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Posted: 16 years ago
Part 30
As the sun settled behind the sturdy mountains, there
were towering groves of trees, creek beds lined with wildflowers emitting delightful fragrances, and sunsets that astound. Along side its banks Heer heard a familiar sound, as the bullfrogs' bellows lead the way for nightfall. The night brought in the cool country air, and with it the thick aroma of the wood-burning stoves through the windows. The birds chirped as the crows sang songs to lead the way for all the birds to go to their nests for rest.

As Heer stood near the window, the nature evolving around her graced her eyes making her feel a little homesick. She had felt giddy earlier due to her pregnancy and now she was feeling something unravel and ravel in her stomach. Nature was such a wonderful thing, as so she thought, how a mother feels so sick but yet is so willing to have a child that can be a symbol of the bond shared between the parents. Suddenly, there was a knock on the door which startled Heer as she was soaking in the beauty of nature in her heart. She wanted to rush and open the door but as soon as she got up, she realized as if there was something preventing her from doing so. Anyhow, she walked up cautiously towards the door and reached for the lock to open it. Upon opening the door, a body fell at her feet which caused her to jump back and let out a shriek. She let out a sigh when she realized it was none other than Preet.

"Preet, what is wrong with you?" She said as she crouched down to make him sit properly on the floor, "You scared me Preet..and where is Prem?"

"Bhabhi, Bhabhi, Itni deewani? "

"Huh? Preet just shut up, and tell me why you are here" She roared

"What do you mean why? Its my house, I can walk around here, there, in your washroom" He joked

"In my washroom? The one which is mine and Prem's and that Prem will get so infuriated if he find out you said that..that one right?" She let out a tone of sarcasm and upon hearing those words, Preet fell to her feet again

"Please bhabhi, no don't tell PB, he will get so mad, meri to band baj jaye gi bhabhi"

Heer laughed as she saw Preet's face change. It was so amusing to annoy him. She loved doing so.

"Anyhow bhabhi, tonight, I am taking Meher out on a date. So can you tell me what she likes?"

"Not you" She smirked as she walked away

"Bhabhi, your anger is understandable at this point. I mean you are mad because soon you'll be getting quite large..all women get mad upon hearing the word fat" Preet teased

"Preet, just shut up ..please shut up..Meher likes oriental foods a lot. Go annoy her but PLEASE leave me alone" She pleaded for him to leave the room as she couldn't handle the things being said to her..

"Thank you Bhabhi." He said as he walked out of the room, "Oh and by the way, I will still love you as my bhabhi even if you do get fat" Preet rushed in to say that, suddenly laughed, and ran out for his room leaving Heer sitting on the bed angrily

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Meher began the evening ritual as she sat at her vanity, combing each section of her long brown locks and staring into her reflection. She reminded herself of how Preet's eyes sparkle upon seeing her face. She recreated the shimmer in her brown eyes by recalling a humorous event which took place two days ago, Saawariya. She snapped back to reality and realized that she had to go for her date. She practiced her most infectious grin which amuzes her as she feels stupid for being so cautious in what she does at the date. Suprised that that didnt work (although it has never worked before) she eagerly reached under her mattress for the photograph that began the second step of what eased her into a soundslumber. She got back from the mattress and began to search for cloths to wear for today.

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"Heer"

Heer was facing out the window admiring the beauty of nature once again. She hadn't known why but she felt an attraction towards it. Her hair fell on her left shoulders as she caressed each and every strand with care. Her eyes were dazing at the twilight skies that had just appeared post sun set. The sky was seamless except for one star which sparkled tremendously. The star looked as if it were smiling at Heer who was still dazing at the skies examining every part that could be seen through the window. As Prem called her name from the back, Heer snapped back to reality and rapidly turned her head around to face him causing her hair to fly from her left shoulder to her face and then to her right shoulder.

"Sorry, tum?"

"Haan, obviously its me Heer, who else could come in at this time" Prem replied as he settled on the bed and took his shoes off

Heer giggled and replied "Sorry Prem..I was just preoccupied. What's in your bag?"

Prem gave Heer an unusual look as he gestured her to come and sit beside her on the bed. Heer confusingly, walked towards the bed cautiously and then took her place on the bed. She squeezed the cold hardwood on the bed and her body rocked as she looked away from Prem. She didn't know what to say or to do as he was behaving quote strangely with her. Prem was dazing at Heer with a tender look but she had her face the other way to notice. After a while, she felt a little awkward and stood up. She stood as her hands crossed on her chest and her foot tapped gently. Prem looked up surprisingly and realized that Heer didn't understand what he was trying to say..

"Heer, what happened?"

"Nothing" She replied irritably, "I just asked you what is in the bag and you didn't reply so I thought why bother"

Prem put his hands on Heer's shoulder and gently squeezed them. She helped her turn around and made her look into his eyes.

"Heer..Heer..Heer. you get mad so quickly" Prem then turned around and grabbed the bag. He opened it and took out two cone shaped things. Heer raised an eyebrow and wondered what it was

"What is that Prem?"

Prem turned around with a naughty look and a naughty smile. He was amuzed at how Heer can get so mad at such a small thing.

