FF khel khel mein....RECAP page 63 27/1/2011 :) - Page 6

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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey i just started reading ur FF and found it really interesting, waiting for the next part.. thanx
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hey!
Awesome update!
Loved how Heer got all mad!
and then the car ride...lol!
Can't wait till the next update!
?xXx?
Sunayna
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Posted: 16 years ago
#53

you are too good plz upadate soon i'm waitingggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggg

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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey dear when will u update?waingggggggggggggg?
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hi my dear friends, hope you are doing well, so here I am with another update which I myself did not like but I hope you people will like it. My internals got over today so I typed whatever got into my mind ...its short and its bad. From now onwards I wont be able to update regularly until january because next my lab internals will start, followed by lab external then theory external, so pls bear with me...


Now I extend my heartiest thanks to sweta,kggkgrl11591,sunayna,kis desh Rocks!,heer hann,ash and thapanee for commenting on my last update, thanks a lot guys...

So wasting no more time, here's what happens next....


PART-10

As Prem wheeled the steering,he glanced at Heer who was looking outside, he smiled at her as she was looking very cute with the orangy top which had a caption "Barbie", he was satisfed with the gradual development. When he saw her coming down wearing that top and with her hair left loose, he himself knew how much dificult was for him to control himself from not kissing her nose tip, as appreciation for her cuteness. He along with other family members have acted as if not noticing the change because they didn't want to embarras her and wanted her to open up on her own, but Prem's mouth kept on tickling continously to compliment her.


As they reached their venue,everyone got out of backseat of the car and headed inside, Heer and Tanu got off the car and were walking hand in hand, Prem thought of taking a chance...

"By the way you look cute", Prem spoke up and from inside slapped himself hard for having less resistance over his mouth.
Heer turned towards Prem with an expression half shocked and half pleased as someone complimented her over her look, her cheeks turned red all of a sudden and she could feel the warmth she was radiating, now she was feeling a little bit awkward of wearing this 'Barbie' printed top. she lifted her gaze onto Prem and saw him looking somewhere down. She followed his gaze and saw him looking at Tanu
"Your frock is so preety,from where did you buy it?", Heer felt disappointment roam across her body, but why should she care?
"Heer didi, gave me..."
"Beta, subah subah mazak nahin karte",Prem said in a mocking tone.
"Why? what is funny in that? cant I choose a pretty dress for my sister?", Heer shot back
"Choosing a dress, yes, its not funny, but you choosing a dress, its like an elepahant performing water ballet", Prem smiled at his own statement.
"Excuse me,Senior,I have a good choice in everything for your kind information, look at my own top." Heer sounded desparate.
"You gotta be kidding Heer" he blurted out laughing loudly,"One day you come out wearing a top with these girly captions and you think you can change the world's impression over you?"
Heer's face turned deep red as she was furious and was also feeling ashamed of herself right at the moment, while Prem continued,"Waise, if you continue to wear decent dresses like this maybe there's little hope..." he left the place instantly.
Prem entered the hall with a sullen expression as he was feeling too bad for hurting Heer in such a way, his words have hurt her no doubt but he is helpless... Prem came out of the trance as he heard Tanu shout "ANGAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAD" and running onto the stage to meet her favourite rockstar Angad Khanna. Prem smiled at Tanu as she ran and started pulling Angad's pant till Angad rested his gaze on her and gave her a warm smile. He kneeled beside her and shook hands with her and she spoke out,
"Aap duplicate ho?"
"Nope I am original, but who are you?"
"My name is Tanusha Mann, I am a pre primary student of St.John Institute"
Angad laughed while she continued," aap mera favourite gana gaoge function mein....kaisa yeh pyaar hai...kaisa yeh pyaar hai", she whinned and Angad laughed loud," Obviously hun, anything for you."
Angad gaze grazed the door where he saw a handsome young lad lightly saluting him, he immediately recognized that boy,"Hey Pre..", Prem noddded his head in negetive vigourously and Angad looked at him confusedly then it hit him..."Pj senior", at last he spoke looking at the girl who has just entered and grounded herself beside Prem. Prem went ahead and shared a high five with Angad and then a big hug. Preet tapped Angad's shoulder and indicated to share a hug with him too. Three of them shared a hug and Angad spoke up enthusiastically.
"Its good to see you guys after so long"
"Even are we, by the way thanks for contributing here"
"Come on guys,I'll do anything for these lovely bunches"
"By the way, where's Kripa bhabhi?"
"she's in dubai for a show she'll be back by tomorrow"

"Angad", cooed Ash in a flirty tone, and Heer made a vomitting expression,"hi! this is Ash" and she extended her hand to Angad and he shook hands with her gladly.
"Here let me introduce you to all of the them", offered Preet and he gave a tour round the rehersal area and introduced him to every performers and everyone
"....and here's Ash you've met, then he's Arjun Mann, the owner, this is um what's that ah Heer" and pointed to Heer and she returned Preet glared look which Angad did not miss.After returning pleasenturies with Heer, Angad saw Preet searching somthing, rather someone
"What are you searching?"
"ummm....I am searching Ritika..where's she?"
"I send her to the rooms to fetch the kids", Prem came back to the place with a clipboard in his hand and a pen hanging round his neck. He rolled up his dark blue shirt sleeves upto his elbow and Heer could not help but notice that he was looking awesome, but the thing that disturbed her since yesterday was his eyes.The chocolate brown eyes of his twinkled with a familiar mischief, they had the warmth she has felt before, those eyes seemed to hypnotize her and take her to a ride down the memory lane. Those eyes were making her miss Prem more since yesterday. As he came and stood by her side , his elbows brushed against her hand and she looked at him shocked as the touch seemed familiar. Heer's trance broke with Ritika's voice

