FF: Mohabbatein (Part 8 Last Part pg 22) - Page 11

Originally posted by: sonali09

awww no prob garima!😃 soo happy that my comments encourage you😳🤗 lolz i knew it! naughty naughty garima😆 lolz...update soon!

luv sonali

Originally posted by: sakeena

GARIMA!!! That was AWEESSOMMEEE... i really loved the hug scene! 😳 oh and when i was reading it, it reminded me of june 25th's hug scene! when the guys came to tell Prem that he was nominated for business man of the yearr...

awwhss omgg i can't wait till the partyy!

looking forward to your next updateee 😊

- Deena

Originally posted by: srklover93

aww..sorry babes 😒
but had to stop there cuz i was in a hurry...but i promise next part will be longer!! happy now??😆
lol plz dont cry...and thanks..glad u liked it!! will update soon!!!😛

Originally posted by: ashpush

Hey garima...saw ur update just now...its great yaar......its short,but its sweet...hmm im having thoughts.is Heer's dad gonna be like the dad in he movie mohabbatein? im afraid...will he try to break their love??
Update asap yaar

Hey guys!!!! I'm back with my next update...thanks again to all of you with ur wonderful comments...sorry i couldnt respond to all of them :( but thanks anyways!! Enjoy this part!!!

Part 5

Heer quickly ran towards her hostel room to share the good news with Meher and Ashlesha. She ran so fast that by the time she got to her room she was out of breath. Seeing Heer like this Ashlesha asked:

Ashlesha: Kya hua heer di?? aap itni jaldi mein kyun hain?

Meher: Haan heer di...kya hua?

Heer: (catching her breath) Arre yaar...mein tum dono ko ek khush khabri dene aaiy hoon!! you wont believe it!!!

Ash and Meher: Accha!! jaldi bataao!!

Heer: Mujhe exams mein top score mila hai pure college mein!!!!!!!! said heer almost screaming in excitement.

Meher: NO WAY!!! are you serious!!! itni badi khush khabri!!! congradulations heer di!!! and she hugged her tightly.

Ashlesha: OMG!!! congrats heer di!!! i knew you were brilliant!!!! and she joined Meher in hugging her.

Heer: Awww...thanks you guys...magar yeh pura credit mujhe sirf nahin jaata...woh to mere professors ko, papa ji ko..aur tum log ko bhi jaata hai!!

Meher: thats so sweet heer di...aapke jaisa accha insaan maine kabhi nahin dekha!!

Ashlesha: haan heer di..meher theek keherahi hai...aap sach mein bhaut achi hain...aap kabhi khud ke baare mein nahin sochti..hamesha doosre ke baare mein sochti ho...kaash humbhi aapke tarha aise hote...

Heer: (having tears in her eyes) arre tum dono bhi bhaut achi ho..ishiliye to tum dono meri BEST friends ho...sirf dost nahin...behen jaisi ho...ab dekho tum dono ne mujhe rulaadiya..

Saying this they all laughed and hugged eachother again.

Heer: O haan...mein toh bataana hi bhulgayi....aaj shaam ko papaji ne mere liye ek party rakhi hai iss khush khabri mein!!!

Ashlesha: WOW!! i just love parties!!! chalo meher hum log apni dresses select karte hain!!!

Heer: ek minute...aggar dress peheni hai to phir white color mein peheni hogi

Meher: Magar kyun di??

Heer: Kyunki mera favorite color white hai aur vaise bhi papaji ne dress code white aur black rakha hai...

Meher: oohhh....acha acha...to phir aap kya pehenogi?

Heer: Abh yahi to mujhe nahin samaj mein aaraha hai..mein kya pehenoon?

Ashlesha: Usme toh phir mein expert hoon...aapko mujhse phoochna chahiya tha...well mere paas ek idea hai...kyun na hum aap ke liye ek special dress khariden?

Meher: yah...that would be a great idea!

Heer: haan magar...mere paas time nahin hai koi naiy dress khareedne ke liye..

Ashlesha: Koi baat nahin heer di...vaise bhi bhaut time nahin lage ga...humlog uss dukaan peh jaaenge jisse mein dresses leti hoon...agar mein pehle se call kardoon to phir woh log dress ready rakhenge....aur agar hum thoda der bhi hogaye...then we'll be Fashionably Late kyun heer di?

Heer: Acha theek hai...i guess ur rite..ab jaldi jaldi chalo!

Meher: Yay!!

Ashlesha called the shop to have the dress ready and both ash and meher took thier dresses along with them so they can get ready there and leave from there.

STORE

Ashlesha: Hi..humne ek white dress book karavaiy thi..kya woh ready hai?

Emplyee: ji mam...ek minute.

She brought the dress to them...it looked something like this:

http://prom365.com/uploaded_images/white-prom-dresses-768760.jpg (go to this website and you'll see it)

Meher: WOW!!! Its beautiful!!!

Ashlesha: I KNO!!! Heer di par kitni achi lage gi

Heer: wow'yeh dress to bhaut achi hai'lekin'

Ashlesha: Lekin kya heer di?

Heer: tumhe nahin lagta ki thodi si revealing hai?

Meher: Oh common Heer di!! Grow up!! Ab aap bachi thodi na ho ki apko yeh dresses peheni manna hai'aap yehi dress pehenogi and that's final!

Ashlesha: Haan di meher theek keherahi hai'ab chalo beauty parlor!!

Heer: Kya?? Beauty parlor??? Lekin ash tune toh kaha tha sirf dukaan se dress lenhi hai'ab beauty parlor??

Ashlesha: Arre meri bholi bhaali heer di'kya aap party mein aisehi jaaengi? Koi make-up ya baal banake nahi jaengi??

Heer: haan lekin'

Meher: Lekin vekin kuch nahin'ab chalo.

So Ash and Meher dragged Heer to the beauty parlor where she got her Make-up, hair, and nails done'her hair was done in a bun (like the girl in the pic is wearing) and her nails were done in a French manicure style. She looked nothing less than a princess.

Meher: WOW heer di'u look beautiful'bilkul ek pari ki jaisi!! Said meher and kissed heer on the cheek.

Heer: thank you meher'said heer while she was blushing.

Ashlesha: WOW di..ur looking hot!! Aaj toh koi bhi ladka aap pe fida hojaye ga. said ashlesha while winking at Meher'and they both started laughing.

Heer: Offo'tum aur tumhari bekar ki baatein'ab tum dono jaldi se tayar hojao'varna der hojaye gi.

Both Meher and ash got ready wearing beautiful white dresses'All three got to the Ballroom in time, slightly late, but that didn't matter'Heer was nervous to go, thinking of how many peoples eyes would be watching her'especially his eyes, why was she feeling so nervous to go in front of him? Why?

So how was it?? jaldi bataao...i kno there were kno prem heer scenes today..sorry...but next update there would be...hope u guys liked the dress..i thought it was very pretty...plz leave comments i love getting comments!! k..till then tata bye-bye!!!

luv Garima <333333333333333

Originally posted by: ashpush

Garima,that was a sweet update yaar,..loved the scene between Heer-Meher-Ash....wow!! Heer in white,,,...cant wait 4 the party update...

And thanks Garima,im glad that Balraj wont be like Amithab...

Take care