"Mamma said that woman at this time crave things so I felt that you might want some ice cream and I went and got it for you"

"Awww, really Prem?" She rushed towards him, closed her eyes, and tightly hugged him; her head resting on his chest. Prem 's elbows were up and his palms were holding the two ice creams. He was a little confused but was happy inside as Heer was so adorable. Both of them unraveled that paper off the ice cream and settled to devour it near the window watching the scenery outside.

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Preet opened the door to let Meher inside his car. As he closed the door, Meher noticed a goofy smile on his face while he was coming to sit on the driver's seat. It was so silly it made even Meher laugh. Preet wondered why she was laughing but was too excited about his first date to question anything..he was just letting the moment flow

"chale?" Meher asked with a smile, her eyes still teary from laughing so hard

"Yes, as soon as I start this car" Preet said nervously

"Umm, maybe if you put the keys inside, it will start working" Meher suggested

Preet cleared his throat and replied "Oh right" He gave a nervous smile

The car finally started and they were on their way to the restaurant. Preet wanted to impress Meher, and so he tried to put on a song but was too nervous to get it right. He wanted to play a romantic song to spice up the surrounding but accidentally played Josh.

"Sorry, galti ho gayi" Preet's expressions were hysterical and Meher was enjoying every moment of this cute sensitive guy. Finally, Bakhuda started on the CD played and he took a sigh of relief. Then he stopped the car and rushed to the passenger's seat to get Meher to come out. He opened the door and Meher stepped out in an aqua green sari embedded with sequins of silver color. They stepped into the oriental restaurant and were seated in a booth made in a shape of heart. The lights were dimmed inside of it and the table stated Reserved Meet.

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Gayatri came into Heer and Prem's room and found the two enjoying their ice cream. She smiled and then sat with them.

"Prem, I want a son from the both of you"

"No mamma, I want a daughter.." Prem replied as he licked his ice cream

"Son!"

"Daughter"

"HEER", both of them asked Heer who just shyly looked down and said

"I..I.." Suddenly, something at the back of her throat bothered her. She felt a little sick and a little heavy. She brought her hands on her torso and squinted her eyes. Prem noticed something wasn't right

"Heer. Heer are you okay?"

Heer suddenly got up rushed to the washroom. She vomited. Prem quickly got up to rush to see what was wrong with her. His smile, his joy everything faded as he saw his jaan in trouble. Gayatri held on his wrist preventing him from leaving and sat him back down near the window..

"Prem, she is pregnant..this will happen often"

"But she..she looks as if" he hesitated to finish the sentence.."She is vomiting mamma"

"Yes Prem.. Its cause she is pregnant. This will happen for another 2 months or so"

Prem clutched the sheet under him and closed his eyes. His tongue got caught in his throat and he couldn't say anything. He wanted the child, the symbol of his love, but he couldn't see her like this.

"Mamma..isnt there any way to stop it"

"Prem you are acting like a child..its not a bad thing. Its normal"

"I know but"

Prem's eyes saddened…

So here it is guys. Keep reading and commenting. Ill make shure the engagement and date takes place on fridayy so you guys can get a little more of Meet. Anyhow, i hope you enjoy the update..Have funn..Next update..Friday:)
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Posted: 16 years ago
awesomeeeeee too good very nice part waitingggggg for next asap.
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Posted: 16 years ago
Hey Farwa awesome!!! awesome !!!! awesome update loved each and every single part of it.... and prem is shoooo shweeet he bought ice cream !!!! ... loved preets nervouness... loved the way prem was all worried about heer and then finally gaythri explained to him!!! ... hmm plz continue sooon want to know what will happen to meet' date plz continue soon!!!!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: Iqra238

Hey Farwa awesome!!! awesome !!!! awesome update loved each and every single part of it.... and prem is shoooo shweeet he bought ice cream !!!! ... loved preets nervouness... loved the way prem was all worried about heer and then finally gaythri explained to him!!! ... hmm plz continue sooon want to know what will happen to meet' date plz continue soon!!!!!!

Thanks so much..
i will continue soon..I promise..
but on fridayy..LOL THanks for ur commetns Iqra
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Originally posted by: sweta2005

awesomeeeeee too good very nice part waitingggggg for next asap.

Thanks so muchh hun
Glad you liked it
Will update Fridayy for shure<3
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Posted: 16 years ago
awesome update farwa... awww our Prem's so sweet he brought ice cream for the craving mother...the meet scenes were too funny... so mr. Preet all nervous nervous... and our Prem is so concerned abt Heer... just loved the way he asked his mom if there's any way to stop her throwing up....will be waiting for the next update.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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loved premeer ice cream scene
prem can't see his heer in pain soo sweet
loved it👏👏
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Posted: 16 years ago
hi farwa, loved each and every part of the update& also loved premeer ice cream scene.
thanks for the pm.
tc.
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Posted: 16 years ago
Hey!
Loved the update!
Preet annoying Heer at the start, and then Prem being so caring at the end not wanting to watch Heer go through any of the downsides of the pregnancy,,,
Can't wait till the next update!
xXx
Sunayna
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Posted: 16 years ago
mein teri ff ko deewani hogayi.i cant wait so longgggg plz update yaar that very big one plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

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