - oh kya ho raha hai... uncle ji, mujhe pyaas lag rahee hai, ek paani ka glass mil jayega
Daljeet - paani ka , haan re putaar ...kyun nahin, abhi mil jayega.. aree rano, zara paani laana..kitne sona munda hai... kya dekh rahee hai , ja la
rano - ji chachi
Guy aree app rukhiye, telling rano and thern looking at daljeet - inhe laane deejiye na...
Daljeet - main
Guy - haan app...and then going and stretching himself on the sofa ..
Balwant - yeh namoona kaun hain.. isse andar kisne aane diya..
Guy - namoona kisko bola, you langoor... aap mere liye chai lekar aao..
Balwant - chai... ha ha
Guy - kyun ...aap ke ghar main mehmaan aaye hai, chalo chaiu lekar ayo..chalo..
Daljeet - telling balwant - main kehtee hoon, le aao... pata nahin shayad humaree kismet main, yehi ladka likha hai, isse rano ki shaadi karwa lenge... dekho kaisee mujhe nachaya tha... theek vaisee hi... yeh rano ko bhi nachvaya ga.. main kehtee hoon...shayad yehi woh farishta hai, jiska humko intezaar hai
Guy thinking - theek farmaya aapne daljeet chachi - farishta to main hoon, lekin aapke liye nahin, is ghar ke liye, prem ke liye, heer ke liye... aur mujhe apni dosti ki kasam... heer aur prem ko main eek saath layoonga aur saath main preet ko bhi yeh eksaas dila doonga ki uskee asli manzir meher hai.
Guy telling daljeet - aree sexii, paani to le aayo.. agar aap mere liye in mombaati jaisee mulayam haathon se meri liye paani layoge, to is ghar ki shobha aur badh jayegii.. aur saath main us budhe kuset ko bhi chai ke liye bol dena..
Daljeet - sexiii...haye rabba, kitna sona hai, sushil hai..ajji main leh rahee hoon, chalo paani late hain, chai laatein ho, mehmaan aaya hai, mehmaan bhagwaan ka roop hota hai..
Guy strecthing himself on the sofa as daljeet and balwant get him water and chai... takes a sip of chai and spits it out... yeh koi chai hotee hai..aunty ji... aap bhi banadijiye na mera liye chai... agar aap mere liye chai banayegeen to chai main mithaas ki zaroorat hi nahin hogee... daljeet goes and gets tea, guy gets up and purposefully bumps himself into balwant and the chai falls on the ground..
Guy - Haiiii Raam, Chai gira di...
Balwant - chai gira di... daljeet marble floor main chai gir gayee hai, stain par jayega...
Daljeet - ab isse saaf kaun karega... rano beta, jhaddo laana...
Giuy - telling rano and grabbing her hand...tum kahin jayogee.. tum idhar ruko.. telling daljeet - aap hi saakf kar deejiye na ... aur uncle ji.. mere pairon main bahut dard ho raha hai, daba deejiye na..
So the guy gives daljeet a broom stick and ensures she sweeps the floor while balwant is pressing his feet... fllor cleaned and daljeet is all sweay and tired... guy pointys to some more dirt and some dirt ad then gives her a cloth and makes her get soapy water to clean the floor further ...
In the midst of all this... ashlesha looks at preet and says yeh ladka kaun hau
preet - tum bas dekhtee jayo
ashleshA - par yeh kaun ..isne to mom se bahut kar diya, mazza aa gaya
preet - maaza to ab aayega, tum bas dekhtee jayo...
Ashlesha - accha - yeh jo bhi ho, yeh bada maazedar
preet - to isi ko pata lo..
ashlesha - putting her arms around preet - aree jaanu, isse pata loongee to shaadi thodee na kar payoongee tmse...
preet - kyun , kyunnahin
ashlesha - pyar jo kartee hoon tum se
preet - succhi...
ashlesha - koi shak..
preet - naah, takes an aaply, bites it and goes from there...
In the mean while prem looks at heer and says vaise agar tum hasna chaho to has saktee ho, it does not cost a thing a you know... shal main sudhar aa jayega.. looks at heer sgain, shakes his head, goes two steps downstairs , looks back only to see a faint smile on heers..comes back again, takes heers hand in such a way that they curl against his and goes downstairs, lets go of heers hand... as thry reach the bottom of the stairs ... takes a football, dribbles it against the soul of his feet... and throws it up in the air towards the guy, guy catches it , while hes sitting down and says gotta, gets up, dribbles it and throws it towards preet, who kicks it and it goes towards harman, who dodges with the ball and gives it to the guy, the guy kicks it towards harshad ... and so a football match ensues at home ... at the risk of the floor getting dirty and there being a lot of breakages.. finally the ball is thrwn in the air and goes in the direction of heer, prem shouts heer and heer catches it... everyone is relieved. Heer then throws the ball and it goes to the guy..... the gy cathes it and walks towards prem and heer, winks at prem, putrs his hand out towards heer and says Hi, I am Aman...and then says sorry, wrong person, goes towards prem and says kya re .. tere saath haath nahin
prem goes jhappi lagate hain....
Prem hugs Amar ... and telld heer , yeh hai amar...
Amar -looking at heer and saying - aand you must be ... never mind...