"Bhaiya, here are our guests of honour", Ritika announced and behind her followed a queue of 12 kids.
"Perfect",Prem smiled at them.
"Hey hey what did you call him?", Heer asked shocked.
"Bhaiya...", Ritika concluded casually.
"I am elder to you, you never called me didi, ek din mein yeh bhaiya kaise ban gaya?"
"Ek din mein, I started liking him that's why I called him bhaiya"
"To dusre ko kya bulaogi....saiyaan???", Heer demanded.
"Aapko kaise pata?", Ritika answered cooly and all the boys looked at her shocked including Heer.Ritika after realizing what she did was banging her head ,in her mind,into an imaginative wall for speaking out her thought loud. Preet turned to the deepest shade of red and looked around uncomfortably. Prem was the one who cleared his throat, to lighten the environment and announced that everyone should start their rehersals.
As everyone left, Heer was about to follow them while Prem stopped her grabbing her wrist.She pulled her hand off hastily and hissed,"Kya hai?"
"Where do you think you are going?"
"Following your orders senior, going for the rehersals"
"you help me with these kids here..."
"that reminds me, why are they here?"
"I am planning a fashion show with these kids, that's why I need to take their measurement, like my idea?"
"you planned it on your own?"
"yes mam"
"hard to believe"
"will you help?"
"ok, i'll, but rehersals?"
"dont argue, just do as I say", he handed her the clipboard and went to take his measurement tape and Heer mimicked him "Just do as I say..."


Here on the platform, Heer was jotting down the measurements Prem was taking, on the other hand, Ritika and Preet were on a mission to avoid each other but circumstances were bringing them face to face and they were trying not to look at each other. Ritika got fed up of facing him for the 3rd time after that incident and was praying not to face him again
"No god please, aaj nahi..." and she bumps into Angad who was tuning his guitar. Angad looked at her confused and she gave him a nervous grin.
"Are you ok?"
"who, me, yes I am perfectly fine"
"I dont think so"
Ritika didn't answer, while he continued,"you like Preet, right?"
"I dont know."
"you know"
Ritika felt awkward," forget it, sing somthing na.."
"that is what I am here for."
"No, something special, close to your heart"
"like?"
"like for Kripa...you know"
Angad's face broke down into a smile..."Here you go babe."
Angad plugged in his guitar and the people present over there turned to have a look including Prem and Heer...
"This is for my Kripa"
The crowed wooed and clapped, while Prem smiled and turned back to take the measurements and made Heer turn back.



aankhon mein inteezar ke badal baras gaye
hum dekhne ko aapka chehra taras gaye
bin tum gumsum hone lage, jaane kis duniya mein khone lage
aankhon mein inteezar ke badal baras gaye


Heer's pen stopped as the song reached her ear, the lyrics were practically speaking about her situation. Prem continued with the work but even he was disturbed with the song as he knew, his love is restless at the moment.


resham se dil ke yeh ristein, rishto ki nazuk dor
is dor pe janejana chalta nahi koi jor
tujhe dhoonti hai nazarein, zara saamne toh aa
bebas hai dil yeh mera, dil thaamne toh aa
saare jahaan mein tum hamein tanha sa kar gaye
bin tum gumsum hone lage, jaane kis duniya mein khone lage
aankhon mein inteezar ke badal baras gaye


Heer's eyes welled up as flashes of the past kept on creeping on her mind. Her ears ignored the instructions Senior gave her, Her chest seemed to tear up with pain and she felt difficult to stay at the place.

As the song ended, the hall burst into claps and therefore Prem decided to turn towards Heer and convey her the measurements
"Waist 18...", he stopped midway as he saw the clipboard and the pen on the ground and Heer not by his side.


So how was it???? pls guys be honest...

will try to update as soon as possible, pls bear with me...


PRIYADARSHINI AKA PRIYO...😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
#56
awesomeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee too good very nice part waitingggggggggg for next asap.
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Posted: 16 years ago
#57

Hey Priyo...im gonna be frank.......that update was.....superb!!!!😆...Ritika almost blurted out abt her crush on preet...cute...

Oh and thanx a lot 4 bringing angad-kripa to this....just love them...
Its k if u dont update regularly...after all studies come 1st
Ash
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Posted: 16 years ago
#58
was wating for your update........ nice update.... i like Beta, subah subah mazak nahin karte",Prem said in a mocking tone. hahahahaha
waiting for next part
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Posted: 16 years ago
#59
Hey!
Fantastic update!
Oh Ritika was funny with the whole Bhaiya and Didi part...
and then the song at the end was cute!
Hope Heer's okay!
Cont. soon!
xXx
Sunayna
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Posted: 16 years ago
#60

wat a nice update, seriously it was good, waiting for the next part....

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