FF:One Lie-UpdtPt32(pg60)Fear of Losing the child - Page 39

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Posted: 16 years ago
Thank youuuuuu lol
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: .xganga.x

Hey!

Loved the update!
Preet annoying Heer at the start, and then Prem being so caring at the end not wanting to watch Heer go through any of the downsides of the pregnancy,,,
Can't wait till the next update!
xXx
Sunayna
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Heyy lolll..
thank youuuu!
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: prempadmasujal

mein teri ff ko deewani hogayi.i cant wait so longgggg plz update yaar that very big one plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

Okaiii lol....
thank youuuuu!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!<3<3
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: sadizzle

aww!

preet and meher's date - so cute! - can't wait to see what happens there!
omg and is heer having major mood swings or what?!?! - thats crazy! lol
great update
plz do continue soon!
-Sadi*

Heyyy lolllllllllll.....
Thank youuu!
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Posted: 16 years ago

Oh my GOd. I am so sorry you guys for being so late but sadly my lap top has apparently recieved a virus from someone and I need to fix it😕 However, my computer is here so i will update my FF. 😃Though i have lost some of my work...which is kind of sad😆... okay so the update for today...

Part 31
"I like this booth Preet...its really...romantic" Meher said shyly as she fiddled with the fork and created imaginary circles on her plate. The booth astonished her as it was so vibrant and radiant; it was as if the booth had been created for the two of them to enjoy the time before their wedding. Preet looked at Meher while resting his palm on his right cheek; he had a goofy, yet alluring look in his eyes as he sighed everytime she said a letter, or even breathed. Meher was a bit nervous as he kept staring at her and tried to look at him through the corner of her eye to make him stop staring. The waiter came and asked for their order...
"So, what will it be today sir", the waiter asked with a frustrated tone as he seemed a bit tired from working all day at the resturant. His shoulders were broad and slouceh and he had a hump on his back.
"Umm, I would like to have chinese fried rice with a side of chilli chicken please" Meher said as she skimmed through the menu looking for something she might have missed
"I want Meher and Meher only..." Preet replied unknowningly as he had been lost in the thoughts of Meher and was unaware of his surroundings. Suddenly, A bang underneath the table, an ouch from Preet and a hesitant yet cunning smile from Meher. Yes she kicked him. The waiter raised an eye brow to a lovingly, yet odd couple as he asked once more.
"Ill have whatever..."
"The maam will have?" the waiter interuppted Preet as he knew where this was going.."Arghh..younsters" he left with an angry look at which Preet and Meher smiled at
After eating, Meher and Preet decided to walk home instead of driving. It was cold and so Meher hugged herself with her arms wrapped around her chest and she shuddered a bit. Preet noticed and tried to take off his coat and wrapped it around her. Even though it looked a little odd with the sari, Preet was happy that meher was wearing it.
"Preet, do you know what I want after marriage?" intrigued Meher
"Me hopefully" Preet mumbled under his breath but truly said.."hmm, whatever you want... Ill get it for you Meher"
"I really want a dog, or a puppy" she said as she huddled herself in Preet's arms and rested her shoulder on his. Preet, due to be so lost in her thoughts as she was so close to him, heard something else. Somthing like "Preet darling, I want you and you and you. Thats it" Now it was obvious that Meher hadnt said that but Preet was unwilling to believe. So eventually he replied..."main hoon na"
"What..you?..you are a dog? you want a dog? or you will buy me a dog?"
"Huh?"
"I said i want a dog"
"Oh...i probably heard something else...umm..*cough* yeah i...uh...i uh..i..i love dogs..they are so cute with their..*gulp*..nasty i mean cute tails..and sh..sharp ..i mean clean teeth", Preet replied with hesitation. Preet had always been scared of dogs since childhood. He never liked the way the were and their nature of biting people.
"Oh look, there is a puppy awwww" Meher said as she pointed up front. Preet's eyse widened at the sight of seeing a puppy in front of him. It wasnt a puppy, it was an animal, an indecent animal. He stuck his nose at the sight of the back but returned to his polite expression as soon as he saw Meher look at him.
"Lets go see it"
"No Meher, the dog will be busy now na?"
"Umm Preet..its a dog..not busy"
"Bu..But its night. Its not..not good to wake it up. Not good at all"
