FF:One Lie-UpdtPt32(pg60)Fear of Losing the child - Page 13

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Posted: 16 years ago
omg!!!!!!!! fantastic update!!!!!!!!!👏 omg prem-heer scene was soooo cute and romantic!☺️ phew! DJ isnt evil! wow...she's gonna help them?! yaay....lolz pati prameshwar!!!😆😆 lolz preet is sooo funny! he was singing songs to meher...lolz they make such a cute couple! awesome update!👏👏👏 hope you continue soon!
Edited by sonali09 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago

OMG awesome update loved the prem and heer scenes but what really makes me laugh is DJ being nice🤣

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Posted: 16 years ago

Heyy you guyys.. okai so i updated my FF. Please read all the descriptions (of the morning, and of the houses) or else you wont understand what is happening...

LOVE FARWA

AND OH Yea

Please comment!!

Part 19
It was a crisp autumn afternoon on the streets of Ludhiana as the sun's vibrant rays shone on the city's landmarks and other places. The vast mountains were now lit with the sun's radiance and the green grass was fluorescent under the sun's reflection. The scent of the flowers illuminated the city's vast areas and brought warmth in the season. Stall workers yelled for people to come and buy their foods, clothing, and toys. Lalit and family traveled to Heer's maternal home in a Punjabi Bus.

Everyone in the house was busy either chattering or planning the afternoon's meal. Meher was still overwhelmed by the card that had been given to her by Preet. She still couldn't believe that someone as childish as Preet can be so sensitive and caring. His love had overcome all the other feelings and maybe she was falling for him too. Just maybe'

A knock on the door stunned everyone as they were not expecting any guest today because they already had Prem and Preet. Usually, in Ludhiana, doors of houses were open to anyone to come in as everyone mingled and remained as close as family. However, because Prem, Heer, and Preet were in Teji's house, she decided not to invite others as they might feel uncomfortable and the word of Prem and Preet staying at their house would spread'After all, they were Junejas'. Anyway, Heer went to open the door and was shaken to see the Juneja Parivaar standing in front of her. She didn't have any other choice but to invite them in'

"Gayatri Aunty'come in. Why are you standing outside?", asked a stunned Heer "Ill call Maa and Dadaji"

They stepped in the house but Meher stopped them. Once again, she welcomed them the 'Punjabi' way.

"Heer beta, I thought you were only going to stay at your mother's place, why are my sons here as well?" wondered Gayatri as she gazed at her sons who eventually looked down embarrassed

"Umm mamma, the car broke down so we decided to stay here" replied Preet

"You could've called na?"

"Yes, sure, anyways now you guys are here. We need to show you Ludhiana. You need to see this beauty of this place. Mamma I think we should move here. Its so beautiful mamma wonderful", said a nervous Preet as he tried to divert the attention from him and his brother.

Teji and Daljeet came with appetizers and refreshments to ..well.. refresh their newly arrived guests. They all sat in the living room and chatted with one another and Teji told Heer to go to the kitchen to make coffee. Heer was too afraid to get up and walk towards the kitchen as she didn't want Gayatri aunty to say anything that would show that Heer had lied in Mumbai. That would also embarrass Heer's family'and the pride of her family was something she wasn't willing to let go. Not for anyone'

Prem winked at her and assured her that he would take care of everything if anything was said against them. By this, Heer quickly went inside to make coffee and quickly came back out. By the time she had come out, Meher had left for her room upstairs.

"Kia hua maa?", asked a concerned Heer

"Nothing beta, Gayatri ji just asked us for our daughter's hand", said Daljeet chachi happily

"What, whose hand?",

"Meher's ofcourse", Teji said as she smiled at the thought of the proposal

"Itni jaldi?"

"Haan, Preet had already spoken to Gayatri ji about him liking Meher and that's why they had come",

"But mamma, I didn't want you to bring the proposal now. I want meher to like me just as much as I like her'I think this is too fast", replied a concerned Preet

"Don't worry beta, no one will force Meher into a relationship with you. She'll come through for it herself. We just came to see the girl and mingle with the Maan's" Replied Gayatri

"Right, and also, we have heard Punjabi's make the best food in the world" Lalit said as he picked up one of the sweets from the tray at which everyone laughed.

As the sun settled behind the mountains taking its radiance with it, the nightfall had spread throughout Ludhiana. Everyone at Heer's house was getting ready to sleep'the Maans', the Junejas' and Daljeet.

Prem went up to Heer and gave her a piece of paper. He asked her to come to this place just after 9:30 PM to which Heer hesitated but eventually agreed.

Heer wore a black seamless, chiffon sari with silver sequins. Her hair was let out and her face had a different glow. Her eyes seemed glittery as always and her skin, too flawless to be true. With that style, Heer left the house at 9:30 PM as per Prem's 'orders. She arrived at an old deserted house with vines and such climbing it'she wondered why Prem had called her to this ratty old place when he could've take her out for a romantic dinner. Anyways she moved towards the house pushing the heavy gates open the touch of the iron bars, as cold as ice, seized up her hands completely. Even though she could feel the unevenness of the old cobbled path beneath her, they were smooth in contrast to the crunching of the odd dead leaf that she stepped on. Carrying on up the path the grass carried on forever into the horizon, a dull dark grey colour as if it had lost the will to live and stopped growing altogether.

