premeer one shot part two added

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Posted: 16 years ago
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hiya guys thought of doing a one shot of premeer so here it is

part 1

the sun was up and the birds were chirping, the trees were swaying and the two lovebirds were cuddled up with eachother. heer had her arm around prems waist and prem had his arm around heers waist.
she woke up to find the sun rays hitting her face and then she turned to her side and saw her husbands face hes was sleeping with a little smile on his face how cute she thought to her self she kissed his forehead and then his cute little nose he woke up sensing something against his skin and found his beautiful wife kissing him automatically his smile turned into a grin. he greeted her good morning she blushed and replied back good morning
they stayed cuddled up for a few minutes
whats the time? asked heer
7:00
oh i have to get up and get ready
she was about to get up but prem had tightened his grip round her so she can't move
prem please leave me
he kissed her forehead
prem please i have to have a shower and get ready
oh you have to have a shower na?
no don't even think about it!! warned heer by seeing the glint in prems eyes
don't even think about what? prem replied acting innocent
nothing now please let me go..please
ok ill let you go on one condition
what...she asked knowing his conditions in the past has brought her trouble
you have to give me a kiss
but i did i gave you two buy one get one free she replied while laughing
you did but now where iwanted you to
heer began to think
if you dont give me it then i wount let you go he made his grip arounnd her even more tighter
ok
she went close to so close that there was no gap betwen them an the she pressed her soft pink lips against his and then he responded back and the kiss turned into a passionate one with him having his hand on her waist and her putiing her hand on the back of his neck bringing him more closer
after a few minutes when they couldn't breathe they pulled apart
can i go now heer said blushing
ye you can go prem released his grip and heer ran away to the washroom leaving prem running his hand through his hair
part 2
heer was jus coming out the shower when she noticed prem was not in the bed or anywhere but then she felt someone pull her back by the waist and against the wall she opened her mouth to scream to only find her husband, prem
heer main hoon said prem
acha par prem thumne ne mujhe yaha kyun laya me tho shower kar ke ai hu said heer noticing she was in the bathroom
ha heer thumne tho shower kar de moving his hands from the waist to the her face par maine tho nahi ke hai na said prem with a glint of mischief in his eyes
prem mujhe chodo said heer as she knew what he was up to
prem wanted heer to have a shower with him
nahi chodunga kya karage heer
heer thought for a moment and then replied
thum jana chata ho ke ma kya karugi said heer while slowly bringing her face to prems
hah heer mujhe batao he brings his face forward thinking
ye karunge she stood on his foot which made him move back and ran downstairs to make tea
prem jus laughed and closed the door to have a shower
a few minutes later heer came up with the tea and saw prem only in his tracksuit trousers wih no shirt on she stared for a minute and then decided to do something
she wet up behind his back and hugged him (remember hes shirtless)
prem was suprised and quickly turned back to find his wife hugging him
heer thum kya karahi thi?
kya karah thi me tho bus apni pathi ke gala lagi she said while putting her hands around his neck
kyun nahii lag sakthi?
hah lag sakthi ho he said by sliding his hands on her waist and bringing her even more closer
she looked down and he brought her face upto his and looked at thos inviting lips and took those lips into his and heer responded to the kiss while playing with his hair slowly they came apart and heer became shy and looked down prem brought his hand to her chin and lifted her face up
ab thum kyun sharmarahi ho?
woh.. main ... prem chalo ja peetha hai
chalo
and bothe of them sat down and drank their tea thanking the person above for bringing them together
Hope you liked it please comment i have another part in my mind if i recieve comments then i will add that part aswell
Edited by miss_hyper - 16 years ago

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Posted: 16 years ago
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44 v iews and not even one reply 😭
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey
i just read now
one shot was awesum
soo cute romantic
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hi. i read ur one sot and it was fantastic. i m new so thats why i was feeling a little nervous to reply. and ur one shot as i say is simply GREAT.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Oooo..😆 I LOve It!
Please Add The Other Part!!!!!
-Priyanka xx 😃
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Posted: 16 years ago
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ill add the other part 2mrrw
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Posted: 16 years ago
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i loved premeer one shot it waz so cute romantic wud b waiting for da other shot
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hi,nic start......loved,hope u add more parts...bye
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hi,nic start......loved,hope u add more parts...bye
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hey!! loved the premeer one shot it was sooooo cute plz continue SOOON!!

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