Heer - huh never mind
Amar - ya never mind... naam main kya hai...pehchaan hum baad main kar lengein... winking at prem again... and saying kyun prem
prem shaking his head...
Amar goes towards bauji and gayatri ... and says payee lago ji... ab main uth jayo,... kamar main dard ho raha hai...
Gayatri and bauji - laugh and say chal shaitaan
Amar to Gayatri - vaisee ma, thode garam garam aloo ke paranthe milenge , wohii safed makhan ke saath..bahut hakka hua aur aapke haathon ka khaana khayee hue saal ho gaye hain
Amar looking at daljeet and Balwant - and says aree ein main to main inke baarein main to main bhool hi gaya tha,... aree aunty ji uncle ji, main hoon amar... namaste... apka yeh jo preet hai na, inska collge ka buddy ..
daljeet - buddy
amar - han buddy matlab di dost, friend... mainu na saree log pyar se amar bol detein se... yaani gal karte hain..ajji apnee punjabi kaisee hai ji..
balwant - ek dum ghatiya
amar - accha, to aape se msin kis bhaasha main vartalap karoon, baat karoon, talk - angrezi, french, chinesem russia
daljeet - bas bas... tu humse hindi main baat kar accha... kitne sona hai tu...
Amar - haan ji mujhe maalum hai si... zara aap hamara ek aur kaam karenge..
Daljeet - bol na beta...
Amar - yeh samaan upar ,...
Daljeet - samaan .. looking at balwant upar rakhva do ji....
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Gaurav has a smile as he thinks of Aman. If it werent for Aman, then he probably wouldnt have come to know of rishabh rampals real intention. Aman was the reason for this change of look. A feeling of pride engulfs gaurav as his thought go back into time.
In Delhi before the blast happenned.
Edited by mistyeyed_25 - 16 years ago
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awesomeeeeeeeeeeee too gppd very ive part waitingggg eagerlyyyyyy for ext part.
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thank you... i will be building upon the story this weekend... from monday or may be before that prem will be at the junejas....😃
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Part 11;
In Delhi before the blasts happenned ...
At a Restaurant :
So, remarked Aman
Prem was humming and hawwing...
Aman - Kya Socha Hai.
Prem - Socha Hai, Raising his eyebrows. About What.
Aman smiled as he studied his friends face. In the last 15 years they had known each other, Aman thought he knew prem and that too closely. The thought of prem finally getting married made him very happy. He knew Prem was not his usual self ever since he took over the reins of the business and more he had observed about prem and heer together, the more he knew how heer was apt for me. They both really were made for each other.
What : Prem asked almost questioningly.
About the tender thats going to be filled.
prem takes a napkin and hits out atul.
Tender or future savings? Prem replied amost in retort.
Prem : you know prem, I know lalit uncle has really thought about his savings. All his life he was just ... just hell bent on building up whats he has lost and you just sacrificed everything. Left your dreams mid way to build an empire, you were in the deans list prem, and you were awarded a gold medal for exellence in music, science and business. You gave up everything - your hopes, dreams ... But Prem , really seriously and honesty, what about when you are gone. How are they going to survive.
Prem - you know atul, thats what worries me too. I stepped into the business when everything was lost. I still cant get over that fire and I still cant believe that, Mr Sohan Rai could have done something like that or then is no more.
Aman - Sohan Rai... Whatever became of his son.
Prem - I dont know. You know its strange, Sohan Rai was such a dedicated worked and yet his son was so strange. Once I stepped into the business, He left.
Aman - Probably got upset that you took over the reins
Prem - Aman.. looks at Aman and then says yeah, I think you are right. After All he was dads favourite too and was being groomed to be the future director of the company.
Aman- So kya socha hai.
Prem - But you know Aman the day when that that ghabla thing hapenned and the fire broke out where we lost everything...
Aman- yeah, I remember how you ran almost instantly from new york and left that music concert mid way
Prem - rite. but that day something changed. Some lives changed.
Aman looked at prem as if studying his face closely.
Prem - you know something it worries me about what they are going to do and how they are going to survive. Its Maa, really I am worried about .. All the properties are insured and there are properties that I have invested in all my life. There is the life insurance sceme too and yep the shares. Thankfully maa knows about it all. So I am sure there is going to be no problem...
But hey, i have to show you something ..remarks prem. Pulls out a huge plan ..
Prem and aman both pour their heads over a plan. This is going to be my gift to heer on our wedding. Its beautiful remarks Aman. The plan was of a land in a picturesque area. Here these are the photos of the land remarks Prem. Its in this area called billaspur in UP. Aman - ghosh is there anything like this around. I mean, Serously, Honestly Beautiful - Its Amazing.
The picture showed the land surrounded by hills on three sides and a lake on the fourth. Its actually in a valley said prem and the plan is of a weekend home.. There thats the outhouse, and here these are the swings and this is going to be a relaxation point.
Aman - My My there is a gym too. Aman laughed - it was sooo much like prem to plan on his wedding wedding.
A waiter comes and by mistakes drops water on the plans... What the says Aman, dekh nahin sakto hai kya.. Chod De Aman,remarks Prem. He gets up to go to the washroom to dry himself and just then he sees rishabh going somewhere. He walks by and tells Aman to wait by the car while he goes and gets a saree for his mother.
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oyeee...i expected more than a gr8 fan fic from you..... 😆😆

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