FF: Mohabbatein (Part 8 Last Part pg 22) - Page 9

awwww ...i read all the parts 2day and fell in love with ur fic... continue soon...

hey update soon, this part was nice and cute,, waiting for the next part....

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Hey garima...hope you will be updating soon!😃😳

hey garima...ur blackmailing us with ur sweet words...lolzzz....but ur right.. we will wait(www) like good gals :)

haila! fourth note garima?! thum tho mujhse aagay ho!😆 no worries..totally understand....we can wait 1 day....like ash said we are good gals!😃 will be waiting...

Hey pplz...this is my next update hope u like it!!

Part 4

Heer and Prem had officially, become friends! It was time for them to leave for class when the bell rang…Prem was so lost in Heer's eyes that he didn't realize he was shaking hands with her and didn't let go of her hands.

Heer: Prem woh…class mein jaane ka time hogaya hai…mein chalti hoon

Prem: Oh…theek hai..bye…

Heer: Woh Prem, mera haath chodo…tabhi to mein jaoongi…said Heer shyly.

Prem: Oh! Sorry! Who…maine dekha nahin…said Prem while turning tomato read…lolz

Heer: Koi baat nahin…mein chalti hoon…baad mein milte hain…ok bye!! Heer said and left giving a quick glance at Prem with a smile…thinking of why she was so attracted to him.

Prem: Bye!...he said with a grin on his face…thinking that he was the luckiest guy on earth because he had become friends with Heer…not only friends…but fallen in love with her.

The rest of the day went by pretty fast…without knowing it was already three o'clock in the afternoon when the classes ended Prem was waiting for Heer to come in front of the school where they met this morning.

Prem: pata nahin kahaan rehegayi Heer? Thought Prem while he was waiting impatiently.

And there she was coming towards him with a sweet smile on her face and a hint of excitement also.

Prem: Hi Heer…kya hua itni der kyun lag gayi tumhe class se aane mein?

Heer: Pata hai Prem…aaj mein bhaut khush hoon!! Bhaut khush!! Said Heer excitedly.

Prem: Woh to dikharaha hai…par kya mein phooch sakta hoon, yeh khushi kis baat ki hai?

Heer: Prem…you won't believe this!! Woh jo last week hamare exams huey the na? usme mujhe top score mila hai pure college mein!!! Can you believe it??!! IM SOO HAPPY PREM!!!...screamed Heer in joy and unknowingly hugged Prem tightly.

Taking this moment as an advantage…he quickly hugged her back…realizing what they were doing both separated from each other…feeling a little awkward. Finally Prem broke the silence.

Prem: Congratulations Heer!! Great Job!!

Heer: thank you!! Aur ek baat aur…woh mein abhi abhi papa ji se milke aaiy hoon…unhe yeh baat sunke bhaut khushi huey toh unhone mere liye ek bari si party rakhi hai aaj shaam ko Grand Ball room mein…toh ishiliye mein tumhe invited karne aaiy hoon..saare students wahaan honge…tum aaoge na?

Prem: Of course mein aaunga! Isme kya phoochne ki baat hai? Mein tumhare liye kuch bhi kar sakto hoon…now that we're friends..right?

Heer: right!...theek hai phir shaam ko milti hoon…saath baje…der mat karma!

Prem: Alrite…see u then

Heer: Ek minute Prem!

Prem: Haan?

Heer: Dress code black and white hai…girls in white aur boys in black…ok…see u soon bye!

Prem: Bye!!

With bidding each other goodbyes they went their own ways…excited about whats going to happen at the party!!

I kno I kno...its short...sorry i was in a hurry tho...as u all kno im very busy on the weekdays but i still tried to update...see how nice i am?? lolz...anyhow tell me how it was...i kno this one wasnt so interesting...it was more of an informational update then a dramatic one...but the next one is gonna be way better..and will hve alot of PH scenes and stuff like that..k? :) alrite byes

~Garima <3333333333333

wow garima!!!!! awesome update!👏👏very nice.....lolz prem not letting go of heer's hand!😆 awww so they've become friends and feel atrracted to each other! sweet update!👏😳 so party eh? ooohhh garima! you must be upto something😆 lolz...gr8 update!..so next part with lots of ph scenes huh? thats gr8...cant wait!

wonderful update garima... so they r friends now...will wait for the next eagarly...
bbye
tc
priyo