FF khel khel mein....RECAP page 63 27/1/2011 :) - Page 7

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Posted: 16 years ago
#61
very nice yaar plz continue soon dunno where have heer gone???
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Posted: 16 years ago
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updateplzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz waitingggggggggggggggg asap with long part.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey that was one lovely update!!
i really am enjoying your FF poor prem heer both being forced into emotional situations him feeling bad for making heer sad but aall for good
well waiting anxiously for the next tupdate hopefully we'll get one very soon
update soon dear
thnx
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Posted: 16 years ago
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update plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz asap with long part waitinggggggggggggg.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey friends...hope you all are doing well... well day after 2mmoro is my internal and I am quite busy preparing or it.. but I had written half of this part which I thought I should post...its short...hope you'll like it...

Now, I would like to thank sweta,ash,thapanee,sunayna,kis des rocks!,heer hann,PH4EVR... for your lovely comments... pls be strict with me guys..I am still a learner but big hugs to all of you for appreciating, and sorry for this update as its incomplete but I am pretty busy hope you'll understand...

Many of you were asking me the whereabout of the song "Bin Tum" in my last update, its from the film "Dus kahaniya" download and listen to it, if you hadn't listened to it yet...Please let me know if you liked the song..

nyway...here's what happens next...


PART-11

It has been late evening...still there was no sign of Heer. At 1st they did not take the matter seriously. Even Prem thought she'll return after few minutes,but when the minutes turned to hours, they became tensed...They searched her in the grounds of the orphanage, the rooms of the children and the possible nooks and corners of the place but in vain.Even they searched the nearby places but saw no sign of Heer.
All the members therefore decided to pack up the rehersals and offered to help, but Prem denied it as this was an important event. He only took Ritika with him as he was not aquainted with the roads yet but Tanu also wanted to accompany them therefore they took her...
Prem drove to all possible places, looking for Heer but to his and Ritika's disappointment, she was not there.
After a while, Prem stood beside his car, tensed and feared that he lost her...he, kept his face calm but panick was clear on his face..he grew impatient every growing second and spoke up...
"Ritti, we have to go home and inform Balraaj chachu and Teji chachi"
"Are you sure?"
"we dont have any other options..."
"and if we dont go to Heer didi's house, we wont get into the park"
"What?", both Ritti and Prem spoke up.
"ha...She's in the park"
"you knew it all through?",Ritika asked
"yes"
Prem picked her up and made her sit on the bonnet of the car.
"Then why you did not say us anything?" Prem almost yelled at her...
Tanu lowered her voice and her facial expression changed as if she's going to cry.
"you did not ask me..."
Prem noticed Tanu and pressed his temples for loosing his cool. He bent towards Tanu
"I am very sorry ok?", he caressed his cheek and turned to Ritika.
"which park is she speaking of?"
"There's a small park near our house, its Heer's favourite hangout place"
"then let's go."

As they reached the park, they spotted her on a bench, crying ,silently gazing the view in front of her. Her face showed that she has been crying for hours... Prem heaved a sigh of relief and called up Preet,"Yah, we got her" and hung up. The sight in front of him was too painful for him to tolarate. He couldn't see her in so much pain...he was the one for whom she's crying he knew that, and he is standing afar doing nothing, he shook his head regretting. He decided to confront her and tell her everything and was about to proceed for the same but Ritika sensed his longing and grabbed his arm stopping him and nodded a no.
Instead she sent Tanu. Tanu went forward and and put her hand over Heer's hand breaking Heer's trance.
"Tanu, you here? who brought you?", Heer asked, concerned, wiping her tears.
"I brought them here" and she pointed to the figures standing little far.
"You brought them?"
"main bachchi thodi hoon?"
Heer's face broke into half smile. She got up and took Tanu's hand and walked upto them...

"How dare you, leave the rehersals without informing? this is the height of unproffesionalism", Prem shouted at her angrily.

Heer looked at him and her vision stopped at his eyes, she couldn't help but notice, his face and his eyes were not credulous, they spoke in a different manner. She lowered her gaze as she couldn't meet his eyes. Even she did not shout at him back as she was not in a mood to do so.

"Chal Heer.", Ritika spoke and 4 of them headed towards the house.



At the front door. Heer was the 1st one enter the house.She did not look back or speak. Ritika turned and looked at Prem, and she could bet she saw signs of tears.
"Ritti didi, I dont want to go home, can I stay here?"
"Sure honey, I'll call up chachu and inform.
"Ok guys I'll leave and Tannu please forgive me...bbye"
He turned to leave but a pair of little hands stopped him. He turned around and saw Tannu indicating him to kneel. He smiled lightly and kneeled in front of her and she gave him a big teddy bear hug. They pulled back and Prem looked at her confused, "What was that for?"
"Whenever I become sad, papa does like this and I become happy...you are also sad na..."
Prem was moved beyond words. He again pulled Tanu close and hugged her tightly, closing his eyes letting the tears come out which he has been holding back for hours. Ritika was dumbfounded with her baby cousin's meaningful act. She saw them pull back and Prem leaving in his car and both of them entered the house, locking the door behind.


How was it guys??? pls let me know...


with lots of love

Priyadarshini aka Priyo😊

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Posted: 16 years ago
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awesomeeeeeeeeeeeeee too good very nice part waitinggggggggg for next asap.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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very good yaar and also emotional bechare preemer kitna royain ge?plz continue soon n it was quite short and also thx for thanking me hehe do continue soon!

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: sweta2005

awesomeeeeeeeeeeeeee too good very nice part waitinggggggggg for next asap.




hun...be patient...😆😆 sabr ka phal mitha hota hai...😉
and thanx 4 liking this part too...
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: heer hann

very good yaar and also emotional bechare preemer kitna royain ge?plz continue soon n it was quite short and also thx for thanking me hehe do continue soon!





thanx dear for liking this part too.... and yaar mujhe khud achcha nahi lagta inko rulana but kya karu...
and ya I told ya b4 its a short update...but yaar abhi deemag mein sirf programs aur electrical circuits ke sivah kuch nahi hai...bear me like this till end of dec...
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey Priyo
thnx for the update like usual did enjoy it aswell and good luck for your exams, me too having exams but cant miss an update now can i ?
by the way i did like this part too was kinda emotional and that sweet little tannu is sweet and innocent angel. i dont know but i guess i was expecting a bit more at the scene when prem finds heer at the park i dont know why i just had this urge for them to unite right at the moment but i guess u have better plans i hope u unite these too very very soon cause poor both of them have had a hard time lately especially poor heer
hope to find god times soon
keep it up 👏👏👏

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