Meher had to practically drag Preet there and for some reason, he seemed a bit heavier. He was trying to loosen himself from Meher's grip and his neck was turned the other way indigust with his eyes closed. He really really didnt want to see the dog. AT ALL.
"Aww...what your name..sweety" Meher spoke to the dog as she nuggied his hair and tickled under his neck.
"Haha, usse kia pata, its a dog Meher, you are too funny sometimes Meher" The dog barked at Preet's reply at which his smile vanished and his face was overcome by a more scared look. He jumped back as Meher laughed and said "Sorry kuttai, i mean dog, i mean..uh..sweety"
The dog barked at him again, this time louder, and the dog jumped towards Preet causing him to move back. The dog barked once more and started to run towards Preet. Preet ran..ran like he has never ran before feeling the cold wind slap his face as he whipped through it. All he could scream was Meher. Meher started to go behing the two 'animals' but was not able to find Preet anywhere. Soon after she stopped under a tree...
"Psst..Psst..Meher."
"Preet" she screamed "Preet neeche aao"
"Shh.. SHH..Meher, the dog will come again" Preet replied as he hugged the tree brach all the way at the top. Due to not being able to find a good hiding spot, he climed the tree.
"Preet, shut up and come down this instant"
"Okay, but promise me youll keep away from that kuttai ka ba.."
Again interrupted, "Preet..shut up just come down"
As he was climbing back down he said "Kash..I wish i was that dog. Atleast you were nice to him"
"Oh my God Preet...you are too much" Meher said as she crossed her arms on her chest and laughed at the silly event occuring that night.
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It was a beautiful day like any other with the clear blue sky and the nice cool breeze swept the town of Mumbai and woke everyone up. The sun was bright and radiant and was shining its rays towards every house.
Prem woke early that day. He woke up and sat on the bed, closed his eyes, and stretched his arms up while yawning. As he yawned he turned his neck to his right and saw Heer sleeping peacefully and calmly. He layed beside her and carefully stroked the strands of hair away from her face. He touched Heer's lips which had a faint smile to which she fidgited. He looked at her slender body lying on the bed and remembered those vivid memories that were shared between the two of them that brought them at this point in life, with a baby to come. He noticed her hand which was gently placed on her stomach. He took her hand in his and removed it gently placing it aside. He then kept his hand on her stomach trying to feel the life that existed within her. After tremendous efforts, he brought his left ear closer to the stomach to hear his symbol, his baby. He smiled...
Heer suddenly woke up and realized what Prem was trying to see...
"Prem, kia ho raha hai"
Prem suddenly sat down properly and looked down in embarrassement. He hastily replied.."kuch nahi..uh how are you today"
"Prem, be quiet...tell me what you were doing"
Prem brought Heer into his arms as he gently dragged her Heer sat with her back facing to Prem, but touching his firm chest from the back of her head. He wrapped his hands around Heer's stomach and said...
"You women are so lucky, you actually get to feel the baby before its born whereas, i have to wait..wait for another 6 months till the baby is born..."
Heer gave Prem a tender look as she touched his face with the palm of her hand...
So thats it for today guys. hope you enjoyed it...Please read and comment. I love you all. Next update Monday..😃😳😳
Farwa
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Posted: 16 years ago
awesomeeeeeeeeee too good very nice part waitingggggggg for next asap.
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Posted: 16 years ago
hey thats a really cute update!!!!👏
preet and the dog incident is very funny😆.
the sweet moment between prem and heer👏.
great can wait till the next update...
~nikki
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Posted: 16 years ago
hey
awesum beautiful update
loved premeer scene
sooooo cute sweeeet
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Posted: 16 years ago
omg wonderful update
and i can feel preet 100% about that dog issue! 😆
dogs & me don't mix well either!
Prem is so adorable..he just says that most sweet stuff ever..about how women are lucky and how he has to wait to feel for the child for another 6months! -i was like 'awww!!' when i read it!
ur such a great writter! and very creative!
so can't wait until monday..
plz continue with your amazing updates!
Thanx
-Sadi*
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Posted: 16 years ago
prem n preet r so cute...
preet part was so funny...
nice updt....
Edited by sonu0511 - 16 years ago

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