FF When love finds a way PREM RETURNs UpDt..Pg44.. - Page 5

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Thanx D@niy@...............Glad u r liking my story…………….Hope u continue to enjoy the coming parts too……………Thanx once again…………..

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Alright everyone Prem has done his job for the week fabulously.................I loved each episode this week..................
Abb its my turn...............
Here's the next part...................Hope u all enjoy this one too..................
There in Ambala…………the next morning……….Heer was already up…………….and busy getting Preeti and Junior Ready for their first day at the play school………….along with Preet and Meher…………….

Meher is getting junior ready………….and while Preet ties up Preeti's shoelaces………..Heer does her hair…………….

Preet says smiling-- Abb lag rahi hai humaari beti apne dad kii princess…………….Preeti smiles back…………as Heer stood admiring he love and care Preet showered on his daughter……………..always mssing Prem knowing how much he would have loved to see his little bro being such a nice father…………..this was not the only thing………….where Heer missed Prem………….the list was endless………….and the grief in her heart immense………….still she kept smiling…………….at her destiny…………and cruel fate……………..

She then goes on to bringmilk for both of them…………..and while Preeti has breakfast at the dining table with the rest of the kids…………..Tanyaa, Paarth…………and Aman…………who all were already up for school…………..Junior continues to mess around the place……….with Meher and Heer closely after him………….ane with a glass of milk in her hand…………while the other with the shoe he was not wearing on one of his feet……………..and the lace of the other lay untied……………..

At last Heer catches hold of him……….and making him sit in her lap………….and while she made him drink the milk inspite of his potests…………Meher made him wear on the shoes…………….After which his new tantrums had begun……………

He says standing up……………with one hand on his hip he says-- Hum play school ke pehle din Heer taayijii ke saath hii jaayenge…………….

Meher smiles and replies-- Haan theek hai……….Lekin pehle aap taiyaar toh ho jaaiye………..

Meher combs his hair………….while Heer packed his bag………….both wondering if the same itenary was going to be followed everyday like this!?.................The thought jittered them………….kyunkii Junior was the naughtiest of the lot…………….(Arre yaar apne naam kii izzat bhi toh rakhni hai usse………….Like taujii…………like Junior……….samje?)………………..

With that all the kids get loaded in the car…………………….Paarth the eldest one…………..sitting in the front with the driver………….while Heer sitting at the back with the rest of them……………..

Like this Heer used to somehow manage to survive the day………….the kids…………..Prem's parents………..the business meetings………….but it were the nights which were tough for her to pass………….it was then that she felt alone………….lonely…………..and found refuge…………..in the memories of the beautiful time she had spent with Prem…………remembering those moments………….

Heer sat by the window to look outside at the orange sky………………….The sun was seting………………there in London it was already night………………..All the NRI's of the city were preparing for the big night…………….There was activity everywhere…………as the well known of the city were getting ready to be part of the big evening…………….

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Posted: 16 years ago
#43
awesum super update
loved it
can't wait for the next update

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Posted: 16 years ago
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First one to reply..................Kya baat hai pooji..................Glad u liked this one too dear..................Next part asap...................
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Posted: 16 years ago
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awesomeeeeeeee too good very nice part waitinggggggg for ext asap.
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Posted: 16 years ago
#46
awesome!!!!aww feel so bad for heer
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hi
its aweome
awwww junior is too cute
wat r all NRIs preapring for??
great updt
continue soon
Amana
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey dear....
nice FF....like this story a lot,.....but i have a suggestion......
pls let Preeti & Junior call Heer & Prem as uncle aunty......
coz when ever i read tauji & tayiji, an image of an aged couple comes to my mind....and i cant see Heer & Prem as oldies all of a sudden.....pls dont be offended....but i cant help it......kuch karo yaar!!!
thanks in advance!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Thanx to all of u..............
Glad u all like the FF.............
Here's the next part.............
Hope u all like this one too..............
Heer sat by the window to look outside at the orange sky………………….The sun was seting………………there in London it was already night………………..All the NRI's of the city were preparing for the big night…………….There was activity everywhere…………as the well known of the city were getting ready to be part of the big evening…………….

Prem was getting ready…………..it was a big day for the whole city……………and not only him……………….the ocassion being the city's richest businessman's engagement with his business partner………………

The people believed they were made for each other…………….Prem………….and his would be life partner…………..not aware that he was someone else's love………..someone else's life………….

There Ranbeer (alright this role will be played by Ranveer of the show Ranveer Rano………..u all must be knwing him………….He's really cute………..anyways imagine him as Ranbeer alright?....................) enters Prem's room………….He had known him for two long years by then…………….Ranbeer was excited………….but today he was surprised…………………as he saw no excitement…………..no happiness in his friend's eyes as he stood getting ready in front of the mirror…………….

There was no sparkle…………..no joy…………no happiness……….Why? Ranbeer thought……………

He walks towards him and puts his hand on his shoulder and asks-- Abhi tak tayaar nahiin hua Prem?...............

Prem turns around and smiles………….both of them were dressed in black formal suits………….and looken handsome in their own right………….Prem replies back-- Bas ho gaya………….

Ranbeer then asks-- Vo toh itni excited hai kii khud hii tujhe upar lene aa rahi thi…………..Mainne roka………….Prem………….(he continues his smile suddenly vanising)………….Tu khush toh hai naa?...................

Prem replies as a matter of factly-- Yahaan sawaal mere khush honey yaa naa honey kaa nahiin hai……………….vo khush hai…………mere liye yehi kaafi hai……………..kyunkii yeh zindagi ussi kii dii hui hai……………….toh iss par hak bhi ussi kaa banta hai…………..mera kya hai?.................(he says grimly)………….Kuch bhi toh nahiin…………..main usska karzdaar hoon……………….isliye vo mujhse shaadi karna chahti hai…………….Yeh wajah mere liye kaafi hai raazi hone ke liye………………..

He continues-- Vo mujhe apna jeevan saathi banaana chahti hai……………Yeh wajah kaafi hai mere liye usske saath apni baaki kii zindagi bitaane kaa waada karne ke liye……………..Vo mujhse pyaar karti hai…………aur kya chahiye…………vo mujhe chahti hai………..aur kya expect karta hoon main?....................

Ranbeer seems to have had enough of it……………..till date he had thought Prem too loved her……………just like she did……………..and today when he stood finding himself terribly wrong………………….incorrect………….Ranveer fell offguard………………he knew it was wrong…………wrong on Prem's part to get maried to someone he did not love at all…………..

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Posted: 16 years ago
#50
nice update as always
wonder what will happen next

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