One lonesome Oak tree stood by the house swaying in the wind and as the wind swept by the tree whispered to the air and its surroundings. The moon shone bright white, in the cloudless sky, it was the only source of light that could be seen for miles. Owls occasionally fluttered by overhead, their silhouettes passing over the grass. The air was cold and numb and with every breath she drew a misty, chilly exhale followed

As the house drew nearer everything around her became quieter and more distant. The trees murmuring couldn't be heard anymore and the cold iron gates were far from sight. She slowly entered the old 'haunted' house carefully watching her step and calling out for Prem. A shadow came out from around the corner startling Heer and causing her to scream. She closed her eyes as she ran to the other side of the haunted house. The hammock in front of her spun as her veil got stuck in it, she screamed for Prem once more. Again, there was no answer. She saw a spider which made her jump even more and felt a rush of cold air. She ran'ran in tears, about to go out 'out of the house when a sturdy figure grabbed her from her waist and swiftly pulled her towards him. Heer shut her eyes completely'

"Heer, Heer", a recognizable voice called to her "Heer I was just joking around with you. There is nothing here to be scared about"

Heer slowly opened one of her eyes to see none other than her love, her life, standing in front of her'Prem.

""PREM, DO YOU KNOW HOW SCARED I GOT. I CANT BELIEVE YOU DID THIS TO ME PREM". She said as she broke down into tears once more. She fell to the floor sobbing when Prem took her face in his hands. He wiped her 'diamond-like' tears and said..

"Heer I was just playing around and then I saw your tears flow from your twinkling eyes down to your tender cheeks. I couldn't take it anymore and I hate myself for making you cry", replied Prem, his eyes were also puffy and red "Also, those tears have no right to caress your cheeks only I do"

Prem stood Heer back up but her eyes were still a downcast and his eyes were staring at her. She couldn't believe he had seen her cry again. He couldn't belive that he was the one to make her cry. No matter what thought they loved each other'

The thunder struck and Heer jumped right into Prem's arms. Her hands were wrapped around Prem's neck and his hands were around her waist. Prem had a playful smile on his face, as if he were thanking God for the thunder. Heer slowly unwrapped her hand around his neck and hooked them to his shoulders. He felt her waist slowly leaving a chill up her spine. Her breathing got heavier and eyes got lower. Her muscles felt numb and cheeks felt blushed. Prem was enjoying this as he didn't feel uneasy in her arms. He caressed her face, touching her jawline, and feeling her lips. He planted a small kiss on her cheek and she felt like melting. He kissed her nose, her eyelids, moving slowly down to her lips. She felt his hands go up her back to her shoulders and back down to her waist; they tightened. He nibbled on her upper lip and closed his eyes. He felt her arms wrap around his waist as their bodies came closer and closer till they consisted of no more space in between. He tilted his head to ease the kissing position and got deeper into the kiss. He separated her lips through his tongue and the kiss became more passionate. He rapidly turned her body around so she was placed against the wall. Her hands were positioned on the wall and her palms were facing him. He held Heer's palms and tightly closed her hands in his. He got deeper'much deeper into the kiss. Her knees felt weak, and her pulse raced.

Prem caressed her back and her hair and held her tighter'tighter as if he never wanted to see her go. Heer felt a little pinch and so she pushed him away to which Prem said

"Sorry, I am so sorry. I didn't know I was becoming so vigorous, I am sorry"

"Its okay Prem, don't worry"

Prem came closer to Heer once more and grabbed her waist once again. He rubbed his cheeks with hers and planted gentle, tender kisses on her neck. Heer tightly grabbed Prem's neck and their bodies met.

"PREM...", an angry voice called from the back'

Edited by DMG_farwa - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
farwaaaa!!! omg....im...im...im just totally speechless!!! that was the a fantabulous....amazing...superb...fantastic update!!!👏 👏👏👏 wow!!!!!👏👏👏 omg...omg im still blushing! premeer scene was soooo romantic!!!☺️ ooooh the way you just described it!👏 oooh so preet and meher get married?! yaay we will get to read some of their chemistry too! oh no! someone caught them...nooo cliffhanger! *thinking* is it gayatri?!anyways fantastic update👏👏👏 hope you continue soon!
Edited by sonali09 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
OMG thanx soooooooooooooo muchh sonalli...
it took me so long to iitee this...after hearing this from u...everything feels worthwhilllee thnnnxx
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Posted: 16 years ago
awesomeeeeee too good very nice part waitinggggggggg for next asap.
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Posted: 16 years ago
excellent, fantastic update
sooo cute premeer scene
some one caught premeer
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Posted: 16 years ago
love the update plz updat soon who is that person its mystery plz update soon cnt w8 to find out who it is no fair u left us with a cliffhanger and loved the way u described prem and heers love
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Posted: 16 years ago
Hey!
That was a fantastic update!
The Premeer scene was very cute!
I can't wait to find out who caught them!
Continue soon!
xXx
Sunayna
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Posted: 16 years ago

Hey Farwa i seriously don't know what to say............you left me speechless

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